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Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997) is a Japanese/Haitian professional tennis player. ] (]) 00:19, 14 September 2018 (UTC) |
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Naomi Osaka's whole name is in Hiragana.
Someone please fix it. Thank you. オ坂 なおみ This is the correct spelling. CTRLmyself (talk) 00:56, 29 July 2014 (UTC)
- The first character in this comment is a false friend, and the current page is correct that it is 大 and not 才 which is never read as "Oo". Either way, I think this comment has been completely addressed by now. Not sure what the policy on Misplaced Pages is for cleaning up old addressed talk threads (or the ten thousand redundant ones that follow below, for that matter). 96.41.225.223 (talk) 18:48, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- Archive them.Tvx1 23:07, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
How can she be Japanese-American if her father is Haitian and her mother is Japanese?
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168.243.226.20 (talk) 02:15, 30 August 2017 (UTC)
If her father is Haitian. It should be written as Haitian-Japanese. That's what it look like this morning. Why the sudden change? I agree why the sudden change. This should be corrected or I think it will have an impact on[REDACTED] credibility.. Po joseph (talk) 23:15, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Still, she IS half Haitian, and should be noted as such. She is not Japanese only; she is a Japanese-Haitian American. Cwashi3324 (talk) 18:06, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
Agreed this should be updated to mention her Haitian ethnicity Nfaustin (talk) 02:09, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
lineage has historically been traced paternally, hemse she is Hatian-Japanese American. Not Japanese-Haitian American or simply American. To remove her paternal heritage is an obvious slight and inaccuracy. This compounded by the fact that her page has been locked and is uneditable. Her Black Heritage, which she openly claims and often corrects those who overlook or attempt to dismiss should not be augmented or erased. This error should be corrected immediately.
In closing, Naomi Osaka herself has stated the following...
"In racially homogeneous Japan, Osaka is considered hāfu, which is Japanese for biracial. Her Japanese grandfather was furious when he found out that her mother was romantically involved with a black man. As a result of the interracial relationship, her mother did not have contact with her family for over ten years. In a 2016 interview, Osaka said: "When I go to Japan, people are confused. From my name, they don’t expect to see a (black girl).""
Black people have not attempted to erase her Japanese heritage and the Japanese should not attempt to erase her Haitian/Black heritage. If it wasn't for both her Black Father and Japanese mother she would not exist to represent Japan.
She is "hāfu" honor it! In the opening lines of her page, not in the subtext. WebEpic (talk) 07:34, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Are you just ignoring the discussions below? Welcome back to Misplaced Pages after 5 years and 2 edits. Vivexdino (talk) 11:29, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
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Saying that Osaka is "a Japanese tennis player who represents Japan" is plain silly! Even "a tennis player who represents Japan" is silly. Biographical articles on WP traditionally give the person's ethnicity/nationality/citizenship in the first sentence. Osaka has Japanese and Haitian ethnicity and is an American citizen. This is all in the article and it is all sourced. Therefore we should follow convention and call her a Japanese-Haitian-American tennis player in the first sentence. Scolaire (talk) 12:22, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
- I wholeheartedly disagree. As far as I can tell, WP articles list the "sporting nationality" of athletes, unless there's a mismatch - and if there is, it's generally fleshed out in a different section. For example, Federer's intro doesn't mention that he is of South African descent, nor Djokovic saying that he is of Montenegrin/Croat descent. Osaka is Japanese born, of Japanese descent, and represents Japan - there's no disjointment. And her ethnicity and residency are clarified in a later section. Your intro is way more convoluted than necessary.--Ortizesp (talk) 01:07, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- "American" was first added on 18 March. Since then there have been 88 intermediate revisions by 41 users. "Haitian" was first added in January 2015. Since then there have been 367 intermediate revisions by more than 100 users. Yours are the only edits to remove "Haitian" and "American". Nobody else finds it "convoluted". There is a clear consensus for keeping it. Please do not edit-war to restore your version until you establish a consensus for it here on the talk page. Scolaire (talk) 14:04, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- Refer to MOS:BLPLEAD - Context - "This will be the country of which the person is a citizen, national or permanent resident, ... Ethnicity, religion, or sexuality should generally not be in the lead unless it is relevant to the subject's notability. Similarly, previous nationalities or the place of birth should not be mentioned in the lead unless they are relevant to the subject's notability." The only nationality relevant to Osaka as an athlete is Japan, ethnicity (Haitian) and residence (American) are secondary. They are both expanded in the personal life section. Secondly, I am not the only one to play around with her intro, you seem to be the one of the few restoring it. And third, there is a clear consensus for how these intros work, else we'd end up with Federer "the Swiss-German-Afrikaner tennis player", Novak Djokovic "the Serbian-Croatian-Montenegrin tennis player," or Ethan Ampadu "the Welsh-Irish-Ghanaian-English footballer". I have found a reference for keeping my format, if you can find opposing evidence, then you may dispute it or start a consensus yourself.--Ortizesp (talk) 18:05, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- I don't think the comparisons with Federer, Djokovic or Ampadu are good ones. It's not a question of "descent". Osaka has lived in the US since the age of three. She has US citizenship. She speaks English with an American accent. On the other hand, she has spent little time in Japan, and has only poor Japanese, so "born in Japan and plays for Japan, therefore Japanese" is not by any means a good summary of her nationality. She herself lays emphasis on all three of her nationalities, as can be seen in this interview (at 1:26). For BLPLEAD purposes, I would say that her multi-national background definitely is relevant to her notability. It is talked about in nearly all the news stories about her. Scolaire (talk) 15:55, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- Rather than go to WP:3O, I am pinging editors who have had a major input into this article, and who have edited it this year: Fyunck(click), GAThrawnIGF, Wolbo, Ytfc23, OVVL, NewYorkYankeesVersusNewYorkMets09281999, Xperiaray610, GeneM18, Ausmor627, Brentbaxter. What do you think the first sentence should say? Scolaire (talk) 15:55, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- Refer to MOS:BLPLEAD - Context - "This will be the country of which the person is a citizen, national or permanent resident, ... Ethnicity, religion, or sexuality should generally not be in the lead unless it is relevant to the subject's notability. Similarly, previous nationalities or the place of birth should not be mentioned in the lead unless they are relevant to the subject's notability." The only nationality relevant to Osaka as an athlete is Japan, ethnicity (Haitian) and residence (American) are secondary. They are both expanded in the personal life section. Secondly, I am not the only one to play around with her intro, you seem to be the one of the few restoring it. And third, there is a clear consensus for how these intros work, else we'd end up with Federer "the Swiss-German-Afrikaner tennis player", Novak Djokovic "the Serbian-Croatian-Montenegrin tennis player," or Ethan Ampadu "the Welsh-Irish-Ghanaian-English footballer". I have found a reference for keeping my format, if you can find opposing evidence, then you may dispute it or start a consensus yourself.--Ortizesp (talk) 18:05, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- "American" was first added on 18 March. Since then there have been 88 intermediate revisions by 41 users. "Haitian" was first added in January 2015. Since then there have been 367 intermediate revisions by more than 100 users. Yours are the only edits to remove "Haitian" and "American". Nobody else finds it "convoluted". There is a clear consensus for keeping it. Please do not edit-war to restore your version until you establish a consensus for it here on the talk page. Scolaire (talk) 14:04, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- My thoughts are this is like Maria Sharapova and it should be short and simple in the lead. Naomi Osaka is a Japanese professional tennis player. The main body can go into detail about her parentage, etc.. Fyunck(click) (talk) 18:37, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- Garbiñe Muguruza is described as being Spanish-Venezualan. I suppose either Japanese-Haitian or just Japanese is acceptable. Ausmor627(click) (talk) 22:17, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- I only edit the ranking of the player. I leave the biographical details to the pros, so I won't be of much help. Sorry! GAThrawnIGF (talk) 22:48, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- That was a somewhat underwhelming response. It does appear, though, that contributors to the talk page are not greatly in favour of Japanese-Haitian or Japanese-Haitian-American. At least we can point to this discussion if people change it in future. However, I still think "a Japanese player who plays for Japan" is silly. I am inclined to follow Ethan Ampadu, "a professional footballer who plays for English club Chelsea and the Welsh national team", and take "Japanese" out of the first sentence. Scolaire (talk) 13:34, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
Japanese expatriate sportspeople in the United States?
