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| Hey, I have been scanning over my article again and am looking for anything that has a promotional tone. You said you noticed some things I was hoping you could point them out, or let me know what the issues are. Is the article allowed to reference goals of the firm? Also I put the "press section" in external links. Is that appropriate? | Hey, I have been scanning over my article again and am looking for anything that has a promotional tone. You said you noticed some things I was hoping you could point them out, or let me know what the issues are. Is the article allowed to reference goals of the firm? Also I put the "press section" in external links. Is that appropriate? | ||
| Thanks very much for the help! | Thanks very much for the help! | ||
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| A user whose only edits are to AfC is not one who is intending to become part of the community. As far as the links in the article ... well, at some point soon it will be accepted (in which case it will be cleaned up) or rejected and deleted. If that's how they think they can promote their business, more fool them. ] (]) 19:56, 6 July 2013 (UTC) | |||
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EatOut Article: More Context
Hi. Thank you for reviewing my article on EatOut. Can you tell me specifically which areas/sections of the article need more context?
- The article is a bit confusing and needs more focus. Is the article about an app or a company that created an app? What is a "booking service"? What can people do with this app? The "Yummy Blog", is it part of the app or something else offered by the founder of this service? What is "EatOut Kenya"? the company that created the app or the app itself. If you'd like to include Taste Events Ltd. in the article you should probably make the article about the larger company rather than a specfic app.--RadioFan (talk) 11:35, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
Downsize Fitness: Help with Neutrality
Hey, I have been scanning over my article again and am looking for anything that has a promotional tone. You said you noticed some things I was hoping you could point them out, or let me know what the issues are. Is the article allowed to reference goals of the firm? Also I put the "press section" in external links. Is that appropriate? Thanks very much for the help!
IntelCapital
A user whose only edits are to AfC is not one who is intending to become part of the community. As far as the links in the article ... well, at some point soon it will be accepted (in which case it will be cleaned up) or rejected and deleted. If that's how they think they can promote their business, more fool them. Daniel Case (talk) 19:56, 6 July 2013 (UTC)