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| **'''comment''' - it would be helpful if you focus on what you can contribute rather than what you can't. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 19:34, 18 August 2007 (UTC) | **'''comment''' - it would be helpful if you focus on what you can contribute rather than what you can't. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 19:34, 18 August 2007 (UTC) | ||
| ***Wow, Jaakobou, you said it. It would be nice if I could focus on positive contributions. Unfortunately, I can't make them — or rather, I can make them but I will be reverted on shabby pretexts within hours. And on the talk page, I can't make positive contributions because they keep getting bogged down with spurious disputes which do not exist in the source material. I'll say it one more time: '''No sources have been found, nor by all evidence do any reliable sources exist''', which accuse the Palestinian side in the Battle of Jenin of committing war crimes. ] 21:38, 18 August 2007 (UTC) | ***Wow, Jaakobou, you said it. It would be nice if I could focus on positive contributions. Unfortunately, I can't make them — or rather, I can make them but I will be reverted on shabby pretexts within hours. And on the talk page, I can't make positive contributions because they keep getting bogged down with spurious disputes which do not exist in the source material. I'll say it one more time: '''No sources have been found, nor by all evidence do any reliable sources exist''', which accuse the Palestinian side in the Battle of Jenin of committing war crimes. ] 21:38, 18 August 2007 (UTC) | ||
| == POV changes to Amnesty International report == | |||
| The citation for the Amnesty International report at http://web.amnesty.org/library/Index/ENGMDE151432002?open&of=ENG-PSE has been changed from the correct title: | |||
| "Israel and the Occupied Territories Shielded from scrutiny: IDF violations in Jenin and Nablus" | |||
| to the more innocuous: | |||
| "Amnesty International report on Jenin & Nablus" | |||
| The correct list of AI's conclusions was altered by removing or changing the following: | |||
| * Unlawful killings (removed entirely) | |||
| * Failure to ensure medical or humanitarian relief (changed to 'inconsistent access to external relief and medical agencies') | |||
| * Demolition of houses and property (removed entirely) | |||
| * Cutting water and electricity supplies (changed to 'damage to electric and water grids') | |||
| * Torture or other cruel, inhuman or degrading treatment in arbitrary detention (removed entirely) | |||
| * The use of Palestinians for military operations or as "human shields" (changed to 'use of human shields') | |||
| In addition, the following text in the first paragraph: | |||
| "research included reviewing Israeli High Court cases and examining medical records, statements, and video documentation. Delegates conducted numerous interviews. Testimony and other evidence were cross-checked for accuracy" | |||
| is exactly repeated in the third paragraph for no apparent reason. | |||
| The full text of AI's conclusions, located at http://web.amnesty.org/library/Index/ENGMDE151432002?open&of=ENG-PSE is as follows: | |||
| ]. Please read at the source page instead. ] <small>(])</small> 21:48, 25 August 2007 (UTC)] | |||
| ] 17:18, 25 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :that's a pretty long statement you've made there. instead of such a long copy-pasting, could you please keep your points short about the changes you're interested in achieving? <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 20:08, 25 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| My point is that the correct title for Amnesty International's report is omitted, and that a number of AI's conclusions are omitted or altered to make the report seem more favorable to the Israeli point of view. Also omitted is the fact that AI concluded that war crimes were committed. | |||
| Also, the exact same wording in part of paragraph 1 for this section is repeated in paragraph 3. Is there some reason for this? ] 01:19, 26 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :The correct title should be used, but I suggest we do so using a ]. Also, isn't that particular source also cited in the lead? ] <small>(])</small> 01:26, 26 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::We've had just this kind of discussion several times already. Most notably (to my mind), we discussed . The changes necessary there to bring the article back into line with policy have still not been made. A succession of thoughtful, careful contributors have disappeared from this article as it's been brought home to them that policy may not apply in this area, and in this article in particular. Perhaps ArbCom can be involved and decide whether there are red-lines in the project or not. ] 07:50, 26 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Unless somebody objects, I intend to change the AI section to: | |||
| 1) remove redundant wording present in paragraph 1 which is repeated paragraph 3, | |||
| 2) as per nadav, I will include the correct title of AI's report in a ]. nadav, I could not find AI specifically cited in the lead, maybe it was there once but subsequently removed. There is mention of generic human rights organizationsDoes anybody think it should be cited there? | |||
| 3) include the full list of AI's conclusions: | |||
| * Unlawful killings (currently omitted) | |||
| * Failure to ensure medical or humanitarian relief (currently modified) | |||
| * Demolition of houses and property (currently omitted) | |||
| * Cutting water and electricity supplies (currently modified) | |||
| * Torture or other cruel, inhuman or degrading treatment in arbitrary detention (currently omitted) | |||
| * The use of Palestinians for military operations or as "human shields" (currently modified) | |||
| 4) include the fact that AI believes war crimes were committed during the battle, which is currently omitted from the AI section. ] 07:41, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| '''comment''' - i don't mind these changes as long as it's written in a paragraph and not as a shopping list and as long as it's written properly (citations and NPOV). while you're at it though, i request you also insert the proper name of the Camera article. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 07:50, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| *I do not know what Camera article you are referring to. ] 21:04, 5 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| **The article in question is entitled - and contains such gems as "despite copious evidence of their blatant lying ... refuting their fictitious 'massacre'". Needless to say, we should never be using such very poor material in the encyclopedia, it's clearly not an acceptable RS. (But it's further proof that the "No Massacre" thesis is a "Minor View"!) ] 11:53, 6 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ***note: the subject matter of Camera has been discussed throughly on , and the problems have been resolved by a serious inspection into the and queries. p.s. i totally support the sources statement/allegation that there were fictitious and possibly careless ("blatant lying") claims. | |||
| ***note2: i don't see the connection to "minor view" and don't think it's of any importance to the Amnesti article naming discussion. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 12:40, 6 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ****The discussions of CAMERA's reliability focused only on whether they could be reliable for what is printed in ''other'' sources. This section is about not doctoring the Amnesty report; please don't link that problem to the unrelated question of how much we should foreground a partisan op-ed.--] 15:15, 6 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| *****i and others have considered Amnesty as partisan also (on behalf of what they perceive as innocent and honest civilians) and i explained my view that this partisan "Israel and the Occupied Territories Shielded from scrutiny" title of the amnesty article (1. Jenin was under full PA jurisdiction, 2. how about a "Palestinian terrorists shielded from scrutiny" article.. does one exist?) can be included into their report if the camera partisan title is included also. either both POVs are presented or we leave both out. should we start a new subsection about if people believe amnesty to be an advocacy group or should i just ? <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 20:50, 6 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
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| 2) We need to know who these sources are; are they reprints of print media or just some websites? If they're print, what kind of circulation and influence do they have? If they're websites, is there any exceptional reason to believe they are significant? ] 12:00, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | 2) We need to know who these sources are; are they reprints of print media or just some websites? If they're print, what kind of circulation and influence do they have? If they're websites, is there any exceptional reason to believe they are significant? ] 12:00, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | ||
| == Western media accept "massacre" == | |||
| I've found proof in a very pro-Israel source of something rather obvious - most of the world knows it as "The Jenin massacre". Quoted here are one Israeli reporter (but in a British newspaper), 2 US papers, 1 blog and 3 UPI stories. | |||
| Note the dates - the fighting stopped around 10th/11th April, siege ended 16th or 18th April, each of these reports are several weeks later. So this is not a case of the world's press being misled while Israel kept them away, this is their considered response after the event. | |||
| You need to visit that link on the "windsofchange.net" site to get the full flavour, but here are parts of it: | |||
| (Ze'ev Schiff, Haaretz, 2002/07/17) - ''"None has since retracted the mendacious claims nor tried to find out how they were misled."'' | |||
| (Martin Sieff, UPI, 2002/05/22) - ... The most hysterical and inaccurate accounts and the wildest, unsubstantiated claims came not while the international media was barred from Jenin but after it was allowed in. (not a single documented fact in here - the nearest is the unreferenced ''"even the PA itself revised its own official figure for Palestinans killed in the fierce fighting down to only 56."'', which contradicts the named Palestinian minister above). | |||
| :Ummm, not sure how to break this to you, buit all your quotes are pointing out how "massacre" stories are wildly distored and inaccurate. Is anyone else here noticing this? --] 15:55, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| "Analysis: Why Europeans bought Jenin myth" (Martin Sieff, UPI, 2002/05/21) - "Most of the major press and broadcasting outlets in Western Europe uncritically gobbled up the Jenin Massacre Myth with self-indulgent abandon. ... entire echelons of editors and executives in these organizations were willing to accept uncritically the fierce unsubstantiated and hysterical reports coming out of their correspondents in Jenin. | |||
| "Part One: Documenting the Myth" (Martin Sieff, UPI, 2002/05/20) - ... the Western European media fell for the "Massacre Myth" in Jenin in a big way. ... What made these unreliable and misleading reports all the more remarkable was that many of the worst of them emerged in the most respected and influential organizations in the British media. The British Broadcasting Corporation and three of the four so-called "quality" daily newspapers - The Times, The Independent and The Guardian - fell for the "Massacre Myth" hook, line and sinker. | |||
| (Tom Gross, National Review, 2002/05/13) - "The British media was particularly emotive in its reporting. They devoted page upon page, day after day, to tales of mass murders, common graves, summary executions, and war crimes. Israel was invariably compared to the Nazis, to al Qaeda, and to the Taliban. | |||
| (Sharon Sadeh, The Guardian, 2002/05/08) - ... the British papers, almost unanimously, presented it from the outset as a "massacre" or at least as an intentional "war crime" of the worst kind ... The Independent, the Guardian and the Times, in particular, were quick to denounce Israel ... Selective use of details or information and occasional reliance on unsubstantiated accounts inflict considerable damage on the reputation of the entire British press, and more importantly, do a disservice to its readers." (ie gets right of reply in the Guardian and uses it to grumble that consensus is against him). | |||
| :this is baloney. PalestineRemembered, are you not noticing that most of your articles use the word "massacre" in an ironic or disputive way? Have you read your own quotes? What about the following quote, above? "The British Broadcasting Corporation and three of the four so-called "quality" daily newspapers - The Times, The Independent and The Guardian - '''fell for the "Massacre Myth" hook, line and sinker.'''--] 15:41, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| "The Independent's 'reporting'" (Andrew Sullivan, andrewsullivan.com, 2002/05/06) - the Independent made matters even still worse by uncritically reprinting such stories as news." (See also: (Phil Reeves, Independent, 2002/04/16) and (Phil Reeves, Independent, 2002/04/25)) | |||
| (Betsy Pisik, The Washington Times, 2002/05/04) ''"reports that a massacre did not occur have received scant attention in the Western news media."'' ] 14:44, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :'''Supporters of Israel cannot have it both ways'''. | |||
| :'''1)''' Verifiable sources say Jenin was not a massacre (though with the most vestigial evidence possible, contradicted by everything else, and from highly partisan sources, so we probably shouldn't use them). | |||
| :'''2)''' Simultaneously, the same sources tell us that "everybody else ignored these denials". | |||
| :We could cooperate on this if you were agreeable - would you choose to do a section on the Israeli newspaper (interview with the bulldozer driver) or include the rest of the world's newspapers (who never doubted that this was an atrocity)? ] 18:44, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::i'm afraid i don't follow how the kurdi bear story fits in with whatever you're trying to present here. i also don't understand why your point needs the support of a phrasing such as "supporters of israel...". | |||
| ::to the subject matter, i suggest you pay attention to the difference between all the reports during and imediately after the battle (note the date of publication) which basically repeated the allegations without proper validation of sources (some allowed their own imaginations to run wild, eps. in the british media) and how the media treated this story once UN and qadoura mousa gave the death toll of 52-56. because of this change of descriptions we have both the current title and the "previously known as" title in the intro. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 18:57, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::The UN gave the figure of deaths as "at least 52", but likely not as much as 500. The PA gave the number of deaths as 375 (for incursions all over the West Bank, but Jenin by far the worst affected). | |||
| :::If you read those reports (we have the British ones in full, but only small sections of the US ones ... strange, huh?) you'd realise they tell us that the British media were even more convinced there'd been atrocities and mass deaths once they'd got into the camp. ] 19:18, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| '''Help!''' Can someone please explain to PalestineRemmebered that all of these quotes are saying that the newspapers's ''accounts'' of a "massacre" were totally unfounded? We seem to be hitting a block here. | |||
| So PalestineRemembered, you think these quotes are referring to the ''denials'' as being without credibility, rather than the accounts of a "massacre"? Isuggest you re-read these quotes several times. i think you're missing the basic point with all of them. At this point, i dont'want you to rely only on my word. Can someone PLEASE add their comments on what these quotes mean?--] 19:02, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :I'm not disputing that sections of the US and Israeli press claim that there was no massacre. | |||
| :But the same sources tell us, in detail, that the rest of the world never reported their denials (in fact, in at least some cases, the claims of atrocity and "large numbers of deaths" became more vociferous once the observers got in). | |||
| :In line with NPOV, that makes "Massacre" the major view, and "No massacre" a minority view. ] 19:11, 29 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| PR, i think you're missing the point i was making. these articles are talking about the totally cynical way, preferring hype to facts, the press treated the event before qadoura mousa released his statement. if you follow the general reporting after the number was released, they were taking a step back from the initial figurative speech massacre reports. pay notice to how differently news sources reported the event in retrospect (sample - ) compared to how they reported it before. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 00:24, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :Read the references again. The Western media goes into detail on what they saw and what witnesses reported, and they called it an atrocity. (I suspect 90% of the US media did the same). | |||
| :Nothing has ever been produced to suggest that the Western media withdrew the charges of atrocity (and only limited evidence they withdrew on the word "massacre", which unfortunately has two meanings). All the evidence I've seen suggests they carried on saying "war-crimes". | |||
| :Now we discover, right from the sources quoted to support "No Massacre", that pro-Israeli denial never had any currency anywhere other than in (likely small) portions of the US press. Furthermore, the accusations against Israel became still more strident once the observers had gone in. | |||
| :In other words, "major view" is "Massacre, atrocity, war-crimes", and "No massacre" is a minor view. Likely so minor it should be reduced to a foot-note. ] 11:30, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::Um, you're basing that statement that the "major view"(sic) can be supported using these references? These references are debunking the massacre claims; they are NOT supporting them. You're trying to use evidence that says "there was false reporting of a massacre in Jenin" to say "there was a massacre in Jenin". I'm not sure if english is your first language, but honestly, you quoted them stating that the massacre did not happen in your initial post. ] 11:37, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::Exactly. Thanks for your great comment, Kyaa. --] 13:22, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :'''Defenders of Israel cannot have it both ways'''. | |||
| :'''1)''' Verifiable sources say Jenin "was not a massacre" (though their evidence is paltry and unconvincing - and it comes from angry, partisan sources as almost certainly don't belong in our references). | |||
| :'''2)''' Simultaneously, the same sources tell us that "all the other Western media ignored these denials and carried on calling it an atrocity/massacre" (especially once they'd really had a chance to look). | |||
| :So we have it from the horse's mouth - the Western media ignored the denials, and "Atrocity/massacre" is the "major view". | |||