She is listed under the category "Japanese expatriate sportspeople in the United States". She has U.S. citizenship though so she's not an expatriate in the U.S. She should probably be removed from the category. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 73.51.115.45 (talk) 17:10, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
- Whether a person gains citizenship has no bearing on their listing as an expatriate of the former country. Fyunck(click) (talk) 18:05, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
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Change > Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997) is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player. On July 23, 2018, Osaka reached her best singles ranking of world No. 17. She was the first Haitian-Japanese woman to reach and win a final of a Grand Slam, defeating Serena Williams at the 2018 US Open. to > Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997) is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player. On July 23, 2018, Osaka reached her best singles ranking of world No. 17. She was the first Haitian-Japanese woman to reach and win a final of a Grand Slam, defeating Serena Williams at the 2018 US Open. Plgeorges (talk) 22:02, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
Last night on tv she herself indentified herself as Haitian so stop being a racist and leave it her bio!! TheReelBlackSheep (talk) 22:16, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
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I read this wiki article the day before the Us Open. It stated that she was Haitian-Japanese in the first paragraph. Now it only says that she is Japanese. Why would this information change?
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Her father is Haitian and her mother Japanese. I sincerely feel that it should be said that she "Haitian - Japanese" and not just Japanese. I believe that both cultures are something to be proud about! Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by M&M.plt (talk • contribs) 22:17, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
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Hi please correct the article on Naomi Osaka. It should state that she is a Haitian Japanese tennis player, this article does not include her Haitian ethnicity at the beginning of the article. Thank you. Dimes25 (talk) 01:24, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
She’s Haitian-Japanese, please correct the page. LMacTheGr8 (talk) 17:58, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Ethnicity and race do not go into the head paragraph. It stating Japanese would be accurate because she is a Japanese citizen if I'm reading the sources correctly otherwise it would be that she's an American tennis player that represents her mother's home country of Japan.Mcelite (talk) 20:28, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
She is the first Japanese and Haitian Tennis player to win a Grand Slam singles tournament, defeating Serena Williams in the final of the 2018 US Open. Osaka has reached a career-high world ranking of No. 7. 2601:643:8200:9999:E4FB:1E1E:2C48:6F96 (talk) 21:57, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Yesterday here on Misplaced Pages it stated she was a Haitian-Japanese tennis player. Now that she's famous Misplaced Pages has edited out her Haitian heritage!! Stating that she's only Japanese. Stop trying to filter out black greatness. You can't stop us!!! TheReelBlackSheep (talk) 22:14, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
I don't know why this is still an issue. A ton of users believe that her Haitian half should be mentioned. Why? Because its notable. They've provided sources as to how her ancestry is notable in regards to her position as a tennis player representing Japan. Her biracial makeup is an ongoing discussion in Japan in regards to societal acceptance of "hafus". That by itself makes this the exception to the rule of ethnicity generally not being included in the lead. The word 'generally' as a qualifier in this rule means exceptions can be made. Like the example of Henry Ossawa Tanner or Jero. Ms Osaka's country representation in sports (pushed by her father) was for financial reasons (JTA was more promising than USTA). Ms Osaka herself clearly identifies as both proudly Japanese and Haitian and has corrected media when her ancestry/heritage isn't properly referenced. Furthermore, her formative years were in the US with her Haitian relatives. I've made a couple of good faith edits which I've believed accurately represented Ms Osaka only to be repeatedly undone. Illogical if you ask me. Ghostreconnaissance (talk) 02:58, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Your reply shows that you're either not comprehending the point so many users are trying to make or you're willfully ignoring it. The issue is whether or not her ethnicity is notable enough to warrant being mentioned in the lead, not if its mentioned in the article itself. The latter is a given. The former seems to be a hot button. Those in favor including myself believe it does and have expressed why. Misplaced Pages specifically states the parameters for having certain contextual info in leads. I believe this case fits that bill. I've yet to hear a convincing counterpoint other than her not being a Haitian citizen which is irrelevant to the original point in the first place. Everyone knows she represents Japan, literally no one is disputing that. Ghostreconnaissance (talk) 04:47, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
It is still an issue because of the widespread discussion on social media about the blatant racism on Misplaced Pages that has removed her Haitian heritage to make her appear Asian instead. She wins, and now she is no longer African American? Obviously editors here have little sensitivity to issues of culture and ethnicity. And the argument that that info belongs in another paragraph is no excuse. Google Osaka's own comments on this issue to educate yourselves! Judeberman (talk) 19:23, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Discussion aside, I must say I find the unfounded sockpuppet accusation absolutely hilarious. Thanks guys. Its good to know that users such as myself get scarlet lettered for showing interest in particular articles and attempting to engage in discourse. Ghostreconnaissance (talk) 05:40, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
I am referring to the accusation levied against me. Its completely unfounded. But I digress so that I don't derail this talkpage. We can discuss this accusation further on the "investigation" talkpage if you so wish. Ghostreconnaissance (talk) 07:55, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Observation - What may have to happen is after the die-down of the twitter/instagram falsehood fades away, since nothing serious can be done with that around our necks, we'll have to have a pow-wow on the best language to use in the lead. For years this article simply said Japanese tennis player, but in the last year it has flipped-flopped to many different incarnations. Right now we are having to remove Japanese-American, Haitian-Japanese, Haitian-American-Japanese, different orders, you name it. It's not like any of the changes are wrong, but everyone wants something different, and the sources don't help much because they are all different too. It's a royal headache. The lead is pretty generic and safe as it stands today but for all I know its final resting place could be a professional Haitian-Japanese-American tennis player who represents Japan, or it could stay as is and we let the personal section explain the details. I don't know, but I do know we can't do anything in the atmosphere created by the directed social media accounts. Luckily at[REDACTED] we can wait it out and then do our best to arrive at a good fit for the article. Fyunck(click) (talk) 20:35, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
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- "Naomi Osaka’s Breakthrough Game : The 20-year-old is poised to burst into the top tier of women’s tennis. Can she also burst Japan’s expectations of what it means to be Japanese?" https://nyti.ms/2BFe4eB -- with a lot of content on her early life. --178.132.29.134 (talk) 09:28, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
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Remove "Williams went on to congratulate Osaka while giving her a hug, and told the audience to stop booing because of their anger against the umpire and to focus on congratulating Naomi." as it is irrelevant to the preceding and succeeding sentences stating Naomi Osaka won the 2018 US Open. Butko0 (talk) 20:39, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- It is not irrelevant that is an important moment and shows sportsmanship between the women.Mcelite (talk) 21:24, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- DoneI actually think it is trivial and should be removed. This is not Serena Williams article. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:32, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Eventually it will be removed, as will the full thank you speech. Those are beyond trivial to this article. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:47, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- I'm willing to settle for mentioning that Serena congratulated her we can keep out the extra Serena hugged her and told the audience to stop booing. I believe that is relevant because it shows their sportsmanship and Naomi has looked up to Serena.Mcelite (talk) 22:06, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- But that always happens. When doesn't an opponent congratulate the winner? Fyunck(click) (talk) 23:59, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- I'm willing to settle for mentioning that Serena congratulated her we can keep out the extra Serena hugged her and told the audience to stop booing. I believe that is relevant because it shows their sportsmanship and Naomi has looked up to Serena.Mcelite (talk) 22:06, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
@Fyunck(click) and Mcelite: As of now, the last paragraph of § 2018: Indian Wells and US Open Champion reads, in full (emphasis added):
- She defeated her idol Serena Williams in straight sets to claim the trophy. During the award ceremony, as the crowd was booing, Osaka stated, "I know that everyone was cheering for her and I'm sorry it had to end like this. I just want to say thank you for watching the match. It was always my dream to play Serena in the US Open finals so I'm really glad I was able to do that. Thank you."
