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The map is factually incorrect. Gaza (we'll discuss West Bank another time) has not been "Under Israeli occupation since 1967". <span style="font-size:smaller;:'arial bold',;border:1px solid Black;">]]</span> 06:59, 29 July 2016 (UTC) The map is factually incorrect. Gaza (we'll discuss West Bank another time) has not been "Under Israeli occupation since 1967". <span style="font-size:smaller;:'arial bold',;border:1px solid Black;">]]</span> 06:59, 29 July 2016 (UTC)
:You must set forth your reasons why the map is incorrect. You cannot just state it is so, and then say ''we'' when you mean unilateral action undertaken by yourself. Regardless of the merits of the map, removing it because you think contrafactually that Gazas is not occupied is obviously improper.] (]) 07:29, 29 July 2016 (UTC)

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"Root of conflict" claim in Agriculture section

The Agriculture section currently states the "root of the conflict" is land. Is this absolutely verifiable? Land may be a major or even primary source but to say it's the "root" may be excessive. I think that paragraph should be rephrased. If no one objects here, I will make the change. Tale.Spin (talk) 20:28, 3 December 2015 (UTC)

RfC: Proposal to fix a long term structural problem in Palestine Israel conflict articles

Please see WT:IPCOLL#RfC: Proposal to fix a long term structural problem in Palestine Israel conflict articles. Oncenawhile (talk) 22:12, 14 January 2016 (UTC)

A plea for a 100 year narrative

Given the importance of the conflict articles to our project I had hoped for more feedback at this RFC, but I think I overcomplicated the description. Some editors may also be thinking "we've been just fine for 10 years so is there really a problem here that needs solving"? I would like to encourage more editors to contribute.

The core issue behind the RFC question is that most readers know very little about the conflict and therefore need one single summary article to read and begin their journey, and we need that single summary article to broadly match the picture that the 1,000s of books summarizing this conflict take. Instead we have sat for many years with three primary articles (IPC since 48, AIC since 48 and ICMP 20-48) which are fine but are missing something above them to thread them together into the 100-year-narrative of the conflict presented by the vast majority of books on the topic.

I recognize that many editors may find the question is a little more dry and boring than many of the debates around here, but its importance to the average Misplaced Pages reader can hardly be overstated.

Oncenawhile (talk) 11:10, 2 February 2016 (UTC)

Well I knew few approaches but before that I"ll have to clarify some things that are often forgotten in this subject.
If regarding the Palestinians as the non-Jewish inhabitors of the land before 1881 (first wave of Zionist migration), then the Israeli-Palestinian conflict, or maybe the Jewish-Palestinian conflict or another way to explain it is the "Zionist-Palestinian conflict", is a conflict that started as a conflict between the Zionist Jews and the anti-colonialist Palestinians, mainly Arabs. According to Palestinian Nationalism article, upon the establishment of Tel Aviv in 1909, the conflicts over land grew in the direction of explicit national rivalry
  • The conflict might"ve started in 1881 because this year marks the beginings of Zionism in Palestine/Israel, this is used by the Hebrew[REDACTED] after they achieved a consensus but I couldn't find a proper source from the article or the consensus it self (which probably had sources).
  • According to the Israel, casualties of the Israeli-Arab conflict are listed since 1860 (Even though the first casualty was in the 1873, named Aharon Hershler who was killed by Arabs in Mishkenot Sha'ananim, the first Jewish neighborhood outside of Jerusalem, built in 1860 Hebrew source), when Jews started building neighborhoods outside of the Walls of Jerusalem. (Yom Hazikaron#Observance).
  • The Intercommunal conflict in Mandatory Palestine began with the Franco-Syrian war, after the establishment of the Mandate after the first clash between Jews and Arab since the creation of the mandate in 1920. I personally think this one is the correct one because it is the "Israeli"-Palestinian conflict and the way to 1947 war was with the establishment of the Mandate.
  • The obvious one in 1948 with the declration of independance of Israel, serving the "Israeli" part of the name.
  • Another apporach I deeply oppose is 1964, with the beginings of the "main phase" with the creation of the Palestinian Liberation Organization - the organized Palestinian resistance.
The historical option is 1920 and the logical option is 1948.--Bolter21 (talk to me) 12:57, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
Another option is 1917 with the Sinai and Palestine Campaign and the Balfour Declaration. I think this is where many begin.
Yet another is 1798 beginning with the French campaign in Egypt and Syria.
I feel very strongly against the 1948 option, i.e. starting from the Israeli Declaration of Independence. That's like starting the American Revolution article in 1776 and ignoring the Boston Tea Party. After all, the 1947 partition plan was put in place with the intention to END the conflict!
Oncenawhile (talk) 13:17, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
As an aside, note that the reference you linked to below is another example of modern authors using the land-based "Israel-Palestine" term (rather than the people-based Israeli-Palestinian). Oncenawhile (talk) 13:20, 2 February 2016 (UTC)



References

  1. Sandra Marlene Sufian and Mark LeVine (2007) Reapproaching borders: new perspectives on the study of Israel-Palestine Rowman & Littlefield,-Remembering Jewish-Arab Contact and Conflict by Michelle Compos ISBN 0-7425-4639-X p 48

Semi-protected edit request on 28 March 2016

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This Misplaced Pages article states:

"Palestinian leaders insist that the Israeli decision, following attacks from Hamas, to impose a weapons blockade of Gaza, Israel's control of Gaza crossing points into Israel, and Israel's control of air above and sea around Gaza constitutes continued Israeli occupation."

