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The result of the proposal was '''moved'''. Note that ] moved the page to ] while ]. ] --] (]) 18:11, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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] → {{no redirect|Ghouta chemical attacks}} – We discussed this some at ], and I think there is enough support there to merit a full discussion. I think the new name would be better because it matches the current title's neutrality, while adding a key descriptor (''chemical'') and removing an unnecessary disambiguation year. ] (]) 04:15, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''Support''' per my page move nomination. ] (]) 04:16, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''Support''' but have a suggestion: ''Ghouta chemical attacks'', plural, as multiple sites across Ghouta were targeted. -] (]) 04:23, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Adding the plural to the nom since there are not other !votes. ] (]) 04:25, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''Support''', I agree with summary in the nomination reason for the suggested change.--] (]) 04:34, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''Support''' per above. ] (]) 05:23, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''Oppose''' - there's nothing wrong with the current title. Don't rename things unnecessarily and especially don't spend time endlessly discussing it. I also think, for an article about an event, that it's better to have the year in the title - it's quite helpful as a key signifier eg in categories. If it's absolutely necessary to rename, then at least ]. ] (]) 07:43, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''Support''' per VQs reasoning. ] (]) 15:35, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''Strongly Support''' : Method of attack and which weapons are used, it is important for headline. See: ] and most importantly ''']''' in ]. Besides, many resources available on this subject :, , and more... ] (]) 20:00, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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* '''Support''': as being descriptive and closer to common descriptions of the topic. ] (]) 20:41, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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====Sub-proposal: singular 'attack' in the new name==== |
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The ] seems to almost (but not quite) reach consensus for ''attack'' (singular) rather than ''attacks'' (plural). For that reason I'm posting a clarification with calls for support/opposition + short summary reason here - otherwise the person closing the request may end up unintentionally making a move to a name that is opposite to the de facto consensus. The sub-proposal is: '''attack''' (not ''attacks''). ] (]) 21:57, 8 September 2013 (UTC) |
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* '''Support''' - (proposer) The majority of reasons ] + I think the mainstream media usage of the singular is because the evidence so far is that the attack/attacks happened over no more than about an hour or two. In terms of the whole Syrian civil war, this is one "event", so one "attack". ] (]) 21:57, 8 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''Support''' As the original instigator of the discussion of the issue, I see nothing that changes my original argument. ] (]) 22:03, 8 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''No objection''' to the singular if it is preferred by the team. Either one is equally acceptable to me. ] (]) 06:54, 10 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:''Any additional comments:'' |
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I strongly disagree and think the Ghouta incident may have been an accident. Credible sources have claimed this, including the actual victims. See these sources: and . The best title IMHO in the face of uncertainty is "Ghouta chemical weapons incident." Frankly, not having the phrase "chemical weapons" or similar in the title is very odd.] (]) 05:58, 5 September 2013 (UTC) <small>''copied from above by VQuakr to concentrate discussion.''</small> |
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:In my opinion, based on the scale of the attacks (spanning miles with a dozen separate areas with chemical casualties) and the preponderance of opinions from chemical weapons experts, the hypothesis that the Ghouta chemical poisonings were accidental is firmly in fringe territory and merits no mention in the title or lede. The antiwar source gets its info from the same disputed Gavlak/Mintpress source, and the IBT source was published the day of the attack - at which time the scale of incident was not well known. ] (]) 06:31, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Agreed. I see no consensus for including this fringe theory in the lede. -] (]) 07:20, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Agreed. Anyone who think it was some kind of accident that happened in multiplie location at the ~same time, should take a hard look at ].--] (]) 11:33, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::If we simply accept the U.S. allegations as true, then we 'know' that the scale of the 'attacks' was 'wide' and, of course, we can look at the U.S. State Department map. But until and unless an independent body, such as the UN inspection team, confirms or denies U.S. allegations, we can't put those allegations into an encyclopedia article as if they are truth. At a time when the estimated dead range from 281 to 1729, we 'know' little and the entry should allow any plausible hypothesis that hasn't been disproven by concrete, verifiable, public evidence.] (]) 15:03, 7 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::There are multiple ways it could have been a government-perpetrated accident, even with multiple launches in multiple locations. In particular, the munitions could have been mislabelled, or it's been suggested that a mistake was made with the mixing, and the chemical was supposed to be relatively weak and it turned out not to be. Nobody ''really'' knows except those who did it. However, accident doesn't seem very likely, and if evidence to that effect turns up, the article name can always be revisited. ] (]) 15:03, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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Re Podiaebba's concern about having a year in the title, I do not see anything at ] that would imply having the year is desirable unless it is necessary to disambiguate from a different Ghouta chemical attack. ] (]) 16:45, 5 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Attack was almost certainly performed by Syria == |
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Secondary sources have now had time to review the UN's report, which contains much more detailed information than had previously been released to the public. Many sources mirror the analyses of the report stated and , that this was almost certainly an intentional chemical attack by the Syrian military. The key pieces of information include: |
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*Rocket trajectories originating from Syrian-controlled territory, specifically one Syrian military base associated with chemical weapons |
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*Use of large quantities of military-grade sarin |
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*Use of 140mm ] and 330mm rockets, which are launched from bulky, vulnerable launchers and not associated with rebel forces. |
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I think this summary needs to be in the article, and the viewpoint of the article should present this as the mainstream POV, with the Russian/Iranian/Syrian version mentioned as a minor viewpoint. ] (]) 05:20, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:I strongly agree for the reasons you stated. As more facts surrounding this incident are reported, it is becoming clearer and clearer that the mainstream perspective here, supported by the preponderance of available evidence, is that the Syrian government fired several rockets containing sarin gas into populated areas controlled or contested by rebel fighters, causing several hundred civilian deaths. This article far more than adequately presents the minority point of view that is skeptical of the official (UN-endorsed) version of events. -] (]) 05:42, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Yes, the totality of evidence available from the UN and other sources needs to be brought together; as I said repeatedly before it came, the UN report changes everything. It would also be good to watch out for comments from some of the US commentators who suggested "false flag" possibilities (eg Ron/Rand Paul) as they might well change their minds now. To some extent, the entire article needs rewriting around the UN report. ] (]) 06:01, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Totally agree that the UN report need to be the core of the article. A lot of opinion that contradicts without proof that report just needs to be purged. --] (]) 06:13, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::I took a swag at improving the UN report section and added a sentence to the lede. I think the "intelligence reports" sections should be pared down into a single section of two or three paragraphs, and the underinformed hypothesizing from both sides of the issue over the last few weeks should be reduced even more. ] (]) 07:44, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Thanks for developing the UN report section. I'm reluctant to simply lose pre-report content though - not least because it may lead to a lot of argument about what to lose and what to keep. Would it be possible to dump a lot of the suddenly-less-relevant early stuff into a separate article, like ]? That would have the advantage of rapidly getting the content out of this article without deleting it, and making it easier to achieve a brief summary of it (subarticles help with that, I find). ] (]) 08:24, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::I support not dumping all previous information. The report does not claim who is responsible, so any information related to responsibility needs to stay. ] (]) 15:34, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::dis/misinformation you mean - still, you should be very happy "the affair has proved to be largely a sideshow in a conflict in which conventional weapons have killed and maimed vastly more people, and continue to do so. In one sense, Assad has gained the tacit go-ahead to prosecute the war, so long as he eschews nerve gas. In the wake of this dubious deal, the high tide of pressure for direct western action peaked, then subsided.' ] (]) 16:19, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::''tacit go-ahead to prosecute the war, so long as he eschews nerve gas'' - that was always the (official) political and legal position. People all around the world have been and are being killed by conventional warfare, and mostly nobody does anything about it except write reports. ], anyone? ] (]) 17:09, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::Well, let's not get personal. But stuff like this is the first paragraph ''The Syrian government and rebels have blamed each other for the attacks.'' is just plain misleading. It's as if we have no information to figure it out. Or we have equal information each could be responsible. In reality we do have a ton of information that only Syrian government could only be responsible. --] (]) 16:48, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::Yes, that needs updating. ] (]) 17:09, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::I do not like this idea per ]. Either the information is germane to the Ghouta attacks, or it is not. I also disagree with USChick - clearly outdated information need not be kept. ] (]) 16:54, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::It needn't be a POVfork, and it would be helpful for restructuring. If long-term it becomes a POVfork, it can be dumped then having served its purpose. ] (]) 17:09, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::If its function is just for convenience since navigating the history can be clunky, it should be saved in either the Talk: or User: space rather than article space. I have no objection to someone doing this if they find it useful. ] (]) 17:44, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::A talk/user copy still forces a discussion ''now'' about what is kept in the article. A substantial part of the point is avoiding that, because deletion is avoided. Efforts are better spent elsewhere right now, and over time it'll become easier to delete and/or summarise those things. ] (]) 18:00, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::Better to just keep them in the article then, and address them individually and remove methodically. We are not under any mandate to react to news instantaneously. ] (]) 18:04, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::I agree that outdated information should be removed. However, BOTH sides are still blaming each other. To suggest that I should be happy about an attack is very mean and uncalled for. Considering that the US is the largest manufacturer of chemical weapons, you better check the label on those rockets Sayerslle. ] (]) 18:19, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::::I meant happy about the misinformation/disinformation campaign in creating a miasma.] (]) 18:27, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::Oh, excuse me, it was Britain. ] (]) 18:29, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::::{{ec}}The US does not manufacture chemical weapons, has signed the chemical weapons convention, and has nearly completed destruction of its legacy stocks. The 140mm rockets used in Ghouta were Russian. So far, the Russians and Syrians still blame the rebels but are notably short on backup for this claim - we do not need to provide equal coverage to their unsupported and minority viewpoint. Agree that it was uncalled for to imply anyone here was happy about this event. ] (]) 18:37, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::Sodim Flouride is in your toothpaste. The fact that Britian sold it in industrial quantitites to Syria may indeed be inexcusable, but you seem to be under the impression that this is somehow evidence that the Assad regime is not responsible for its chemical attacks? I would still personally assign criminal blame to the people who manufactured CW, and those that then used it in combat in areas populated with civilians. ] (]) 18:43, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::"Quite simply, you need fluoride to make sarin." We wouldn't have so many terrorists if our government(s) didn't create them. ] (]) 18:48, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::::Flouride salts are common chemicals with very, very broad legitimate usages. There are multiple synthesis pathways to manufacture sarin from other flouride compounds, making regulation of precursor chemicals a great challenge for the UN and related regulatory bodies. Are you now referring to the Assad regime (who was the ultimate recipient of these particular chemicals) as terrorist? What exactly is your point here and how does it relate to this article? ] (]) 18:53, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::::::I already made my point. Both sides are still blaming eachother. Do you have a reference for your comment that those are Russian rockets? ] (]) 18:57, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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{{od}}Yes, it is already cited above and in the article. The 140mm rockets are ]'s. Both sides are blaming each other, but that does not mean that their opinions are equally credible. ] (]) 19:08, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:The ones that "can be fitted" with chemical agents? Don't forget to cite where the chemical agents came from. The other 330mm rockets "have been used rarely, and always by government forces." Any one familiar with these? ] (]) 19:16, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::''Don't forget to cite where the chemical agents came from.'' ]? Analysts have noted that the sarin used was of a military quality, implying its origin is manufacture by the Syrian government. What is your point here? The 330mm rockets had been noticed pre-Ghouta by some bloggers; the consensus seems to be that they are manufactured in Syria. I have not seen any particularly good sources discussing them in detail. ] (]) 19:24, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::I'm not arguing with you. ] (]) 19:29, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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Rebels have such rockets and you dont need bulky launchers for them, you can actually launch them from your backyard or roof.( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DZaJZOD2ZmE https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-30VCUNoqEc https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qb8QI8Giwpg ).they captured many military bases, and hardware so military grade sarin means nothing.(here for example a scud facility: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tntOBy56tYU where are scuds there are cw. or they could have it from the captured chlorine factory on the outskirts of Aleppo) ] (]) 20:13, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:The UN report trumps this ]. These are not even the same weapons as was positively identified. --] (]) 20:27, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::and 'hard to explain how they managed to carry out the operation from several points inside regime territory'. ] (]) 21:12, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::it is a fact that rebels use tunnels for weapon smuggling in Damascus, so smuggling rockets into the city is no problem for them(hamas is doing that for years).Setting up in a backyard and firing will take one minute, where is the problem? ] (]) 22:05, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::If a reliable source states that it is plausible that the rebels tunneled several kilometers into Syrian territory and launched chemical rockets on themselves from possibly the most heavily fortified position in Syria, that may be worth including in the article. Multiple sources state that 140mm and 330mm rockets are not weapons the rebels are known to have used. We are not using youtube as a source here; please review ]. ] (]) 22:33, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::: 1)It is a speculation just like the theory that it is impossible to launch a rocket from government controlled territory(and they have the tunnels ) 2) they are they are either wrong or lying , |
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:::::"The Free Syrian Army - as well as the Al-Qaeda affiliated al-Nusra Front and other groups - have also been using increasingly potent captured artillery."from ] (]) 10:02, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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Im in the Southern hemisphere so time differences mean, well lots go on while I sleep. But there are no reliable refs for NPOV objective evidence Syria 'did it'. Its opinion and conjecture, essentially more of the same POV (more later things to do) ] (]) 23:28, 17 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Perhaps you could share what you would, hypothetically, personally accept as convincing, reliable evidence that Syria was the perpetrator of the Ghouta attacks? I think very few neutral observers could possibly agree that there is no evidence or reliable references documenting that evidence. ] (]) 00:18, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:: that's an invitation to a load more 'opinion and conjecture' -you might as well ask a Japanese Nationalist what it would take for him to accept the nanking massacre. only RS should be brought forth as a basis for discussion imo. What RS body forth, explain, the basis in the known world of reality, the Russian/regime/infowars.com/fansofodehmuhaweshmintopress hypothesis?] (]) 00:26, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::] there is NO clear objective evidence who did it. Until there is (maybe never) we put all options on the table in NPOV style. This sums it up for me. '"We want the events of the 21st of August to be impartially, objectively, professionally investigated," Mr Lavrov said.' http://www.abc.net.au/news/2013-09-18/russia-and-france-clash-chemical-weapons-blame/4964360. For what is worth to me its clear the rebels had everything to gain by framing Assad so the West attacked Assad. Game over for Assad. Thats powerful Motivation esp as they are losing lately. Assad had very weak short term gains if he did it and mid term long term a huge loss, game over in fact. Plus Syria would know that so it makes no sense Assad did it. So I think in time hopefully the truth will emerge based only on the motivation factor. ] (]) 01:23, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::You quote Mr. Lavrov who regularly spouts opinion with zero evidence. And you give us your opinion the rebels gassed their own families with zero evidence. Yet we have the unbiased UN report that plain as day points to the government and you think we have NO evidence. You do seem a bit biased to be editing this article. --] (]) 01:43, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::] Please follow the thread. I was asked by ] this. 'Perhaps you could share what you would, hypothetically, personally accept as convincing.' I replied. Two other things you mentioned. 1/ Can you please supply the refs where the rebels own families were gassed at Ghouta. Which rebels and the breakdown of the dead into pro neutral and anti Govt. Thank you. 2/ Perhaps I read the wrong report. Can you show me the part, the hard evidence, where as you say 'UN report that plain as day points to the government'. ] (]) 02:16, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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Blade, Lavrov's response today is certainly relevant to the topic, and indeed included in the article. But it is, following a pattern consistent with the Russian response, a flat out denial without any explanation as to ''why'' the Russians would not interpret this as a Syrian attack - not evidence. You mention that you do not believe Syria had adequate motive to execute this attack, which particularly in hindsight seems to be the case. But a motive is not evidence of guilt or innocence. Meanwhile, as noted and cited in this section and in the article we have a plethora of reliable sources (if you believe the New York Times is not reliable please take it to ] and see what response you get) indicating that the information in the UN report points squarely at Syria (in the case of rocket trajectories, literally!). Making obviously false statements such as "there is NO clear objective evidence who did it" is unproductive could be interpreted as intentionally obstructive behavior worthy of a topic ban. ] (]) 03:08, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:''a motive is not evidence of guilt or innocence'' - sure it is; presence or lack of motive is often a part of legal cases. It's not ''proof'', but evidence of motive is often evidence of guilt, where motive is in dispute. ] (]) 07:59, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Still not the same thing as evidence. Of course this is not a court of law, but even so a motive is an investigative tool to provide clues as to where to look for evidence. Lack of motive can never prove innocence, and even a very strong motive can never prove guilt. ] (]) 19:32, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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The HRW assertion that the insurgents did not have 140mm BM-14 rocket launchers is a mistake which went viral, and I know the organization was challenged on the error by journalists who relied upon the briefing (which came with a graphic). I know YouTube may not be the best but this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RRH9nQFSda8 is a video of a BM-14 being used by persons other than the regime's forces. The insurgents have captured dozens of 140mm BM-14 launchers, they are very cheap and are ubiquitous in this conflict. I have one email from one of the major newspapers involved, to HRW querying the error. The HRW assertion in relation to 140mm launchers only being in the hands of the regime's forces was a mistake. It is one of the key reasons the Russians are able to maintain their present position. ] (]) 16:43, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:The video you linked is a smaller system than a BM-14 - among other things, it has the wrong number of launch tubes. I think it is a ] but I am not sure. In any case, we would need publication in reliable sources that HRW was incorrect in their assessment before we could modify the article. ] (]) 17:00, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:I can't find any BM-14 mentions that are relevant. The nearest thing is the Taliban having used BM-14s. . ] (]) 17:31, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::and "Russian sources also state that these missiles are still being used by the Afghanistan, Yemeni, and Egyptian armies, all nations where al Qaeda or terrorists groups linked to al Qaeda are active" . ] (]) 17:36, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::and Channel 4 News lists some rocket launchers used by Syrian opposition, including the more sophisticated BM-21s. ] (]) 17:53, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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Type 63, yes, I think you are right. Any reliable reports for the regime driving around or using the 140mm launchers? Being a former owner of an antique rocket system, it is not quite the same thing. The insurgents must have every type of looted inventory. ] (]) 21:02, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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] → {{no redirect|Ghouta chemical attack}} – In several places, the article refers to this as a single event: |