| :(Presently I might delve a bit deeper - I'll probably find that the US media never withdrew the allegations of atrocity either - but they were bullied into silence rather quickly, unlike the media everywhere else). ] 16:47, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::dude, you;re exhausting me. try reading your own quotes and then we can talk. at this point, just ton respond seriously, i don't feel we can act on your suggestion, unless some more editors speak up that they would like to uphold it. And if you guys post in support without addressing the obvious and glaring problem in the meaning of these quotes vs. what PR says they are, I'll know this duscssion cannot accomplish anything with clarity. thanks. --] 17:11, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Steve asked me to comment. Unfortunately, I don't have time to enter much into this discussion now. I did look at this Talk section and, briefly, the article. I can toss out some quick suggestions to you here but no guarantee it'll be helpful. | |||
| *(#1) Steve, can you dispassionately & concisely reflect back PalestineRemembered's (PR) understanding of the sources? (He had to repeat himself presumably because you didn't seem to acknowledge his points.) If so, run it by him, to check if you understand his perspective adequately. Perhaps PR can do the same for you, if he's willing, and then you can both clarify more specific points of agreement and disagreement about how to utilize the sources. | |||
| *(#2) I wasn't clear about how PR proposes to use his understanding of the sources to edit the article. Is PR trying to modify the section on body counts? Or does PR accept the body counts section, and he is focusing on the "allegations of massacre" section? Perhaps you could both focus (on the Talk page) on PR's proposed edits based on his reading of the sources. | |||
| *(#3) From a theoretical standpoint (mine), PR seems to be pursuing an interesting line of reasoning. Can the verified ''absence'' of something -- i.e., no retraction or ignoring a denial (did I get this right PR?) -- itself be considered a source? Specifically, can a verified absence determine what is the mainstream point-of-view? Personally, I don't quite see how this could alter the body count data, but I'm not so sure about what this tells us about the usage of the term "massacre" in media discourse on Jenin. After all, who's to say whether "massacre" can refer to the killing of 5 or 50 or 500? | |||
| *(#4) On the other hand, an encyclopedia needs to make judgment calls about the relative merits and reliability of competing sources. Doesn't the verified absence of a retraction, or of ignoring a denial, strongly undermine the reliability of a source? If so, then the cited sources (British, US, UPI) seem more reliable. Conversely, the remaining media that ignore new data would seem quite flawed. If so, we need to keep in mind that Misplaced Pages gauges the major/mainstream NPOV view based on the most reliable sources, even if there are larger number of less reliable sources offering a different view. Right? | |||
| Hope this is helpful, Steve (or others). Anyway, please accept it as well-intentioned. Thanks! ] | ] 18:52, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :: PS Since drafting the above comment, PalestineRemembered, you expressed concern about my being drawn into the discussion. If you feel the same way after reading this, please let me know. I would like to avoid being an involved party to any arbitration of this article. ] | ] 18:52, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::Hi. thanks. errr, actually though, I hadn't quite expected all that. thanks though for all your hard work and heartlfelt efforts, as usual. i think i'd prefer to leave things alone for now. thanks. --] 19:08, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Ok. An afterthought. PR states: "Nothing has ever been produced to suggest that the Western media withdrew the charges of atrocity (and only limited evidence they withdrew on the word "massacre", which unfortunately has two meanings). All the evidence I've seen suggests they carried on saying "war-crimes"." This seems to be a key point for PR and subject to further source verification, regardless of how PR's argument-by-absence (#3) unfolds. ] | ] 19:16, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Hello, ], welcome along. The discussion about this article is very different from what we discussed before because this article itself is so terrible. (I think the name of this article is desperately misleading too, much worse than AoIA, but that's near the bottom of my concerns). | |||
| :::::(#1) Question is to Steve. | |||
| :::::(#2) HG says -> I wasn't clear about how PR proposes to use his understanding of the sources to edit the article. PR says -> I'm not very clear how to improve this article either, because the layout is so awful, and my one attempt to correct it was summararily reverted weeks ago. I'd scrap the "body-count" section, and scrap "the allegations of massacre" section. I'd completely re-write the lead (to match how other battles are treated), then have the "story of the event" in some kind of NPOV fashion (matching other battles), follow it with the investigations (UN with EU & PA, Amnesty, HRW, IDF, Jenin Investigation, Time Magazine - in that order). | |||
| :::::(#2b) I am extremely dubious about the body-count, the alleged "PA admits 56" story comes from angry sources and doesn't match what the PA told the UN 3 weeks afterwards (c. 375 for the whole of the West Bank). However, I can see this is one of the cases I'd likely be forced to let in material that I believe does not add up. | |||
| :::::(#3) HG -> Can the verified ''absence'' of something -- i.e., no retraction or ignoring a denial (did I get this right PR?). PR -> No - the sources collected by "windsofchange.com" tell us that "all" other sources (they concentrate on the British media, but they refer to "the Western media", everyone outside the US and Israel) ignored the "No massacre" thesis and continued to say there had been a massacre (or at least, major atrocities). Which makes the "Massacre/atrocity" theme the "Major View". It's a slam-dunk case, this pro-Israeli source tells us, in some fair detail, that the "No massacre thesis" is very widely rejected. | |||
| :::::: You say, "No" as if I didn't hear you right when I talked about '''an absence or an ignoring'''. But then you again point out how the windsofchange sources report how Western media "'''ignored''' the 'No massacre' thesis." So I'm still confused, since it still sounds like your inference hinges on windsofchange telling us what was ignored, which I consider (my #3) an interesting but speculative approach on your part. .... Maybe this will help clarify. The encyclopedia aims to gather knowledge, focusing on the major view of what is verifiably known. You want to infer from windsofchange that we know that "the massacre thesis" is the major view. However, instead, one may infer from windsofchange sources that much of the Western media is not reporting what is ''known'', but rather reporting "the ''uninformed'' massacre thesis." I realize you don't want to add 'uninformed' as a qualifier, but isn't that the point of the sources you've quoted? ] | ] 01:54, 31 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::(#3b) Massacre is irrelevant, it's a red-herring thrown up by the sources that wish to persuade us "There was no massacre". The Boston massacre was 5 people dead, Kent State was 4. There is a secondary meaning of massacre which means "a group of people machine-gunned to death", and it's universally agreed that that didn't happen in Jenin - but that doesn't mean that it wasn't a massacre, or considered a massacre (the last being what matters in this case - our article has to be written around the "Major View"). | |||
| :::::(#4) HG -> Doesn't the verified absence of a retraction, or of ignoring a denial, strongly undermine the reliability of a source? PR -> You're starting to lose me. The Guardian gave "right of reply" to an Israeli journalist in London to write a column and tell us there was "No massacre". But our source states that the rest of the media were insistent there was "Atrocity/war-crime", and they became still more insistent once their journalists got into the came. Slam-dunk, these sources are teling us that "No massacre" has very little currency. | |||
| :::::(#4b) HG-> If so, then the cited sources (British, US, UPI) seem more reliable. PR -> Not sure which sources you're talking about. Most of the sources from "windsofchange.com" are fundamentally quite unreliable. Only one of the UPI reports is available in full, and it's almost a complete polemic (the only "fact" in there is the highly dubious claim that the PA admit only 56 dead). There is the British paper, the Guardian, giving right of reply to the Haaretz journalist, then there are the cited Independent reports which are loud in their condemnation of Israel - and more so after they've got into the camp. | |||
| :::::: PR, I'm having trouble following you. On what grounds are you considering US and British newspapers or news services as "fundamentally quite unreliable"? So much of Misplaced Pages relies on these sources, I don't think you're assessment is going to find favor among wikipedians. Furthermore, if the sources aren't reliable, how can you justify using them for any kind of inference? ] | ] 01:54, 31 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::(#4c) HG -> Conversely, the remaining media that ignore new data would seem quite flawed. PR -> Verifiability not truth. There is no "new data" from any of the sources in "windsofchange.com". But there is new data from other souces, bodies continued to be found in the bulldozed rubble for almost 4 months (until early August). There were further intrusions by the IDF, in one of which Amnesty graphically describes 2 children killed by a tank shell (the body of one of them run over and over by a tank) - this when the curfew had supposedly been lifted for 2 hours. With conditions this unpleasant, we know why there was no careful count. One of the accounts (EU to the UN?) says that the bomb-disposal weren't allowed in for weeks, at least two more Palestinians were killed by accidental explosions. | |||
| ::::::: By new data, I meant the quotes from which you inferred support for the "massacre thesis" as a major view.] | ] | |||
| :::::(#4d) HG -> If so, we need to keep in mind that Misplaced Pages gauges the major/mainstream NPOV view based on the most reliable sources, even if there are larger number of less reliable sources offering a different view. Right? PR -> Correct. The Times magazine called their article "an investigation", but there's no evidence they did more than tour the camp and get everything from the IDF, it should come near to the end. We have good RS accounts from Western journalists who went in and provide detailed, graphic accounts of atrocities from eye-witnesses, as did and . "windsofchange.com"s sources jeer at these accounts, but then we've familiar with denial after all these years. | |||
| :::::There's a lot, lot more I can add about material that ought to be in this case - eg the . That's the most easy-reading snapshot of just what the "Battle of Jenin" was really about - and Jaakobou has specifically told us his only objection was that the English translation comes top-and-tailed with partisan statements. There's no question it was published in Hebrew by a major Israeli newspaper. So why's it not included in the article? Answer - it's been edit-warred out! As I said, really, really serious problems with this article. ] 21:30, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Thanks for your detailed reply, ]! Looks like my #1 and #2 suggestions might be useful. Following up on #2: Given your experience in trying to rewrite this disputed article, you might want to consider just writing a few sentences that you feel are merited by the windsofchange sources and see how it's received here in Talk. Less ambitious, more feasible. Your replies to my #3 and #4 indicate that I didn't understand you reasoning and, well, I still don't. I interspersed some feedback above w/your nicely outlined replies. Meanwhile, if you don't mind my saying so PR, you might want to consider that, if somebody like me (i.e., academically trained) is having trouble following your line of thought, you may need to articulate it more clearly for it to work in the encyclopedia. Anyway, it's good working with you albeit briefly on this topic. Thanks again, ] | ] 01:54, 31 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::This whole discussion seems somewhat unnecessary to me, as it all comes down to a single point. Do current, mainstream RS characterise this event as a massacre or not? If yes, then great, if not, also great. <font style="color:#22AA00;">''']'''</font><font style="color:#888888;"><sup>]</sup></font> 02:08, 31 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| Here's what I might diagnose at the heart of the dispute. An underlying premise (P1) of PalestineRemembered's analysis is that there is a ] against Palestinians interests in U.S. and British news media. (Let's skip how one might deduce P1 from PR's words and reasoning.) Is there such a bias? Maybe. But here's where the rubber hits the road. Even if such media bias exists (= True), Misplaced Pages does not generally analyze sources based on such a bias. On the contrary, we presuppose (P2) that US and British newspapers and wire services as reliable for NPOV writing. There's a good reason for this -- our readers accept such mainstream sources as reliable for verifying knowledge. We are not in the business (yet) of trying to convince our readers otherwise. Perhaps it's a a paradoxical catch-22, but the premise of systematic media bias (P1) is a point-of-view (POV) that is not verifiable with mainstream sources. This dynamic is surely a bitter pill to swallow for those who feel P1 is true, since P1 implies that systematic bias unavoidably seeps into Misplaced Pages. Anyway, what's the result? In general, as I saw with Tiamut regarding ], pro-Palestinian Users need to bear the burden of editing with the assumption (P2) that US and British media (etc) are reliably neutral sources. Specifically here, PR, I think you need to take the US/British sources as reliable overall, not just where they talk about what other Western media is ignoring. In other words, windsofchange sources are saying that the other Western media are not reliably reporting on Jenin. This doesn't turn other Western media into a major view in favor of the "massacre thesis" -- instead, windsofchange sources can merely verify that there are unsubstantiated (in the eyes of US/Brit sources) allegations of massacre that persistent elsewhere. I'm sorry that my reasoning doesn't happen to be more supportive of you position in this situation, PR, but please take it as a good faith effort to discern your view. Thanks for hearing me out. ] | ] 11:18, 31 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :I'm not sure on what basis you determine my position, I don't believe I've said anything on what you've called "P1" (or at least, not in this part of the discussion). | |||
| :And we're not discussing P2, the working assumption that US/British media are generally reliable. | |||
| :What I've done is to point out that, even the most POV sources (as compiled by windsofchange.com) admit that the "Not a massacre" thesis has been largely (perhaps almost entirely) ignored. Hence it is mysterious indeed that this article is *still* written from this disturbing POV. And astounding that people can remove the "Totally disputed tag" from this article as if there was consensus. ] 06:58, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::Looks like I may have made a mistaken assumption. Why are you say that these are "even the most POV sources"? Is it because of the publications (UPI, Wash Times, Ha'artez etc) or because of the authors? Also, you /we/ may need to distinguish between reporters and op-ed columnists. Below, G-Dett makes this distinction -- though G-Dett also seems to claim that Wash Times is systematically biases (P1). If you/G-Dett argue based on op-ed vs news reporter, that's plausible. If the argument relies on P1, I'm saying that doesn't work for Misplaced Pages (even were it a strong argument for original research). Do you see my approach to WP policy on sources? ] | ] 14:28, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Each of these articles appears to be long on opinion and short on facts (nearer op-ed that reportese). None of them are "major media", one is a blog, one is the "Israeli right of reply" by the Guardian. I'm not making a sweeping generalisation about general bias towards Israel (though that is strong, the they did on themselves, April 2006). | |||
| ::::However, my argument has nothing to do with "P1". It's simply that these reports tell us that, even long after the event, the "No Massacre" thesis was ignored by most of the (British/Western/world) media. And I have a suspicion the tongue lashing was aimed at the British media in order not to do the same thing to the US media, which were little different. ] 18:28, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::I'll comprimise with a statement similar to "initial reports stated that there was a massacre, but after investigation the claims of massacre were found to be false and the early death counts were scaled back from the hundred to "at least 52" according to the United Nations statement." Yes, the reports were exagerrated initially and after the smoke cleared the actual numbers were much lower and, as both AI and HRW stated "there was no evidence of a massacre". You can continue to believe that there was one, but there was no evidence left behind. Does this mean that the refrigerated trucks you mentioned on HG's page drove them away? Maybe, but there is no RS provided to verify that particular conspiracy theory, so far. ] 13:04, 6 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| === PalestineRemembered even pro-Israel sources tell us that "Majority View" is "Atrocity/Massacre". === | |||
| My position on this is very simple - we have a limited number of sources that would normally be considered RS putting forwards the "There was no massacre" thesis and the article is written entirely to reflect this "View" as if it were the "Majority View". | |||
| These reports (compiled and presented by the "windsofchange.com web-site) themselves tell us that the view they take is the "Minority View", they're not the Majority view. | |||
| #Haaretz - ''"None has since retracted the mendacious claims"'' | |||
| #UPI - ''"The most hysterical and inaccurate accounts ... not while the international media was barred from Jenin but after it was allowed in. | |||
| #UPI - ''"willing to accept uncritically the fierce unsubstantiated and hysterical reports coming out of their correspondents in Jenin. | |||
| #UPI - ''"British Broadcasting Corporation and three of the four so-called "quality" daily newspapers ... fell for the "Massacre Myth" hook, line and sinker"''. (Just one paragraph of this available to us). | |||
| #UPI - ''"devoted page upon page, day after day, to tales of mass murders, common graves, summary executions, and war crimes"''. (Just one paragraph of this report available to us). | |||
| #British Guardian (but in a commentary by Israeli) - ''"use of details or information and occasional reliance on unsubstantiated accounts - do a disservice to its readers." | |||
| #British Independent - ''"uncritically reprinting such stories as news"''. (Emphasises that this is *after* entering the camp and doing the regular journalism thing, talking to witnesses etc) | |||
| Lastly, and perhaps most damagingly, the Washington Times states - ''"reports that a massacre did not occur have received scant attention in the Western news media."'' | |||
| There are a number of other serious problems with these reports, and we have no indication that even mainstream US sources accept what they claim. I will have to come back on this point when I have more time. | |||