The article provides as a source:

http://www.cnn.com/2009/WORLD/meast/01/06/israel.gaza.occupation.question/index.html

The particular points being quoted are stated in the source, not in reference to occupation, but in the words of the one being quoted:

Israel has "besieged Gaza," Ashrawi said Sunday. "They control the territorial waters, the airspace, the land crossing points and they gave themselves overriding security consideration or powers."

A siege is not synonymous with an occupation, neither in a legal sense, nor even in a common language sense. Forces occupy a site subsequent to a siege - a castle under siege is not yet occupied. The Misplaced Pages article should be amended to "constitutes continued Israeli siege", or if we wish only to discuss occupation, most of the line be removed as the reasons given are not sourced in respect to occupation.

Neither is it completely rational - 'Israel's control of Gaza crossing points into Israel' is synonymous with 'America's control of Mexico crossing points into America', which as with any country border, is not indicative of occupation. If it were so, than the article should in all objectivity mention Egypt, as the same reason implies that Egypt is occupying Gaza, as they have 'control of Gaza crossing points into Egypt'. At the very least, that part of the sentence should be removed.

50.153.128.6 (talk) 03:48, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Take a look at note 21 in the article Gaza Strip.
The sources there are far superior to the CNN source linked above, and provide answers to your questions.
I suggest we bring that note into this article, and widen the above quote to refer to the international community's point of view.
Oncenawhile (talk) 05:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
That makes sense. However, while many of the points mentioned in that note (22?) are true, the credibility of the sources is questionable. Obviously dependency by choice or circumstance is not occupation (is the Vatican city occupied by Italy? they have similar dependencies for power, water, and sewage), rather dependency actively imposed by another power is a form of occupation and control. The article Gaza Strip incorrectly attempts to address this: "For its energy, Gaza is largely dependent on Israel either for import of electricity or fuel for its sole power plant. The Oslo Accords set limits for the Palestinian production and importation of energy." This is from a UN report cited there, note 21; however this is actually false. The full text of Oslo accords I and II are readily available online (http://www.jmcc.org/Documentsandmaps.aspx?id=392 and http://www.mfa.gov.il/mfa/foreignpolicy/peace/guide/pages/the%20israeli-palestinian%20interim%20agreement.aspx), and contain no such limits or controls. Feel free to check. Sources willing to fabricate lies in defense of their beliefs (or claim to be scholarly, yet not be capable of checking primary sources) should not be deemed credible or reliable. Or, at the very least, as Misplaced Pages attempts to be objective, context should be given, pointing out their unreliability or lack of scholarly research which their title/journal otherwise leads readers to believe.
18.189.1.177 (talk) 16:01, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
Your analysis is WP:Original research. That is not allowed on Misplaced Pages. The sources in the note are written by respected scholars. As a Misplaced Pages editor, the fact that you disagree with them is not relevant. We follow the sources.
Ultimately, these sources are simply explaining the view of the international community. The existence of that view. i.e. that the international community still consider Gaza to be occupied, is a fact, just as the sky is blue.
Oncenawhile (talk) 19:20, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
Not done: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the {{edit semi-protected}} template. — JJMC89(T·C) 08:33, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

Fatah or any other groups to be added to infobox?

Should any other groups/organisations, such as Fatah (main part of PLO) be included in the infobox, Fatah because they still support the stabbing attacks and incitement against Israel? Should 'Palestinian lone wolves' be added too because they are still attacking currently, or should only actual organisations/groups be included in the infobox? (Just wondered) Thoughts?--PaulPGwiki (talk) 10:08, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

Scepticism

  • Concerning the image depicting a "Chemical burns on a 15-year-old Palestinian child following Israeli bombings in the village of Khoza'a, Gaza."

How could we be sure that it is not a picture of propaganda? It could be a rare disease for example.

A similar image

Secondly, I don't think that graphic image should be privileged on a sensible topic. It looks more like a competition into the sickening...

  • Concerning the image "Bar chart showing Israeli and Palestinian deaths from September 2000 to July 2014"... An indication about what happend during this period of time should be provided : second intifada (2000-5), fightings and conflicts with Gaza.

--Pargidey (talk) 03:45, 8 June 2016 (UTC)

About the first, I can confirm this photo is legitimate because of the symbol of the hospital on the bed. I don't have an opinion about wether it should stay.
About your second concern, I think the article talks about all of those phases in the conflict, so it isn't a problem.--Bolter21 (talk to me) 11:55, 8 June 2016 (UTC)

Removing article's factually incorrect main map

The map is factually incorrect. Gaza (we'll discuss West Bank another time) has not been "Under Israeli occupation since 1967". KamelTebaast 06:59, 29 July 2016 (UTC)

You must set forth your reasons why the map is incorrect. You cannot just state it is so, and then say we when you mean unilateral action undertaken by yourself. Regardless of the merits of the map, removing it because you think contrafactually that Gazas is not occupied is obviously improper.Nishidani (talk) 07:29, 29 July 2016 (UTC)
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