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" a chemical weapons rocket bombardment that occurred on Wednesday, 21 August 2013. The event took place over a short span of time the incident |
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Much as the firing of multiple shells in a battle does not turn it into battle''s'', and one person shooting another with multiple bullets would not be called shooting''s'', this could accurately be described as one event. —] 00:29, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''No objection''' to proposed move per below. ] (]) 00:51, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''No objection''' ] (]) 01:18, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''Whatever'''. Singular is probably more accurate. ] (]) 07:08, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''Meh.''' I've argued in favor of the plural, as I think the attacks on multiple sites throughout a fairly diffuse area from different launch sites (per azimuth analysis) are, well, attacks. One thing I would suggest before executing yet another article move (would be the third this week, I believe) is determining if there is a ] mode of reference -- whether most RS tend to use the plural or the singular. -] (]) 07:30, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*'''No objection'''. yeah slight improvement. Let me know when we can change "chemical" to "sarin" and I'll get more excited. --] (]) 09:00, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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**I don't see why we don't do that now. The UN has confirmed sarin use and no-one disputes it anymore AFAIK. Better sort it now than have another move discussion in a few days. ] (]) 10:21, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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As nominator for the previous recently closed move, I have no objection to this proposed title. Both options seem technically correct and adequately descriptive of the incident. ] (]) 00:51, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:oh yes please, let's spend more time talking about renaming the article. ''rolls eyes''. ] (]) 07:07, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Your ] is ''very'' helpful. ] (]) 07:20, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Sorry. I did immediately after support(ish) the proposal. I just find this such a low priority, I'm annoyed it's taking up discussion bandwidth (as was clear, I guess). And we're now talking about my annoyance! Well done, me. ] (]) 07:28, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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*In response to Kudzu1's comment in the survey, about ], I did a Google News search for "ghouta", glanced at the stories that came up on the first page of results, and found nearly an even split: |
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* singular —] 04:19, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::That's very helpful, thank you. Well, I'm not going to kick and scream if folks want to move the article, but my tendency is to say if it ain't broke, don't fix it. -] (]) 04:23, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== 'Al-Qaeda and Al-Nusra in Syria may have significant amounts of sarin' == |
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The US military have reportedly proved that sarin gas production is going on among some Sunni salafists in Iraq, and via Turkey, can reach Syrian rebels, former Pentagon official Michael Maloof told RT, citing classified sources. |
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http://rt.com/op-edge/syria-rebels-have-sarin-980/] (]) 05:15, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:RT is not a reliable source, and Michael Maloof is not notable. -] (]) 05:19, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::says who? RT is ok for facts just like the NYTs which has its own bias. Check the reliable ref criteria. If you want to go on about notable then be thorough beause some of the pro USA POV refs are using names very un notable, like 'a diplomat' or this beauty 'rebel sources'. -] (]) 06:12, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::RT is absolutely, unambiguously considered less reliable than the NYT. This has been reviewed on the ]. For example: |
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:::Adding the context that Russia has a great deal invested in defending Assad's regime makes it clear that RT cannot be taken seriously for claims of fact in Syrian civil war-related issues. ] (]) 07:37, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:: Here is a better article on what BotS mentioned since the RT one was a QnA session basically. Why would a reporter need to be notable to be cited? That makes absolutely no sense. —<font face=Verdana><span style="border:1px solid;border-radius:1.7em 0"><span style="background:#000;border-radius:1.5em 0 0"> -]</span>] </span></font> 05:41, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::He is not a reporter, he is the one presenting his opinion which means his opinion is only worth including if he is particularly significant. He is also somewhat infamous for misrepresenting his credentials. In the RT.com article he was presented as an "interviewee." WND.com is also wildly unreliable - I know them for their persistent Obama birther views. There are a number of RSN archives like ] that document reviews of their reliability. ] (]) 05:50, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::I've never seen/used wnd before finding that article but if I see that same story on CNN/FOX/MSNBC in the near future will that article be a RS all of a sudden because it would be CNN/FOX/MSNBC publishing it? Just curious, —<font face=Verdana><span style="border:1px solid;border-radius:1.7em 0"><span style="background:#000;border-radius:1.5em 0 0"> -]</span>] </span></font> 06:19, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::Re. 'a reporter need to be notable to be cited?' Translation. This is becoming uncomfortable for the US POV. |
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:::::http://www.iol.co.za/news/world/syrian-rebels-have-sarin-gas-official-1.1578968 |
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:::::http://www.reuters.com/article/2013/05/05/us-syria-crisis-un-idUSBRE94409Z201305 |
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:::::http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/05/05/syria-sarin_n_3220502.html |
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:::::http://www.liveleak.com/view?i=102_1379447013&comments=1 |
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:::::Del Ponte told a Swiss-Italian TV station, “Our investigators have been in neighboring countries interviewing victims, doctors and field hospitals and, according to their report … which I have seen, there are strong, concrete suspicions but not yet incontrovertible proof of the use of sarin gas, from the way the victims were treated.” Del Ponte added, “This was used on the part of the opposition, the rebels, not by the government authorities.” http://www.middle-east-online.com/english/?id=61410] (]) 06:21, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::Not sure what your trying to prove with all these links. But Maloof was fired by the government 10 years ago or more. And he works for a dodgy online newspaper. So, in his case he's is not a super reliable source. Why do we need this in the article? Also, the UN report says it was high quality sarin used in the attacks and not some home brew stuff. --] (]) 06:38, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::Not uncomfortable. Just irritating that you and a handful of others insist on a phony "balance" because you just can't believe that good old Bashar al-Assad would gas his own people (after months and years of simply killing them via conventional means). As I said above, it's ] abuse. Maloof is not remotely credible, Del Ponte is well known as someone who shoots from the hip and makes wild allegations, RT and WND are uproariously unreliable sources, etc. There is simply no ''actual, credible evidence'' that clearly disputes the UN report and the preponderance of claims in U.S., UK, French, German, and Turkish intelligence reports. If the Russians have such evidence, it's incumbent upon them to present it; at some point, simply calling the international community's conclusions "baseless" and insisting that there's no proof the rebels didn't do it isn't notable enough to merit inclusion. This article makes the unwavering Russian position, which has been echoed by some fringe commentators in the U.S. and elsewhere, quite clear. But it's half past time for you to accept that the consensus view on this incident is 1) the consensus view and 2) in light of the evidence, most likely accurate. And if you can't bring yourself to accept that, nor can you bring yourself to contribute in such a way that you acknowledge the facts of the matter -- which isn't to say that you having your own opinion/perspective on this conflict is improper or unwelcome! -- maybe you should think about pulling back from editing on a subject about which you have such obvious and irremovable biases. -] (]) 07:25, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::The disbelief about Assad using CW in Ghouta was quite prominent in a number of sources, because of the UN inspectors on the ground and the existing "red line" threat. Don't pretend it's because people reckon Assad is ''too nice'', it's strategic calculation that causes the disbelief. Also, on evidence, prior to the UN report there were a number of mainstream reports about how weak the public and classified evidence was, and while the UN report massively shifts the balance of probabilities, it's not entirely definitive as to culpability either; it's strong circumstantial evidence. As to Russia engaging with evidence: disappointing, but then the US/UK never explained why they dismissed the Russian report into the Khan al-Assal attack either. ] (]) 07:43, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::Yup my point also, there is no clear cut proof Assad did it. The UN report is not definitive. Motive and consequence clearly favours the rebels doing it. The links above show circumstantial evidence the rebels may have done it at Ghouta, like this ] ] 03:34, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Maloof in the RT story seems to still think the Adana (Turkey) al-Nusra arrest in May involved actual sarin, but Turkish prosecutors now allege the al-Nusra-linked militants were trying to obtain ingredients for it. Not keeping up with that doesn't inspire confidence. Anyway, what about a separate article about Syrian opposition attempts to obtain chemical weapons (]? ]?)? It would be easier to discuss that without the constant "well does that prove anything about the Ghouta attack" looming over it; and the basic topic is legitimate since eg the UK's JIC has conceded that some of the Syrian opposition are trying to get CW. ] (]) 07:36, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::There is a section in ] on chem weapons that could be one candidate for expansion. The Syrian opposition is so fragmented that it is not particularly meaningful to refer to say that "the opposition" is acquiring something. ] (]) 07:45, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Military-grade sarin == |
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Right now it says in the article ''Third party analysis of the evidence reported by the UN showed that the sarin gas was military grade''; but neither of the references used back that up. The NYT sources cites US/UK ambassadors saying Sellstrom told the UN the sarin was "high quality"; the other source doesn't address the issue. I've seen elsewhere (ref lost now) claims that the sarin included the chemical stabilisers permitting long-term storage. I can't find either of these issues (quality or stabilisers) mentioned in the UN report. This is unsatisfactory. ] (]) 07:21, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:The stabilizers are listed in the "other interesting chemicals" column of the last appendix of the UN report (lab reports). "This was not a chemical attack cooked up by opposition forces in some underground kitchen. It was a sophisticated attack involving military-grade sarin". Also , . ] (]) 08:45, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::''The stabilizers are listed in the "other interesting chemicals" column of the last appendix of the UN report (lab reports).'' - I thought those were byproducts or the result of decomposition. Which of the chemicals named in the lab reports are stabilisers? If the report explains that I missed it. ] (]) 10:24, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::There are three columns in appendix 7 per lab. '''CW Agent''' (for reporting actual CW molecules detected), '''Degredation Products''', and '''Other Interesting Chemical'''. ] (]) 19:13, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::OK, yes, but which of the identified "other interesting chemical" is a stabiliser? ] (]) 21:59, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::Good question. Per the UN report, "other relevant chemicals, such as stabilizers, are indicated and discussed in Appendix 7." However, looking down the list I do not see anything that jumps out at me as a chemical stabilizer. Published analysis by a specialist chemist would be good here since I am by no means an expert and ], but I have not seen any rigorous third party coverage of this that analyzes the results to the level of detail of "chemical 23 is a stabilizer. It is commonly associated with weapons manufactured by country x..." which of course would be a great source. More analysis may come out later; until then we have stuff like which can be included but is not as authoritative. I '''do''' see an RDX precursor in the list, which is interesting because RDX is not that common in military rockets, and its presence has been cited by Russia as evidence that the ] was the work of rebels. Sources such as Brown Moses, however, that blame Khan al Assal on Syria believe that the attack was with the same 330mm rocket that was used in Ghouta. If the 330mm Syrian rocket does use RDX as a bursting charge, it could mean that the Russians accidentally implicated Syria in another attack as well. Could be good info for both articles if reliable sources pick up the link. ] (]) 04:05, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::This is from the ref you supplied. 'Their mandate does not allow them to say who was responsible for the deadly barrage. But if you read between the lines, it isn't difficult to figure it out.' Oh OK read between the lines huh. wink wink. Peter Bouckaert, makes the conclusions in the first two refs. Is he a qualified military man? No. Hes in a human watch group making up theories. Lets talk to the scientists. Read on |
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::Again no one can tell who made it.' Military grade sarin, for instance, would not contain chemical byproducts likely to be present in sarin made through other recipes. And traces of the impurities in home-brewed sarin would be detectable in soil. But different recipes for the home-brewed version will yield different byproducts, and investigators may have no way of knowing which ones to seek. Even if the byproducts were known, detectives would need to know the normal levels of those compounds in the soil to determine whether the amounts are elevated. |
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::Likewise, examining tissues from victims would provide little help. Sarin kills by interfering with the action of a nervous system chemical in a way that ends up overstimulating muscles and paralyzing those around the lungs, impeding breathing. Physicians can detect signs of sarin in the tissues and in urine. Indeed, Secretary Kerry told the Senate Foreign Relations Committee today, "We have now learned that the hair and blood samples from first responders in east Damascus has tested positive for signatures of sarin." But investigators cannot discern the telltale impurities of the home-made nerve agent. |
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::Military-grade sarin theory to determine who did it. FAIL. Case closed. Strong POV refs removed and replaced POV quote (''Third party analysis of etc) with NPOV facts. https://www.scientificamerican.com/article.cfm?id=who-made-the-sarin] (]) 08:57, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::The Scientific American article was published prior to the UN report, so it is clear the author is speaking in hypotheticals. I do not think anyone is claiming that the provenance of the sarin can be determined from tissue samples taken from the victims - we are talking about direct swabs of chemical from the weapons parts and soil samples. The UN took soil samples in the rocket impact sites and far away, so the SA author's concerns about background levels of chemicals in the soil has been addressed. The UN report is careful to stay neutral, but we of course are going to use expert analysis of the report and report their conclusions. FYI, adding FAIL to your reply does not make you more credible, and your conclusion that this SA article disproves or even conflicts with the reports I added to the article is blatantly wrong. ] (]) 19:13, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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] Re 'The Scientific American article was published prior to the UN report, so it is clear the author is speaking in hypotheticals. Reference that. And I suggest you Re read what the scientists said, not some human rights zealot. Re 'The UN report is careful to stay neutral' Think on that. Its a fail because its a fail. If you disagree provide refs, of a standard to match mine. You cant. Fail. ] (]) 01:28, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:You want me to provide a reference to show that September 3 comes before September 16? What are you even trying to say here? You are so busy denying everything that you are incoherent. Also, my replies specific to the SA article make it obvious I did read it. ] (]) 02:47, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::The science is sound from The Scientific American article. There is nothing to refute it re the Ghouta samples. I looked. If you refute it please share the refs. I want you to stop digging in when what you write as fact can be scientifically disputed. You are coming across as a very pro USA POV editor. Can you rise above that? I dont know. ] (]) 03:20, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::I already explained above that you are misquoting the Scientific American article. You have not addressed that yet. Writing "scientifically" before something to try to make it sound more valid is an improvement over writing "FAIL", but a rather marginal one. ] (]) 04:05, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::I dont think so. Bit nit picky. I fixed it anyway. BTW just below it you have misquoted where the rockets came from. Your refs are saying maybe, but you say for sure. Please reword the section or find correct refs (they dont exist...fail) ] (]) 04:13, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::Not at all nit picky. The SA article says tests on people exposed to sarin will not indicate if the sarin is military or homebrew. Agreed. The SA article says soil and swab samples require controls to eliminate background contamination. Agreed. The UN report pulled soil and swab samples, and used controls that tested negative for all relevant chemicals. Background contamination eliminated. The statement ''However Scientific America has stated analysis of samples collected from the site will be unable to determine who made the sarin.'' that you put in the article is explicitly, demonstrably false. ] (]) 04:24, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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===Sellstrom=== |