| All in all, there's no need to look any further, the "Majority View" is clearly stated (by these "pro-Israel sources") to be "Atrocity/massacre". This is what the article should be written to say, not the way it's currently written. There are huge problems of both fact and NPOV in the current article, and, at a minimum, it must be tagged as such. | |||
| This article and the associated Talk have been disfigured by nonsense of all kinds - my argument here exposes (I think) just the one that should be the very easiest for people to understand. ] 08:39, 1 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :'''comment/explanation''' - '''"retraction" is a very dirty word in the world of journalism.''' they usually just change the titles and the subtext of the next articles about the same subject - haaretz and BBC have sinned in this many times before... and i've given you earlier a link to the BBC, which could not be mistaken as a pro-israeli source, article as an example... btw, haaretz isn't considered pro-israel either, but that's another story. i think you should put an emphasize on understanding the difference between reporting things on the back pages (i.e. "receive scant attention") and between holding a position that a massacre occurred. if you notice, '''there is no retraction''' in ("not a massacre/witnesses told stories of executions/Israel has valid point against UN mission") or in ("Palestinian militants put up fierce resistance/grocer Adnan Hassan, says his home rocketed by Apache gunship/Martyrs' capital") either but it is clear that the word massacre is not the message of the article anymore. the next reports are ("UN condemns Israel's military action in Jenin/complex vote reflects concerns at failure to condemn suicide bombings") and ("UN says no massacre in Jenin/Saeb Erekat rejects the UN report/Daniel Taub: report shows Palestinian claims, atrocity propaganda")... '''no retractions... just a different story'''. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 11:27, 1 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| #Do you know what mendacious means? It means "false or untrue." In other words the source is calling the "massacre" a lie. | |||
| #UPI is saying that the press printed innaccurate accounts of a massacre. In other words, there was no massacre. | |||
| #UPI again states that the reports from Jenin were exaggerated and even goes as far as to claim "hysterical". | |||
| #UPI says everyone was buying the lies again. | |||
| #This one could go both ways, but again, its the UPI which has been repeatedly reporting on the inaccurate reporting of a massacre at Jenin. | |||
| #UPI is chastising the british press for, omg, printing false, unverified stories. | |||
| #Again, this time the Independent is saying that there was no massacre. | |||
| And finally, the Washington Post comments on the fact that noone is correcting themselves and that they SHOULD BE. | |||
| What are you trying to accomplish PR? Have you switched sides and are now claiming there was no massacre? Cause that's what your "evidence" is saying. ] 11:41, 1 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :The Washington ''Times'', Kyaa, not the Washington ''Post''. Dear me. The ] is one of the great independent family-owned newspapers that, along with the ''New York Times'' (and the ''Los Angeles Times'' and the ''Wall Street Journal'' before their respective corporate buy-outs) set the gold standard of serious journalism in the United States. The ], on the other hand, is a controversial and very conservative broadsheet with a circulation one-seventh that of the ''Post''. It was established by the Reverend ], the Korean businessman who describes himself as "humanity's Savior, Messiah, Returning Lord and True Parent," and who explained his journalistic brainchild as follows:<blockquote> Fifteen years ago, when the world was adrift on the stormy waves of the Cold War, I established ''The Washington Times'' to fulfill God's desperate desire to save this world. Since that time, I have devoted myself to raising up ''The Washington Times'', hoping that this blessed land of America would fulfill its world-wide mission to build a Heavenly nation. Meanwhile, I waged a lonely struggle, facing enormous obstacles and scorn as I dedicated my whole heart and energy to enable ''The Washington Times'' to grow as a righteous and responsible journalistic institution. | |||
| </blockquote> | |||
| :Ronald Reagan plugged the ''Washington Times'' saying it was his favorite newspaper, much as Dick Cheney would later plug ''Fox News'' and praise its unbiased reporting. The ''Columbia Journalism Review'', on the other hand, drolly notes that "because of its history of a seemingly ideological approach to the news, the paper has always faced questions about its credibility." | |||
| :We've seen this confusion once here already. The fact that editors on this page continue to confuse the ''Times'' for the ''Post'', or refer to them interchangeably, is very unsettling, especially when the very thing we're discussing is the range, balance, and above all the quality of our sourcing. | |||
| :Now, PR's post also contains a misattribution, though a less serious or grotesque one than Kyaa and Isarig's. The quote allegedly from the ''Independent'' regarding "uncritically reprinting such stories as news" is actually a quote from the blog of (then) neoconservative blogger and fierce ''Independent''-critic Andrew Sullivan. The ''Independent'' 's Middle-East correspondent Phil Reeves, on the other hand, talks about Israeli and pro-Israeli propaganda exploiting Palestinian propaganda for its own purposes – i.e., continued exaggeration of body counts and massacre allegations by Palestinian officials provided the perfect rhetorical opening for Israeli propagandists to wave off the whole "Jenin lie," to throw the baby out with the bathwater, to pretend that the whole story of Jenin is the story of massacre allegations that turned out to be false or exaggerated, rather than war crimes allegations that turned out to be true. | |||
| :The POV problem with our article is that we've taken this same propagandistic angle as our starting point, as if it were a self-evident foundation on which to build a neutral and encyclopedic account of the siege of Jenin. It is not. And the point of PR's post, which has been misunderstood, is that the major, prestigious, reliable-source news outlets by and large did not treat the massacre allegations and their subsequent discrediting as ''the'' major story about Jenin. The various pundits he quotes (the Sullivan blog, a ''Haaretz'' journalist writing a guest op-ed for the ''Guardian'', a ''Washington Times'' op-ed, and so on) are wringing their hands precisely because the main respectable news outlets did not frame and contextualize the siege of Jenin the way those pundits would have liked. Those pundits would be pleased with our Misplaced Pages article. But that doesn't, unfortunately, make it NPOV; quite the contrary.--] 17:57, 2 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::Point not found. Regardless of who published it, his sources are all still saying precisely the opposite of what he's attempting to support. ] 02:04, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::Kyaa is correct. Kyaa, I'm still here and supporting the correct points you are making, just so we both can support each other, in addressing this issue. thanks. --] 02:26, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Sorry not to be joining the group hug. Kyaa, the point you're missing may clarify if presented in your own words: PR's source ''"comments on the fact that no one is correcting themselves and that they SHOULD BE."'' Should be, but aren't. That is, the big massacre-allegation-massacre-retraction story that you, a number of partisan pundits, and our article in its current form are pushing as ''the'' central notable thing about the siege of Jenin, did not constitute the central notable thing about the siege of Jenin for many, if not most, of the mainstream reliable sources. PR's sources by and large attest to that, even if they see it as cause for complaint.--] 03:51, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Hey, if you want to write the article as a simple description of the battle without any commentary, I'm all for that. We don't need any of the reactions from the partisan sources or human rights organizations or any other groups trying to push any POV or "emotional" rhetoric. No allegations of massacre, no "swarming helicopters", no allusions to mysterious, possibly mythological armored bulldozer drivers. I'm there. Cut it all down to the bare facts with no POV statements, no controversy coverage, no discussions of death counts. Just the straight facts with none of the drama. That would be very refreshing actually. ] 05:50, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::The very sources this article is written around state that their version of events is a "Minor View" eg ''"reports that a massacre did not occur have received scant attention in the Western news media."'' It's ludicrous to claim that this "Minor View" shouild be the basis of this article. ] 11:04, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Kyaa, your post presents a ]: either '''a)''' we present the Israeli propaganda version, which highlights and foregrounds the revised casualty estimates and discrediting of massacre claims as a means of obscuring the major war crimes which were alleged ''and'' confirmed; or '''b)''' we present a bare-bones "simple description of the battle," which you propose to magically piece together without the benefit of "partisan sources and human rights organizations." First of all, I hope it's clear why this is a false choice, but briefly: Jenin was significant for prominent, high-quality reliable sources for a number of reasons, and we should cover both the siege itself and its significance with those things in mind, and from a neutral point of view per ]. Secondly, I hope it's clear why your notion of a simple description of the battle with no partisan sources or human-rights organizations among our sources is an impossibility. There were no journalists allowed in during the attack and siege, remember? The only first-hand accounts are from IDF soldiers and Palestinians, both presumably by definition partisan. Human-rights organizations, aren't partisan, except from the point of view of state propaganda, which likes to take an a la carte approach to their findings; and to equate them to groups like the ADL is a serious deception. They are the highest-quality possible sources for an article like this.--] 11:32, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::Did you seriously just claim that HRW and Amnesty International aren't partisan groups? Just checking. ] 12:43, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::Yes, of course. And so do you, and so do pro-Israel pundits – at least when HRW, Amnesty ''et al'' are discrediting massacre claims. When they are confirming allegations of war crimes by Israel, then of course they are labeled partisan by those who embrace other of their conclusions. This is absolutely natural, and absolutely consistent and predictable. When HRW and Amnesty publish their findings about Hezbollah's war crimes, or Saddam's mass graves, or Serbian atrocities in the Balkans, those become the standard statistics cited approvingly by U.S. officials; when HRW and Amnesty then publish their findings about human-rights violations in Guantanamo Bay or at the CIA's various "black sites" and detention centers, then those same officials ridicule their bias. And of course Saddam apologists and apologists for Serb atrocities and Arab despots and so on cite HRW and Amnesty in equal and opposite ''a la carte'' ways. This is par for the course, and representative of the basic vernacular of state propaganda – whether the state in question is a liberal democracy like the U.S. or Israel, or a dictatorship or a military junta or whatever. State officials who practice this rhetorical a-la-cartism are simply doing their jobs. Our job in writing an encyclopedia is different, however, as I would hope would be self-evident. HRW and Amnesty are the very best possible sources to cite in an encyclopedia article about human-rights violations. That they piss everyone off some of the time, and delight those same people at other times, is a very strong indication of their essential non-partisanship. | |||
| ::::::::But perhaps there is some confusion about the very meaning of "partisan." I'm not claiming that HRW and Amnesty are uniformly beyond reproach, that their findings are G-d–like in their infallible accuracy. Some say, for example, that because their findings in a place like Jenin were compiled without the cooperation of the Israeli government, they were necessarily biased. Others point out that since HRW's donor base is disproportionately represented by wealthy American Jews, their findings will be skewed in the other direction in matters regarding Israel (this last was a point of contention after last summer's between Israel and Lebanon, when Kenneth Roth found himself under serious political pressure from parts of HRW's donor base). Such claims can be weighed and measured as the need arises, and they might even form the substance of an interesting Misplaced Pages article. But even if you find fault or allege bias in this or that set of their findings, it is absurd to argue that they are "partisan" organizations in the sense that the ADL – or for that matter, any number of "Justice for Palestine" organizations on the local or national level – are partisan. To carry on that way is to engage in a major semantic distortion, and to confuse the mandate of state propaganda or public-relations lobbying with the very different mandate of encyclopedia-writing.--] 14:36, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::These kind of sarcastic one-liners are unhelpful. I think the Misplaced Pages article on HRW says it: "anti-Western, anti-India, anti-China, and anti-Israel bias...accused of importing a Western agenda...assault on Hellenism" - in other words, accused of bias against essentially every country it reports on. Here's a simple question. If HRW and Amnesty are partisan groups, who are the non-partisan human rights groups? Or the human rights groups which are partisans of other ideologies? I must say that once you eliminate those outlets the Israeli-American right considers "biased" (like, the entire European press, large chunks of even the Israeli press, all international organizations) you're left with a rather dismal selection of dubious accounts from USA Today, TIME magazine, and the like. And the article we have right now strays from even those inferior sources to make statements that aren't even found in them. ] 14:13, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::::For the record, I don't think Kyaa's post was overly sarcastic, if anything just a little naïve. Anyway I have no opposition to a little sarcasm on talk pages for articles like this; where there are serious and deep ideological tensions about a certain subject, a little banter can help defuse things.--] 14:41, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::G-Dett, i disgree with your previous posts earlier. the fact that the cited articles say that the retractions were glossed over, or insufficiently covered by major media outlets, doe not mean those major media outlets were doubting the retractions or disputing the retractions in any way. this seems a bit excessive. you can't reserach historical events by quoting analyses of media coverage; especially when the media coverage they analyze do not contain any statements of fact, but in fact the main focus is the media's failure to report a retraction of non-factual allegations. your argument is convoluted, counter-intuitive, and in my opinion does run counter to the facts. I also agree with Kyaa; let's report the facts, and not wrange over which hyperbole or drama to use. --] 18:26, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::Sm8900, I didn't say that major media outlets doubted the retractions, and ''I'' certainly don't doubt the retractions (remember, I am not the one challenging the credibility of major international human-rights organizations – that's Kyaa). My point was that major media outlets did not appear to have emphasized those retractions as ''the'' central notable thing about Jenin. The pundits PR cited, however, did just that, and they lament that the major media did not follow their lead in this. The NPOV problem with our article is that we ''do'' follow the lead of partisan pundits in this, instead of giving a neutral overview of Jenin's significance for the major reliable sources. | |||
| ::::As for the "just the facts, ma'am" approach suggested, I have explained why I think the suggestion was mere rhetoric. The best sources by far for the facts are the major international human-rights organizations, but Kyaa and others keep describing them, bewilderingly, as "partisan groups," and advocating an ''a la carte'' approach to their findings, which we can then supplement with press releases from genuinely partisan lobby groups. Then there's this persistent talk about "helicopters swarming angrily." Was that ''ever'' in the article, or is it a strawman? There's nothing there now about that. And yet at least one editor who invokes it as an example of emotive or dramatic rhetoric has vigorously edit-warred to keep in place a reference to defensive mines packing "ten times the blast of a suicide bomber's belt." Just the facts, ma'am – indeed. | |||
| ::::We need the facts first; and then the significance, the controversies, and so on (including but not limited to or frontloaded by the revised casualty estimates and retracted massacre allegations). For the facts, we have first and foremost the major international human-rights organizations. For the significance, we have an ample range of reliable sources, which should include ''but not privilege'' those for whom the major story here is the precipitous allegations of a massacre. --] 19:07, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::i disagree with who you perceive as the "first and foremost" factual. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 20:17, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::Do you really, Jaakobou? Really truly? So who is your source for the discrediting of massacre allegations? You have seemed quite content with a lede that refers to the massacre allegations being "rejected," "disproved," etc. Who is your "first and foremost factual" source for that? Whose credibility trumps the exhaustive on-site investigations and extensive reports by Amnesty and HRW? Time Magazine? | |||
