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** '''ALT1''':... that the ] prompted ] to refer to FBI director ] as the "ringleader" of a "den of thieves"<ref>{{cite web |last1=Higgens |first1=Tucker |title=President Trump: Comey is 'criminal,' and IG report 'totally exonerates me' |url=https://www.cnbc.com/2018/06/15/trump-doj-watchdog-report-totally-exonerates-me-comeys-actions-criminal.html |publisher=CNBC}}</ref>? ** '''ALT1''':... that the ''']''' prompted ] to refer to FBI director ] as the "ringleader" of a "den of thieves"? <small>{{cite web |last1=Higgens |first1=Tucker |title=President Trump: Comey is 'criminal,' and IG report 'totally exonerates me' |url=https://www.cnbc.com/2018/06/15/trump-doj-watchdog-report-totally-exonerates-me-comeys-actions-criminal.html |publisher=CNBC}}</small>
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::# The article needs a little work on referencing. Every para must have an inline citation. For example this: "...which had a deleterious effect on the FBI's credibility." Also the Focus section need a cite. ::# The article needs a little work on referencing. Every para must have an inline citation. For example this: "...which had a deleterious effect on the FBI's credibility." Also the Focus section need a cite.
::# The hook needs to be exciting. E.g. you could use Clinton's "But my emails" quote. Or Trump's "den of thieves." Trumo is so colorful. Anything he says is perfect for a DYK hook lmao. &ndash; ]<sup>(])</sup> 04:06, 19 June 2018 (UTC) ::# The hook needs to be exciting. E.g. you could use Clinton's "But my emails" quote. Or Trump's "den of thieves." Trumo is so colorful. Anything he says is perfect for a DYK hook lmao. &ndash; ]<sup>(])</sup> 04:06, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
:::{{ping|Jerry the Bellybutton Elf}} Wow, Jerry article looks great! One last referencing thing. In addition to every para needing cites, every quote needs a cite. I see one last item that needs a ref: "in response to requests from Congress, various organizations, and members of the public". And the hook is bigly winning. &ndash; ]<sup>(])</sup> 07:04, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

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|comments = I had to source a quotation in the lead. Earwig reported copyvio probably but this article liberally uses public domain content. I put Focus section in a quote. Trump hook may seem contentious however Trump has lowered the bar for contentious lol. Can't really read the text on the pic, but it's discernible that it's a government report. Great job, Jerry.
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Inspector General Report on FBI and DOJ's Actions in the 2016 Election

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Created by Jerry the Bellybutton Elf (talk). Nominated by Jerry the Bellybutton Elf (talk) at 02:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC).

  • I am honored to be co-credited for this article. But apart from approving the AFC and pointing Jerry to DYK I had little involvement. That said I am pleased to review this nomination.– Lionel 04:00, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
  • @Jerry the Bellybutton Elf: Here are two things that standout:
  1. The article needs a little work on referencing. Every para must have an inline citation. For example this: "...which had a deleterious effect on the FBI's credibility." Also the Focus section need a cite.
  2. The hook needs to be exciting. E.g. you could use Clinton's "But my emails" quote. Or Trump's "den of thieves." Trumo is so colorful. Anything he says is perfect for a DYK hook lmao. – Lionel 04:06, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
@Jerry the Bellybutton Elf: Wow, Jerry article looks great! One last referencing thing. In addition to every para needing cites, every quote needs a cite. I see one last item that needs a ref: "in response to requests from Congress, various organizations, and members of the public". And the hook is bigly winning. – Lionel 07:04, 22 June 2018 (UTC)


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Overall: I had to source a quotation in the lead. Earwig reported copyvio probably but this article liberally uses public domain content. I put Focus section in a quote. Trump hook may seem contentious however Trump has lowered the bar for contentious lol. Can't really read the text on the pic, but it's discernible that it's a government report. Great job, Jerry. – Lionel 05:59, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

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