As far as I understand what happened, the booing, and the hooraw that prompted it, followed directly on the referee's action against Williams, her furious ranting at him, and his docking her one game, which cost her the match. Those details are seriously notable. If we're going to keep that quote, we must explain why the crowd was booing. Readers will be seriously confused: "Who were they booing? Why were they booing? Did they think Osaka had cheated or had not earned the win?" I'm reopening the request until this issue is addressed. --Thnidu (talk) 21:12, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Naomi Osaka is a Haitian-Japanese tennis player 2600:8806:1100:10A0:E5C0:BACB:2C63:2702 (talk) 20:51, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Someone is editing this section to specifically target Tennisexpertise (talk) by striking out his answers in a thoughtful and deliberate debate. I have restored his answers. Please stop attempting to destroy other points of view because you're too vested in your own narrowed one. You are being watched. shiznaw (talk) 00:26, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
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Naomi is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player. Aafc1228 (talk) 22:47, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
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Her Japanese family has been in the Japanese news with this win, so expansion can be done to add family details. -- 65.94.42.168 (talk) 23:19, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Using the fact that she's listed with the IPA as playing for Japan shouldn't negate her complicated Biography
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Tennisexpertise (talk) has given numerous examples and cited sources in which She refers to herself as a Hatian and living a significant part of her formative years in America. This has to be addressed in the 1st paragraph with objectivity, not with a biased view against having a complicated life history for the sake of simplicity. The world is becoming ever more complicated. We'll have to keep up in order to remain relevant.shiznaw (talk) 00:56, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Not sure what Fyunck is talking about, but it's clear to the rest of us that Naomi's ethnicity is Haitian and Japanese. Her formative years were spent in America while She was born in Japan, so her Nationality is Japanese and American. It's also clear to many here that her ethnicity is central to her story and a significant part as to why she's received as much fame as She has today, not solely because She's a ranked Tennis Player. We need to move forward and get consensus while leaving the others entrenched in their views behind. Agreed? shiznaw (talk) 00:38, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
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Haitian - Japanese — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:581:C002:D43:E591:70DC:8C8:BEDA (talk) 23:54, 10 September 2018 (UTC) Confirmed her dual citizenship and updated accordingly.Since it seems most of the controversy here surrounds descent v. citizenship, I updated the page with a mainstream media reference to her Haitian citizenship:
and a local media reference to the fact that she's the first Haitian citizen to win.
This should resolve the Haitian citizen v. descendant debate that's been raging on here. Eganist (talk) 00:16, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
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Considering her dual-heritage is more widely discussed than her dual-US/JP citizenship and equally as discussed in the press circuit as her playing specifically under the Japanese flag, it comes across to many as disparaging half of her heritage by omitting such a crucial fact from the initial summary, especially when considering she's been strongly on the record (https://www.ebony.com/news-views/naomi-osaka-haitian-australian-open) fact-checking journalists who neglect half of her heritage. If the player herself actively and vocally represents both sides of her ancestry (both Haitian and Japanese) when playing, then even if she's playing under the Japanese flag, it's clear she's representing multiple groups during competition play; this should be acknowledged as such. See preceding reference and also the video interview referenced therein. Eganist (talk) 03:36, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
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With few seeming to care to keep things in the same thread it's really really hard to find conversations anymore. It's utterly a mess. Either we have clones calling clones, or someone posted on the web to flood this page with nasty and repetitive comments and edit-requests. I wish something could be done about it. Sigh. Fyunck(click) (talk) 04:01, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- I'm quite a ways distinct from the other commentators, but I really think this particular comment seems to dismiss the primary concern. Why the preoccupation with whether something's a mess, be it the talk page or the article itself? As an example, I proposed a specific change which I think warrants some amount of discussion considering the sheer volume of public discussion about it (beyond just the talk page--I cited several external references to this end); can we get back to that and refine/revise/improve it if possible? Looking forward to working with you on this. Eganist (talk) 04:33, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- Why the preoccupation of whether the talk page and article is a mess? I can't believe I read that so no comment on that. The other point does not belong here. Fyunck(click) (talk) 04:36, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- Agreed, I'll stop dignifying the deflection. I'll focus on the section I opened above and any other related sections on the topic of accurately addressing the groups she represents during gameplay. Eganist (talk) 04:42, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- Why the preoccupation of whether the talk page and article is a mess? I can't believe I read that so no comment on that. The other point does not belong here. Fyunck(click) (talk) 04:36, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
I did find one of the culprits in the flood of one-time brand new posters. An Instagram post! berating[REDACTED] and all who edit here. Of course it's a lie if you look back at the page history, but an out-of-context post on Instagram will do that. I also see that the misinformation may have originated on twitter. Fyunck(click) (talk) 04:59, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- For the record, I'm here because I looked up Naomi Osaka after news reports of the US Open claiming she was just "Japanese" when she didn't look like she was only of Asian descent to me, and I felt rather irritated that the lead of this article (at the time) also just called her "Japanese" before clarifying that she's biracial with dual citizenship and it's clearly more complicated than that. I never saw any social media posts about this issue. My interest in this is as an Asian American who's tired of people with Asian ties being seen solely as Asians from Asia. Incidentally, I'm not terribly unhappy with the current language of "a player representing Japan/first player of that nation" although I think I'd prefer if the first sentence left it at "tennis player" and the second sentence said "first player representing Japan" as I think that's a less awkward way to make it clear it's indicating athletic affiliation. (PS: My edit history would be a bit longer but my ip changed recently when I got a new router.) 96.41.225.223 (talk) 13:21, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- Your concerns were already addressed before this player came up. Neither Michael Chang, nor Vania King are introduced as a Taiwanese tennis player and Apollo Anton Ohno is not introduced as a Japanese ice skater.Tvx1 21:44, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- When I arrived here, the lead was "Japanese". I don't want to crawl through the hundreds of edits to find the one that changed it, but this is what I saw. I believe Fyunck changed the first two sentences so that she is not referred to as a "Japanese professional tennis player" and I'm happy about that. Similar language still persists on her sister's page, but lest the drama spread to that page, I figured I should leave it be for now. 96.41.225.223 (talk) 01:58, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Also, I don't think the three American examples are equatable to this case. First, "Japanese" is an ethnic descriptor as well as a denonym in a way that's far more direct than the equation of "American" with either whiteness or First Nations affiliation. (This is true both linguistically and culturally: prominent mainstream Japanese politicians will openly oppose immigration saying that the Japanese identity is both cultural and racial. In fact, there's a link somewhere on this talk page discussing how Naomi's challenging these notions in Japan.) Second, in Naomi Osaka's case, a variety of other factors make "Japanese" intended as a sports affiliation a misleading statement likely to be misread as Japanese (ethnically+nationally), from her utterly Japanese name to the relative absence of indications to the contrary in the first-glance impression of this article. Anyway, as I said, the current language is much better, but I wanted to argue against what I saw as a false equation.