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Apparently the description of the quality of the sarin comes from Sellstrom speaking to the UN, and saying the quality was higher than that used by Iraq in the Iran-Iraq war. , . Would be nice to have more details and/or a direct statement by him rather than UK/US ambassadors repeating what he said... but it'll have to do, and seems to be the origin of the "military-grade" claim. ] (]) 18:54, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Also, if the chemical stabilisers aren't in the actual UN report, that too is from Sellstrom's briefing to the UN Security Council . ] (]) 19:00, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::I agree that in the absence of a technical (as opposed to political) authority discussing the purity or provenance of the Sarin, this needs to be clearly attributed to Sellstrom. ] (]) 20:48, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== m-14 not bm-14 == |
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"The inspectors were able to identify several surface-to-surface rockets at the affected sites as 140mm BM-14 rockets" BM-14 is a rocket launcher, the inspectors identified m-14 rocket. ] (]) 09:25, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:This is not quite as simple as it seems. Analysts have confirmed that the 140mm rocket casing is the type used in the BM-14 launcher, even noting the specific factory the motor was manufactured in in Soviet Russia. But no reliable sources that I have seen have positively confirmed that the warhead was the standard-issue MS-14 chemical round, since the warhead was not recovered. So we know the motor was from the M-14 series of rockets but it might be a violation of ] to call the weapon an MS-14 chemical round if no secondary sources have identified it as such? What do people think? I also need to re-read the HRW report from last two weeks ago, because it might have gone into a little more detail. ] (]) 20:55, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Mint Press News smeared as "Shia advocacy site" == |
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I posted this in a thread above but I think it merits a new section here. Not even the PJ Media post referenced indicates that ] is a "Shia advocacy site." It indicates that it is a self-described "advocacy journalism" website (whose About Us page indicates it advocates for "social justice and human rights", not anything relating to Shia Islam) with an editor-in-chief who apparently happens to be a Shia Muslim. No matter how you spin it, the current wording is not factual. Beyond that, the religious views of Mint Press News' editor-in-chief have nothing to do with the content of reporting by Dale Gavlak and Yahya Ababneh (which, moreover, consisted of interviews that amount to hearsay; the article is not even the authors' personal claims) any more than the religious views of any other non-religious news outlets' editors-in-chief have any bearing on the content their respective organizations publish. That the interviews in the article contain allegations that appear to be roughly in sync with the Assad regime's claims, in no way makes the entire website of Mint Press News a "Shia advocacy" organization; assertions to the contrary are blatantly misleading. ] (]) 19:04, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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: this is about a single sentence that is apparently annoying this SPA as it prevents the page becoming an entirely loving self-description from mintpressnews. it has backers - one of thm is the editors father in law - he is an avid 12 er shia - I have no idea what this is , but his views incude virulent anti-Syrian rebel views. other backers are hidden . it is well knwn for carrying a story that smeared the rebels - you don't mind the rebels getting smeared , but if anything, in the name of openness, has info about the ideology of the backers and editors you set up a right yawp - the ghouta story makes enquiries into the people behind this operation utterly legitimate - - to argue the views of an editor and backers are irrelevant to content is disingenuous in the extreme - there is no 'spinning' of the PJ story - its title is quoted word for word and a link provided to the article. - it is you who want to spin - its ok to smear rebels and carry story of them gassing themselves , that looks to be proven utter flapdoodle by the UN report, but if anyone dare provide a link with something to say about mintpress you go off on one. curious set of values. ] (]) 19:14, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Since the mintpress report has since been discredited, why don't we just remove it and take care of the issue that way? ] (]) 19:23, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::My point is that the article containing allegations of rebels carrying out the Syria attack has nothing to do with the religious views of the editor-in-chief of the website that published the interviews. Let's look at how distantly correlated these two things are. The claim that rebels carried out the chemical attack are made by Syrians interviewed by a Jordanian journalist, who co-wrote an article with a Jordanian-based American journalist who also writes for AP and NPR (Gavlak), who together published the article on a Minnesota-based news website founded by a Palestinian-American who apparently is a Shia Muslim. The father-in-law mentioned is not a "backer" but is called a "key adviser" in one article. His personal views do not belong anywhere besides a Misplaced Pages entry on him alone. Likewise for his daughter-in-law. Whether the article in question belongs in this entry in general is not my concern. ] (]) 19:39, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::: to say, as this SPA account does 'the article containing allegations of rebels carrying out the Syria attack has nothing to do with the religious views of the editor-in-chief of the website that published the interviews' - of course it bloody does, its like saying a chain of cinema exhibitors has nothing to do with a film, they didn't make the film, - a perusal of odeh muhaweshs facebook page which I used to be able to read - keep getting an error message at he mement, carried absolutely intense, 100% copper bottomed pro assad regime propaganda - to call this irrelevant to the fact that a press he is involved with carried a notorious example of propaganda is not right imo. ] (]) 19:41, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::I support removing all information that mentions Mint Press News. ] (]) 19:48, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::In its own disreputable way though, it is part of the story - look at the role misinformation played in shaping some uninformed public opinion - i heard phone-ins when people shouted at the host that they ''knew'' the rebels had carried out the ghouta attacks - this kind of story is part of the story in the same way stories of ] or something was part of the first world war story of propaganda. ] (]) 19:52, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::Mint Press News didn't claim Syrian rebels carried out the Ghouta attacks. People interviewed by Yahya Ababneh did. ] characterized the article as "honest about the limits of its knowledge." ] (]) 20:10, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::sophistries really. but, so what. mint press ran a story. comment was made in various sources about the people editing it, 'key advising' it. that's it. ] (]) 20:27, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::I think we should keep the story for the time being, along with worthwhile criticism. Perhaps the "Shia advocacy" statement isn't worthwhile, but other criticism is fine. -] (]) 21:58, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::::PJ media noted it was Shia - the spa keeps saying its just the wildest coincidence that muhawesh, who happens to be an avid pro-Syrian regime bloke and is a key advisor - is aprt of an operation that promoted the rebels gassed themselves story - that is just his insistent pov, it is not strengthened by ite re-iteration over and over - PJ media mentioned the Shia side of things - they noted it - that is a fact - if the Shia thing is written of as irrelevant that is interfering with the PJ media ref and the way they chose to title and present the story on the provenance and publishing of that story - if it is annoying a certain pov to have this pointed out, - censoring it - that is inadmissible imo. ] (]) 22:11, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::This is an article about the Ghouta chemical attacks, not about an obscure source that's been determined as non reputable, but we include it and then immediately discredit it. That's not how we do things. ] (]) 22:14, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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===Speculation in general=== |
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The section above is about how to neutrally communicate that a Mintpress article from early on was discussed broadly on the internet but ultimately discredited. More broadly, there has been a great deal of speculation about these attacks - by the media and by public officials of verious nationalities (ie Russian denials and American congressmen). Many of these speculations have been categorically discredited since. It sounds like this speculation has itself been the subject of discussion in reliable sources. I think the best thing to do with this "historical" speculation is to greatly collapse it and put it in its own section near the end of the article. ] (]) 22:43, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:That's fine. However, commenting about the source is not appropriate. ] (]) 22:52, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::If we are going to refer to published sources from the last three weeks as disproven speculation, we had better have a source for that! ] (]) 23:12, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::The original complaint is that this article makes negative comments about the source. Either the source is reliable and it should be used, or it's not reliable and shouldn't be used. Right now we use it, but then immediately discredit it. This article is not about the source, and all commentary about the source is inappropriate. I think the entire thing needs to be deleted. There's nothing here that can't be said by using a better source. ] (]) 23:24, 18 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::If a crappy source made incorrect statements about the attack; and that crappy report was picked up, retweeted, and influenced public opinion about the attack; and if the impact of the crappy speculation itself the topic of discussion by secondary sources then that is indeed a good topic to include in this article. ] (]) 00:04, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::That's true, however, the sources commenting about it are just as crappy. ] (]) 00:12, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::Well speaking of crappy sources hows about 'Mother Jones'. And third party analysis of the serious events by non experts jumping to conclusions is not good enough. See below to solve these issues ] (]) 00:31, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::If you have a concern about sources, you could take take it here or to ] rather than reverting. Or you could add a different source since the views I posted are by no means unique. The consensus at the RSN though seems pretty clear that they are considered reliable . Context matters, so it is of course possible that the community would agree with you in this specific case. ] (]) 01:11, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::So what about Mint Press? Do we have consensus to delete? Revise? What? ] (]) 00:45, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::If the Mint Press article has been deemed as "discredited," it was not discredited because of its editor-in-chief's religion. It was most definitely not because ] is a "Shia advocacy site," because it is not a Shia advocacy site. That suggests something like a religious charity nonprofit group. That's not what it is. It's a for-profit media startup company in Minnesota. Most of its content appears to be about American news topics, and its writers appear to come from diverse backgrounds, some with ties to well-established credible publications. The only evidence being cited to suggest that the editor-in-chief's religious views, of all things, are somehow influencing what its reporters write, is that the Ghouta chemical weapons story it published -- but which was written by freelance journalists, one of whom also writes for AP and NPR, and neither whom even claimed that the allegations being made in interviews were necessarily anything beyond allegations -- happened to roughly align with the Assad regime's claims. I don't think this logic is legitimate. ] (]) 01:34, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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An editor made a suggestion, I include it below, for inclusive language for both views. We need to start doing it. Why? for NPOV. i.e. There is also an argument that many refs are anti Syrian regime and that the USA is also. ] (]) 01:03, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Neither Mintpress nor PJ are reliable sources, and as such, neither belong in this article. -] (]) 04:15, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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I added a speculation section documenting what happened here. The Mint Press article was cited, recited, and I think for better or worse this incorrect report ultimately had a significant impact on the chronology of events. ] (]) 04:28, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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{{outdent}}gavlak is distancing from the report - from Brown Moses BlogSpot -20/9/2013 - "Dale Gavlak has now sent me the following statement about the article. |
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"Mint Press News incorrectly used my byline for an article it published on August 29, 2013 alleging chemical weapons usage by Syrian rebels. Despite my repeated requests, made directly and through legal counsel, they have not been willing to issue a retraction stating that I was not the author. '''Yahya Ababneh is the sole reporter and author of the Mint Press News piece'''. To date, Mint Press News has refused to act professionally or honestly in regards to disclosing the actual authorship and sources for this story. |
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'''I did not travel to Syria, have any discussions with Syrian rebels, or do any other reporting on which the article is based'''. The article is not based on my personal observations and should not be given credence based on my journalistic reputation. Also, it is false and misleading to attribute comments made in the story as if they were my own statements." |
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was it Winnie Churchill? who said a lie gets half way round the world before the truth can get its boots on. plus ça change.] (]) 12:07, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Really nice work on that section. -] (]) 05:04, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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Well it adds nothing much really. Its kinda negative editing. Speculation, where does it end? Its coming across as a bit of a rant. where was the consensus? Better off to write NPOV with consensus that adds something better than this. In a review it will go for sure ] (]) 06:10, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:I don't agree. It's valuable to express the initial uncertainty, dispute, and fog-of-war surrounding the circumstances of these attacks. But it is clear at this point that the consensus view, which follows from evidence that overwhelmingly supports this mainstream narrative, is that the attacks were almost certainly carried out by regime forces, from within regime territory, against opposition-held and contested territory, using rockets only the military is known to possess, using amounts of sarin only the government is known to possess. It simply no longer makes sense -- if it ever did -- to include ] and ] claims that the rebels carried out the attacks alongside the mounting body of evidence (most recently bolstered by the UN report) that supports the mainstream conclusion, as if the claims have equal weight. They don't. -] (]) 06:27, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::'' It's valuable to express the initial uncertainty, dispute, and fog-of-war surrounding the circumstances of these attacks.'' - I absolutely agree. The difficulty is clarification the best available knowledge ''now'' without losing that history. We should be able to do both if we try. ] (]) 06:41, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Yes. I think the creation of a "Speculation" section is a step in that direction. Perhaps it can be workshopped a bit further, but I think that's the right approach -- presenting claims like this with due weight and context. -] (]) 06:47, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::I tend to agree it could be valuable if its reworked into neutral language. There are also some interesting bits i.e. the hostage over hearing item. Perhaps more material of a better quality may turn up as well. I'll do a search. ] (]) 22:09, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Suggestion from a non involved experienced editor == |
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' I think the only way is where many suspect foul play, but none can prove it for sure, we should stick to "according to A this and according to B that", so that anyone, be he follower of A or B opinion or rejecting both A and B as false propaganda, can simply get the idea of what is going on by comparing the two reports.' |
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This may help stop many of the edits and reverts if the language was neutral and NPOV inclusive for views A and B. |
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BTW Sopher just wipes out 2000 -3000 characters. Not on. ] (]) 00:27, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:At this point, view "B" is "Assad is innocent despite all evidence, please believe us!". This is a minority viewpoint, and NPOV does not dictate equal time with the mainstream view that this was an attack by Syria. It is worth mention only because it is still the official line of Russia and Syria. You can help stop the reverts if you stop reverting, BTW. ] (]) 00:40, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::He reverted and has been warned by an admin. I agree about listing the sources with no commentary such as pro-Castro or whatever, even it it's sourced. ] (]) 00:43, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Good re Sopher. |
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] thats your POV. There are many refs which support this view that are dubious, like Mother Jones and many others which can be countered ie the military grade sarin issue. No one can prove conclusively Assad did it, there is some circumstantial evidence alone. View A is 'He did it, I just know it....look at this third party analysis. (reply Ah ahem hes a nobody) well its military grade sarin (reply. ah ahem no, that cant be proved see scientific American). Well I just know evil Assad did it and evil Russia too and the USA cant be wrong ...can it?' (reply Ah ahem...Iraq) yeah but...(just stop already) |
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Lets stop the silly refs and use both sides with good refs and this sort of language, "according to A this and according to B that" ] (]) 01:13, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:yes, please! ] (]) 01:33, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Yup its overdue, see suggestion on my talk page, last entry. ] (]) 03:14, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::I find editing can actually be quite therapeutic, so now that I've collected myself more, I will reiterate this: ], ], ], ], ]. I apologize for ]. But I would also repeat my admonishment above that if an editor cannot separate his or her personal biases from his or her contributions to Misplaced Pages, that editor might consider withdrawing. I hope we can find common ground here, but again, Misplaced Pages has guidelines for what sources should be used and how they should be used for very good reason. -] (]) 05:40, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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I think your apology may be accepted more readily if you removed the struck thru rant. The common ground exists if NPOV is adhered to and better phrasing of conflicting referenced views are made. Are you thinking of withdrawing? ] (]) 05:52, 19 September 2013 (UTC) . |