| ::::::On another note, who do you go to for information on human-rights violations in other parts of the world? You must be very skeptical when you read about human-rights violations in Saddam's Iraq, or Sierra Leone, or Rwanda, or the Balkans. Gosh, with half the stuff we know about such things having come from such dubious, discredited, partisan sources as Amnesty International and Human Rights Watch, it must make you wonder if any of this stuff even happened! Well at least we have the good ol' dependable ADL, from whom we know there was no Armenian genocide. Or at least there was no Armenian genocide until last weekend, when the political sands shifted and suddenly Foxman announced: ''"Upon reflection, the consequences of those actions were indeed tantamount to genocide".'' Wonderful that: "upon reflection." The ADL doesn't get tangled up with historical data, or established facts, or the documentary record, or old-fashioned notions of maintaining political and financial independence, or sending experts to investigate and prepare reports on-site, or anything of the sort. Rather, Big Chief Foxman sits and "reflects" in solitude. OK, OK, not ''absolute'' solitude, but the relative solitude of conference calls with Shimon Peres and Israeli foreign ministry officials, who then coordinate their own reflections and announcements in consultation with the Turkish president, who until now had veto power over historical truth for the ADL under Big Chief Foxman, who in turn has veto power over historical truth for some of the more exasperating editors in our midst. --] 21:27, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::yes i really really do, i disagree with what you perceive as the "first and foremost" factual, i find this unrelated rant about the politics of the ADL and the turkish gov.... unrelated. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 09:25, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::] - if you'd indent and thread your responses in a regular fashion, it would be easier to accept your apparent enthusiasm for the ADL, over the evidence we've just had presented that it's an entirely political organisation, in which one man makes ideological U-turns about genocide bearing no relation to evidence whatsoever. ] 12:29, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::::warning issued, this has gone long enough. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 12:58, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::gimme a break. there is no support for massacre allegations, from any source. I think we need to stop arguing over labels and charged weasel words. --] 01:07, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::Steve, have you read the post you're responding to? I have not suggested that there is support for massacre allegations.--] 04:11, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::So you're supportive of not presenting this as a massacre and limitting the discussion to what in the end was presented: that there was no massacre in Jenin? ] 04:54, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::::Limiting the discussion to the revised claims of massacre? Why on earth would we do that? | |||
| ::::::: On another note, Kyaa, given that you've just edited the very sentence that falsifies sources, why didn't you fix the misrepresentation? Have you not read the sources?--] 05:07, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
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| No, Jaakobou, it doesn't work like that. The tags indicate the presence of a dispute. They don't indicate that the dispute is "valid" or "invalid" in the judgement of a heavily involved, highly partisan editor. You want a point of inaccuracy and POV? Here's ''one'' example, based on ''one'' paragraph which is roughly representative of the ''entire'' piece. | |||
| *<small>Palestinian militants had expected an air strike since their security forces' barracks in the Gaza Strip and West Bank had been repeatedly bombed by an Israeli military that didn't want to risk the casualties of Close Quarters Combat. However in Jenin, the IDF chose not to bomb the spots of resistance using aircraft in order to minimize civilian losses, even with the risk of increased losses to infantry, although there was limited use of helicopters.</small> | |||
| Source 13 doesn't seem to exist; but I'm assuming from the name that it's supposed to be the UN report (of which HRW and Amnesty, which did actual investigations instead of summarizing press reports, were harshly critical). What does the report say on the "no aircraft to minimize casualties"? It says, "According to Israeli sources, in their incursion into the camp IDF relied primarily on infantry rather than airpower and artillery in an effort to minimize civilian casualties, but other accounts of the battle suggest that as many as 60 tanks may have been used even in the first days." What does it say about "limited use of helicopters"? It says, "IDF is reported to have used bulldozers, tank shelling and rocket firing, at times from helicopters, in populated areas.", it says "Much of the destruction appears to have occurred in the fighting as a result of the use by IDF of tanks, helicopter gunships and bulldozers.", it says, "Interviews with witnesses conducted by human rights organizations suggest that tanks, helicopters and ground troops using small arms predominated in the first two days, after which armoured bulldozers were used to demolish houses and other structures so as to widen alleys in the camp. ", it says, "The heaviest fighting reportedly occurred between 5 and 9 April, resulting in the largest death tolls on both sides. There are reports that during this period IDF increased missile strikes from helicopters", and that's all it says about helicopters (excluding Israeli and Palestinian submissions to the report.) It uses the word "limited" exactly twice - once to say that the usefulness of a report without on-the-scene investigation is "limited", and once to say that Israeli access to the camp in the aftermath of fighting was "limited". The EU submission says, "IDF systematically used bulldozers, tanks, armoured personnel carriers and infantry, also armoured helicopters. The operations took a broader scope after the death of 13 Israeli soldiers in an ambush inside the refugee camp." It never says anything about limited helicopter use, limited use of force - this is all a fairy-tale that pro-Israeli editors have cavalierly attributed to people ''who never said it''. What does TIME say about helicopters? It has, "Cobra attack helicopters began to pound rooftop Palestinian positions." It uses the word "limited" only in reference to a previous incursion in February, never in reference to the events of April. More fairy tales. | |||
| "the IDF chose not to bomb the spots of resistance using aircraft in order to minimize civilian losses, even with the risk of increased losses to infantry" is sourced to a CNN piece, which in fact says, "Israel Defense Forces spokesmen have said that the decision to use infantry to spearhead the attack – rather than using air power and artillery – stemmed from a desire to limit civilian casualties, even at the risk of higher IDF casualties. The decision to take the crowded refugee camp – with its narrow streets and alleyways – block by block did prove costly to the Israeli forces." | |||
| So in other words, we are again taking the word of Israeli "spokesmen" as received wisdom. The source ''in fact'' says that "the decision to take the crowded refugee camp ... block by block" caused increased casualties, not any suspension of aerial bombing. The aerial bombing claim is an ''IDF'' claim which is fine attributed as such, but should ''absolutely not'' be treated as factual, WP-voice information! | |||
| Note that I haven't even ''begun'' to talk about what ''other'' sources say, source which I've repeatedly drawn from and which have been repeatedly expunged. What do Amnesty and HRW say about helicopters? What did Peter Beaumont say that he saw with his own eyes? He described "helicopters that swarmed angrily above the city's roofs, firing indiscriminately into the city's crowded refugee camp", "We could see the tanks manoeuvering and shelling ... Most shocking, however, were the Apache helicopter gunships". HRW says, "Civilian residents of the camp described days of sustained missile fire from helicopters hitting their houses...Firing was particularly indiscriminate on the morning of April 6, when missiles were launched from helicopters, catching many sleeping civilians unaware." Amnesty quotes one of their officials describing, "Houses pierced from wall to wall by tank or helicopter gun ships." They say, "Houses were intensively attacked by missiles from Apache helicopters...the fighting Palestinian residents and Palestinian and foreign journalists and others outside the camp saw hundreds of missiles being fired into the houses of the camp from Apache helicopters flying sortie after sortie. The sight of the firepower being thrown at Jenin refugee camp led those who witnessed the air raids, including military experts and the media, to believe that scores, at least, of Palestinians had been killed." HRW and Amnesty are by far the most credible sources we have; they are neutral, they are experts, they conducted on-the-scene invesigations - and we completely contradict them! | |||
| The neutrality and factual accuracy aren't really "disputed" here - they're despicable. ] 13:26, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :if you have a problem with this tiny snippet, why not fix the problem? i don't see how this over-sized paragraph justifies the tag. p.s. keeping it short and to the point might help you achieve your desired changes faster, assuming you want to improve the article rather than just keep the tag. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 13:53, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::Jaakobou, I apologize for beating a dead horse here, but I wanted to make it clear that the article is suffering from massive NPOV and factual problems; this is ''one example'' of ''one paragraph''. The lies and distortions are laced throughout this article. Don't implicitly impugn my motives ("Assuming you want improve the article.") We've been trying to improve it for weeks; you and some others have been trenchantly opposed to such improvements. ] 16:58, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::<s>indeed, We've been trying to improve it for weeks; you and some others have been trenchantly opposed to such improvements. indeed.</s> <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 21:35, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::please focus on the material which bothers you and make subsections to each single problem. i don't believe the tag is needed, but i'm willing to let it slip for a while longer as long as we are taking steps forward to resolve the issues. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 21:54, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::I have to agree with Jaakobou above. Please mention some specific points that editors can act upon. As things are now, with no specifics being mentioned, there is no reason for the disputed tag to be included in the article. -- ] 22:01, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::No, it doesn't work like that. You don't decide whether our dispute is valid, or "specific" enough to mention (wtf are you talking about, anyway? there are specifics all over the place!). The dispute exists. The tag stays. This constant tag-removal is verging on disruptive editing. ] 22:06, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::I don't see a whole lot of specifics above, but if they are so plentiful then why don't you just make the list that I requested, so that Jaakoobu, I and other editors can act upon them? Reading through the article and the recent reverts, the tag seems to unjustified. Another issue is that I will have to ask you to please remain WP:Civil. Cursing and accusing other editors of being disruptive is not acceptable. -- ] 22:18, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::I'm not going to be drawn into an argument about whether "wtf" is "cursing". Nor will I argue about whether removal of maintenance tags because you don't personally agree with them is "disruptive editing". I'll simply quote WP:NPOV: | |||
| '':''Sometimes people have edit wars over the NPOV dispute tag, or have an extended debate about whether there is a NPOV dispute or not. In general, if you find yourself having an ongoing dispute about whether a dispute exists, there's a good chance one does, and you should therefore leave the NPOV tag up until there is a consensus that it should be removed.'''' | |||
| ::This extensive, exhaustive discussion going on since early July has led nowhere, and I have no reason to believe that re-capitulating it would accomplish anything. Briefly, the article devotes vastly undue weight to IDF and allied sources, and passes their claims on without attribution as truth. It downplays and misrepresents the findings of credible international observers and of journalists. It ignores vivid and shocking descriptions by eyewitnesses, including military experts, humanitarian workers, journalists, and senior representatives of the EU, UNRWA, and others, in favour of vague, nebulous statements which are unattributed, or attributed to sources that do not say them. It relies ''extremely'' heavily on a single TIME magazine piece, to which entire paragraphs of key information is sourced - yet it ghettoizes and downplays, or worse misrepresents, the findings of Human Rights Watch and Amnesty which conducted extensive investigations. And then it devotes space for the Anti-Defamation League to kick dirt on them - as if the ADL has a sliver of credibility here! | |||
| ::Let me end with one fact which sums it up. There isn't a ''single'' Palestinian quote in the article which describes their suffering here. Not one. Out of all the eyewitness testimony compiled by HRW, Amnesty, the P.A. submission to the UN report - ''not a single one''. ] 22:30, 30 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :There isn't a single quote describing Israeli emotions either, since this is an encyclopaedia article. We aren't interested in helicopters "swarming angrily", just facts. If there are any facts that you think aren't being included, then by all means point them out. <font style="color:#22AA00;">''']'''</font><font style="color:#888888;"><sup>]</sup></font> 02:13, 31 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::Which facts? Facts that have been fabricated? Facts that are attributed to sources that didn't say them? Facts that are actually POV opinions from involved groups? For example, I referenced the "fact" that "the IDF chose not to bomb the spots of resistance using aircraft in order to minimize civilian losses", and we've been debating the "fact" that "major human rights organizations maintained had taken place on both sides". The first "fact" is an official statement offered by the IDF and passed on as "fact", the second "fact" is an original-research misreading of sources which nobody has actually shown to use "war crimes" or "grave breaches of humanitarian law" when referring to the Palestinians in this battle. Why not address any of the points made here or above, instead of posturing. ] 18:01, 31 August 2007 (UTC) | |||
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| *'''Comment''' - considerable numbers of editors have been driven off this article in frustration by the complete failure to edit it to Misplaced Pages policy. The discussion on "what should be contained in the lead" come to the conclusion that the "context" contained therein did not belong there. So why have we not corrected this substantial problem? And why is it that people are deleting the "Totally disputed" tag from the article, when every portion of it is so POV (and much of it very badly written)? ] 11:10, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | *'''Comment''' - considerable numbers of editors have been driven off this article in frustration by the complete failure to edit it to Misplaced Pages policy. The discussion on "what should be contained in the lead" come to the conclusion that the "context" contained therein did not belong there. So why have we not corrected this substantial problem? And why is it that people are deleting the "Totally disputed" tag from the article, when every portion of it is so POV (and much of it very badly written)? ] 11:10, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | ||
| **'''comment to PR''' - PR, there are open subsections to both issues and it's a strange ] that you leave these messages on each and every subsection when you can simply talk on the open '''''and related''''' subsections. i'll help you out: (1) - (2) . please try to keep talk focused and related. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:22, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | **'''comment to PR''' - PR, there are open subsections to both issues and it's a strange ] that you leave these messages on each and every subsection when you can simply talk on the open '''''and related''''' subsections. i'll help you out: (1) - (2) . please try to keep talk focused and related. <b><font face="Arial" color="teal">]</font><font color="1F860E"><sup>'']''</sup></font></b> 16:22, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | ||
| ==POV-problems are one thing<s>, outright deception another</s>...== | |||
| Whoever keeps reinserting the following deception to the lead –<blockquote> | |||
| Palestinian and some international sources described the Israeli actions as indiscriminate and raised allegations of massacre, initially reported in the international media and subsequently rejected by outside observers, and of war crimes, '''which major human rights organizations maintained had taken place on both sides.'''</blockquote> | |||
| – please remove it, and restore the factual and sourced account, and restore whatever references need restoring.<s>, and stop insulting the intelligence and abusing the good faith of your fellow editors.</s> This issue has been settled beyond any reasonable doubt in the ]. <s>If the deception hasn't been removed by tomorrow, I'll do it, and thenceforth revert without comment any insertion of unsourced material to the lead.</s>--] 21:38, 3 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :I was going to apologise as I had unwittingly restored that with some other text. However an accusation of "outright deception" is a bit far - I remind you again that as frustrating as the goings-on here may at times be, that sort of tone does nothing to help the collaboration along. This is exactly the sort of atmosphere where we all need to weigh our words with utmost care. <font style="color:#22AA00;">''']'''</font><font style="color:#888888;"><sup>]</sup></font> 05:59, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::We do indeed need to weigh our words with the utmost care, especially in the mainspace. Incompetent and dishonest editing is the source of the frustration and the core of the trust issue, much more so than talk page tone.--] 04:41, 5 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::I cannot tell who is accused of war-crimes. The phrase "Palestinian does not adequately describe the sources who "described the Israeli actions as indiscriminate", and this has been noted and agreed before. appears to reinsert a weasel-worded version of what the ADL claimed, conflating the claim that "No massacre occured" (itself highly debatable) with claims that there were no atrocities. See . | |||
| ::Clearly, there are many other serious problems with this article, but corrections of the above would help a bit. ] 10:34, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::<s>Objecting to a verifiable source's direct quote? Honestly PR....</s> ] 10:41, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::The gist of PR's post is spot-on, Kyaa. Quotes like the ADL's strategically conflate the massacre allegations with "atrocities" more generally, in order to falsely suggest that the evidence for ''both'' the former and the latter were subsequently found wanting. This article, being a propaganda article, follows the ADL's lead; much of the edit-warring over the lead, for example, is a result of editors' efforts to deploy the same strategic conflation. PR is obviously no fool; stop patronizing him.--] 14:38, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| :::::<s>Indeed, he is not a fool in the same world that news articles stating that the media should be writing more articles retracting the allegations of massacres shows that a massacre occured when even HRW and AI say otherwise.</s> ] 15:14, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
| ::::::I think you need to read more carefully; you've badly misunderstood him, the several clarifications by both of us notwithstanding.--] 15:26, 4 September 2007 (UTC) | |||
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Malam Report (Hebrew)
I found this very interesting source, i thing we should add info from this to the article.. maybe i'll find time to do this soon, but i can't do it today.