- Your concerns were already addressed before this player came up. Neither Michael Chang, nor Vania King are introduced as a Taiwanese tennis player and Apollo Anton Ohno is not introduced as a Japanese ice skater.Tvx1 21:44, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
96.41.225.223 (talk) 02:27, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- How could Japanese be misread here in any way? She represents the Japanese national teams in this sport, she does have Japanese ethnicity and she has had Japanese nationality for all her life. Japanese is correct in this case no matter what definition one goes by.Tvx1 07:09, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Because, as I said in my original complaint, it's incomplete. Japanese is only half of the story in everything but athletic representation: she's ethnically half Haitian and she holds dual US citizenship. To anyone who doesn't read "Japanese" as an athletic affiliation (which is probably a substantial proportion of readers, including myself, as I wasn't aware athletic affiliation existed until this talk page) it looks like a claim that she is one thing and, by omission, not anything else (or you would've mentioned that, right?). And now the lead is "Japanese" twice over thanks to GiantSnowman. Ugh. I only take comfort in knowing that this is almost certainly not the final iteration of the lead. 96.41.225.223 (talk) 14:05, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- How could Japanese be misread here in any way? She represents the Japanese national teams in this sport, she does have Japanese ethnicity and she has had Japanese nationality for all her life. Japanese is correct in this case no matter what definition one goes by.Tvx1 07:09, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
I archived a bunch of these pointless edit requests. Hope that helps the navigability of this page.Tvx1 23:58, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
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Semi-protected edit request on 11 September 2018
indicate that Naomi is Haitian-Japanese, as was previously the case. Charlietian19 (talk) 08:41, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 11 September 2018
Her identity as a "Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player" was included before she won the U.S. open and should still be included. Just modify the first sentence to read "Naomi Osaka is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player representing Japan." 141.216.60.190 (talk) 12:18, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 11 September 2018
Naomi Osaka is a Haitian-Japanese Professional Tennis player. 131.239.18.4 (talk) 13:40, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Naomi OsakaBefore Naomi Osaka won NY Grand Slam, Misplaced Pages has described her as a “Haitian-Japanese tennis player”. Two days later it was changed to “a professional tennis player representing Japan”. Why this sudden change? As a Haitian-American journalist, it has been my experience that anytime Haiti is projected through the lenses of posotiveness, someone -by omission it bu commission- decides to erase it or transform it to “something” else. Worse, Misplaced Pages has blocked her page from any edit. I’m reiterating my question -rhetoric or not-: why the change? Jean Jean-Pierre Jjeanpierre1 (talk) 14:33, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 11 September 2018
She is Haitian and Japanese. She is Japanese, Haitian, American. in that order. Because, she was born in Japan. Her Father is Black (Haitian) she now resides in America. Before she won the championship this is what you said. Now she is just Japanese after her winning. Misplaced Pages is full of it. Please don't deny her African/Haitian Heritage. This is very racist. Thank you. Reebee77 (talk) 14:35, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 11 September 2018
Please change "Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997) is a professional tennis player who represents Japan. She is the first player of that nation to win a Grand Slam singles tournament, defeating Serena Williams in the final of the 2018 US Open." to "Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997) is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player who represents Japan. She is the first player of that nation to win a Grand Slam singles tournament, defeating Serena Williams in the final of the 2018 US Open." Reason: Before she won the Grand Slam singles tournament, this opening sentence stated that she is Haitian-Japanese. After she won, this was changed. There is no good reason for this change, and it is more informative to leave it as it was. Ydryer (talk) 15:53, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Why do editors keep deleting Osaka's Haitian heritage from the article's introduction?I'm very disappointed to see repeated attempts to erase Osaka's Haitian identity from the introduction. Osaka was born to a Haitian father and Japanese mother. She only spent a few years in Japan and was raised in Broward County in Florida, a location known for being predominantly influenced by Haitian culture. I do not want to impute any nefarious motives to those who keep erasing this notable fact. Please desist and let the facts stand. See this Washington Post article for details - https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/morning-mix/wp/2018/09/10/japanese-haitian-and-now-a-grand-slam-winner-naomi-osakas-historic-journey-to-the-u-s-open/?utm_term=.3e2eb3b0a498. Kunkuru (talk) 16:20, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
LedeShe represents Japan, she holds Japanese nationality - for the purposes of the lede (and taking into account WP:OPENPARA) she is Japanese. The Haitian/American elements of her heritage/upbringing are not relevant in the lede. That should be covered in a 'Personal life' paragraph. GiantSnowman 16:34, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 11 September 2018
Please change Naomi Osaka is a professional Tennis player representing Japan to Naomi Osaka is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player because you are completely erasing the Black part of who she is and spreading false information. 2600:6C65:767F:CC11:D9B6:8540:AC7B:B19 (talk) 19:12, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 11 September 2018
Specify her background, as it was originally mentioned on her page: Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997) is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player, who represents Japan internationally. 5.51.91.124 (talk) 22:09, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 12 September 2018
Change this: Naomi Osaka: WTA Tennis is a Japanese professional tennis player. to this: Naomi Osaka: WTA Tennis is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player. 67.80.165.115 (talk) 03:52, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 12 September 2018
Change "Naomi Osaka is a Japanese professional tennis player" to "Naomi Osaka is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player." Supersoldierskywalker (talk) 04:43, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
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For your attention
Any further editprotected requests asking to add "Haitian-Japanese" to the lead of the article may and will be rolled back on sight as disruptive. @Fyunck(click): - hopefully this will help Fish+Karate 09:49, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- I've hatted all the repetitive requests to make the talk page less manic. Fish+Karate 10:07, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Standard wording is 'Japanese tennis player' not 'tennis player who represents Japan' or similar. GiantSnowman 12:16, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Please read the discussion under "This talk page is non-navigable now" for issues with the word "Japanese". 96.41.225.223 (talk) 14:07, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Standard wording is 'Japanese tennis player' not 'tennis player who represents Japan' or similar. GiantSnowman 12:16, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- User:Fish and karate, I would like to request that we stick something like "of Haitian-Japanese descent" in the lead. Are you going to roll me back now? ;) Joe Decker, Bus stop, it seems to me that y'all agreed that there was plenty of sourcing to warrant this. GiantSnowman, I don't know what the guidelines say (and I don't care much, really) but I agree with you. That tennis players would "represent" something is sporadically and temporarily; ethnicity and whatnot is ongoing. That Osaka is Haitian-Japanese-American is of huge importance apparently to many people and it's recognized in all kinds of articles in the news; what the tennis guidelines have to say about that is of little interest to me, and they certainly shouldn't dictate uniformly what is important for whom. Drmies (talk) 01:21, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Tennis Project Guidelines, as far as I know, say nothing about such things. I think GiantSnowman was simply saying what is normally done. I think actually the tennis articles have all kinds of different things done with nationality. Hers is just a complex one since sources give us Japanese-American, Japanese, Haitian-Japanese, and Haitian-Japanese-American. It's tough to know what is best. Fyunck(click) (talk) 04:56, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Despite not having Haitian citizenship or nationality wouldn't she be of Haitian ethnicity or of Haitian extraction? The majority of Haitians are black and the father of Naomi Osaka is no exception. By way of contrast most Japanese are not black and not even most citizens of the United States are black. Naomi Osaka shares identities with various groups of people. I think an argument can be made for mentioning each of these groups even in the lede of the article. I think a fairly compact sentence can allude to identities based on citizenship as well as ethnicity. Many sources address the several identities embodied in Naomi Osaka. Bus stop (talk) 02:57, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- This has been discussed extensively above. Each one of these points has been literally already addressed. Vivexdino (talk) 07:23, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Yes, and basically shut down with not much of an argument that I can find. Literally. Drmies (talk) 15:02, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
Infobox photo racist?
