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Per discussions with experienced Wikipedians in preparation for FAC: | |||
'''Whole article:''' | |||
* <s>Trim article size to 45-50 kB (readable prose)</s> | |||
* Find citation for every <nowiki>{{fact}}</nowiki> template. | |||
* <s>Remove or integrate most/all efn's - high quality writing that I hate to lose, can we move them to subarticles in many cases?</s> | |||
* Remove all exterraneous details from sections which are supposed to be written in ]. | |||
* <s>Research and resolve concerns from Hog Farm on the Missouri section</s> | |||
* Implement bcatt's suggestions on NPOVing the article, inasmuch as the suggestions were reasonable, made in good faith, and for the purpose of strengthening the article. | |||
* <s>Prune references that no longer have citations based on them</s> | |||
* Include more inline citations (notes), where applicable, and/or where the fact could use a citation. | |||
* Verify everything. | |||
* Continue to improve brilliance of prose, and make more concise. | |||
''''Early life' section:''' | |||
''''1827 to 1831' section:''' | |||
* Add picture(s) (purely cosmetic suggestion). | |||
* Add mention of his trusty white stovepipe hat | |||
''''1831 to 1844' section:''' | |||
Massive work! | |||
Generally get the article to synch up better with the extremely well-written ] sections on this period. | |||
* Remove or at least deflate the two paragraphs (and then one under the notes) regarding the noncentral tarring and feathering; can't we include something more encyclopedic and central to his life? | |||
* Add reference to polygamy under Nauvoo section. | |||
* Explain: What does temple-building have to do with Smith's life? | |||
''''Marriage and family' section:''' | |||
* Section on polygamy | |||
* Section on birth family | |||
''''Major teachings' section:''' | |||
''''Legacy' section:''' | |||
''''Notes' section:''' | |||
''''References' section:''' | |||
* Prune obsolete material, move it to ]. | |||
''''See also' section:''' | |||
* Expand. | |||
''''External links' section:''' | |||
* Expand external links. (Include at least some anti-Smith links.) | |||
* Prune and alphabetize categories. | |||
* Alphabetize interwiki. |
Latest revision as of 13:56, 9 January 2025
Per discussions with experienced Wikipedians in preparation for FAC:
Trim article size to 45-50 kB (readable prose)Remove or integrate most/all efn's - high quality writing that I hate to lose, can we move them to subarticles in many cases?Research and resolve concerns from Hog Farm on the Missouri sectionPrune references that no longer have citations based on them