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:No. But I think you should consider whether your own bias precludes you from being able to contribute in a constructive way here. I hope you will decide that you can begin following NPOV yourself. -] (]) 06:22, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Thank you for listening and removing the eyesore. Now the suggestion above is a good one. Editors who have problems with it are hard to understand. Its quite a common solution to use. Why all the resistance? My bias has been reviewed. There are No hard facts yet for the USA stance. Id be interested in your views on Iraqs WMD> use a talk page. Interested? ] (]) 08:03, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::The article has never been in better shape. Thank you everyone for cooperating. ] (]) 15:00, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::Since my opinion was quoted here as the "non-involved editor", I might as well state that at this point, I find the article looks as NPOV as it can get. I am sure there are people who feel all opinion contrary to theirs is fringe, invalid, etc, which is fine, but that Russia's officially accepted version should not even be stated because it is a "minority" view does not seem to be according to WP:VALID, WP:DUE, WP:FRINGE, WP:INDISCRIMINATE, WP:V. ] <small>]</small> 16:19, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::That wasn't my argument. Past incarnations of this article have sought to balance virtually every source that favors the mainstream narrative with a source that does not, and that is improper. I do think it is in much better shape now, and I'm glad to see some agreement here on that. -] (]) 16:45, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::] believe it or not it actually is better, but I agree with you. But ] you have been doing some heavy reverts and adds without consensus and got a warning as a result. Slow it down and talk about things. We have made improvements but slid back recently due to that. I think it detracts from an encyclopedia when a big player like Russia's officially accepted version should not even be stated because it is a "minority" view. ] (]) 22:05, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::What a crazy coincidence that the "uninvolved administrator" (who is, of course, not actually an administrator at all) just happens to mention on her user pages, just as you do, her admiration of Maher Baba! And that she knew to place the same "community sanctions notice" on my page that you received recently (from an actual admin, natch) despite being an infrequent editor on Misplaced Pages! Oh, and just to make this clear to you, contributing to a page is ''not'' "edit warring". I followed ], and lo and behold, USchick and Hoverfish seem to think the article (which actually mentions the Syrian/Russian position more prominently in the lead now, if it matters) seem to think it looks pretty good now. -] (]) 22:49, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::Re "uninvolved administrator". Agree I know its not helpful. Dinner party talk led to Syria and Wiki...I think I know who is trying to help, but its not helpful. I'm surprised she managed so much lol and will have a word if she posts again. For the record though she is right you have broken the one revert per day rule blatantly. So an admin may ping you. BTW its ]. ] (]) 00:21, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Please don't insult my intelligence with this thoroughly unconvincing story. And please show me where I violated 1RR. I was the only person editing the page, to my knowledge, when I was checking through it and making some changes last night (most of which were for uniform style and readability), and I had not edited the page for more than 24 hours prior to that time. -] (]) 00:24, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::::Well this isnt the place to discuss your intelligence. You are in an edit war. I will put this back in soon that you removed without discussion. . You have done a lot of edits without consensus. This article has tags about that. Here on the 19th you appear 21 times. Quite a few cuts too. 7500 characters + ] (]) 00:33, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::If you want to readd that section, it's within your right to do so; I felt the information contained within was adequately covered elsewhere. The mindset that every time somebody says something about these attacks and Russia calls them a bad name, Russia's objection has to be noted in a position of prominence in this article smacks of ] as well as ]. But I followed ] in making my changes, the scope of which I will not apologize for -- as I said, much of my work was organizing and rewriting parts of the article in a more readable (and hopefully more ]) way without changing the meaning -- and I am happy to follow the tried-and-true ] process. So, if you think Russia's "nuh-uh" in response to the U.S. intelligence reports is notable and should be included, go ahead and make your case. I wouldn't think including the fact that Japan's prime minister said he agreed with the U.S. assessment is notable, either, for what it's worth. -] (]) 00:41, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::: Well I tend to agree with you about the 'mindset'. The article is about as NPOV as it probably will get now, bar tweaking and watching new edits. The Russian view should not be overdone but it should be in there if the refs are good and the subject is notable. Japan is not to Syria as Russia is. Japan has no UN security council veto. I think the bit you cut out is both notable and well reffed, so Ill take up your offer and put it back. ] (]) 06:05, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Questioning the trajectory analysis == |
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Someone added this questioning the trajectory analysis. However, the analysis is clearly laid out based on the UN report and should be directly verifiable from it. Ideally some credible source would judge the points made, but if none can be found, we could draw out these points from the UN report itself. Very briefly, the claim is that the Moadamiyah rocket trajectory can be questioned because the environmental samples were negative for sarin, while the Ain Tarma rocket trajectory can be questioned because the report didn't say the rocket contained chemical agent. ] (]) 16:36, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:] applies here. -] (]) 16:42, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::The article claims that there's no evidence that the rockets analized by the UN are the same rockets that delivered sarin. Considering that there was a lot of firepower before and after the event, that makes sense. This statement from the UN report: The inspectors cautioned that the five sites they investigated had been "well traveled by other individuals prior to the arrival of the mission" gives credibility to the Russian position that the UN report is inconclusive. ] (]) 16:53, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::That sounds like ]. What are reliable sources saying? -] (]) 17:02, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::''At first they described them as inconclusive. But following talks with Syria, Russia’s deputy foreign minister, Sergei Ryabkov, condemned the report as “politicised, preconceived and one-sided”.'' Russia is urging the United States to declassify all of its intelligence. ] (]) 17:47, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::The information is classified, so we only get to see what they want us to see. Russia is screaming, but they can't reveal classified information. Without that, who knows what actually happened. ] (]) 17:50, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::Governments will always have some information that is classified. Hiding sources or information that leads to sources is normally classified. This would be a common situation is almost every article (Benghazi, Killing Bin Laden, etc) and doesn't signify anything unusually. Russian are just trying to add to the conspiracy angle since they have nothing to prove there version of events. --] (]) 20:11, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::except the classified information that they have access to and we don't. ] (]) 20:42, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::If a tree falls in the forest and no one hears it, does it make a sound? If the Russians perpetually claim they have watershed evidence on this but never release it, then their position is indistinguishable from bluster and should be given no weight. ] (]) 20:57, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::They can't release classified information from the US. See links above where they're asking the US to declassify it. ] (]) 21:05, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::::Russia has continuously claimed to have evidence that implicates rebels in Ghouta. Why not just publicize this evidence (which they control) rather than asking the US to release intel? The obvious answer is because they have no evidence, only bluster, and they are making a safe bet by asking the US to release more evidence since they can just deny whatever the US discloses as biased, or decry the secrecy if the US refuses. We do not need to give more space in the article to empty bluster. ] (]) 22:56, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::I'm sure you'll understand when we ask to see a source that disqualifies the questions as empty bluster. As soon as there's a source, I will personally remove the information myself. I promise! ] (]) 03:58, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::It is bluster until they back up their claims. The kvue article you link above is old (sept 2), and the economist article which you cite goes on to point out Russia's hypocrisy regarding the UN and Syria, as well as that "The UN itself issued an unusually blunt riposte, describing the results of its investigation as 'indisputable'." ] (]) 04:54, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:That source is propaganda, and makes a number of mischaracterizations in order to infer something that is not true. "At least one of the two rockets the UN commission assessed contained no chemical agent at all." No, fragments from both rockets analyzed in detail tested positive for Sarin or its decomposition products (specifically in appendix 7 see line items 2 & 3 for Moadamiyah and line items 14, 15, and 16 for Zamalka/Ein Tarma). Analysts have pointed out that the 330mm rocket, with a thin-walled chamber surrounding the payload and only a small "bursting" charge, is clearly a chemical warhead. If it had been high explosive, the rocket would have been disintegrated in the blast. The 140mm rocket warhead was not recovered, but the UN report and third party analysis notes the lack of high explosive or incendiary damage around the impact point - the same impact point that is contaminated with Sarin and decomposition products. Given that this article is clearly trying to discredit the UN report and subsequent mainstream analysis, I think it is safe to say it has no place in the article. USchick, I have not seen a single reliable source that analyzes the UN report and claims its findings are inconclusive. ] (]) 20:43, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::VQuakr, what you said about the weapons sounds just as reasonable to me, someone who knows nothing about weapons. Is there a secondary source about that besides the (primary) UN report? That would go a long way to clarify things in the article. Otherwise, it seems very much like the Iraq war where the US claims weapons of mass destruction used by someone they accuse, based on secret information that only they can see. ] (]) 20:54, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Secondary sources supporting this are already in the article. The info on the lab results can be sourced directly from the UN report since there is no synthesis needed there (the UN identifies the sarin decomposition products). All of this info on trajectories is coming from the UN and third party analysts using open information, not the US government (though they also stated from the beginning that the rockets were fired from Syrian territory). ] (]) 21:15, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::Sadly for the sake of clarity its much like the Iraq war and the trajectory data is in conclusive, and not rock solid. Confusing the matter are all the normal rockets that were fired from all over the place. Maybe thats why the rocket angle is not getting traction as a story by serious experts. ] (]) 21:54, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::"not getting traction as a story by serious experts." Who are "serious experts" in this context? What reliable sources say that weapons experts are keeping quiet to avoid ruining their reputations? Why don't they just speak up and say the evidence is poor, rather than staying silent? ] (]) 22:51, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::I find the weapon discussion a bit too confusing to follow. The point that did make sense to me was the Moadamiyah site being negative for sarin in the environmental samples - if this is true (and I don't have time to figure out how to check that in the UN report), that would be a point against the solidity of the trajectory findings, because it makes it more plausible that the weapons could have been moved (the report does note some comings-and-goings of people, but gives various reasons why they think the tested weapons weren't). It would just be nice to have an actual expert review the solidity of the report findings ''in toto'' from a position of neutrality, and not from a position of "does it prove the government did it". ] (]) 21:58, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::It is confusing. Until we know for sure what you say is sound re '''in toto'' from a position of neutrality, '] (]) 04:41, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::The question I have about the rockets is how can they tell these 2 rockets were launched the day of the attack? Not the day before and not the day after, especially when the Syrian army did "heavy shelling" the day after. Any sarin residue around the site and on the rockets would be from a different bombardment. The UN report does nothing to establish that these 2 rockets actually belong to the bombardment that carried sarin warheads. The two "independent" reports came from people who followed the trajectory angle, but those people did nothing to find out when the rockets were launched. This seems like a big gigantic question and I wonder why the weapons experts aren't asking that. Am I missing something? ] (]) 03:54, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::I'm no expert on this, and I don't think you are, either. Hence the peril of ], and why Misplaced Pages has guidelines against it. I surmise -- in my amateur, completely unverifiable opinion -- that the inspectors believed those rockets were fired in the attack because they were mostly intact, apparently carried chemical payloads, and tested positive for sarin. -] (]) 04:04, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::No you are not missing anything. I saw an analysis about some branches missing from a tree they linked to a missile nearby to create trajectory. But what else could have damaged the tree in a battle zone. Another missile from the hundreds fired from all over, Tank fire, RPG, debris ? All these and more. The data is not definitive and should be ''in toto'' from a position of neutrality, ] (]) 04:41, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::That's what I'm worried about, that the inspectors were so busy measuring the angle of the trajectory, no one bothered to ask if it was the right rocket. Surely this one blogger is not the only person asking this question. ] (]) 04:18, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::Exactly. What else could have damaged the tree in a battle zone. Another missile from the hundreds fired from all over, Tank fire, RPG, debris ? Wheres the definitive report? ] (]) 04:44, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::The UN team included actual weapons experts. They did not express any concerns that these were not examples of the weapons used. Appendix 5 of the report describes their methodology. They knew where to look for the munitions based on where casualties were located. They found where the 140mm munition had glanced off a building and the crater where it hit the ground. The damage to the building and crater was used to determine the trajectory. In Zamalka/Ein Tarma, two 330mm rockets were found. The warhead section of both of these rockets was retrieved - not something that would ever happen in a detonated high explosive rocket. In addition, the warhead design includes fill plugs - a feature unique to chemical munitions designed to be filled with volatile chemicals before use. Rockets with high explosive warheads are shredded when they detonate, while most of the damage to the motor sections of all three rockets appeared to be from hitting the ground. Popular mechanics wrote an article about the M-14 rocket, . I think it should be added to the article. ] (]) 04:42, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Thank you for that article, yes I agree it has info that should be added. This is what caught my attention from the article "The BM-14 is the farthest thing from a precision weapon." From another source "The trajectory includes the Republican Guard base, the presidential palace and grounds" . Who in their right mind would fire a "non precision" weapon over the presidential palace? Even if he wasn't home at the time, whaaaaaattt????? The sources also can't seem to agree if the 330 was home made or not. “The 330 mm rocket appears to be a unique Syrian weapon so I have not the foggiest idea of its range,” Long wrote. No wonder Putin is screaming for a real investigation. smh ] (]) 05:12, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::::Key points. Who in their right mind would fire a "non precision" weapon over the presidential palace? and No wonder Putin is screaming for a real investigation ] (]) 06:02, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::::USChick, the source you linked clearly agrees that analysis of the UN evidence implicates Assad. It would be misrepresenting the source to imply that the trajectory is evidence the attacks were not Syrian, and original research to claim that the reported trajectory caused implausible risk to the palace. Article improvements aside, rocket artillery does present a short round risk but is pretty reliable (globalresearch cites a 1:1000 chance of a round falling 1 km short). Non-precision in this case means a probable hit pattern on the scale of few city blocks, not 4/5ths the intended travel distance. All artillery carries some risk of rounds falling short, yet conventional Syrian pieces have been blazing away to the south right over the palace and other Damascus high-value regions. Putin was "screaming" for the UN report until the results implicated his ally. The sources are actually pretty consistent that the 330 is a domestically produced weapon designed to be launched from existing 333mm launch tubes such as the ]. You are probably right that no one has much clue as to its range or accuracy, other than "not very far" and "not very accurate." ] (]) 08:01, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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Several flaws with the UN trajectory calculation and other conclusions are analyzed . ] (]) 00:54, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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===Moadamiyah=== |
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Some more sources about the differences between Moadamiyah samples and Ayn Tarma/Zamalka samples. ] and some random blog with helpful screenshots from the UN report . Parry also said "I was told by one intelligence source on Monday night that there continues to be skepticism among intelligence analysts about the White House claims and conclusions being drawn from the UN report." ] (]) 14:17, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:The blog source is terrible - it crops images from the report tables to draw emphasis away from the degredation products found at Moadamiyah, for example. The news source is more interesting though - ] helped break the Iran/Contra scandal and I consider him alternative, not crazy. I wish he had made more effort to consider other possibilities besides the "no chemical attack in Moadamiyah", though. For example, the Moadamiyah rocket broke apart in midair and just the motor was recovered. Also, the 330mm rockets have a chemical payload on the order of 10-20x as much as a 140mm rocket (assuming its warhead was similar in size to the Russian chemical warhead for that rocket, which was not exported to Syria). Both of these factors would mean that the physical samples collected in Moadamiyah would have been more lightly contaminated, while the warhead components and dirt surrounding the impact at Ayn Tarma/Zamalka would have been literally soaked with sarin during the attack. He also makes no attempt to explain why he thinks the signature decomposition products found at Moadamiyah were "false positives" rather than, as the UN report concluded, indicators that the chemicals were used. The control samples used did not test positive for those chemicals, as they would if this was indeed a false positive. |
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:That said, Parry is a well-known source with a reputation for breaking stories, and his observations merit a sentence in the article. ] (]) 21:29, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::I think you're being a bit unfair on the blog, which does note the degradation products mostly found by one lab; it says that could indicate other sources like insecticide. (I've no idea how plausible that is, and I suspect they don't either.) The headline summary they could have made but didn't quite is that there were 13 environmental samples from Moadamiyah, of which Sample 3 for some reason is split into two and tested twice. With 2 labs, that's 28 chances to find CW or degradation products. Not a one of those chances was taken for CW; only 8 were taken for degradation products - and of those 8, only 1 involves the 2 labs agreeing! Your point about payload differences is fair and probably far outweighs the slight time difference which is in Moadamiyah's favour (2 fewer days for sarin to degrade). But at the end of the day, the environmental results for Moadamiyah can only be described as very weak. ] (]) 22:17, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::I added something, but I couldn't remotely do justice to the issue in a sentence. I do so hate it when people write things like ''X criticised Y ''. Either the criticism is worth explaining enough that a reader can understand it and have some judgement of its relevance and meaning, or it isn't worth having at all. ] (]) 22:32, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::A great start, and I think a well-balanced contribution that fairly represents the source. Thanks for the contribution! I stand by my characterization of the blog post though. DIMP, for example, is a byproduct of sarin production, that is it. It does not occur naturally in the environment, and it is not associated with pesticides. They downplay the findings of relevant chemicals in Moadamiyah consistently, and the cropping of tables from the UN report is inexcusable. They also jump right from "we think the data from Moadamiyah is inconclusive" to "FAAAAKE!" immediately, which is a bit of a red flag that they already had decided the conclusion. ] (]) 23:03, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::Thanks. I've just added DIMP/IMPA to ] - perhaps you could have a look because the recent media references are to IMPA as the first breakdown product, while the ] has ] as the first, which then breaks down into IMPA. Both are apparently unique to sarin. It helps to be clear about this! ] (]) 00:46, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:I don't think this Consortiumnews.com blog is a reliable source. If Parry or someone else makes this argument in a reputable newspaper or journal, I can see a case for inclusion, but as it is now, I think it's given ''far'' too much weight for an article on a fringy-looking blog. -] (]) 00:57, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Russia holds its ground == |
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Its pleasing to see more NPOV content and a more careful approach to wording. Russia is holding its stance, and thats very interesting. Hopefully reliable technical data will come out so their position can be referenced and the proven perpetrators are unveiled conclusively. I think in time it will. |
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“We have every grounds to believe that it was a provocation. Of course, it was adroit and smart, but, at the same time, primitive in terms of technical performance. They took an old Soviet-made missile, which was taken out of service in the Syrian army long ago. It was most important to have ‘made in the USSR’ written ,” Putin said at the Valday discussion forum on Thursday. |