main article: martyr city Attachments main: UNRWA terror supporter image sample attachment: translation and original
Jaakobou 16:43, 6 June 2007 (UTC)
Intro debate - Israeli explanation
I request people stop mass reverting based on "red lines", and address the issues properly.
in an attempt to get a little consensus, i open this first section (more will follow) in regards to how the intro should be written in regards to the Israeli reasoning for the operation.
User:G-Dett has suggested the following in regards to this matter:
- a) present the two competing accounts of the "context" for the battle; or b) relegate such contentious material to the "background" section where it probably belongs.
please select your preference pro A or pro B and give a reasoning. remember, this is not a popular vote and reasoning must be stated. In the chance that you have a question/opinion/thought, please state it on Talk:Battle of Jenin#AB comments.
p.s. try to keep it short and to the point. Jaakobou 20:39, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
i'd request all the active people to participate since reverting once this issue is resolved could be considered as disruptive.
pro A
- I totally support giving the Palestinian pretext to the battle in the intro. to be frank, i believed it was already stated that they considered the attack to be indiscriminate and raised allegations of massacre (was there another narrative i'm unaware of?) Jaakobou 20:39, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - "Pretext" and "context" are not even remotely the same thing. In this case "context" refers to the perceived reasons for the action. What you are describing ("indiscriminate, allegations of massacre") is not "context" but factual information about the events themselves. Conflating these two would be a serious mistake. Eleland 21:45, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - my stand is based on WP:LEAD, meaning that the massacre allegations are the only reason this battle was notable. Jaakobou 22:57, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment The massacre allegations are not the only reason this battle was notable. Documented Israeli war crimes was another. And there are several other reasons.--G-Dett 20:48, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - if you have documentation for this, i'd expect you to bring the documentation forward rather than claim notability without sources. Jaakobou 10:10, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment The massacre allegations are not the only reason this battle was notable. Documented Israeli war crimes was another. And there are several other reasons.--G-Dett 20:48, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - my stand is based on WP:LEAD, meaning that the massacre allegations are the only reason this battle was notable. Jaakobou 22:57, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - "Pretext" and "context" are not even remotely the same thing. In this case "context" refers to the perceived reasons for the action. What you are describing ("indiscriminate, allegations of massacre") is not "context" but factual information about the events themselves. Conflating these two would be a serious mistake. Eleland 21:45, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
pro B
- Even a bare minimum summary would tend to dominate the lede section, which ought to emphasize what actually happened in early April 2002, rather than perceived or proclaimed motives, objectives, etc. We ought simply to note that Jenin was one of many West Bank locales reoccupied in "Defensive Shield" at leave it at that. Issues of motive and justification often descend into "Israel said X, but Palestinians say Y, to which Israeli responded Z, which was countered by A, leading to accusations of B..." which is awkward in a main article section, but totally disastrous for readability of a lede. Eleland 21:13, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - As long as the references aren't broken, I'm ok with removing the details from the lead as long as context is firmly established. Kyaa the Catlord 22:43, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - is that your "vote" or just a comment? Jaakobou 22:50, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- Just a comment, for now. Kyaa the Catlord 23:11, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - is that your "vote" or just a comment? Jaakobou 22:50, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - As long as the references aren't broken, I'm ok with removing the details from the lead as long as context is firmly established. Kyaa the Catlord 22:43, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- Having a context doesn't really belong in the beginning of the article. I've looked at other battle and siege articles for guidance. Siege of Antwerp, Siege of Paris, Siege of Warsaw, Battle of the Bulge, as well as many other lesser known siege of -- articles. Sometimes in requests for comments, the question is not posed as pro-A or B because it tends to be divisive. Jerseycam 18:11, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - Battle of the Bulge seems to have quite a lot of pretext/context/etc. and two out of the other 3 are very much incomplete articles. Jaakobou 20:20, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - Battle of the Bulge has a lot of detail, but I don't see pretexts, justifications, casus belli, etc.--G-Dett 20:25, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - Battle of the Bulge seems to have quite a lot of pretext/context/etc. and two out of the other 3 are very much incomplete articles. Jaakobou 20:20, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
AB comments
- comment - we should probably mention in the background section that the wave of suicide bombings has it's pretexts in the Israeli-palestinian conflict but i don't find this notable enough within' the article to be given a bigger place on the intro than the events which actually led to the attack on jenin. note: i find that people stating the suicide attacks are the "official" reasoning for attacking jenin (in contrast to the conspiracy genocidal/sabra-shatila theories) insulting. Jaakobou 20:39, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- Comment - I object strenuously to any attempt to tar one side exclusively with accusations of "mass reversions". Clearly, certain "pro-Israel" editors have shown very little restraint in conducting reversions of their own, even to the extent of restoring broken English and weird phraseology - and yet they generally do not clearly indicate that their edits are reversions, which is contrary to best practice. Eleland 21:04, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - I specifically reverted most of the changes that you objected to above. My missing one hardly warrants this reply, especially given my attempts to ensure that your past neutral edits were preserved along with any changes I made. Tewfik 21:19, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply - i agree to some extent, but disagree as a whole considering the way things have been done; but mostly i disagree with the accusative polemics which will not help us move forward. regadless, i request you perhaps shorten your comment to my choice of pro A
and also consider moving it to this AB comments section.(i took the liberty to move a portion of your comment eleland, i hope you don't take offense by this) i am trying to stop the personal interactions and make everyone's opinions and ideas written down in an easy to follow way rather than the current debate mess we have. p.s. please let's focus not on polemics, but on just discussing the issues. Jaakobou 21:22, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - Your proposed "A" position would require us to say something like "Israel conducted what it termed a large-scale counter-terrorist operation after 100 Israelis were killed in a wave of suicide bombings, Palestinians called it a collective punishment designed to demoralize them and encourage their submission to Israeli military occupation ongoing since 1967" (I'm conjecturing on the Palestinian side, in the actual article we'd have to find proper sources.) Eleland 21:45, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- questions to Jerseycam - (1) what is your opinion about WP:LEAD? (2) was that note a vote for B or just commentary?
- reply - Regarding your question 1 to me, WP:LEAD is a style guideline. Regarding question 2, I'll try to put it in a diplomatic way. We all make commentary unless we simply write "I am for B" or "I am for A". Commentary is one of the purposes of the talk page. The fact that my commentary supports B and that it is under the B column would be factors that would allow a reasonable person reading the talk page to assume that I am voting for B. Jerseycam 07:50, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply - thank you for clarifying. Jaakobou 15:04, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply - Regarding your question 1 to me, WP:LEAD is a style guideline. Regarding question 2, I'll try to put it in a diplomatic way. We all make commentary unless we simply write "I am for B" or "I am for A". Commentary is one of the purposes of the talk page. The fact that my commentary supports B and that it is under the B column would be factors that would allow a reasonable person reading the talk page to assume that I am voting for B. Jerseycam 07:50, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
war crimes
to resolve the dispute about who did what and how the war crimes should be attributed i open this subsesction so that we can handle this dispute properly.
please add all sources relating to who did what either to Israeli war crimes, Palestinian war crimes, or Both were complicit, make your comments on the comments section.
note: please pay careful attention to who says what on your provided sources, don't misrepresent, and try to keep it short and easy to follow. Jaakobou 10:46, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
Israeli war crimes
- Palestinian report submitted to the Secretary-General -
- http://www.un.org/peace/jenin/
- relevant quote: Many credible sources have reported about atrocities committed... prima facie evidence of war crimes... it is probable that a massacre and a crime against humanity might have been committed... enhanced by the statements made at some point by the occupying forces... and their reported attempts to move bodies from the camp to what they referred to as the graveyards of the enemy.
- note: if you wish to expand/discuss on the palestinian part of this source in length, please start a new subsection. Jaakobou 10:46, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- http://www.un.org/peace/jenin/
Palestinian war crimes
Both were complicit
- http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/middle_east/2165272.stm
- UN - Report of the Secretary-General
- http://www.un.org/peace/jenin/
- relevant quote: 32. Of particular concern is the use, by combatants on both sides, of violence that placed civilians in harm's way. Much of the fighting during Operation Defensive Shield occurred in areas heavily populated by civilians, in large part because the armed Palestinian groups sought by IDF placed their combatants and installations among civilians. Palestinian groups are alleged to have widely booby-trapped civilian homes, acts targeted at IDF personnel but also putting civilians in danger. IDF is reported to have used bulldozers, tank shelling and rocket firing, at times from helicopters, in populated areas.