Before raising this sensitive matter, I un-hid the many closed discussions on this page, and searched for "photo" and "image"—neither of which found any previous mention. I therefore presume it's OK to open this new section.
Since Naomi Osaka's Sept. 8 victory in the women's final of the U.S. Open, average daily views of her Misplaced Pages page have dramatically increased, peaking the next day at 872,064. Concurrently, online criticism has emerged as to Misplaced Pages's treatment of her race, some of it focusing on our Infobox image. I wish to address the latter specific issue only.
The objections are typified by blogger Douglas V. Gibbs's Sept. 12 post, "Why was Misplaced Pages Racist Towards Naomi Osaka?" I do not submit this as a prospective reference in our article, given that it is not WP:RS, but solely to encapsulate the argument. Gibbs offers a screencap reproducing Misplaced Pages's lead and Infobox image Before Winning and After Winning, respectively. He adds captions noting, correctly I believe, that our image before winning "shows her as darker skinned" and after winning, "Suddenly, she's lighter skinned."
Even before reading Gibbs's blog, I became concerned enough by similar criticism that I changed the image back to the more recent photo from 2017 that, as stated in my edit summary, "better represents her present appearance than does one from 2015." Twenty-five minutes later, my edit was reverted, with the explanation that "Recent is not always better, previous photo was more clear and high quality. We also have some from 2018."
I invite discussion by other editors, with the goal of forming consensus as to which of the 42 images in our Wikimedia Commons repository would best represent Ms. Osaka and, at the same time, neutralize accusations of racism. KalHolmann (talk) 20:18, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Goodness I hate political correctness and the term racist thrown around so casually these days. That aside there is no question that your photo was inferior in quality and lighting (as is), not that what is there now is the best. What is generally wanted in the infobox is a shoulder and head shot looking slightly to the left from our perspective. Then a few pics throughout the article showing her backhand, forehand, serve, and volley. Remember also that the viewership will die down to normal in a few months, especially after the inflammatory social media posts wane. I will endeavor to fix your suggestion so it would be appropriate for the article and see how it turns out. Fyunck(click) (talk) 20:32, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- @KalHolmann: I made it more infobox friendly. Thoughts? Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:03, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Fyunck(click): Why is it that when I politely ask for discussion to form consensus, you jump in, make a snarky comment about political correctness and the term racist being thrown around casually, and assume command? I realize you're the top editor of this article with 20.3% of the total. But please give other editors a chance to weigh in before single-handedly taking charge as usual. This page is not your personal fiefdom. KalHolmann (talk) 21:09, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- You realize I wasn't speaking of you, I was speaking of bloggers and their opinions. Sorry if that wasn't clear. You bringing it up here is fine, and it's why I took it to heart to try and fix your suggestion (which I did). No comment on that or is only my taking charge and trying to help an issue? That's cool I'm 20% of the total. I wonder how they figure that out? Considering how many times I had to correct her charts to tennis project guidelines and remove improper posts it's not surprising, but when I scroll through the actual edits made by everyone my total looks tiny. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:22, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- I honestly think this current photo is the best photo of her for the info box that we have access to. We need to make sure we can always use the best picture of her whether she has a tan or not. People are too sensitive and always jump to conclusions and I'm a minority saying this.Mcelite (talk) 21:27, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- I agree with the above. Thanks for bringing this up KalHolmann. We have photos also from 2018 that could be cropped. The current photo looks okay though. Claiming photos are racist is indeed pretty desperate however. Vivexdino (talk) 21:46, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Before uploading this pic I looked through wikimedia commons and public domain flickr and didn't really see any good head-shot pics I could use. I thought there might be a lot more but they were all protected photos we couldn't use. That's why I circled back to KalHolmann's original photo suggestion and thought maybe it could work fine if it was cropped and not so dark. I do some photo editing part-time so I took it on myself to download the original and fix it as best I could in a short time. Of course that will add to my 20.3% of edits but I took a chance that no one would hold that against me. :-) Fyunck(click) (talk) 22:11, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Fair enough. Makes sense. Vivexdino (talk) 22:32, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Before uploading this pic I looked through wikimedia commons and public domain flickr and didn't really see any good head-shot pics I could use. I thought there might be a lot more but they were all protected photos we couldn't use. That's why I circled back to KalHolmann's original photo suggestion and thought maybe it could work fine if it was cropped and not so dark. I do some photo editing part-time so I took it on myself to download the original and fix it as best I could in a short time. Of course that will add to my 20.3% of edits but I took a chance that no one would hold that against me. :-) Fyunck(click) (talk) 22:11, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- I agree with the above. Thanks for bringing this up KalHolmann. We have photos also from 2018 that could be cropped. The current photo looks okay though. Claiming photos are racist is indeed pretty desperate however. Vivexdino (talk) 21:46, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- I honestly think this current photo is the best photo of her for the info box that we have access to. We need to make sure we can always use the best picture of her whether she has a tan or not. People are too sensitive and always jump to conclusions and I'm a minority saying this.Mcelite (talk) 21:27, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- You realize I wasn't speaking of you, I was speaking of bloggers and their opinions. Sorry if that wasn't clear. You bringing it up here is fine, and it's why I took it to heart to try and fix your suggestion (which I did). No comment on that or is only my taking charge and trying to help an issue? That's cool I'm 20% of the total. I wonder how they figure that out? Considering how many times I had to correct her charts to tennis project guidelines and remove improper posts it's not surprising, but when I scroll through the actual edits made by everyone my total looks tiny. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:22, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Fyunck(click): Why is it that when I politely ask for discussion to form consensus, you jump in, make a snarky comment about political correctness and the term racist being thrown around casually, and assume command? I realize you're the top editor of this article with 20.3% of the total. But please give other editors a chance to weigh in before single-handedly taking charge as usual. This page is not your personal fiefdom. KalHolmann (talk) 21:09, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- @KalHolmann: I made it more infobox friendly. Thoughts? Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:03, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Fyunck(click): Please help me understand. Why is it that the cropped image you uploaded today to Wikimedia Commons and inserted into the Infobox is so much lighter than its source file? KalHolmann (talk) 21:59, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Why? Because that's one of the items I corrected and I mentioned that in the photo file. It was a very dark picture and often we have to tweak things to make them more visible to readers. This must be done with many photos no matter what subject we are dealing with. The fact the lighting was poor in the original was one of the reasons it was not a good pic for the infobox. The cropping issue was the other. Fyunck(click) (talk) 22:11, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- It reminds me of the O.J. Simpson mugshot that Time magazine famously altered to score a racist point. Of course, they darkened, rather than lightened, the image. So there's that. KalHolmann (talk) 22:52, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Look, if you don't like it then remove it. I did my best to make it look like it was taken in sunshine rather than a basement with a flickering candle; to bring out details that were hidden in shadow. I don't do things to score points nor do I like any insinuation that it was done for that purpose. I do everything here to best serve our readers. You may have an agenda but I don't. I don't boast that