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“No matter how difficult it might be, but if in the end we manage to answer the question… as to who committed that crime – and that was certainly a crime – the next step will follow. Then, together with our colleagues from the United Nations Security Council we will have to define the level of responsibility of those who committed the crime,” Putin said. |
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] (]) 20:51, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Talk is cheap; the Khan-al-Assal report handed to the UN in July is still not published - and since it doesn't seem likely to rely substantially (or even at all) on sensitive sources it's hard to see why. The UN report has massively raised the bar for how sophisticated a "false flag" operation this would have had to have been. It's not quite impossible, but at this point, Russia needs to provide good evidence or it's just hand-waving to protect an ally. Skepticism was due to poorly-evidenced western intelligence reports - it's also due to unevidenced Russian claims. ] (]) 22:06, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Still no evidence, but the developing Russian story seems to be that the weapons were Soviet-made and exported to Libya and converted to chemical weapons by Gaddafi, before getting to Syria in the post-Gaddafi chaos. . ] (]) 22:14, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Its now more complex yes. I was a little surprised to read this report and see Putin put his nation and reputation out there like that. Something will give eventually. Clearly Putin has made a decision and he has pretty much said it was a sophisticated operation. |
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:::This too is interesting to explain some of the mindset. ' The Russian leader is frustrated that Western states have no idea what they would do if, after their interference in the ongoing war, extremists came to power in Syria. “Would they drive them away with a newspaper?” Putin said. ] (]) 22:18, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::Blade, the observation that the US's policy on Syria does not appear well thought through is attributable to not only Russia but international and US opinion sources as well. ] (]) 22:48, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::OK ] (]) 00:00, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Only the 140mm rocket is Soviet. Analysts have repeatedly noted that the 330mm is not a Soviet-era import, but appears to be a domestically-produced model made to be launched from 330mm-class launchers of similar rockets. The 140mm warhead and rocket body can be disconnected and stored separately, and since the warhead was not recovered there is no way for third parties to verify its provenance (as opposed to the rocket body, which is indeed quite old). Perhaps Jamil's comment that the sarin came from Libya actually indicates insider knowledge that could only be from the folks that launched it? The article actually says Syria says the rocket's history is USSR-Syria-Rebels-Libya-Rebels-False Flag Attack. ] (]) 22:48, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Russian POV is really a conspiracy thing. The more proof there is the more it proves the conspiracy. Hopefully this article can steer clear of that thought process. Btw, if you want to see what happens if you think bit of information is lie read the Russian version of this article. --] (]) 23:47, 19 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::Since the warhead was never recovered, what makes you think it was a chemical warhead? This rocket was designed to carry all kinds of things, what evidence is there to say it was sarin? What makes you think this rocket wasn't launched before or after the sarin attack? (Not being a smart a**, just asking for clarification.) It's very obvious to me that none of us are watching the same news reports, so when we come here, we all have preconceived notions. That's why we clash. Just an observation. ] (]) 04:08, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::Those are the key questions and no ones answering them. What does Russia know. Putin - ''They took an old Soviet-made missile, which was taken out of service in the Syrian army long ago. It was most important to have ‘made in the USSR’ written'' ,” ] (]) 04:51, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::USChick, an explosive rocket would have caused explosive damage and mangled the rocket motor. The evidence that the agent used was sarin was partly the proof of sarin exposure in the thousands of victims, and partly the fact that the motor was coated in sarin decomposition products. We do not and may never have quantitative analysis of concentrations on the rocket relative to the surrounding area, but the number of relevant chemicals found on and immediately around the impact sites are good evidence that the UN experts picked the correct munition. But seriously, if the folks on the ground from the UN are confident in what they found why are we questioning it here? ] (]) 05:27, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::I'm just trying to understand before I decide which version to believe. They all have ulterior motives and personal agendas, my heart goes out to the victims and refugees. I work with "experts" and if you talk to 100 experts, you will get 100 different opinions, and the only thing that makes you an experts is, you have to be from out of town. The UN weapons experts have experience with what kind of weapons? This particular kind? The kind manufactured in 1967 in the Soviet Union and have long been decommissioned? I doubt it. Certainly not the 330mm kind, because even the expert has no idea how far it can travel. Ad who would launch such a weapon over Assad's house? Probably not Assad! Sorry about the rant, but you asked. ] (]) 05:57, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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Update: FWIW, Russia is claiming the Sellstrom team ignored evidence passed to them in Damascus . ] (]) 10:30, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Saw that. Interesting update ] (]) 21:35, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::"The Syrian authorities have conducted their own sampling and investigation, analysis in terms of possible evidence of the rebels being responsible for the tragic episodes both on August 21, but beyond that also on August 22, 23 and 24,” Sergey Ryabkov told RT's Maria Finoshina" - so the rebels gassed themselves 4 days running. fucking hell. ] (]) 23:21, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Yes, well, barring the sadly obscure munition-switch accident idea (raised by a UN weapons inspector, but zero followup), you're left with either a fairly sophisticated false flag operation, or a monumentally stupid decision by the Syrian government. (Monumentally stupid because the tactical advantage appears to be approximately nil - the targeted neighbourhoods are still rebel-controlled despite concurrent major conventional assault; and the strategic disadvantage is obvious, given the massive risk of Western intervention on the side of the rebels.) Pick your poison. Question worth asking though - only the Russian and Syrian govts seem to allege further attacks on August 22-24... which seems odd. ] (]) 00:55, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::IMHO the munition switch theory did not gain much traction because it is not plausible. The 330mm rockets have fill plugs and are significantly shorter than the high-explosive variant that has also been observed in Syria. Filling a 50 liter rocket with sarin would be a dangerous and excruciatingly deliberate act done shortly (within days) before launch (you do not want to stockpile sarin in what is essentially a garbage can with a weak seam) by a specialist team wearing full-body exposure suits. There is not really any way to do that and be confused about exactly what you are doing. Yes, you would think ongoing gas assaults would be widely reported through non-governemental information streams, as the Aug 21st ones were. ] (]) 01:39, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Mount Qasioun == |
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I removed a sentence from the intro noting the trajectory of some of the rockets appeared to come from the area of Mount Qasioun while working on the page last night. Today, it's been readded. That's fine -- I don't object to the information, which is included elsewhere in the article as well (a statement I left alone), but doesn't it seem a bit detailed for the intro? I know we usually try to keep those concise, and it doesn't seem notable relative to the rest of the information in the lede. Again, not disputing the claim or the source, but I figured we should follow through with Step 3 of ], since I ] removed it and it was ]. Thoughts? -] (]) 00:09, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Agree the lead should not have such detail, but sum up the body ] (]) 04:48, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::How about we edit it for brevity instead by combining it with the previous sentence: Based on analyses of the UN's evidence, multiple analysts concluded the rockets that delivered the sarin were launched from Mount Qasioun, in well-defended Syrian territory.(refs) ] (]) 05:02, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::That looks fine to me, provided we have the sources to support the notion that all rockets were launched from Mount Qasioun. I haven't seen that claimed, though. -] (]) 05:06, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::I recall the sources already cited in the lede make that claim. Worth double checking before the edit is made, to be sure. ] (]) 05:30, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::its not like the article isn't about a specific subject, its not 'warfare' or 'Syrian civil war' , it can surely bear the weight of this detail in the lead - not surprised Blade wants it gone from the lead - RS details, even/especially in the lead, are a great weapon against humbug - if its combined, the combination arrived at should be checked that the new York times ref isn't used to support more than it says. - personally I think the sentence is perfectly fine as it stands and its removal was pointless . ] (]) 12:36, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Locality names == |
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I notice the locality names aren't linked (unless I missed it). From searching and looking at ] I think Moadamiyah is ] in western ], south of Damascus. Ayn Tarma and Zamalka are next to ] in eastern ], east of Damascus; but they don't seem to have[REDACTED] articles - nor to be listed anyone as parts of a larger entity. Given the variant spellings it would be helpful to link them. ] (]) 13:59, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Ah, ] has an article too. That just leaves Ayn Tarma. ] (]) 16:00, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== User POV == |
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After inserting , the user then accuses me of "pov pushing" and gives NO reason for why he feels that is POV. Kindly explain it here(] (]) 18:45, 20 September 2013 (UTC)). |
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The syrian army and rebels fought in ghouta on the 23, thats a fact. Japan and south korea neither give support to the opposition nor recognize the opposition. |
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This stuff is also factual and belong in the lede as it is conclusive " The Mission "collected clear and convincing evidence that surface-to-surface rockets containing the nerve agent sarin were used in the Ein Tarma, Moadamiyah and Zalmalka in the Ghouta area of Damascus."<ref name=Guardianinspectorssubmit/> The report's lead author, ], said that the quality of the sarin used in the attack was higher than that used by Iraq in the ].<ref name=ReutersUNconfirms/> Based on analyses of the UN's evidence, ]<ref>HRW, 17 September 2013</ref> and '']'' concluded the rockets that delivered the sarin were launched from areas under government control.<ref name=Gladstone20130916>{{cite news|last1=Gladstone|first1=Rick|last2=Chivers|first2=C.J.|title=Forensic Details in U.N. Report Point to Assad’s Use of Gas|url=http://www.nytimes.com/2013/09/17/world/europe/syria-united-nations.html|accessdate=17 September 2013|newspaper=New York Times|date=September 16, 2013}}</ref><ref>{{cite news|url=http://www.miamiherald.com/2013/09/17/3633485/un-calculations-of-poison-rockets.html|agency=Miami Herald|title=U.N. calculations of poison rockets’ paths implicate Syrian guard unit|date=17 September 2013|accessdate=18 September 2013}}</ref> " ] (]) 18:53, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:I don't know how yhthat is POV. If you read my summary I was saying to keep details out of the lead. That tthey fought one day at the location is not for the lead its for the article. Not sure what you mean by Japan and South Korea, they were not mentioned in either version. |
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:Who made that quote? Its just a random line with no reason/contect. And the mission need mnot be capital M when used on itwns own. Its not a proper noun. Likewise HRW and NYT are partisan, they are notneutral . They are however notable so I don't agree with removing it altogether, but it is not for the lead that summarises ''general'' aspects of the article. Mind you , NONE of the content is for removal. I would keep it in the article just not the lead. |
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::Although I will say the army is not Assad's oersonal fiefdom. It is that of the Syrian government. We don't see the armed forces of President obama!(] (]) 19:09, 20 September 2013 (UTC)). |
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:I think Sopher99's "pro-assad nun" edit (which he has since self-reverted) was POV. But I definitely take issue with your since-reverted changes to the lede (mostly removing necessary and appropriate content) and reorganization of sections, which I believe was contrary to ]. Intelligence reports by major countries are more notable than blog and alternative media speculation; this article structure at present reflects that while making note of early theories and ongoing skepticism from limited quarters to the generally accepted version of events. Sopher99 may push his POV, but that doesn't make it right for you to do the same. I appreciate your ], but those edits lack consensus and it's appropriate to discuss. Thanks BTW for starting this Talk section. -] (]) 19:44, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Why, exactly is "Mother Agnes" in the article? She is not a subject matter expert or an eyewitness, and her complaints about the veracity of the mainstream narrative of the attacks is due to her miscalculating time zones. The only sources that present her in a serious light are RT and similar state run media, who apparently think her religion somehow confers notability. ] (]) 20:39, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Agreed, and the bare-URL ref is RT. Let's cut that non sequitur bit about Mother Agnes. Looks like mother superior jumped the gun. -] (]) 21:27, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::I've removed the Mother Agnes sentence. Her claims have nothing to do with timezones though - she claims parents from Latakia recognise abducted children from the videos, or something. Seems totally implausible, but either we explain the implausible claim, or don't mention it at all. ] (]) 22:49, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::I vote not at all. ], ], ], ], etc. -] (]) 00:53, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Also, the US intelligence section is ridiculous. Complete ignorance of ] and horribly ]. Surely we can condense those cherry-pickled skeptical statements. Right now, it's grotesquely imbalanced. -] (]) 21:29, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::You're welcome to add statements that praise the US intelligence report as the best thing since sliced bread. What absolutely must not happen is boiling down the explanation of why people thought the report was poor into "some people didn't like it", as I vaguely fear will be attempted shortly. Whether you think the UN report vindicates the US/UK/France position or not, that takes nothing away from most of the criticism of the US intelligence report - on the strength of which, lest we forget, the US wanted to go to war. ] (]) 22:49, 20 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::I've tried out a new treatment. We ''have'' to condense ''some'' things, especially when multiple sources are repeating themselves; a lot of space was devoted to not-very-notable commentators espousing a minority view, with extended passages rather than concise paraphrasing and indirect quotation. Considering the tiny amount of room -- not even an adequate summary, honestly -- that was devoted to the ''actual'' U.S. government assessment in that section, relative to several paragraphs of assorted commentators (including some non-], such as the Consortiumnews.com blog and Russia Today), it was clear that ] and ] weren't being followed. What I have done is sought to consolidate criticism of the Western intelligence reports, expand them with information taken from the deleted section on Russia's response to the U.S. report (again, an entire section for Russia responding to the U.S. by saying "we don't believe it for reasons" is undue), and flesh out what the U.S. report actually said -- as well as the somewhat dismal results PM Cameron and President Obama got from their respective legislatures, which was given short shrift in the previous version of the Intelligence section. Happy to discuss my changes and any further tweaks. -] (]) 00:40, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::I'm not convinced by at all, merging all the criticism into an undifferentiated morass. ] (]) 01:08, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::I merged all the criticism into a section ''for criticism''. What specifically do you think should be done differently? -] (]) 01:13, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::Well ''specifically'', in the general spirit of ], criticism should be integrated with the thing being criticised, and not artificially chopped out in order to more easily downplay it. ] (]) 03:37, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::There are different approaches laid out on that page. If the will of the editors on this page is to do something different, then I'm open to discussing that. -] (]) 04:24, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::All right -- I've redistributed the criticism as you appear to prefer it. My chief concern is that this opens the door to more of the ] nonsense that turned the previous version of the U.S. section particularly into a flaming mess. ], nor is it a place for ] to pile up. Unless someone really, really significant -- not one of the "usual suspects" in the punditry, not a random legislator, not a random journalist or blogger, etc. -- comments, or something major breaks open in ] reporting (like the phone intercept being faked or something like that), we should be judicious. As I said -- not every commentary has to be cited on Misplaced Pages. -] (]) 05:02, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::I've also merged the duplicated "Intelligence reports" sections, as it was redundant to have both, and broken the section out of the "Evidence" bit -- it seems inappropriate to have statements by foreign powers, especially ones involved in the civil war to some degree, considered "evidence". -] (]) 01:27, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::Congratulations, you've found a way to make a messy situation worse. The fact is that intelligence-based evidence like the phone calls is '''evidence''' and the packaging up of intelligence-based evidence with other publicly-available evidence ''isn't''. Between what you've done to the criticism, the intelligence, and the Speculation section, you've not just ignored ], you've buried it in an unmarked grave. ] (]) 03:37, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::You're hysterical. I'm not the only editor here. If you don't like something, change it. If somebody doesn't like that, they can revert and we'll discuss. And would you knock it off with the ] vandalism? That's hardly constructive. -] (]) 04:24, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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Bold editing has its pros sure. The trouble is with a one revert rule its hard to get rid of several Bold edits if its POV stuff or they are not consensus edits. Consensus is needed before edits that need discussion, that would help solve these issues. Im pretty sure that why the article got a one revert rule. ] (]) 01:44, 22 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Synthesis and original research == |
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I'm seeing some ] and ] examples in the "Motivation" section. While the debate over what the government's motives could have been to launch the attack is notable and merits inclusion, sections like this tend to lend themselves to this kind of unencyclopedic musing, in my experience, unless there's a concerted effort to keep to the sources. |
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*''"Given previous US comments about the use of chemical weapons constituting a "red line" prompting intervention, the opposition would have an incentive to stage an attack and make it appear that the Syrian government had crossed the line. The Syrian government, on the other hand, would more straightforwardly have the motivation to use chemical weapons as tactically required if it believed that the US threat was an empty one."'' There's not even a source for this. It's pure ]. |
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*''"Some have questioned the motive and timing behind the alleged Syrian government involvement in the Ghouta attacks"'' - This is both true and noteworthy. But it's a classic case of ]. Who is "some"? What makes "some" notable? |
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*''"A CNN reporter pointed to the fact that government forces did not appear to be in imminent danger of being overrun by opposition in the areas in question, in which a stalemate had set. He questioned why the army would risk such an action that could cause international intervention. The reporter also questioned if the Army would use sarin gas just a few kilometers from the center of Damascus on what was a windy day. However, the day of the attack was the one day that week when the wind blew from government-held central Damascus towards the rebel-held eastern suburbs."'' - These two sources are synthesized to make one appear to discredit the other. I think we can find a better presentation, or else determine that the CNN report (which is from early days) is inaccurate and/or misleading and should be cut. |