- note: if you wish to expand/discuss on the Secratery-General part of this source in length, please start a new subsection. Jaakobou 12:39, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
- http://www.un.org/peace/jenin/
war crimes comments
- comment - I will not enter a pseudo-vote on the grounds that it is ridiculous to subject clear questions of fact to such a process. It is abundantly clear that credible third party observers (Amnesty, HRW) only used the words "war crimes" or the legalistic equivalent "grave breaches " when describing Israeli actions in Jenin. Palestinian fighters were criticized for putting civilians in harm's way, but that is not the same as saying they were accused of war crimes. Much like the earlier "genocide" discussion, there seems to be a persistent confusion between editors' personal interpretations of claims made, and the actual claims. For example, the report listed under "both were complicit" simply doesn't use the phrase "war crimes" in any context at all. After several fairly deep Google searches (getting in to obscure Likudnik blogs and the like) I simply haven't found any accusations of "war crimes" or "grave breaches" by Palestinians during the battle, even by extremist partisans of Israel. In summary, there is no objective reason to discuss this at all. Eleland 12:31, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - Per Eleland, this is silly. Only one source has been listed under "Both were complicit," and this one source never mentions "war crimes." A while back Eleland wrote a version of the lead that handled the matter with elegant fairness: "Subsequent investigations by major human rights organizations found prima facie evidence of Israeli war crimes, while casting doubt on allegations of a deliberate massacre. Some investigations also criticized Palestinian fighters for operating in close proximity to civilians, but found that the only deliberate use of Palestinians as "human shields" was by Israel."--G-Dett 16:27, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - User:G-Dett, please go over the sources, you've just quoted a phrasing used by the palestinian submission to the UN, who also alleged on that submission a very large possibility for mass graves. I would add some extra commentary, but i suggest we not turn this into polemics and just expose the sources and what everyone said. Jaakobou 17:52, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- question - Um, huh? I quoted a sentence from Eleland's lead proposal above; the sentence is accurately sourced to Amnesty and Human Rights Watch. What are you talking about? And why are you talking about mass graves?--G-Dett 18:10, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply - please go over Talk:Battle_of_Jenin#Israeli_war_crimes. Jaakobou 19:31, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- Jaakobou, I don't know or care whether the phrase "prima facie evidence of war crimes" appeared in the Palestinan submission to the UN, but as I properly indicated in my preferred intro version, HRW said "There is a strong prima facie evidence that, in the cases noted below, IDF personnel committed grave breaches of the Geneva Conventions, or war crimes," and Amnesty said "In Jenin and Nablus the IDF carried out actions which violate international human rights and humanitarian law; some of these actions amount to grave breaches of the Fourth Geneva Convention relative to the Protection of Civilian Persons in Time of War of 1949 (the Fourth Geneva Convention) and are war crimes.". You'll note that I actually chose the less strongly worded of the two, "prima facie evidence" at least allowing the possibility that some subsequent investigation will disprove the evidence. By the way, can we stop with this comment and reply comment thing? It's not a straw poll. Eleland 21:25, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply - please go over Talk:Battle_of_Jenin#Israeli_war_crimes. Jaakobou 19:31, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- question - Um, huh? I quoted a sentence from Eleland's lead proposal above; the sentence is accurately sourced to Amnesty and Human Rights Watch. What are you talking about? And why are you talking about mass graves?--G-Dett 18:10, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - User:G-Dett, please go over the sources, you've just quoted a phrasing used by the palestinian submission to the UN, who also alleged on that submission a very large possibility for mass graves. I would add some extra commentary, but i suggest we not turn this into polemics and just expose the sources and what everyone said. Jaakobou 17:52, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - Per Eleland, this is silly. Only one source has been listed under "Both were complicit," and this one source never mentions "war crimes." A while back Eleland wrote a version of the lead that handled the matter with elegant fairness: "Subsequent investigations by major human rights organizations found prima facie evidence of Israeli war crimes, while casting doubt on allegations of a deliberate massacre. Some investigations also criticized Palestinian fighters for operating in close proximity to civilians, but found that the only deliberate use of Palestinians as "human shields" was by Israel."--G-Dett 16:27, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - this is not a vote, this is a summary of the refs as we have and some categorization of them so that we can have a clearer image on who said what and each person can make a more knowledgeable assessment that is not only based on hunches and preconceived beliefs. please add your references and try to keep commentary short and easy to follow. Jaakobou 17:52, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - How's this for short and easy to follow: you've provided no sourced references to Palestinian war crimes, and there don't appear to be any.--G-Dett 18:04, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply - the reference section is incomplete, i've started it out for the other editors to work on. please focus on improving this talk section so we can move forward with this dispute. Jaakobou 19:23, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - How's this for short and easy to follow: you've provided no sourced references to Palestinian war crimes, and there don't appear to be any.--G-Dett 18:04, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - Generally speaking, a dispute involves two or more sides making a case and presenting evidence for it, rather than one side making a case and asking the other side to provide evidence for it "so we can move forward". Quite simply, nether G-Dett nor I have found any sources which accuse Palestinians of war crimes - the closest I could find was a really slipshod pro-Israel blog which ranted about "UN complicity in war crimes" on the basis that UNRWA was running schools and hospitals in Jenin, so they should be able to forcibly prevent Islamic Jihad from running cells in the camp, but it was a reference to suicide bombings and not to the actual battle. The way to "move forward" would be to avoid raising spurious disputes which do not exist in the source material, which is abundant and clear. Eleland 19:31, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - it would be helpful if you focus on what you can contribute rather than what you can't. Jaakobou 19:34, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- Wow, Jaakobou, you said it. It would be nice if I could focus on positive contributions. Unfortunately, I can't make them — or rather, I can make them but I will be reverted on shabby pretexts within hours. And on the talk page, I can't make positive contributions because they keep getting bogged down with spurious disputes which do not exist in the source material. I'll say it one more time: No sources have been found, nor by all evidence do any reliable sources exist, which accuse the Palestinian side in the Battle of Jenin of committing war crimes. Eleland 21:38, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - it would be helpful if you focus on what you can contribute rather than what you can't. Jaakobou 19:34, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
Genocide II
as i've stated before, i intended to leave this issue out until i make a deeper inspection. i present some sources and hope to hear some perspectives and opinions on these sources. Jaakobou 04:51, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
sources
1) (translated) , (original)
- "The cry of distress : Israeli army committed genocide in the Jenin refugee"
- "often to the point of genocide, the deliberate, as in "Gaza" recently In the Jenin refugee camp"
- "What happened in Jenin was genocide undoubtedly"
4) Jeningrad: what the british media said
g-comments
(struck my comment, I didn't notice the Google translations - will comment again shortly) Eleland 11:33, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
0) Thanks for the effort to find sources.
1) Google machine translations are unreliable, although in at least one case the author is clearly discussing genocide, this is not clear in all 3.
2) We need to know who these sources are; are they reprints of print media or just some websites? If they're print, what kind of circulation and influence do they have? If they're websites, is there any exceptional reason to believe they are significant? Eleland 12:00, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
Wikiquette alert
I have reported this "stressful situation" in order "to seek perspective, advice, informal mediation, or a referral to a more appropriate forum." See the relevant section.
I realize I've posted a rather long summary, and that many editors will want to jump in with at least as much information. I suggest that you hold off for now and just post it here, or to your own talk page, I don't want the Wikiquette people to get swamped. I strongly suspect this issue is heading towards formal mediation; your extensive submissions will be very welcome there. Eleland 13:43, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
- i'm happy to see you've taken a civilized approach to this. Jaakobou 13:55, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
- Well done, User:Eleland. There is a ridiculous amount of good material been edit-warred out of this article (I've listed 10 or so items somewhere), while very, very poor material has been shoveled in. The whole layout is wrong, with "Body Count Estimations" as a complete section with sub-section "Post-fighting investigations" - but it's been edit-warred back in like that.
- Here's something I've never shared with you before - the lead we're using is fundamentally wrong. It contains "context" of a form that's never normally included. I checked the following: Siege of Antwerp, Siege of Florence (1529-1530), Siege of Gaeta (2 of them), Battle of Jerusalem (1917), Siege of Jerusalem (1187), Siege of Jerusalem (1099), Siege of Jerusalem (637), Siege of Jerusalem (70), First Siege of Krujë, Second Siege of Krujë, Third Siege of Krujë, Fourth Siege of Krujë, Siege of Kirrha, Siege of Paris, Siege of Rhodes (1480), Siege of Rhodes (1522), Battle of Seringapatam, Battle of Sevastopol, Siege of Sevastopol (1854-1855) and Siege of Warsaw. There are only two places I've found "context" of the form this article has, one is Siege of Jerusalem (1948) (I wonder why that should be?). The other is the historical Siege of Rhodes - perhaps because the only accounts we have are used as "texts" in language teaching, so this POV "context" is all we've really got. PalestineRemembered 17:06, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
- PS - there was a previous attempt to put part of this matter to the community (over the CAMERA reference). That discussion was immediately overwhelmed by people from the discussion here, led by one of the very most experienced editors of all, who should most certainly have known better. I trust that will not happen again. PalestineRemembered 17:13, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
pallywood
i'm starting up a section regarding this dispute over the "see also" inclusion/exclusion of the Pallywood article.
feel free to give your commentary regarding your position on this issue in the following subsections, try to keep it short and to the point. for generic commentary/questions leave your comment on the proper subsection. Jaakobou 23:49, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
include pallywood
- i'm surprised someone is contesting that "the big jenin lie" is not referred to as events (allegedly) staged by Palestinians to portray Israel in an unfavorable light. Jaakobou 23:49, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
- comment - See WP:UNDUE. If you want to include a section on how both Israelis and Palestinians (and their respective supporters) have exploited Jenin for propaganda purposes, that could be done. Let's do it cooperatively, and with an eye to WP:NPOV. In the meantime, let's not insert an insinuating link to a decidedly marginal term that many consider offensive if not downright racist. "Pallywood" is used by a handful of right-wing bloggers, and to most educated ears sounds like "Jew York Times."--G-Dett 00:12, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - (1) this battle has been noted as one of the most prime examples of pallywood. (2) the "Pallywood: According to Palestinian Sources" film includes footage of residents of jenin having fake funerals as part of their "jenin massacre" propaganda push. it could be written in, but for now no reason to exclude from "see also". Jaakobou 02:01, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- See reply below.--G-Dett 16:51, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - (1) this battle has been noted as one of the most prime examples of pallywood. (2) the "Pallywood: According to Palestinian Sources" film includes footage of residents of jenin having fake funerals as part of their "jenin massacre" propaganda push. it could be written in, but for now no reason to exclude from "see also". Jaakobou 02:01, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- comment - See WP:UNDUE. If you want to include a section on how both Israelis and Palestinians (and their respective supporters) have exploited Jenin for propaganda purposes, that could be done. Let's do it cooperatively, and with an eye to WP:NPOV. In the meantime, let's not insert an insinuating link to a decidedly marginal term that many consider offensive if not downright racist. "Pallywood" is used by a handful of right-wing bloggers, and to most educated ears sounds like "Jew York Times."--G-Dett 00:12, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- Just as NPOV as including Jenin, Jenin. Keep it or lose both. Kyaa the Catlord 06:02, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
exclude pallywood
p - comments / questions
- comment by Eleland 1 - Please learn to use Google. The search "brutal+Israeli+terrorism" returns 1.52 million GHits; "brutal Israeli terrorism" as a phrase returns 289. Similarily, the search "big jenin lie" as a phrase return 245 GHits, almost all of which trace back to a single opinion editorial in an extremely partisan magazine. It is difficult to see how "Pallywood", the supposed phenomenon of Palestinians staging events in front of world cameras, could apply to an event which became subject of great consternation specifically because no international press were there to record it. Eleland 01:29, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply - we've been though this on ], the way this battle has been tagged by people who allege this is a prime example of pallywood is quite clear. Jaakobou 02:08, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- comment by Eleland 2 - Please stop attempting to structure the conversation with these headers. As you must know, it is not on editors to provide reasons to exclude material; rather the burden of proof is on those who want to include it. Eleland 01:31, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply - pardon me for trying to resolve issues seriously. Jaakobou 02:08, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment (to Jaakobou 02:01, 3 September 2007 above) - Slow down, and explain to me why an article on the siege of Jenin, an event of major importance in the second intifada, an event that drew and continues to draw massive international attention, should be 'see-also' linked to an obscure propaganda term from the right-wing pro-Israel blogosphere, taken in turn from the title of an obscure American propaganda film about alleged propaganda on the part of Palestinians. I fail to see the logic. This is a serious article, not a provincial parade for Wikipedians on hobby horses.--G-Dett 04:04, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply - see my reply from before. Jaakobou 06:11, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- continued - I have seen your reply from before. It does not address the general violation of WP:NPOV, or the specific violation of WP:UNDUE. Nor does it respond to the suggestion that we tackle the issue of propaganda on both sides in a balanced, neutral, and serious way using high-quality sources, instead of providing a promotional link to an obscure propaganda film.--G-Dett 14:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply - i think i've explained my perspective in regards to UNDUE, and considering the neologism is non NPOV by definition, then that is resolved also (from my perspective). the issue of propaganda from both sides is being dealt with as seriously as possible considering the voices involved on this article. to the new point, i think your perspective, on how obscure the term is, is incorrect. p.s. please keep long opinion based questions off the main part so that people can follow the debate easily. Jaakobou 16:17, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- continued - Huh? My "perspective" that the "term" Pallywood is obscure is based on the fact that the article Pallywood, whose editors are decidedly enthusiastic about the word, has only been able to find 16 citations where the word is even referenced, and these citations include the blog of the man who coined it, as well as a usenet thread (!) where someone says it off-handedly and then applauds his own cleverness. Some "neologism." My perspective that the film "Pallywood" is obscure is based on the fact that it is not registered in the exhaustive IMDB database, had no proper distribution deal, is not available through Netflix, is not available in any research library I can find, and appears to be referenced only be its right-wing blogger-fans and a very few (as in five or six) back-page feature articles which note it in passing. I am curious if you can give me the basis of your perspective that "Pallywood" is "NPOV by definition" (!) – an assertion which strikes me as outlandish at best. Do you also think "Jew York Times" is NPOV by definition? That's a rhetorical question, but I am seriously trying to follow what seems to me a most idiosyncratic line of reasoning.