I'm in the top 10 edits in anything on[REDACTED] like you do, because I don't care. That's not why I'm here. I think we're about done here. Fyunck(click) (talk) 23:05, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- "If you don't like it, then remove it." that might not be a bad idea; there's no value to editing a professional shot, and I'm sure we can find plenty of other appropriately licensed shots. Eganist (talk) 23:52, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Then go for it Eganist. Dig 'em up and put 'em up. Professional shots get edited all the time as they have since the time of the dark room and how long you leave the pic in the solution. Usually we don't get "professional" photos here since they are under copyright. We get someone with a telephoto lens that didn't open up the aperture wide enough. We had someone complain about the photo that was in the infobox so I did my best to find and make something better that fit the parameters of what works best for our many tennis player articles. Fyunck(click) (talk) 00:19, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- "If you don't like it, then remove it." that might not be a bad idea; there's no value to editing a professional shot, and I'm sure we can find plenty of other appropriately licensed shots. Eganist (talk) 23:52, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- KalHolmann, are you seriously trying to suggest something about Fyunck(click)'s motives? As if the picture to the right makes her look more like a white person? This is just laughable now. Taking sensitivity to the extreme. Vivexdino (talk) 23:17, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- KalHomann are you serious...Mcelite (talk) 23:22, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Look, if you don't like it then remove it. I did my best to make it look like it was taken in sunshine rather than a basement with a flickering candle; to bring out details that were hidden in shadow. I don't do things to score points nor do I like any insinuation that it was done for that purpose. I do everything here to best serve our readers. You may have an agenda but I don't. I don't boast that I'm in the top 10 edits in anything on[REDACTED] like you do, because I don't care. That's not why I'm here. I think we're about done here. Fyunck(click) (talk) 23:05, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- It reminds me of the O.J. Simpson mugshot that Time magazine famously altered to score a racist point. Of course, they darkened, rather than lightened, the image. So there's that. KalHolmann (talk) 22:52, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Why? Because that's one of the items I corrected and I mentioned that in the photo file. It was a very dark picture and often we have to tweak things to make them more visible to readers. This must be done with many photos no matter what subject we are dealing with. The fact the lighting was poor in the original was one of the reasons it was not a good pic for the infobox. The cropping issue was the other. Fyunck(click) (talk) 22:11, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
- Google image search finds 99 matches for the photo on the left, posted on an equal number of websites internationally. Some of the pictures, for whatever technical reason, are distorted horizontally. Yet not one has been brightened. Only Misplaced Pages finds it necessary to visually deemphasize the reality of Naomi Osaka as a woman of color. KalHolmann (talk) 00:00, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- A few thoughts. a. there is no "Misplaced Pages"--there's various editors. b. it is probably worthwhile to get an expert (or two) on photos and lighting and whatnot, to figure out what is edited and what isn't. c. that blog is lousy, just lousy--just a dude making a comment without much explanation. d. let's not throw around the term "political correctness", which is just a cudgel. e. it is very worth while figuring out what is happening with the photos, and the OJ comparison is valid. Drmies (talk) 00:26, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- KalHomann the lighting isn't a huge difference at all. She still has her tan brown skin obviously showing that she is of mixed heritage. The image is in very good condition and I could care less if it was when she had her tan or when she didn't. Even if a better photo was used that showed her with lighter skin because it was taken during her off season I feel you would complain and say that the picture was picked because of her complexion and not the quality of the photo.Mcelite (talk) 01:25, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Mcelite, obviously people disagree on whether it's a huge difference. And please AGF: "I feel that..." violates AGF, and it really doesn't mean anything. Drmies (talk) 01:27, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Mcelite: I'm not complaining about the picture. I'm complaining about Misplaced Pages doctoring the image to suit a particular point of view. KalHolmann (talk) 01:31, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Okay KalHolmann I don't think it was doctored to suit a particular point of view. Honestly in my opinion it looks more defined with more light, but if it's that huge of a issue then maybe the original should be used if possible at all. The background was also lightened. I don't think this was done out of racism but to provide more detail and I think some are being very over sensitive about it.Mcelite (talk) 01:41, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- KalHolmann, you just said "Only Misplaced Pages finds it necessary to visually deemphasize the reality of Naomi Osaka as a woman of color." I think I just lost a few brain cells reading that. I'm officially done. Vivexdino (talk) 01:44, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Vivexdino I'm sorry for your loss, and we'll just have to do without you then. Drmies (talk) 15:03, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- KalHomann the lighting isn't a huge difference at all. She still has her tan brown skin obviously showing that she is of mixed heritage. The image is in very good condition and I could care less if it was when she had her tan or when she didn't. Even if a better photo was used that showed her with lighter skin because it was taken during her off season I feel you would complain and say that the picture was picked because of her complexion and not the quality of the photo.Mcelite (talk) 01:25, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Use original photo, the version that's uncropped and unretouched. It offers better composition; the arms/hands are not cut out; and it does not look washed out / manipulated. --K.e.coffman (talk) 02:56, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
Update her ethnicity
She is half Japanese and half Haitian with an American passport. Please update accordingly. Nfaustin (talk) 02:11, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- This has already been discussed see "Representing Haiti Section" Her ethnicity is mentioned in her article.Mcelite (talk) 03:31, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
RFC about nationality / ethnicity in the lead
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Should the lead describe her as an American and/or a Haitian tennis player, or only as a Japanese tennis player? Iffy★Chat -- 17:36, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
Options to choose from (full wording details can be discussed separately):
- Japanese only
- Japanese and American
- Japanese and Haitian
- Japanese, American and Haitian
- Support 1 as this is how the vast majority of RS describe her, and it's the only country she's represented as a tennis player. Iffy★Chat -- 18:02, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Support 1 Infobox links to official website, where her profile states simply: "Nationality – Japanese." KalHolmann (talk) 18:11, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- We use citizenship to determine this on Misplaced Pages, not nationality. See my comment below. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 19:00, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @R9tgokunks: I searched both Misplaced Pages:Manual_of_Style/Lead_section and Misplaced Pages:Biographies_of_living_persons and found no mention of what you claim. Please point me to the relevant policy or guideline upon which you base your assertion, repeated to the point of clutter on this thread. KalHolmann (talk) 19:12, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- {@KalHolmann: - while she was born in Japan, she was raised in America and currently lives there, and also doesn't speak Japanese fluently. it would be disingenuous to say she's only Japanese. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 19:19, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @R9tgokunks: I searched both Misplaced Pages:Manual_of_Style/Lead_section and Misplaced Pages:Biographies_of_living_persons and found no mention of what you claim. Please point me to the relevant policy or guideline upon which you base your assertion, repeated to the point of clutter on this thread. KalHolmann (talk) 19:12, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- We use citizenship to determine this on Misplaced Pages, not nationality. See my comment below. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 19:00, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @R9tgokunks: Since you replied without answering my question, let me repeat it: Please point me to the relevant policy or guideline upon which you base your assertion. KalHolmann (talk) 19:44, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Basic encyclopedia editing. It's not encyclopedic to not include that she isn't also American alongside being Japanese. We aren't beholden to follow the definitions of tennis agencies when we have our own way of editing encyclopedically. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 19:47, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @R9tgokunks: "Basic encyclopedia editing" is an evasion. I asked for a Misplaced Pages policy or guideline. Evidently you cannot (or perhaps will not) provide one. KalHolmann (talk) 19:53, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- There is no evasion. It is a grave mistake to merely include that she is just Japanese. Factually, this is simply false. She was raised and lives in America with American citizenship, and, for what it's worth, doesn't speak Japanese fluently. If I was Ugandan and I registered with the Korean tennis association but wasn't raised there or lived there, and didn't even speak the language fully, it would be misleading to say in a lede that I was merely Korean - R9tgokunks ⭕ 19:55, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @R9tgokunks: Why do I get the feeling that you're making up these editing rules as you go along? KalHolmann (talk) 19:59, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Possibly because you can't comprehend what I have been saying... I don't know. Maybe I haven't been clear. I've stated that same reasoning a few times now, I'm not sure you've been paying attention... Also, I have been editing here for almost 13 years and It seems you've only been here for about a year. I've been here long enough to know that omitting information is just a mistake and invites trouble for years to come from persons with motives while editing, which is common. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 20:05, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @R9tgokunks: Why do I get the feeling that you're making up these editing rules as you go along? KalHolmann (talk) 19:59, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- There is no evasion. It is a grave mistake to merely include that she is just Japanese. Factually, this is simply false. She was raised and lives in America with American citizenship, and, for what it's worth, doesn't speak Japanese fluently. If I was Ugandan and I registered with the Korean tennis association but wasn't raised there or lived there, and didn't even speak the language fully, it would be misleading to say in a lede that I was merely Korean - R9tgokunks ⭕ 19:55, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @R9tgokunks: "Basic encyclopedia editing" is an evasion. I asked for a Misplaced Pages policy or guideline. Evidently you cannot (or perhaps will not) provide one. KalHolmann (talk) 19:53, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Basic encyclopedia editing. It's not encyclopedic to not include that she isn't also American alongside being Japanese. We aren't beholden to follow the definitions of tennis agencies when we have our own way of editing encyclopedically. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 19:47, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @R9tgokunks: Since you replied without answering my question, let me repeat it: Please point me to the relevant policy or guideline upon which you base your assertion. KalHolmann (talk) 19:44, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Support 1 - Though this should have waited until there was more distance from the social media canvassing. Fyunck(click) (talk) 18:30, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- We use citizenship to determine this on Misplaced Pages, not nationality. See my comment below. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 19:00, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- No we do not. That is not some Misplaced Pages policy. There is also no reason the continually add this comment to every post that you disagree with. That could be seen as disruptive. Fyunck(click) (talk) 19:59, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- We use citizenship to determine this on Misplaced Pages, not nationality. See my comment below. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 19:00, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Support 1 - Saying she is a "Japanese tennis player" primarily refers to the fact that she is registered with the Japan Tennis Association, not her nationality or citizenship. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 19:17, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- For what it's worth, I agree that it should be mentioned in the lead that she is Japanese and American, but I don't think it is accurate to literally say "she is a Japanese and American professional tennis player." That would imply she represents the United States in addition to implying she has citizenship, which is not true. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 02:01, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
- 2. Japanese and American - if it wasn't clear enough. I feel that excluding her American citizenship is a grave error. She was raised and lives in the U.S. and has dual Japanese and US citizenship.- R9tgokunks ⭕ 20:21, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Support 2, she has dual citizenship (Japanese and American). She was born in Japan but has lived in US since she was 3., Haitian is obviously significant as well but it doesn't appear she's lived there and she apparently does not have Haitian citizenship, so I think Haitian makes more sense in the early life section explaining her father is from Haiti, while Japanese and American makes sense in the lead.DynaGirl (talk) 20:40, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Support 2. The lead should mention her dual citizenship, and that as a professional tennis player, she most frequently (only?) represents Japan in these competitions. Take the case that once she retires, she will still be an American-Japanese dual citizen, but she will no longer be a Japanese tennis player. --Masem (t) 20:48, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- "Only". When she retires she would probably be like other players... is a retired Japanese professional tennis player. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:15, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- In nearly all standard readings, the phrase "Japanese professional tennis player" means "a profession tennis player with Japanese nationality" which is not true. She has American and Japanese nationality. That's why saying she represents Japan but has American-Japanese nationality needs to be clearly defined in the lede. --Masem (t) 23:11, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- "Only". When she retires she would probably be like other players... is a retired Japanese professional tennis player. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:15, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Support 2. The lede summarises the article and as she has dual citizenship having been born in America it is relevant to be there. Saying 'Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997) is an American born, Japanese professional tennis player' would be appropriate.Blethering Scot 21:59, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- No that would not be appropriate in any way since she was born in Japan with Japanese nationality.Tvx1 22:13, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Scot, while I agree 2 seems to make the most sense, I think you'd need a different way to phrase this because she was apparently born in Japan. She has US citizenship and has lived in US since age 3. Maybe something like. "...is a Japanese and American tennis player who plays professionally for Japan." DynaGirl (talk) 22:15, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Per the governing bodies of tennis, she is not an American tennis player. She is a Japanese tennis player. She was born in Japan and plays tennis for Japan and also has citizenship in the USA. It can certainly be worded differently to get around that and add American or United States in the lead somewhere. Fyunck(click) (talk) 00:10, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Blethering Scot:, see above. She is Japan-born. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 22:38, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Support 2 She was born in Japan and raised in the U.S. holding dual citizenship and she currently lives in Florida while representing Japan.Mcelite (talk) 23:09, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Support 2: "Japanese-American" reflects best who she is, a dual citizen of Japan and the US who has lived in the US most of her life while representing her native country internationally in a sport. Arbor to SJ (talk) 00:17, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
- Compromise approach: Open the 1st para as currently in the article: "Naomi Osaka is a Japanese professional tennis player. She first came to prominence ..." etc. Then add this sentence to the lead, perhaps at the end:
- "Osaka has lived in the United States since age three; she is of Japanese-Haitian descent and is a dual US-Japanese citizen."