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*''"Columnist and former IDF soldier Jeffrey Goldberg argued that Assad would use chemical weapons because nobody "will do a damn thing to stop him." Syrian human rights lawyer Razan Zaitouneh also argued that the Assad government would launch a chemical attack because "it knows that the international community would not do anything about it, like it did nothing about all the previous crimes.""'' - Redundant and can be condensed. Not everyone who wrote a column need be name-checked in this article. |
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As I said -- the conversation about motive is definitely important, and I'm not suggesting we should cut it or tailor it toward any particular point of view. But right now, that section doesn't look very encyclopedic, and some of it is downright questionable. I would also bring up the guideline ] -- we neither can nor should include every news report on this, but should seek to present relevant and meaningful information based on ]. -] (]) 01:41, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Facebook as a reliable ref == |
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In the lead theres this . Then theres this. 'SOHR has been accused of selective reporting, covering only violent acts of the government forces against the opposition for the first two years of its existence. Although critics concede that its newsgathering has become less partial, the perception is it "continues to defend Islamic extremists to avoid losing support among rebel forces". |
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And this here ' Most information about these massacres and about the violence perpetrated by the regime comes from the Syrian Observatory for Human Rights (SOHR), '''an organisation set up by Syrian rebels in exile. |
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Its looking like a very dodgy ref. ] (]) 04:55, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Hmm. SOHR has been fairly widely cited by reliable sources: . I'd go with what ] is doing rather than substituting our own judgment; that's not our role as Misplaced Pages editors. But I wouldn't link directly to a Facebook page on Misplaced Pages. And I don't think placing SOHR in (reasonable and judicious) context would go amiss; I'd err more on the side of "the United Kingdom-based ], an anti-government group" rather than "the United Kingdom-based ], a rebel activist group that has been criticized for defending Islamic terrorism", for example. Give readers the gist; they can click through to the article to learn the details about them. -] (]) 05:09, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Yeah, upon reflection, it's ] to have SOHR in the intro. I don't want to scrub the entire article of references to that group, but Facebook page refs seem like a bridge too far except under extraordinary circumstances, and nothing really makes an SOHR death toll more notable than a death toll from any other group or agency with an on-the-ground presence or reliable contacts in the area. -] (]) 05:13, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::When I tried to visit the Facebook page it showed the page and then it was covered by a message that I should log in. This is not proper, readers shouldn't be required to have a FB account to read the refs. ] <small>]</small> 22:31, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Technically, it's not that different from having a paywall for, say, ''Foreign Policy'' or ''The Kyiv Post''. All the same, social media really isn't ]. In the case of the SOHR statement on the sarin attacks last month, CNN and other media outlets picked it up and quoted from it, and that's RS. But if a person posts on Facebook and no reliable source is there to quote it, as far as Misplaced Pages is concerned, it doesn't make a sound... -] (]) 23:08, 21 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== "Allies," POV == |
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I've removed a couple instances where Russia and Iran were qualified as "Assad's strongest international allies." |
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There are a couple POV issues here. One of which was discussed above, when it was removed but apparently later restored: If we're to refer to countries like Russia and Iran as allies of the Syrian government then we would also have to have to refer to countries like the US, France, UK, Turkey, other NATO countries, and the Gulf States as allies of the rebels, since the governments of these countries support the rebels both materially and diplomatically, have called for regime change, etc. |
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It's also not NPOV to refer to allies of the Syrian government as "Assad's" allies, as this places undo emphasis on the individual. For example, during the US Civil War we wouldn't typcially refer to a foreign power such as Russia allied with the Union as "Lincoln's ally," but as an ally of the US government. -] (]) 00:51, 22 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Japan and South Korea are not the rebel's "allies" yet they condemn the government. Many countries that are not the rebel's allies condemn the syrian government. Like Botswana . Calling iran and Russia the Syrian government's allies is perfectly neutral. ] (]) 00:57, 22 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::arnt we meant to reflect the language in RS .- it is routine to find such material as this "Russia has been Assad's most important international ally throughout the civil war, supplying his troops with arms and resisting pressure at the UN for tighter sanctions on Damascus."" that's from guardian 26 aug , but instances are obviously numberless - its not for us to decide a new vocabulary to describe relations I don't think. ] (]) 01:28, 22 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::] you make a valid point. ] (]) 01:53, 22 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::Elaborate how. ] (]) 02:06, 22 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::I dont need to, as to me at least, his argument is self contained. ] (]) 02:11, 22 September 2013 (UTC) |
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I agree with Helvetica in that the allies should be mentioned as those of a state and not of a person. I agree that IF we mention allies of the Syrian government we should also mention the aid given to the rebels by the western powers. This is required by NPOV, although a full list of the positions of all the countries around the world may not be necessary here. My opinion is that if we remove all information about allies, we offer less information that would help the reader get a fuller picture about the topic. I would rather see the most influential allies mentioned rather than removed. Without these external influences from both sides, the situation may never have escalated to its present form, after all. ] <small>]</small> 03:26, 22 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:In the background section, this article should briefly explain that Russia and Iran have been providing material and political support for Syria, and that the US, Turkey, and Western European countries have been providing material and political support for elements of the opposition. This understanding is absolutely essential in order for the reader to understand why UK/France/US were immediately gung-ho about dropping bombs, and why Russia/Iran have consistently denied any possibility that Syria could be responsible. This article is about the Ghouta attack, so the section should be brief but of course neutral. I agree with Helvetica on the "Russia vs Assad" thing. ] (]) 04:03, 22 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::I agree with Hoverfish and VQuakr. The intro may not be the place for it, but it should definitely be mentioned in the article. -] (]) 04:06, 22 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Agree as well. This has been a longstanding argument on this page, but am glad to see there's a consensus to add the larger political context now. -] (]) 20:31, 23 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Yes. ] (]) 00:49, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::The proper place for it seems to be a small paragraph at the end of "background", possibly in the style of "It should be noted that ..." or similar. ] <small>]</small> 15:20, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::I agree with the placement, though we should wordsmith different phrasing per ]. ] (]) 18:58, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::Point taken. Thank you for the link. ] <small>]</small> 01:13, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== POV push in UN report section == |
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It is sad how biased this section becomes. On one hand we have a lot of info (even in the lede) about some "study" of a homegrown "expert" crossing two lines on Mount Qasioun. On the other, all pieces which raise question about the reliability of UN inspectors' findings are being actively purged from the article. |
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The al-Akhbar piece is quite well sourced, quoting CW experts. It points to important discrepancies within the report, and it raises questions about the influence of opposition forces on the work of inspectors within the rebel-held areas. |
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Can someone put this back into the article? --] (]) 17:07, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:It also raises bizzare speculation by an unnammed "expert" that Saudi Arabia launched the attack. This is not a reliable source (note that is is in a "blog/sandbox" path of al-Akhbar. Multiple organizations independently performed the Mount Qasioun analysis. ] (]) 18:56, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:I had wanted to walk away from this article, after getting very frustrated with what I shall try not to call attempted censorship, but it's getting just too extreme to ignore. For example, the repeatedly removed al-Akhbar piece cites an expert saying that the environmental/biological sample discrepancy is a real concern: ''I think that it is strange that the environmental and human samples don’t match up. This could be because there have been lots of people trampling through the area and moving things. Unless the patients were brought in from other areas. There doesn’t seem another plausible explanation.'' This expert (Bretton-Gordon) is already cited in the article on another issue on another source, so can we decide whether his opinion matters or not? And pretending that ]'s work is just deletable (against prior talkpage discussion, AFAIR)? No. So I'm back. (Don't all cheer at once.) ] (]) 21:36, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Bretton-Gordon is fine; let's find a secondary source that doesn't quote them adjacent to obviously unreliable material. This blog has no business being in a neutral article. The source they are printed in matters. Do they agree with the conclusions drawn in the blog? Were they quoted in context? I do not trust this author to present them in an accurate context. Welcome back, BTW. "Attempted censorship" is silly; one editor is trying to push a certain POV using unreliable sources, and other editors are rightly saying no. ] (]) 21:45, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::other than Bretton Gordon she cites dan Kaszeta and I noticed a recent tweet of his - - |
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"Dan Kaszeta @DanKaszeta 11h |
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I do not share @snarwani 's opinion regarding #Sarin at Moadamiyah, due to samples 1,2,3,9, and 12 from part 7.1 of UN Report". ] (]) 22:50, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::Kaszeta is talking about the samples which show IMPA and/or DIMP at Moadamiyah, which are unique breakdown products or byproducts of sarin. It could of course be argued (and some have) that since in only 1 of those 5 cases do the two labs agree, that it's just one sample that's really supportive. (Though whether that matters depends a bit on whether you can conceive of rebels deliberately contaminating a site with sarin for inspectors to find.) ] (]) 23:14, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Sharmine Narwani isn't some random blogger. I see no reason not to use the piece, aside from the "sandbox" label which is a bit odd. (If it's really ''sandbox'' it shouldn't be public.) ] (]) 22:55, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::But here, she is misrepresenting sources and making very bold claims based on unnamed sources, which is much more relevant than her having a paragraph bio on huffpo. Quit re-adding material that has been contested and is under discussion - that is edit warring. ] (]) 22:58, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::''misrepresenting sources''? Do explain. ''having a paragraph bio on huffpo'' - was it really too much to expect you to *read* the bio in question? ] (]) 23:16, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::I read it. The explanation is already discussed in this section. ] (]) 23:49, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::If the explanation for the "misrepresenting sources" claim is in this section, I can't find it. ] (]) 17:39, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::Removing the material is edit-warring too. And perhaps such removal should be brought up for discussion beforehand? Not by the person who had introduced it and saw it removed '''twice'''?--] (]) 23:06, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::No, it isn't. Please review ]. ] (]) 23:49, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::Another tweet from Dan kOszeta which looks like he is not happy - " Dan Kaszeta @DanKaszeta 16h |
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− @MothraAttack However, article doesn't point out my observation that the environmental samples are clear and damning" if Im following this right one of the people she spoke to is not at all happy with the way she wrote up her blog. what do you know about her podiaeebba? does she have a particular view of the scw? would she be likely to push one view unreasonably over the other? is she for example, very pro-Iran regime by any chance? ] (]) 23:10, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::'' is she for example, very pro-Iran regime by any chance? '' - I don't know. I do know that no-one asks these questions about sources that support the mainstream view. ] (]) 23:16, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::Exactly. Exceptional claims are going to be carefully scrutinized. ] (]) 23:49, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::The Narwani article says ''In a report on Thursday, American CW expert Dan Kaszeta raised further questions. While concluding that Sarin was used in Ghouta based on “environmental and medical evidence” produced by the UN team, Kaszeta notes that...'' And whilst says "the environmental samples, detailed in Appendix 7 are fairly conclusive and damning evidence of use of Sarin" it doesn't address the issue by site, so his view on Moadamiyah can be deduced but isn't explicit there. And the bulk of the paper is about the medical evidence, and it's that which Narwani draws on. The significance of the IMPA needs evaluating, but the article is already quite long. ] (]) 23:26, 24 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::::: trying to find out abut her predilections - found this from ] - |
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"'''I recently learned of a major exodus of key staffers at Al Akhbar caused at least in part by disagreements with the newspaper leadership’s pro-Assad tendency'''. The revelation helps explain why '''Al Akhbar English now prominently features the malevolent propaganda of Amal Saad Ghorayeb and the dillentantish quasi-analysis of Sharmine Narwani''' When I joined the fledgling Al Akhbar English website last fall, I was excited to contribute my writing on the Israel-Palestine situation and US foreign policy to a paper that I considered one of the most courageous publications in the Arab world. At the time, the Syrian uprising had just begun, and apparently, so had the debates inside Al Akhbar, which reflected the discussions within the wider Lebanese Left. Almost a year later, the results of the debate have become clear on the pages of the paper, where despite the presence of a few dissident voices, '''the apologia for Assad and his crimes has reached unbearable levels'''." |
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- your willful desire not to know of any bias that may be present in her blog is not good imo - you are shoving her blog on the article. ] (]) 00:38, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::''your willful desire not to know of any bias'' - I must ask you to desist from this kind of entirely unwarranted accusation. ] (]) 10:54, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:I just want to make sure everybody understands and agrees with ]. ] <small>]</small> 01:08, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Yes, "bias" was the wrong word above. "Unreliability" is the correct one - an example of a source where the underlying bias is severe enough that the author is misrepresenting sources. This is what makes the source unusable. ] (]) 01:15, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::''misrepresenting sources'' - you continue to repeat this claim without backing it up, even when asked. You do realise that this is a recognised propaganda technique? ] (]) 10:54, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::This is already discussed '''in this section'''. No further explanation should be needed. Taking out-of-context statements by an expert and using them to support a theory not supported by that expert is unethical and frequently performed by conspiracy theorists. ] (]) 17:04, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::If there is a serious disagreement about this, there is always ], where a decision can be taken by uninvolved participants. ] <small>]</small> 01:28, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::Good idea. ] (]) 04:02, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Exactly how many times do I have to link ] and ] before people will stop devoting massive paragraphs to extraordinary claims in recent blog posts? Here's another one: ]. This section needs to be condensed, and non-notable commentators' thoughts -- if it's even necessary to include them, and some of these folks I highly doubt are worth citing at all -- should be presented concisely, rather than quoted at length in a flimsy attempt to counterbalance the "bias" of the section being about ''what the section is supposed to be about''. The sections on Parry (via sketchy-looking blog consortiumnews.com), ''Al Akhbar'', etc., are ''way too long''. We can summarize their salient points, consolidate redundant arguments, and cut verbose quotations and produce a much more encyclopedic ''and'' informative ''and'' fair article. -] (]) 01:40, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Well let's see. ] warns against 1. Summary-only descriptions of fictional works. 2. Lyrics databases. 3. Excessive listings of statistics. I can't see any of those being an issue here, can you? On the other hand, ] warns against 1. first-hand (unsourced) eyewitness-type claims: ''first-hand news reports on breaking stories. Misplaced Pages does not constitute a primary source. However, our sister projects Wikisource and Wikinews do exactly that...'' 2. including "routine" news and over-emphasising "breaking" news: ''routine news reporting on things like announcements, sports, or celebrities is not a sufficient basis for inclusion in the encyclopedia. While including information on recent developments is sometimes appropriate, breaking news should not be emphasized or otherwise treated differently from other information.'' 3. concluding that all individuals in a notable event are notable: ''Unless news coverage of an individual goes beyond the context of a single event, our coverage of that individual should be limited to the article about that event, in proportion to their importance to the overall topic.'' 4. turning biographies into diaries: ''Even when an individual is notable, not all events they are involved in are. For example, news reporting about celebrities and sports figures can be very frequent and cover a lot of trivia...''. Again, I struggle to see how any of that is an issue here. I suggest that if you're going to repeatedly cite policy as a reason for doing what you want, you should actually ''read'' the policy in question. ]. ] (]) 10:54, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::On substance: ] has an amazing track record, and his ] has been around since 1995 and is an established alternative news service. His contribution is certainly worth including on an explicit "X says" basis. As for ''Al Akhbar'' - most of that is citing experts or points easily verifiable from primary sources, and the author, Sharmine Narwani, is serious enough to be an Academic Visitor (a position formerly called Senior Associate Member) at an Oxford college. Nor are the claims particularly "extraordinary" - we're not talking about "oats are actually baby Martians" or something, we're talking about "maybe some fighters in a civil war tried to make an attack look worse than it was in order to gain international support". The possibility of site manipulation is ''right there in the UN report'', for God's sake! ] (]) 11:05, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::And what I am saying is Misplaced Pages is not a place to post lengthy paragraphs about or from blog articles as a substitute for writing and maintaining encyclopedic content. There is no earthly reason why ''Al Akhbar'' should take up more than a couple sentences, as opposed to more than a paragraph. -] (]) 15:38, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::There is "no earthly reason" why you wouldn't look at the actual content instead of making sweeping remarks about ''Al Akhbar'' taking up space. One small paragraph is citing expert Dan Kaszeta's report; if it so offends you to point out that Al Akhbar cited that report, we can use it directly and pretend they didn't. That leaves 103 words from Al Akhbar, of which 48 are direct quotation from acknowledged CW expert Hamish de Bretton-Gordon. Your implication that much space is given Al Akhbar's opinion is wrong. ] (]) 16:58, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::So I'm assuming you wouldn't wail and scream about "POV-pushing!" were someone to quote at length all the "acknowledged CW experts" who agree with the mainstream version of events and add several new paragraphs attesting to its correctness? -] (]) 19:27, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== WhoGhouta Blog == |