--G-Dett 16:43, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply - (1) i stated: the neologism is non NPOV by definition. (2) i don't think this is the proper subsection to discuss how reliable and considering this is an 18 minute "production", i really don't know why you mention IMDB. (3) if you really want to make a "jew york times" article (as might be construed from your commentary), you're invited to do so. Jaakobou 17:03, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply (1) Sorry, I missed that. I guess I don't see why you're advocating we foreground it then. (2) Reliability (WP:RS) is another thing, what I'm talking about is WP:UNDUE, and the film's manifest obscurity is certainly relevant in that regard. IMDB is, so far as I know, exhaustive, and it includes both "short" and "documentary" as categories. That Pallywood is missing from it forms part of a cumulative picture of its obscurity; as I noted, the film is not available through any research library I know of, nor does Netflix stock it. Significant documentary works, even short ones, are routinely purchased by research universities; not this one. There are also distribution companies that specialize in independent documentary shorts; to my knowledge Pallywood is not available through any of these. I don't know if it's reliable because I haven't seen it, and I don't know how I would see it if I wanted to. Would I write to CAMERA? Search limewire for an illegal download? When I do a search for "Pallywood" in the complete historical archives of the New York Times, the database's droll response is priceless, and neatly sums up the situation: "No documents found for: pallywood. Did you mean: plywood?" (3) I am confident that no literate person who knows a reductio ad absurdum when she sees it will confuse my posts as advocating the creation of "Jew York Times." You may be interested to know that I do endorse the existence of the Pallywood article. I am an inclusionist, and someone might stumble on the concept in his daily digest of right-wing blogs, and wish to know its history; whereas "Jew York Times" is a self-explanatory slur, and a nonce phrase with no traced or traceable history that I know of. "Pallywood" and "Jew York Times" are very close in their essential vulgarity, of course, but in my book they straddle the lower threshold of notability, with the former just clearing it and the latter just missing it. There are secondary sources for the former, only primary sources for the latter. It wouldn't take much, mind you, to push "Jew York Times" over the line where it could join its cousin; a couple of secondary sources mentioning the term would be all that's needed (quote farms assembled from primary sources are OR). But even if Jew York Times were to meet the threshold of notability, perhaps with a nasty little film, discussion of which percolated through the blogosphere, I still think it would be extremely inappropriate to link to it from articles on episodes in the I-P conflict, citing the flimsy grounds that said film mentioned said episode. Similarly, to link from an article on a prominent and historically significant event like the siege of Jenin, to an article on a ugly little obscurity like Pallywood, is a violation of WP:UNDUE, for reasons I hope and trust are growing obvious.--G-Dett 17:53, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply - you can watch it here... google is your friend. Jaakobou 04:06, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for the link. I watched it. It's garden variety conspiracy-theory mongering, with a dose of racism and sleazy innuendo thrown in.--G-Dett 18:19, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- (1) i don't think it's (a) racist film or (b) conspiracy theory or (c) obscure either. (2) please stop reverting this film out, its done in poor form when you present it as part of a sequential edit while making statements on the films supposed unavailability (per I don't know if it's reliable because I haven't seen it, and I don't know how I would see it if I wanted to.). Jaakobou 13:47, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for the link. I watched it. It's garden variety conspiracy-theory mongering, with a dose of racism and sleazy innuendo thrown in.--G-Dett 18:19, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply - you can watch it here... google is your friend. Jaakobou 04:06, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply (1) Sorry, I missed that. I guess I don't see why you're advocating we foreground it then. (2) Reliability (WP:RS) is another thing, what I'm talking about is WP:UNDUE, and the film's manifest obscurity is certainly relevant in that regard. IMDB is, so far as I know, exhaustive, and it includes both "short" and "documentary" as categories. That Pallywood is missing from it forms part of a cumulative picture of its obscurity; as I noted, the film is not available through any research library I know of, nor does Netflix stock it. Significant documentary works, even short ones, are routinely purchased by research universities; not this one. There are also distribution companies that specialize in independent documentary shorts; to my knowledge Pallywood is not available through any of these. I don't know if it's reliable because I haven't seen it, and I don't know how I would see it if I wanted to. Would I write to CAMERA? Search limewire for an illegal download? When I do a search for "Pallywood" in the complete historical archives of the New York Times, the database's droll response is priceless, and neatly sums up the situation: "No documents found for: pallywood. Did you mean: plywood?" (3) I am confident that no literate person who knows a reductio ad absurdum when she sees it will confuse my posts as advocating the creation of "Jew York Times." You may be interested to know that I do endorse the existence of the Pallywood article. I am an inclusionist, and someone might stumble on the concept in his daily digest of right-wing blogs, and wish to know its history; whereas "Jew York Times" is a self-explanatory slur, and a nonce phrase with no traced or traceable history that I know of. "Pallywood" and "Jew York Times" are very close in their essential vulgarity, of course, but in my book they straddle the lower threshold of notability, with the former just clearing it and the latter just missing it. There are secondary sources for the former, only primary sources for the latter. It wouldn't take much, mind you, to push "Jew York Times" over the line where it could join its cousin; a couple of secondary sources mentioning the term would be all that's needed (quote farms assembled from primary sources are OR). But even if Jew York Times were to meet the threshold of notability, perhaps with a nasty little film, discussion of which percolated through the blogosphere, I still think it would be extremely inappropriate to link to it from articles on episodes in the I-P conflict, citing the flimsy grounds that said film mentioned said episode. Similarly, to link from an article on a prominent and historically significant event like the siege of Jenin, to an article on a ugly little obscurity like Pallywood, is a violation of WP:UNDUE, for reasons I hope and trust are growing obvious.--G-Dett 17:53, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply - (1) i stated: the neologism is non NPOV by definition. (2) i don't think this is the proper subsection to discuss how reliable and considering this is an 18 minute "production", i really don't know why you mention IMDB. (3) if you really want to make a "jew york times" article (as might be construed from your commentary), you're invited to do so. Jaakobou 17:03, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- continued - Huh? My "perspective" that the "term" Pallywood is obscure is based on the fact that the article Pallywood, whose editors are decidedly enthusiastic about the word, has only been able to find 16 citations where the word is even referenced, and these citations include the blog of the man who coined it, as well as a usenet thread (!) where someone says it off-handedly and then applauds his own cleverness. Some "neologism." My perspective that the film "Pallywood" is obscure is based on the fact that it is not registered in the exhaustive IMDB database, had no proper distribution deal, is not available through Netflix, is not available in any research library I can find, and appears to be referenced only be its right-wing blogger-fans and a very few (as in five or six) back-page feature articles which note it in passing. I am curious if you can give me the basis of your perspective that "Pallywood" is "NPOV by definition" (!) – an assertion which strikes me as outlandish at best. Do you also think "Jew York Times" is NPOV by definition? That's a rhetorical question, but I am seriously trying to follow what seems to me a most idiosyncratic line of reasoning.--G-Dett 16:43, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply - i think i've explained my perspective in regards to UNDUE, and considering the neologism is non NPOV by definition, then that is resolved also (from my perspective). the issue of propaganda from both sides is being dealt with as seriously as possible considering the voices involved on this article. to the new point, i think your perspective, on how obscure the term is, is incorrect. p.s. please keep long opinion based questions off the main part so that people can follow the debate easily. Jaakobou 16:17, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- continued - I have seen your reply from before. It does not address the general violation of WP:NPOV, or the specific violation of WP:UNDUE. Nor does it respond to the suggestion that we tackle the issue of propaganda on both sides in a balanced, neutral, and serious way using high-quality sources, instead of providing a promotional link to an obscure propaganda film.--G-Dett 14:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- reply - see my reply from before. Jaakobou 06:11, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
offtopic
Please stop re-structuring the discussion, moving comments around, and adding headers to comments. I am becoming progressively more upset with this behavior. I do not believe you intend to manipulate opinion by this procedure, but it nonetheless could have the effect. There is no reason for it. Please stop. Eleland 02:18, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- i believe i explained the reason, and i find your commentary for this in an unrelated subsection unhelpful. Jaakobou 03:03, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- Comment - considerable numbers of editors have been driven off this article in frustration by the complete failure to edit it to Misplaced Pages policy. The discussion on "what should be contained in the lead" come to the conclusion that the "context" contained therein did not belong there. So why have we not corrected this substantial problem? And why is it that people are deleting the "Totally disputed" tag from the article, when every portion of it is so POV (and much of it very badly written)? PalestineRemembered 11:10, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
- comment to PR - PR, there are open subsections to both issues and it's a strange soapbox that you leave these messages on each and every subsection when you can simply talk on the open and related subsections. i'll help you out: (1) Intro debate - Israeli explanation - (2) "Totally disputed". please try to keep talk focused and related. Jaakobou 16:22, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
Mediation
I would like to put out feelers for a comprehensive mediation. I do not see the possibility of further communication or collaboration without an effective intermediary.--G-Dett 04:46, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- i've no problem with more editors getting more familiar with the material and giving their input. Jaakobou 10:13, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- More editors would be great, especially if they were brought here through a legitimate RfC (as opposed to Sm8900's targeted recruitment of partisans). But I'm talking about something different, the need for formal mediation.--G-Dett 11:40, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
Please try not to delude yourself into believing there is a cabal and remember the world is not out to get you.Kyaa the Catlord 12:17, 5 September 2007 (UTC)- Kyaa, please don't put words in my mouth and please don't create strawman diversions. I don't believe in cabals and haven't suggested the existence of one, as you know very well. I have no patience for conspiracy theories, but even less patience for the phony attribution of conspiracy theories to one's opponent as a means of gaining rhetorical advantage – so please do give that a rest, Kyaa, it only further erodes good faith. As I said, I think we need mediation because of a breakdown in trust and basic communication. The latest edit war neatly encapsulates the impasse we find ourselves in. Human rights organizations found "no evidence of massacre in Jenin but strong prima facie evidence of Israeli war crimes." These are their words. Jaakobou likes the first finding but dislikes the second, so he's cropping the material accordingly and edit-warring to maintain his whitewash. It has been explained in copious, patient detail on this page why this is unacceptable, but
it is literally impossible to engage him in a serious discussion of this. It's not as if he articulately disagrees;he justwrites inane nonsenseresponds with non sequiturs like "prima facie is weasel words and cherry-picking," and reverts to his cherry-picked version of HR groups' findings, weasel-worded so the reader can't tell whose war crimes they found prima facie evidence for. That kind of editing just shows absolute and utter contempt for the intelligence of his fellow editors, and for core content policy. You know this, I know this, everybody here knows this. And yet not once have you or Tewfik or Steve reverted any of Jaakobou'sinaneindefensible edits; for what appear to be partisan reasons you let them stand, and what happens is you effectively come to represent a bloc vote beholden to your lowest common denominator. What this means is that even when you and I can work together to improve the article, as we did yesterday, Jaakobou can then come in and revert it to something we all know is ridiculous and indefensible, and you won't call him on it. Thus begins another sterile round of partisan revert-warring. If you were willing to break ranks when the content issue is as unequivocal as this one is, it would be possible to make progress, however slow and wearying. But if you are not willing to break ranks with Jaakobou when he makes propagandistic edits with edit summaries that are a direct affront to common sense, then we're left with formal mediation the only way forward.--G-Dett 13:04, 5 September 2007 (UTC)You claim that smwhatever is out recruiting partisans, but omg, we're getting so swamped by them aren't we? It is not as if PR isn't just as guilty as trying to lure people here to meatpuppet for him. I can provide links if you desire. :PKyaa the Catlord 13:19, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- Kyaa, please don't put words in my mouth and please don't create strawman diversions. I don't believe in cabals and haven't suggested the existence of one, as you know very well. I have no patience for conspiracy theories, but even less patience for the phony attribution of conspiracy theories to one's opponent as a means of gaining rhetorical advantage – so please do give that a rest, Kyaa, it only further erodes good faith. As I said, I think we need mediation because of a breakdown in trust and basic communication. The latest edit war neatly encapsulates the impasse we find ourselves in. Human rights organizations found "no evidence of massacre in Jenin but strong prima facie evidence of Israeli war crimes." These are their words. Jaakobou likes the first finding but dislikes the second, so he's cropping the material accordingly and edit-warring to maintain his whitewash. It has been explained in copious, patient detail on this page why this is unacceptable, but
- Interesting non sequitur. OK, I guess I will call your bluff. Where does PR canvass for meatpuppets? And why did you say I "claimed" that Sm8900 is recruiting partisans – is that in dispute? He asked Jayjg, Amoruso, GHCool, Nadav1, and Humus sapiens to come and edit this article, and then swore up and down that their political opinions – I'm not joking or making this up – never even entered his head, that he chose them because they are "reliable editors."--G-Dett 13:25, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- By the way, the actual fact is that i asked them only to add this article to their watchlist, and asked them to read the talk page sometime, and did NOT ask for anything more than that. that may be a small distinction, but given your allegations, it now seems like a rather large distinction. --Steve, Sm8900 16:26, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- I do not see any distinction there, large or small.--G-Dett 16:32, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- By the way, the actual fact is that i asked them only to add this article to their watchlist, and asked them to read the talk page sometime, and did NOT ask for anything more than that. that may be a small distinction, but given your allegations, it now seems like a rather large distinction. --Steve, Sm8900 16:26, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
Here we have PR asking for help with his edit war from someone he feels would be supportive of his causes. Here we have PR asking me to write on his behalf about the Kurdi Bear. These are just two examples of PR asking other editors to do his work for him, which is meatpuppetry.Kyaa the Catlord 13:34, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- Bluff called, bluff exposed. What an absolute waste of time.
The idea that HG could be someone's meatpuppet is shockingly idiotic, Kyaa. You owe HG and PR an apology for that stupidity. As for the idea that PR is trying to recruit you as a meatpuppet .... just too plain stupid for words, Kyaa.--G-Dett 13:47, 5 September 2007 (UTC)And you owe pretty much everyone on your list an apology for assuming bad faith and for libelously labelling them as "partisans". Jayjg is a bloody arbiter of wikipedia, now that's a fine fish to canvass. What next? Are you going to suggest that I conspired with administrators to break 3rr?Kyaa the Catlord 13:50, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
Your bluff was idiotic, Kyaa, and your attempt to wriggle out of it on getting caught is embarrassing and degrading.To reiterate the point of this section, we need mediation.--G-Dett 13:56, 5 September 2007 (UTC)Maybe we need arbitration. Oh wait, the arbiters are partisans! Hahahah. Victim card much? Seriously, if you want to be taken seriously, maybe you shouldn't go around labelling 3rr infractions by "people on your side" as uncontroversial edits.Kyaa the Catlord 13:57, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- Jay is no longer on Arbcom, and his SPA has been inactive since August 4.