- There's a section dedicated to Osaka's personal background, so it's appropriate to include a sentence to this effect in the lead. K.e.coffman (talk) 02:54, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
Discussion
Comment on validity of RFC
Naomi Osaka has dual American and Japanese citizenship. For the record, Naomi has no Haitian citizenship, which immediately disqualifies option 3 and 4. Also, for what it's worth, while she was born in Japan, she was raised in America and does not speak fluent Japanese, and she currently lives in America. This RFC goes against the common method of dealing with dual American citizenship on Misplaced Pages. Normally if someone has dual citizenship in one country and the US, that is mentioned straightaway in the lede. Omitting her American citizenship from the lede is tantamount to censorship.
For more examples of how dual citizenship is treated on Misplaced Pages see:
- Natalie Portman - "Israeli and American"
- Saoirse Ronan - "Irish and American"
- Charlize Theron - "South African and American"
- Salma Hayek - "Mexican and American"
In sporting world articles, one can represent another country without having that citizenship as well, or something similar to Osaka. This is a common example, for instance, in FIFA.
Examples:
- Roman Neustädter, Russian , but played for Germany multiple times, but never was considered German, as he had no German citizenship.
- Mário Fernandes, "Brazillian-Russian", born in Brazil, now represents Russia, has dual citizenship but does not speak Russian.
- R9tgokunks ⭕ 18:53, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Footballers are less associated with their national team than in tennis. (e.g. Football is not a sport where "national flags are commonly used as representations of sporting nationality in a given sport.") Sportsfan77777 (talk) 19:24, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- Per KalHolmann, which Misplaced Pages policy or guideline are you citing? Sportsfan77777 (talk) 20:02, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- I think this particular case is a little more complicated. You do have a point since when actress Emily Blunt gained USA citizenship her lead was changed to British-American actress. However in tennis she is registered as Japanese and you can only represent one country in any international event. She may be a Japanese-American individual walking down the street, but she is a professional Japanese tennis player. Milos Raonic was born somewhere else but is a Canadian tennis player. If you would also like somewhere in the lead paragraph for it to state she has United States and Japanese citizenship, that's reasonable though it's already in the section below. What seems strange would be Haitian-Japanese (although it's easily sourced). That would be like[REDACTED] saying Serena Williams is an African-American tennis player. That would sound weird... she is an American tennis player. Fyunck(click) (talk) 19:26, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
I submit that editors who misspell the word validity as "validitiy" in a subsection heading ought to be open to correction from another editor trying to be helpful, rather than reverting it and threatening to take it to ANI. KalHolmann (talk) 19:49, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Fyunck(click): - yeah, but we aren't beholden to the definitions of the sporting world. We operate encyclopedically, including all information. For instance, If I was Ugandan and I registered with the Korean tennis association but wasn't raised there or lived there, and didn't even speak the language fully, it would be misleading to say in a lede that I was merely Korean. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 19:51, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- It might be misleading to say you are Korean but if you had never played tennis in Uganda, and the ITF allowed you to play for Korea, you would be a Korean professional tennis player. You would also have Ugandan citizenship, but you would be a Korean tennis player. You could always word it as a professional tennis player representing Korea. Fyunck(click) (talk) 19:56, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- That would still omit the Ugandan citizenship from the lede. it's just not factually sound. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 20:00, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- It is factually sound if it is somewhere else in the article. Some people might have 3 or 4 citizenships. We aren't required to list them all in the lead. Fyunck(click) (talk) 20:03, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Fyunck(click):...Not sure what you're talking about? She only has 2 instances of citizenship... not "3 or 4". It's a simple fix as shown on other articles that I presented. And she only has dual citizenship. It would only be a problem if she had more than 2. Saying Japanese and American covers it. It's not that messy or complicated. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 20:07, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- How would you word it? She is a Japanese tennis player with United States and Japanese citizenship? We don't do that with everyone, such as Angelina Jolie. We don't list her as a Cambodian actress just because she has two citizenships. Nor do we do the same with Kirsten Dunst who has German citizenship. We take it case by case. Fyunck(click) (talk) 20:13, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
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- "Japanese and American."
- - R9tgokunks ⭕ 20:24, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- That's not even close to covering it. No context at all. Fyunck(click) (talk) 20:45, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- The lede isn't for context. It summarises the article. see WP:LEDE. As you know many other articles on living persons use the same format I just used. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 20:49, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- And many don't. I simply asked how you would word it and what you gave was useless. "Japanese and American"... that's the entire lead.... nothing else? How do you work that in the sentence to be factual? She is not an American professional tennis player. She is a Japanese professional tennis player with United States and Japanese citizenship. How would you word it? Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:01, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- I believe that mentioned both her U.S. and Japanese citizen is the correct way of going through this.Mcelite (talk) 22:01, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- And many don't. I simply asked how you would word it and what you gave was useless. "Japanese and American"... that's the entire lead.... nothing else? How do you work that in the sentence to be factual? She is not an American professional tennis player. She is a Japanese professional tennis player with United States and Japanese citizenship. How would you word it? Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:01, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- The lede isn't for context. It summarises the article. see WP:LEDE. As you know many other articles on living persons use the same format I just used. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 20:49, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- That's not even close to covering it. No context at all. Fyunck(click) (talk) 20:45, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- How would you word it? She is a Japanese tennis player with United States and Japanese citizenship? We don't do that with everyone, such as Angelina Jolie. We don't list her as a Cambodian actress just because she has two citizenships. Nor do we do the same with Kirsten Dunst who has German citizenship. We take it case by case. Fyunck(click) (talk) 20:13, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Fyunck(click):...Not sure what you're talking about? She only has 2 instances of citizenship... not "3 or 4". It's a simple fix as shown on other articles that I presented. And she only has dual citizenship. It would only be a problem if she had more than 2. Saying Japanese and American covers it. It's not that messy or complicated. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 20:07, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- It is factually sound if it is somewhere else in the article. Some people might have 3 or 4 citizenships. We aren't required to list them all in the lead. Fyunck(click) (talk) 20:03, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- That would still omit the Ugandan citizenship from the lede. it's just not factually sound. - R9tgokunks ⭕ 20:00, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
- It might be misleading to say you are Korean but if you had never played tennis in Uganda, and the ITF allowed you to play for Korea, you would be a Korean professional tennis player. You would also have Ugandan citizenship, but you would be a Korean tennis player. You could always word it as a professional tennis player representing Korea. Fyunck(click) (talk) 19:56, 13 September 2018 (UTC)
Alternate solution
Comment: I don't think the issue is with the first sentence. The issue is with the lead as a whole.
The first sentence should say "Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997) is a Japanese professional tennis player." That paragraph should also mention she her career-high ranking and that she won the US Open.
Then, there should be a second paragraph that goes into her background, along the lines of "Born in Japan to a Haitian father and a Japanese mother, Osaka moved to the United States when she was three years old. She has dual Japanese and American citizenship. Osaka began playing tennis in the United States at the age of ??. She began playing on the ITF Women's Circuit at the age of 16."
Then, there should be a third paragraph that goes into more detail in summarizing the highlights of her professional career as a whole (compared to the first paragraph). Sportsfan77777 (talk) 00:06, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
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