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Hello, I lead the , which is probably the most sophisticated collaborative effort to determine the source of the attack. It is still work in progress, but so far the evidence and analysis there is far more advanced than any of the sources currently used in this article. |
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I do not want to edit the article directly as for me it's original research, but I thought to let everyone know that in its current state it is full of mistakes and false evidence. Specifically, the trajectories in the UN reports are wrong, the launch locations are probably in rebel held territory, the sarin is of low quality, and the rockets were not originally designed to be chemical weapons. |
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I highly recommend anyone editing this article to examine the and keep following up on new developments. We'll do our best to continue providing high quality verifiable data. Thank you. ] (]) 15:24, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:That's nice, but ] and is based on ]. -] (]) 15:41, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Interesting, but unless you can persuade some moderately good source to report your conclusions, it's not really helpful. You might try approaching some media people who might plausibly be interested in actual debate. ] (]) 17:03, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::My intention was not to get you to change the article. Just to give advance warning that the evidence used in the article is faulty. I assume the research will be published in quotable media sources soon. ] (]) 17:15, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::BTW on , including interesting comments, I don't know what the what (I'm no chemist), but note Sellstrom did apparently say that chemical stabilisers were detected (though it's not in the UN report). I hope Kaszeta does the review of the UN's chemical analysis he promised. ] (]) 17:10, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::I am not aware of any claim about stabilizers being made, please share. I suggest you read my post titled "UN Report". There is no mistaking that it intentionally uses ambiguous language to make the reader draw conclusions (a finding that really disappointed me, btw). ] (]) 17:21, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::The stabiliser claim's in the article, under "UN Report". ] (]) 17:36, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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The above has been collapsed with reference to ]. So let's visit it. We find ''There are three types of spam on Misplaced Pages. These are: advertisements masquerading as articles; external link spamming; and adding references with the aim of promoting the author or the work being referenced.'' Highlighting a useful website on a talkpage that is genuinely about the article's topic and isn't even something for-profit is not covered. Nor is there any suggestion that such "spam" should be collapsed even when an existing contributor is having a conversation about actual content. I would complain to someone, but I wouldn't know where. I just think this is appallingly rude behaviour. I intend to go read some more when I get the time, and I urge anyone who isn't sticking their fingers in their ears as a defence against actual factual debate to go visit as well! >:( (Not that I think the blog is overly correct in its conclusions, but it's just as interesting as ] in actually engaging with the issues). ] (]) 20:38, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Removal of content == |
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I wondered who removed all this... and it turns out it was removed in one fell swoop. It was ] who |
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# Evidence about the US intelligence report being released by the White House, and the significance thereof |
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# AP's statement that the US had refused to release satellite imagery, and the significance thereof (previous willingness to release "copious" imagery) |
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# ]'s report about the critical intra-Syrian phone call |
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# ]'s complaint that the US classified report he read didn't provide enough evidence to judge whether Timmerman's report was accurate. |
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And the edit summary for these dramatic excisions? "reorganize, add, condense to reflect WP:NPOV and WP:DUE". |
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I think this speaks for itself. ] (]) 17:34, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:The article is long; removal of content is defensible, particularly if it is outdated. If you disagree with removals, please discuss here while assuming good faith and attempting to minimize drama, thanks! ] (]) 17:53, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::Zoinks! You got me! You caught me in the act of cutting ] claims and consolidating the AP and IPS reports on how the U.S. is not releasing more information, condensing Alan Grayson's reaction to the intelligence with that of other unimpressed members of Congress, and making other such changes to 1) make the article more encyclopedic and 2) make the section on the U.S. report actually ''on'' the report instead of being a coatrack of bloggers' claims about the attacks. Would you like to shoot me here, or wait 'til you get home? -] (]) 19:22, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::''Zoinks!'' indeed. You know what you did. 1. The IPS comments about the report being released by the White House, not the Director of National Intelligence, are important - you deleted them. 2. AP's statement about the White House refusal to release its satellite imagery, despite this being cited as key corroborative evidence and its previous willingness to release "copious" amounts of satellite imagery, is important - and you did even worse than delete it, you edited it to discredit it. You made it appear AP wanted "more information" which was classified (with the strong implication that the refusal to declassify was to protect sources; maybe the satellite imagery is technically classified, but it's hardly to protect sources). The transformation is astounding enough to quote in full your text: ''Some commentators also decried the Obama administration's decision not to declassify all of its intelligence, with the ] and ] reporting that media requests for more information were denied.'' And BTW who were these unnamed "some" commentators who demanded that '''all''' the intelligence be declassified - a demand that sounds ''prima facie'' unreasonable if you know anything at all about intelligence? You cite ], who wants the phone intercepts declassified, AP which wants the satellite imagery released, and IPS who only asks for explanations about publication process. Zoinks indeed. 4. Rep. Grayson's editorial was in the NYT, and one of the few public characterisations of the classified evidence available that gives anything resembling specifics. It links critically with the report in point 3, which Grayson described as "widely read" and was the only specific example Grayson gave as to why he felt the classified report was incomplete. All of that is deeply important, and very far from "fringe" (Timmerman has a long career as a reporter, and even if he didn't, Grayson's citation of the report would be too important to ignore). In short, many, many "Zoinks". ] (]) 00:55, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::] good points. Im not sure why there is so much trouble getting and keeping important notable stuff in. Its like a trigger is pulled, wham, out it goes. Why is it so important to keep anything NPOV out that makes Barry look bad? We are not involved in this fight in Syria. Just supposed to be recording it NPOV and balanced. Am I missing something? ] (]) 01:03, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::After this removal, the article is still on the long side, around 140k. Do we really need quotes from the AP saying the satellite photos were not released, or can we just summarize the critical reception to the White House's published reasoning? As it stands, ] is about half criticism which seems qualitatively about right. ] (]) 01:18, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::Your outbursts and little tantrums don't really bolster your case, Podiaebba, and your insistence on assuming bad faith toward me and certain other editors is growing tiresome. If you are unhappy with the wording, then by god, change the wording. I'm not perfect, and the way I summarized these points -- which needed summarizing, BTW, as VQuakr has pointed out as well -- very well might not have been the best way they could have possibly been summarized. But I don't see what's noteworthy enough about Grayson's comments to include them independently; he basically said "I don't know what I think about this" and indicated the evidence didn't convince him. And as for Timmerman, the man is best known to me as a failed congressional candidate from Maryland, and his reporting is not widely cited. If being a journalist automatically inferred notability, I would love that, but it really doesn't. -] (]) 06:01, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Al-Akhbar == |
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:::I've removed the al-akhbar blog stuff because on the brown moses BlogSpot dan kaszeta seems to be saying that the awful narwani misrepresented him - - if this material doesn't make it to what are genrerally regarded as RS - I think all the FRinge stuff misrepresents the balnce of informed, impartial, opinion ] (]) 19:43, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::''dan kaszeta seems to be saying that the awful narwani misrepresented him'' - reading comprehension EPIC FAIL. Kaszeta vigorously disagrees with Narwani's conclusion that the Moadamiyah rocket had no sarin in it, but at no point does he say or imply that she misrepresented him. He says things like ''a misleading half-truth that “cherry picks” from the UN report'' for the claim "not a single environmental sample in Moadamiyah that tested positive for Sarin", because although this is perfectly true, as a CW expert he knows the significance of the degradation products detected, and apparently believes that Narwani must know it too. But no misrepresentation of Kaszeta, none. And BTW Kaszeta implicitly discounts any possibility of the scene being set up; his analysis rests on that assumption. But if the point is to establish culpability, that's rather assuming your conclusion. ] (]) 20:52, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::to cherry pick - is to kind of misrepresent , no? your obsession against 'mainstream' is not really the point of wp anyhow imo - isn't wp meant to be led by mainstream RS - don't want the tail wagging the dog , and getting overwhelmed with fringe-y stuff. look at mintpresstv -load of garbage wasn't it?] (]) 21:38, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::''to cherry pick - is to kind of misrepresent'' - true, but of the UN report, not Kaszeta's statements, and it assumes knowledge not proven. Absent that knowledge, it's simply a mistake. ] (]) 22:26, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::Can you cool it already with the "EPIC FAIL" stuff? Hardly constructive, is it? -] (]) 21:44, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::::::I know, giving you irrelevancies to complain about is not constructive. With just two words I've managed to distract you from the key point that people keep alleging Narwani "misrepresented sources", which (a) isn't true of Kaszeta as a source and (b) is only true of the UN report if you assume she has certain CW tech knowledge about sarin degradation. Incidentally, if people spent a fraction of the effort on the ] article about how sarin degradation works (I added the critical chemicals, which weren't even mentioned!), rather than constantly removing every sodding source here they don't like the smell of, we'd all be a damned sight better off. ] (]) 22:26, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Brown Moses Blog == |
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I'm surprised this hasn't been raised before (unless I missed something), but what exactly makes Brown Moses (a BlogSpot site) notable and reliable when many other self-published sites (consortiumnews.com having been cut, justly IMO, most recently) and blogs are dismissed? I think we need to apply our policies consistently. As with SOHR above, if reliable sources cite Brown Moses, I think we can use that -- but I don't think a self-published blog should be considered RS on its own. Thoughts? -] (]) 20:19, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Yes, well, there is that - but he is considered highly isn't he ? and cited quite frequently by RS. in the meantime, I'll revert the last edit I made to the article] (]) 20:29, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Brown Moses' claims are often found in mainstream media when they fit the mainstream narrative. Admissions that he doesn't actually know the range of the UMLACA aren't. I guess the obvious thing to do is to quote BM when he supports the mainstream narrative, and ignore when he doesn't, since that's basically the Official Policy here. ] (]) 21:07, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::]. This particular blog has been referenced repeatedly in mainstream news sources, which have also identified him as an expert. I think the most honest thing here is to attribute claims to him in-text and wikilink ] in the first instance. If you have any specific concerns about claims attributed to him, particularly if they have not been picked up by secondary sources, feel free to bring them up here or ] for a more in-context examination. ] (]) 23:52, 25 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== Robert Parry == |
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There is a discussion thread at the reliable sources noticeboard which may be of interest to the editors here. The link is ]. ] (]) 21:03, 25 September 2013 (UTC) <small>Rewritten by ] (]) 00:01, 26 September 2013 (UTC) to minimize drama content.</small> |
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== Mazzeh military hospital == |
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AP reported ''U.N. experts, who had been collecting tissue and other samples from victims in Ghouta, also visited the Mazzeh military hospital in Damascus, taking samples from injured soldier there.''. Did I miss this sampling appearing in the UN report?? ] (]) 01:13, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Agreed that the UN Mission's visit to Mazzeh on Aug 30 was widely reported. Maybe the report writers determined that the personnel they took samples from there were not germane to the Aug 21 attack? ] (]) 01:43, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::I think we're straying into ]/] territory here. -] (]) 06:03, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Probably. I searched and did not see any articles discussing this Aug 30 visit that were published after the UN report came out. ] (]) 07:01, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::Indeed. We could speculate any number of reasons why the reported sampling didn't make it into the report, but that's not really helpful unless it helps us find sources to back that up. Right now I'm just asking the question: AP reports sampling, the results of which would have been surely as relevant as any others. I've not yet had any chance to try to follow that up (or even double-check there's no mention in the UN report, though I'm pretty sure of that from memory, I've read it pretty thoroughly), but if there's no follow-up to be had, I think the AP report on this has to be included without comment. ] (]) 07:10, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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== No evidence and falsified evidence == |
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Mattis has admitted they have no evidence, and wikileaks has sad it was planted and not the full story ] (]) 14:36, 25 February 2021 (UTC) |
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:Significant if true, but I don't think the evidence is there to judge conclusively. Then again, that's basically the definition of "speculation", and it's pretty clear something fishy was going on with that Mintpress business, so I don't know. I'm agnostic on this one. I've also heard rumors that Yahya Ababneh is the pseudonym of a Jordanian writer named Yan Barakat, but I haven't seen anything to corroborate that yet, either. -] (]) 05:54, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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::The CSM article mentions that. Two paragraph quote is below.{{collapse top|Quote from Dan Murphy, CSM}}Whitaker also found a reader comment made on an Aug. 26 article about Syria, three days before the Mint Press story, in the UK's Mail on Sunday by a "Yan Barakat" who told a very similar story about Prince Bandar and chemical weapons to the one that would appear three days later. "Barakat" wrote that he came by the story from "some old men" who'd "arrived in Damascus" from Russia. One of the men from Russia "told me they have evidence that they have evidence that it was the rebels who used the weapons." |
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:Do you have any sources? If you are referring to ]' press conference in February 2018, I suggest you read the . He said Assad's government had used the ] ] during both the Obama and Trump administrations (referring to the attacks in ] and ]). He then says "and now we have other reports" of sarin use and he does not yet have evidence of these recent reports, but he is "not refuting them". |
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A little more internet sleuthing from Whitaker found a Facebook page for Yan Barakat and photos of the man, who described himself as a Jordanian journalist. The pictures appear to be of the same man pictured in the deleted Linkedin profile for Ababneh. There is also a profile page on the Russian social media site VK (much like Facebook) under the name "Yahya Barakat" that contains pictures of a man that looks both like the Yan Barakat and Yayheh Ababneh pictures. The profile says the man's hometown is St. Petersburg, Russia. |
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:Here are the relevant parts of the transcript (with emphasis added): |
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:*'''Mattis''': We are more -- even more concerned about the possibility of sarin use, the likelihood of sarin use, and we're looking for the evidence. And so that's about all the more I can say about it right now, but <u>we are on the record, and you all have seen how we reacted to that</u>, so <u>they'd be ill-advised to go back to violating the chemical convention</u>.<br>...<br>'''Q''': Can I ask a quick follow up, just a clarification on what you'd said earlier about Syria and sarin gas?<br>'''Mattis''': Yeah.<br>'''Q''': Just make sure I heard you correctly, you're saying you think it's likely they have used it and you're looking for the evidence? Is that what you said?<br>'''Mattis''': That's -- we think that they did not carry out what they said they would do back when -- <u>in the previous administration, when they were caught using it</u>. Obviously they didn't, 'cause <u>they used it again during our administration</u>.<br>And that gives us a lot of reason to suspect them. And <u>now we have other reports</u> from the battlefield from people who claim it's been used. We do not have evidence of it. But <u>we're not refuting them</u>; we're looking for evidence of it. Since clearly we are using -- we are dealing with the Assad regime that has used denial and deceit to hide their outlaw actions, okay? |
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Of course, even if every word were verified it still is a degree separated from the subject of the article. I guess we table this one unless it gets more coverage? ] (]) 07:07, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:Additional sources: |
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:* by ] (February 17, 2018). |
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:* by ] (February 9, 2018). |
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:Very misleading. This article states that the Syrian government was the perpetrator as fact. Misplaced Pages should be neutral and not function as a vehicle to perpetuate propoganda of certain states. As is also stated, different government investigations came to different conclusions. ] (]) 20:19, 5 October 2023 (UTC) |
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::Exactly. ] (]) 09:49, 1 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:We need the first paragraph of the Misplaced Pages entry to be clear that the there is great controversy over who made the Sarin attack. By not doing so the article immediately alienates a majority of readers and makes Misplaced Pages's legitimacy across all platforms questionable. ] (]) 09:49, 1 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::Is there anything being done about this? I came here for some quick info, but found that the first paragraph summary doesn't align with the rest of the article at all. ] (]) 21:34, 9 December 2024 (UTC) |
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== Header image of dead victims should be changed == |
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:This is covered in detail in the ] article. NB the MPN claim was implausible; probably about as implausible as the idea that Russian disinfo would produce something so weak and unconvincing. Fog of war (rumours in a war-torn city) quite adequately explains the origin of this story - part of which (Saudi supply of arms to the rebels) is after all well established, so the rumour only needs to cover the step from conventional to CW weapons in the context of a recent CW attack. ] (]) 07:17, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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The header image currently used is too gruesome with its depiction of a dead man and two dead children. I suggest either the image be changed, or at least their faces blurred out of respect. <!-- Template:Unsigned --><span class="autosigned" style="font-size:85%;">— Preceding ] comment added by ] (] • ]) 11:01, 8 April 2022 (UTC)</span> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:Agree. There has to be a better representative picture that doesn't show dead bodies right as you open the article. ] (]) 02:50, 22 January 2024 (UTC) |
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Russia asserts. ''The main conclusion is that the type of sarin used in that incident was homemade. We also have evidence to assert that the type of sarin used on August 21 was the same, only of higher concentration.”'' |
