Ufton Nervet rail crash: Revision history

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cur prev 09:0609:06, 7 November 2024 MIDI talk contribs 40,695 bytes +406 add ref undo
cur prev 08:5508:55, 7 November 2024 MIDI talk contribs 40,289 bytes −5 →Aftermath: rw undo
cur prev 08:5308:53, 7 November 2024 MIDI talk contribs 40,294 bytes +9 →Train and crew: rw undo
cur prev 08:5208:52, 7 November 2024 MIDI talk contribs 40,285 bytes +6 →Train and crew: let's not force readers to do the maths - we introduce one statistic in years and another as a date. undo
cur prev 08:4908:49, 7 November 2024 MIDI talk contribs 40,279 bytes 0 →Ufton Nervet level crossing: name the county as early as possible for those not familiar with the geography of this topic undo
cur prev 08:4808:48, 7 November 2024 MIDI talk contribs 40,279 bytes +7 →Ufton Nervet level crossing: link target undo

cur prev 20:5920:59, 4 October 2024 Captain Cornwall talk contribs 40,091 bytes 0 →Car driver undo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
cur prev 16:2216:22, 4 October 2024 MIDI talk contribs 40,091 bytes +28 →Aftermath: ref undo
cur prev 15:5915:59, 4 October 2024 MIDI talk contribs 40,063 bytes −3 →Collision: rw undo
cur prev 09:3709:37, 4 October 2024 MIDI talk contribs 40,066 bytes +187 →Investigation and inquest: add undo
cur prev 09:2509:25, 4 October 2024 MIDI talk contribs 39,879 bytes −8 →Aftermath: clear this up a bit – the previous wording did not make it clear which (if either or if both) were found in the cess or on the track; the refs do give that information but our wording left the reader to infer. undo
cur prev 09:1909:19, 4 October 2024 MIDI talk contribs 39,887 bytes −6 rdr undo

cur prev 16:3216:32, 23 July 2024 MIDI talk contribs 39,893 bytes −115 →Subsequent events: feel the quote here is a bit tabloidy; we can paraphrase and still deliver the same content to the reader. A quote only really serves to impart emotion here and we shouldn't do that undo
cur prev 16:2516:25, 23 July 2024 MIDI talk contribs 40,008 bytes −1 →Car driver: too specific - if we can't say a precise date, we probably needn't be this precise; the point of this is that the results came back (soon) after the incident undo
cur prev 16:2316:23, 23 July 2024 MIDI talk contribs 40,009 bytes −70 not really relevant to the aftermath of the events; rather, it may have been a cause of Drysdale's state of mind at that point. Move this to the "Car driver" subsection and convert to a footnote - it's not really important enough to keep in the prose as the results of the test are irrelevant (although 'interesting'). re-use ref to avoid duplication undo

cur prev 17:5917:59, 20 July 2024 Captain Cornwall talk contribs 40,079 bytes +208 No edit summary undo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

cur prev 17:4717:47, 23 March 2024 MIDI talk contribs 39,844 bytes −11 two-point belts can be diagonal (sash style rather than lap) so this isn't the disambiguator it appears to be undo
cur prev 17:4417:44, 23 March 2024 MIDI talk contribs 39,855 bytes 0 fix undo
cur prev 17:4417:44, 23 March 2024 MIDI talk contribs 39,855 bytes +31 →Aftermath: we're mixing numbers of vehicles with numbers of staff, let's aim for a bit more consistency undo
cur prev 05:4705:47, 23 March 2024 Daniel Case talk contribs 39,824 bytes +102 →See also: explain why this is here undo

cur prev 08:3708:37, 9 March 2024 MIDI talk contribs 39,705 bytes −2 MOS:NUMNOTES - the "1" is directly comparable to the "88,000" and so both should be in numerals (or both should. be in words) undo

cur prev 05:5705:57, 22 November 2023 WhiteCrane talk contribs m 39,707 bytes −13 Sentence structure error undo

cur prev 20:4220:42, 14 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,654 bytes +4 Changing short description from "2004 rail crash caused by suicidal car driver" to "2004 rail crash caused by suicide of a car driver" undo Tag: Shortdesc helper
cur prev 20:4220:42, 14 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,650 bytes +11 rw to avoid repetition undo
cur prev 20:4120:41, 14 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,639 bytes −107 duplicate undo
cur prev 20:4120:41, 14 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,746 bytes −1 →Royal Humane Society awards: better wording? undo
cur prev 20:3720:37, 14 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,747 bytes −1 fix undo
cur prev 20:3720:37, 14 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,748 bytes +56 →Royal Humane Society awards: not sure if the names are relevant – we are giving more weight to these two individuals than other victims of the incident... undo
cur prev 20:2120:21, 14 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,692 bytes +58 headcode undo
cur prev 19:5519:55, 14 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,634 bytes +462 chronological undo
cur prev 19:4719:47, 14 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,172 bytes −8 rw undo
cur prev 19:4619:46, 14 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,180 bytes +9 chronological] undo

cur prev 14:2914:29, 12 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,171 bytes −1 →Investigation and inquest: think this should be nbsp not ndash undo
cur prev 14:2814:28, 12 November 2023 MIDI talk contribs 39,172 bytes +2 →Aftermath: round; "30 ft" is presumably an approximation undo

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