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::Doubtful to me that there is any better representative picture of a mass murder than dead people. Please see ] and ]. ] (]) 04:36, 22 January 2024 (UTC) |
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== Citations in lead == |
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No hysterics please. Yes yes and yes better refs may be required to satisfy some,. Give it a few days it will spread to refs you can live with. Though lets be honest, some below are fine. This is a discussion. A start, right. Thats all. |
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Discussion in previous section on the inclusion of references in the lead. Diff here: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Ghouta_chemical_attack&diff=next&oldid=1117101956 Justification per {{u| KeepItGoingForward}}: {{tq|Many pages cite in the lead where there is a follow-up later in the body, see 2022 Russian invasion of Ukraine for instance. Providing sources in the lead provides credit to the article for the reader, as the lead is the main focus of an article unless someone dives into the article details}}. Also cites ] that all material likely to be contested should have a source. Opposed by {{u|VQuakr}} on grounds of avoiding duplication of refs. Key policy: ], which states {{tq|The lead must conform to verifiability, biographies of living persons, and other policies. The verifiability policy advises that material that is challenged or likely to be challenged, and direct quotations, should be supported by an inline citation. Any statements about living persons that are challenged or likely to be challenged must have an inline citation every time they are mentioned, including within the lead. Because the lead will usually repeat information that is in the body, editors should balance the desire to avoid redundant citations in the lead with the desire to aid readers in locating sources for challengeable material. Leads are usually written at a greater level of generality than the body, and information in the lead section of non-controversial subjects is less likely to be challenged and less likely to require a source; there is not, however, an exception to citation requirements specific to leads. The necessity for citations in a lead should be determined on a case-by-case basis by editorial consensus. Complex, current, or controversial subjects may require many citations; others, few or none. The presence of citations in the introduction is neither required in every article nor prohibited in any article.}} ] (]) 15:18, 24 October 2022 (UTC) |
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http://indian.ruvr.ru/news/2013_07_10/Rebels-used-chemical-weapons-in-Syria-say-Russian-experts-164 |
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http://rt.com/news/syria-chemical-un-resolution-356/ |
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http://en.rian.ru/russia/20130917/183522104/Russia-Calls-UN-Report-on-Syria-Chemical-Attacks-Incomplete.html |
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:Just out of curiosity, I am curious why this has turned into a large debate? All I am suggesting is adding citations to the first two sentences as I once did after a likely vandal used the lack of citations as an excuse to change the page. Since this event is controversial aka suggesting more citations and there also also people that challenge the statements in the first two sentences so as per MOS:LEADCITE why not add a couple of citations in? I don't see it taking away from the readability of the article. ] (]) 09:23, 29 October 2022 (UTC) |
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::It really isn't much of a debate. You want to add unnecessary cites and no one else seems to think it is necessary. Vandals are gonna vandal regardless of cites. ] (]) 18:37, 29 October 2022 (UTC) |
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:::The lead is not exempt from citation policies and guidelines regarding contentious material. It's not an anti-vandalism method, it's required as part of Misplaced Pages's ] policy. ] (]) 19:59, 29 October 2022 (UTC) |
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::::Fortunately the content is indeed verifiable, so we're in line with that policy. ] (]) 05:30, 30 October 2022 (UTC) |
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:::::Wiki policies are rather clear about the citations being in the lead for this type of complex and controversial article including for verifiability as stated by {{u|Thebiguglyalien}} and other earlier comments. {{u|BobFromBrockley}} also commented about the lack of citations in the lead sentence in their comments on "Page should be reverted to version 13:40, 24 November 2021". It does appear at the moment that the consensus is for citations in the lead over limited to no citations in the lead as put forth by {{u|VQuakr}}. {{u|VQuakr}} what is your thinking about having a couple of more citations in the lead would take away from the readability of the sentence? To me they are barely noticeable unless you want to click them to following up with the credibility of a statement. To me they don't take away from the readability of an article. ] (]) 07:45, 31 October 2022 (UTC) |
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::::::No, there is nothing like consensus for your proposed change. You don't get to count support from someone who happened to mention refs in another context. Quit referencing ]; that's already been addressed. Existing sources provide plenty of support for the lead as-is, and as already noted spamming more isn't going to prevent vandalism. ] (]) 21:23, 1 November 2022 (UTC) |
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:::::::As per WP:V and WP:Verifiability as stated in this talk page and census reached on the talk page except for one dissenting view references are being added back into the lead. As can be seen it does not remove from the readability of the article. ] (]) 04:54, 4 November 2022 (UTC) |
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::::::::You're the one proposing the change; you don't have credibility to judge consensus here. ] (]) 17:01, 4 November 2022 (UTC) |
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:::::::::Please refrain from personal attacks of credibility. Myself and others have tried to engaged in a conversation with you of why you don't want any additional citations in the lead as per ] and ] and to understand why you believe the citations would take away from the article. In the earlier talk of "Page should be reverted to version 13:40, 24 November 2021" I also provided an example of a page that is similar that uses citations as I have edited and proposed here in the lead ]. I realize you have done lots of reversions on this page, but you also need to realize as editors we are also here to help improve the page. We don't want to take anything away from the article. ] (]) 20:27, 4 November 2022 (UTC) |
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::::::::::That's not a personal attack. You can read about what does and doesn't constitute and attack at ]. {{tq|] and ]}} are the same policy and we would be fully compliant with it with zero cites in the lead (direct quotes excepted). As has already been explained. ] (]) 20:47, 4 November 2022 (UTC) |
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:::::::::::As per ] "All material in Misplaced Pages mainspace, including everything in articles, lists, and captions, must be verifiable. All quotations, and any material whose verifiability has been challenged or is likely to be challenged, must include an inline citation to a reliable source that directly supports the material." It also states lower down, "Attribute all of the following types of material to reliable, published sources using inline citations:"..."all material whose verifiability has been challenged"..."all material that is likely to be challenged"..."all contentious matter about living and recently deceased persons." You will also notice numerous citations in ] in the lead portion of the article. I see no lead exception stated in the ] policy. |
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:::::::::::The first sentence of this article is, "The Ghouta chemical attack, was a chemical attack carried out by the forces of Syrian President Bashar al-Assad, in the early hours of 21 August 2013 in Ghouta, Syria during the Syrian civil war." This material has been challenged and will likely be challenged in the future and also includes reference to a living person Bashar al-Assad. |
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:::::::::::My apologizes about double linking ] and ]. |
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:::::::::::I am also trying to understand besides your interpretation of Wiki policy how do you believe the citations would take away from the article? You believe a certain citation lower down in the lead is sufficient as a citation? ] (]) 21:21, 4 November 2022 (UTC) |
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::::::::::::I know what WP:V says. And the content is indeed verifiable. Nothing in that policy says we need multiple cites after ever sentence. Yes, extant sourcing in the lead is adequate. Spamming in more unnecessary cites is an example of bloat. ] (]) 00:00, 5 November 2022 (UTC) |
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:{{u|KeepItGoingForward}} asked me on my talk page to chime in here. I think ] is pretty clear in allowing the proposed citation ("neither required ... nor prohibited"). But I think the more relevant guidance is this: "Any statements about living persons that are challenged or likely to be challenged must have an inline citation ''every'' time they are mentioned, including within the lead." Since we know the accusation is controversial, why shouldn't the footnote appear in the lead? -- ] (]) 00:19, 5 November 2022 (UTC) |
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::{{re|Mikeblas}} supporting footnotes are already in the lead. The proposal is go increase the count from 3 to 6 which I find excessive. ] (]) 00:36, 5 November 2022 (UTC) |
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:::Ah, I see. Is it not possible to reach a compromise with just one reference per each sentence? When the statements are echoed in the body of the article, all of the references can be reused, not just the highlited ones for the lead. -- ] (]) 01:14, 5 November 2022 (UTC) |
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::::Sure, I am happy to do less references such as one or two on the first and second sentence instead of three, but since it is so controversial and involves a living person I am of the view why not provide a diversity of sources. Does the number of sources take away from readability on the wiki? The last sentence of the lead has three references, so I am unsure how the first two sentences are somehow an exception. The first two sentences of the article has no references provided. We already have the three sources in a none-lead part of the article that would fix the issue and are the ones I have placed in the past before the reversions. |
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::::Additionally, only one of the citations in the lead as far as I can see from a quick read directly states that it is the Syrian regime that caused the attack. The other state the Syrian regime may have done it or are references for death tolls from other chemical weapon attacks. They are not stating who the perpetrators are. |
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::::I am of the view of following the guidance quoted by Mikeblas of "any statements about living persons that are challenged or likely to be challenged must have an inline citation every time they are mentioned, including within the lead." and I would also add that the ] also states that "complex, current, or controversial subjects may require many citations." -- ] (]) 09:43, 5 November 2022 (UTC) |
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:::::What if, in the lede, we have a reference each for: lower bound of death toll, upper bound, deadliest since, and the actor? That's only three. ''All'' the references can stay in the body of the article, of course. Should the lede acknowledge there is dispute about the actor? -- ] (]) 18:11, 5 November 2022 (UTC) |
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::::::Sure, we can spread the lead references out. I will start working on that. |
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::::::Per the dispute about the actor I think it is mainly rhetoric without evidence that the actor was not the Syrian Military? I worry that adding in the dispute part may create confusion, but I also could see some value in putting it in the lead too to keep the article neutral to the extreme. I am not sure what would be the best approach and how wiki usually approaches this situation? ] (]) 19:29, 5 November 2022 (UTC) |
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:::::::Great, I think it should be fine for everyone if there's fewer refs in the lede, but still refs in the lede. would you agree {{u|VQuakr}}? |
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:::::::pI don't know much about this conflict or event, but it's just the regular matter of vetting sources. If the sources saying something are reputable (see ]), then we use them. If they're not reputable (see ] for example) we don't use them. It's possible that reliable sources say two (or more!) different things; when that happens I just write "some think foo , and some think bar '" ... and maybe explan or expand those positions. -- ] (]) 18:59, 6 November 2022 (UTC) |
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::::::::The Syrian government's counter-claims weren't viewed as credible (and ''were'' viewed as quite predictable since it was their SOP) and do not merit mention in the lead per ]. "carried out by the forces of Syrian President Bashar al-Assad" is not a BLP statement; I'm not sure why BLP is being brought up here. It isn't necessary to end every sentence with a cite; end of paragraph is editorially favorable when there aren't quotes. ] (]) 18:18, 7 November 2022 (UTC) |
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:::::::::The guidelines specifically states, "any statements about living persons that are challenged or likely to be challenged must have an inline citation every time they are mentioned, including within the lead." That means after every sentence. Bashar al-Assad is a living person. I agree about not mentioning the counter-claims in the lead due to the none-credible nature.] (]) 05:45, 9 November 2022 (UTC) |
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::::::::::I support the edit proposed by Mikeblas and to leave the counter-claims, which are non-credible, out of the lead. It really doesn't hurt to have the citations in the lead, and it wards off some of the drive-by objectors. ] (]) 15:32, 9 November 2022 (UTC) |
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::::::::::{{re|KeepItGoingForward}} Bashar al-Assad is indeed a living person, but the statement is not about him. It merely mentions him. So BLP does not apply here. Regardless, I appreciate the effort you put forth in the article-space edit to declutter the cites to the extent feasible. ] (]) 17:35, 9 November 2022 (UTC) |
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== Please stop reverting the changes without going to the talk page before. == |
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This is a message to VQuakr. You seem to push a POV against multiple users on this page. Namely, you seem to imply that the Assad army is responsible for the attack. Many sources disagrees, many[REDACTED] users told you to stop. Please discuss before reverting any new changes. Thanks ] (]) 19:37, 17 October 2023 (UTC) |
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:Some of these refs are from July. -] (]) 07:05, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:*Your count is weird (it is one person, not "multiple users") |
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::True, one was I removed it. Do you ever sleep :) ] (]) 07:10, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:*You refer to a discussion that is one year old and led to the consensus you are disturbing now. --] (]) 08:49, 18 October 2023 (UTC) |
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== Could there be a more digestible image used instead? == |
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:::::True, one was I removed it. One didnt stick. Minor issue, it will get traction. Actually the two stories tie in. Do you ever sleep :) ] (]) 07:10, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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I'm not an avid Misplaced Pages editor, count me as a[REDACTED] citizen. I think I speak for most casual users (that don't engage in the talk feature) that this image is a little too morbid. I know it depicts the truth, but could there be another image that communicates the same truth that's less macabre? Please reason with me here. ] (]) 07:53, 10 June 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::There's another one that looks like it's from July too (judging from the URL), but the link is broken. The other two are media outlets controlled by the Russian government and are thus not reliable sources. If we can get an RS reporting on this claim, I'm all for including it -- I mean, it would be really cool if Moscow would actually put forward actual ''evidence'', but that seems to be a lot to ask -- but right now, it doesn't pass muster, IMO. -] (]) 07:14, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:::::::IMHO muster will be ok in time as its picked up and discussed. ] (]) 07:18, 26 September 2013 (UTC) |
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:I just noticed that others seemed to have this issue with the image before the current one. Maybe no image is needed? ] (]) 07:55, 10 June 2024 (UTC) |
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:Agreed, it's not necessary at all. I don't think anyone wants to see images of dead bodies unless they're interested in the topic, especially when the header image shows up in the page preview. I'd really appreciate it if someone more knowledgeable than me could change/remove it. ] (]) 04:32, 4 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:]. An article about a mass casualty gas attack is reasonably represented by victims of the attack. If there is a different image that better fits the manual of style per ], feel free to propose the alternative. ] (]) 06:24, 4 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::There are many Misplaced Pages pages about all kinds of atrocities and disasters, but usually without explicitly showing the dead people. Should pages about mass shootings in the USA be illustrated with closeups of the bloody faces of the victims? But those are of course westerners who might complain and even take legal action, while those people shown in this article are "just" some Syrians in a far away land. ] (]) 21:18, 10 December 2024 (UTC) |
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::I disagree. The picture is not informative. It shows dead bodies (of children btw) with numbers on. It could be from '''any''' similar attack, and therefore '''cannot''' possibly inform the reader about the event in question. The image is horrifying to typical readers (again: dead children) and furthermore it is potentially extremely upsetting to victims of similar attacks. The MOS says that such images should only be used when their omission leaves the article in question less informative. I believe I have argued convincingly that that is not the case here. I am not a very active wiki editor and I don't want to get into a war. Unfortunately I cannot think of a better image. Most similar articles I've found on[REDACTED] have no picture whatsoever. ] (]) 10:58, 11 December 2024 (UTC) |
The header image currently used is too gruesome with its depiction of a dead man and two dead children. I suggest either the image be changed, or at least their faces blurred out of respect. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fahdriyami (talk • contribs) 11:01, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
Discussion in previous section on the inclusion of references in the lead. Diff here: https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Ghouta_chemical_attack&diff=next&oldid=1117101956 Justification per KeepItGoingForward: Many pages cite in the lead where there is a follow-up later in the body, see 2022 Russian invasion of Ukraine for instance. Providing sources in the lead provides credit to the article for the reader, as the lead is the main focus of an article unless someone dives into the article details
. Also cites WP:ONUS that all material likely to be contested should have a source. Opposed by VQuakr on grounds of avoiding duplication of refs. Key policy: MOS:LEADCITE, which states The lead must conform to verifiability, biographies of living persons, and other policies. The verifiability policy advises that material that is challenged or likely to be challenged, and direct quotations, should be supported by an inline citation. Any statements about living persons that are challenged or likely to be challenged must have an inline citation every time they are mentioned, including within the lead. Because the lead will usually repeat information that is in the body, editors should balance the desire to avoid redundant citations in the lead with the desire to aid readers in locating sources for challengeable material. Leads are usually written at a greater level of generality than the body, and information in the lead section of non-controversial subjects is less likely to be challenged and less likely to require a source; there is not, however, an exception to citation requirements specific to leads. The necessity for citations in a lead should be determined on a case-by-case basis by editorial consensus. Complex, current, or controversial subjects may require many citations; others, few or none. The presence of citations in the introduction is neither required in every article nor prohibited in any article.
BobFromBrockley (talk) 15:18, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
This is a message to VQuakr. You seem to push a POV against multiple users on this page. Namely, you seem to imply that the Assad army is responsible for the attack. Many sources disagrees, many[REDACTED] users told you to stop. Please discuss before reverting any new changes. Thanks 109.210.109.124 (talk) 19:37, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
I'm not an avid Misplaced Pages editor, count me as a[REDACTED] citizen. I think I speak for most casual users (that don't engage in the talk feature) that this image is a little too morbid. I know it depicts the truth, but could there be another image that communicates the same truth that's less macabre? Please reason with me here. 2601:483:5280:55D0:64A5:B7C5:932F:2F4 (talk) 07:53, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
Referencing and citation: criterion met
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