Cut this victim BS, Kyaa, and stop groping for a new angle every time you get stuck.The point of mediation is not that a grownup comes in and settles things; it's that a neutral party mediates the discussion, making progress possible between editors who do not trust or respect one another.--G-Dett 14:08, 5 September 2007 (UTC)Hey, it would be so much easier if your "side" didn't make ludicrous claims that simply do not reflect the source material, for example, PR's "massacre" section. I know its hard to set aside wishful thinking, but seriously, sometimes the claims here are laughable. Oh yes, and lets not forget that AI and HRW are nonpartisan groups who do not work from a biased POV at all.Kyaa the Catlord 14:20, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- But PR's "massacre section" was something you simply misunderstood, and even when it was explained to you've carried on misrepresenting it. I have also explained in detail why Amnesty and HRW are not "partisan" in the way organizations like the ADL and CAMERA and Justice for Palestine are partisan. The problem is, Kyaa, that I post detailed arguments that answer your objections point by point, and
you respond with inert, unresponsive, and repetitive little teenagey witticisms like "Did you seriously just say HRW and AI are non partisan?"your responses to which show no evidence that you've read them.You've only rarely shown signs of having read and attempted to engage counter-arguments on this page.It's for this reason that I cannot credit you with muchintellectual seriousness ordesire to collaborate with other editors to improve the article.And I certainly don't intend to squander any more time explaining edits to you.If we had a formal mediator, there would still be a line of communication between us as editors, which I think would be enormously helpful.--G-Dett 15:06, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- More editors would be great, especially if they were brought here through a legitimate RfC (as opposed to Sm8900's targeted recruitment of partisans). But I'm talking about something different, the need for formal mediation.--G-Dett 11:40, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- There should not be continuing onoging discussion of which side committed "massacres" or war crimes. That is insane, irrational, and the road to continuing edit wars. the only thing we should actually discuss here is what actually happened, based on verifiable, neutral sources. --Steve, Sm8900 19:12, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- Steve, the verifiable, neutral sources say that there was no evidence for massacres of Palestinians, but strong prima facie evidence of Israeli war crimes nevertheless. Jaakabou wants to crop these findings – that is, to raise the former into strong relief and blur over or cut out the latter. I want to present the verifiable, neutral sources straightforwardly, and in their own terms. That's the debate.--G-Dett 19:26, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- There should not be continuing onoging discussion of which side committed "massacres" or war crimes. That is insane, irrational, and the road to continuing edit wars. the only thing we should actually discuss here is what actually happened, based on verifiable, neutral sources. --Steve, Sm8900 19:12, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- I appreciate your reply. however, I would say, respectfully, there is no such thing as "evidence of war crimes" in regards to an entry on a historical event. How about discussing "war crimes" in the articles on America's treatment of the Indians, or Palestinian terrorism, or Britiain in India. How long would a discussion last there which insisted on throwing around that term, or anything similar? Here at Misplaced Pages, we do not collect, accumulate or document evidence against one side or the other. the only thing which belongs in this article is a clear retelling of events. if you want to discuss evidence of Israel war crimes, or any finding by an international body, advoacy group, or wahtchdog organizations,then I would suggest going over to Human rights in Israel. --Steve, Sm8900 19:56, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- Steve, let me get this straight. Are you saying we should strip the article way down, and say nothing at all about either the massacre allegations (which were dismissed) and the war crimes allegations (which were confirmed)? If so, that's quite a radical proposal, and one with which I respectfully disagree. Because Jenin was sealed from the outside world during the entire siege, the truth about what happened there unfolded gradually and dramatically in the world's eyes. Indeed the event is notable in large part because of the drama and contested significance of that unfolding. If on the other hand you're proposing that we present only a partial account of that unfolding, emphasizing the part dealing with revised body counts and rejected massacre claims, and selectively citing expert findings to support that partial account, then I reject that, for the reasons I've so painstakingly laid out, and which have yet to be challenged by any editor on this page.--G-Dett 20:26, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- I appreciate your reply. however, I would say, respectfully, there is no such thing as "evidence of war crimes" in regards to an entry on a historical event. How about discussing "war crimes" in the articles on America's treatment of the Indians, or Palestinian terrorism, or Britiain in India. How long would a discussion last there which insisted on throwing around that term, or anything similar? Here at Misplaced Pages, we do not collect, accumulate or document evidence against one side or the other. the only thing which belongs in this article is a clear retelling of events. if you want to discuss evidence of Israel war crimes, or any finding by an international body, advoacy group, or wahtchdog organizations,then I would suggest going over to Human rights in Israel. --Steve, Sm8900 19:56, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
G-Dett and others – Greetings. I’d like to make two suggestions regarding your interest in mediation. Perhaps these will be useful.
- First, it’s common to ask the parties to clarify the request for mediation. It may sound a bit daunting to say you need a “comprehensive mediation.” What are the particular editing issues at stake? In a few words, what’s the status of each issue? One way to proceed – let each person list the editing issues they consider worth mediating. Maybe people also could order the list according to predicted ease of resolution, but also rank their personal priorities. (You can peek at each other’s list, but don’t argue or comment on them.) I took the liberty of setting up this page to help you engage is such a process. Kyaa and Jaakobou (Eleland etc) don’t know me, so perhaps this won’t your cup of tea. But I do hope G-Dett will try this out, esp since you posed the mediation idea, or at least let me know (on my Talk) why not.
- Second, it might be less daunting to a mediator if you could make interim progress in modulating the inter-personal dynamics. For starters, if you don’t mind my saying so, there is a fair amount of arguing, accusing and insulting that isn’t necessary for editing. So, I recommend that you go back and
strikeout(not delete) any of your own comments this week that may be construed as sarcastic, uncivil, assuming bad faith, not very nice, etc. Even if it doesn’t win over a mediator, it may generate some good will here. Again, Kyaa and Jaakobou don’t know me, but I do feel somehow that I should expect such self-editing of G-Dett, Steve, and PalestineRemembered. (So if you choose not to do so, please explain on my Talk page.)
Thanks for hearing me out. Regardless of these suggestions, I hope things go more smoothly for you all. HG | Talk 20:31, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- I am loading a half-gallon of ink into my red pen, and will then take it to my comments above until RSI sets in.--G-Dett 21:04, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- LOL, thanks, wouldn't want you wrist to get
inert and unresponsive fromrepetitive strain! HG | Talk 21:40, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- LOL, thanks, wouldn't want you wrist to get
- I am loading a half-gallon of ink into my red pen, and will then take it to my comments above until RSI sets in.--G-Dett 21:04, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- I am not saying to remove the allegations. I am saying to stop using the phrase "war crimes." I assume you are talking about a specific event. Is that true? Fine, then simply refer to that event. In other words, if the allegation were that Israel committed a war crime by destroying widgets (just using a neutral phrase here; not being flippant); then you should say "Steve, i want this article to include allegations about Israel's needless destruction of widgets."
- The issue here is that use of these labels is making it hard for some of us to focus on or to actually discuss what events or acts of Israel you are referring to. If you mean several events, then that's fine; we're still better off referring to them specifically, rather than trying to lump them all under one label, wheher "war crimes" "military actions" or any other label or blanket term. thanks. --Steve, Sm8900 20:49, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- Just to be clear, so you're saying no reference to "massacres" alleged and retracted either?--G-Dett 21:02, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- I have little to add. I guess I am saying no reference to those things. I would rather let others more knowledgable deal with the actual details of specific events. --Steve, Sm8900 21:11, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- It would be a shame to exclude you from editing this article simply because you know nothing about the topic. PalestineRemembered 21:20, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I have little to add. I guess I am saying no reference to those things. I would rather let others more knowledgable deal with the actual details of specific events. --Steve, Sm8900 21:11, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- Just to be clear, so you're saying no reference to "massacres" alleged and retracted either?--G-Dett 21:02, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- The issue here is that use of these labels is making it hard for some of us to focus on or to actually discuss what events or acts of Israel you are referring to. If you mean several events, then that's fine; we're still better off referring to them specifically, rather than trying to lump them all under one label, wheher "war crimes" "military actions" or any other label or blanket term. thanks. --Steve, Sm8900 20:49, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
- FYI. PalestineRemembered put in his list of issues. Do you want to track developments here? Place this note above, as you all deem fit. Thanks and good luck. HG | Talk 23:59, 5 September 2007 (UTC)
Along with contributing my suggestions to HG's list of issues for ways forward with this article, I notified ArbCom of the damage done to this TalkPage by Steve, Sm8900, see here. PalestineRemembered 22:38, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
I've pointed out a number of times how the "kurdi bear" material is misleading due to a distortion of context, and so I don't understand why it would again be added. Similarly, the outwardly unimportant "some" keep getting removed, however our previous discussions showed that sources like the UN and NGOs refused to use the word indiscriminate without reverting to external quotations or other qualification, and that only the Spanish/EU report was clear in the charge, hence it is still misleading to present the charge as representative of "international sources". I hope to see lots of red ink up to this point, and hopefully none after it. Tewfik 09:12, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I gather that Tewfik is identifying 1-2 issues for potential mediation. Is that right? HG | Talk 11:44, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I think the problem is much more systemic than that, HG. It has to do with the approach to sourcing and NPOV, and it has corrupted every part of this article, from the title and the lead down to the very structure of the article, and every single section within it.
- I have gone through and struck my gratuitous remarks above. But tone is only one issue here, and it shouldn't be invoked talismanically to ward off criticism of systematic violations of NPOV.--G-Dett 19:23, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I'm tired of striking stuff and have been up for 20 hours now. I'm crashing before I start making mistakes. Kyaa the Catlord 00:47, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
Removal of {{TotallyDisputed}} - round II
- previous related talk can be found here round I - sep. 11 static]
the following is an attempt to resolve the long standing dispute of the inclusion/exclusion of the {{TotallyDisputed}} tag at the top of the article.
for now, there are three subsections -
(1) opinions about the tag - keep/exclude
(2) issues i'd like to see resolved
(3) questions and notes
-- Jaakobou 08:58, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
opinions about the tag - keep/exclude
- please state your opinion in a brief and short manner, this is just a declaration of position - not an evidence section of full discussion - for questions and discussions go here:
- exclude - a few (tiny) snippet problems can be discussed and fixed, i believe that the article is well factual and referenced, and i don't see how any of the issues justifies such an inclusive tag. Jaakobou 08:58, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- exclude - worthless tag. If you have problems with the article, use fact or dubious tags to directly point out which portions you are contesting. Blanketing the article with a scare tag doesn't help improve the article. Kyaa the Catlord 09:12, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
issues i'd like to see resolved
- please state issues that you would like resolved, be brief, this is only for mentioning/declaration of perspective, not for resolving:
- (1) issues by PR stated here. Jaakobou 12:15, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- (2)
- (3)
TotallyD - questions and notes
Please note that nobody has actually addressed this issue properly. The tag denotes that "The neutrality and factual accuracy of this article are disputed". It doesn't say "This article is neither neutral nor factually accurate". Those who are expressing their opinion of the article's neutrality are missing the point. The discussion should be about whether the dispute exists. Myself, and (I believe) G-Dett and PalestineRemembered also, say that the article is highly POV and contains factual inaccuracies and misrepresentations. Jaakobou, Tewfik, and Kyaa do not seem to agree. Prima facie that is an NPOV and accuracy dispute; nobody has explained why it isn't one. Rather than removing the notice of the dispute, why don't we try and remove the cause of the dispute. Eleland 13:53, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, I'd like to see this article be presented in an NPOV manner as well. I'd be happy to see that actually. Kyaa the Catlord 13:55, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Then you'll want to see the death-toll reported properly, along with all the other problems detailed here. PalestineRemembered 20:02, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- PR, half your claims there violate NPOV. You really need a mentor to go over your ideas and help you learn to use the wikipedia. This isn't a taunt, just a suggestion. Kyaa the Catlord 00:38, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Then you'll want to see the death-toll reported properly, along with all the other problems detailed here. PalestineRemembered 20:02, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
UN and other death toll reports
- in continuation with the complaint that the presentation of death toll presentation is "is systematically mis-stated" (per PR) dispute, i hope this subsection will resolve the issue.
please go over the notes and leave your commentary here. Jaakobou 13:05, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
current article texts
- The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section.
- the following is a generic assembly of the related texts from 13:03, 7 September 2007.
there are probably a couple left outs, but in general it is, i believe, a fair representative of the majority of related text. Jaakobou 13:05, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
intro
The Palestinian death toll was estimated at 52 (including 22 civilians), while 23 Israeli soldiers were killed.
Body count estimates
According to the United Nations (which was prevented from making a visit), "at least 52" Palestinian deaths were confirmed. Human Rights Watch "confirmed that at least fifty-two Palestinians were killed ... This figure may rise". No other Palestinian deaths from the battle have been confirmed since this time. The IDF estimate the number at 52. The designation of combatants differs (IDF counts 38 "armed men", HRW counts 30 "militants"). Palestinian Fatah investigators claimed the death toll is 56, announced on April 30 by Qadoura Moussa, the Fatah director for the Northern West Bank. 23 Israeli soldiers were also killed.
post fighting investigations
Human Rights Watch found no evidence for a massacre, but said "However, many of the civilian deaths documented by Human Rights Watch amounted to unlawful or willful killings by the IDF. Many others could have been avoided if the IDF had taken proper precautions to protect civilian life during its military operation, as required by international humanitarian law." The human rights organization also criticized Palestinian militants for having endangered the lives of Palestinian civilians in part by "intermingling" with them.
Derek Holley, a military advisor to Amnesty International, corroborated that there was no massacre. "Talking to people and talking to witnesses, even very credible witnesses, it just appears there was no wholesale killing." he added.
UN report
The UN report stated that fifty-two Palestinian deaths had been confirmed by the end of May 2002, which mirrored the IDF report, but fell short of the estimate by a senior Palestinian Authority official who had claimed that about five hundred were killed which was not corroborated by evidence. This report was criticized by the group Human Rights Watch as being "flawed" due to a lack of first-hand evidence. The report itself states that a fact-finding team led by Martti Ahtisaari was unable to visit the area as planned due to concerns of the Israeli government, which meant that the report had to rely on papers submitted by different nations and NGOs, and other documents.
... The UN report confirmed that "at least 52 Palestinians" deaths were reported by the Jenin hospital by the end of May 2002 and that Palestinian reports of 500 dead had not been substantiated.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.death toll commentary
- personally, i disagree that the death toll is systematically mis-stated. Jaakobou 13:05, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- agreed. Based on the sourced statements, the final death toll was somewhere (read: estimated) in the 50s (read: 52). I don't see where the contention of this comes from other than the conspiracy theory nonsense about refrigerated trucks hauling the bodies away in the dead of night. (Honestly, these were busy carrying Saddam's nukes to Syria, duh!) Kyaa the Catlord 14:03, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
commentary general
- the following is an exchange started at Talk:Battle_of_Jenin#death_toll_commentary, and moved to a separate area due to lack of relevance. Jaakobou 12:55, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- The UN report says "at least 52" but probably not as much as 500. The provisional PA estimate was around 375 for the whole West Bank (over half of which likely come from Jenin). The "PA figure" of 56 is so badly referenced as to be worthless, as I've detailed.
- If this article is intended to reflect what Reliable Sources said of the event, then the UN and PA estimates will be used and the Israeli estimate barely mentioned, since Israel failed to do any of the investigations it was required to do, and blocked the investigations of others.
- And if you're not taking part in the mediation, then whatever you say will likely not be considered anyway. PalestineRemembered 19:54, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Hey, on the specific issue of refrigerator trucks, that of course tripped my "conspiracy theory" alert at the time, but in fact, it's true. The Israeli Army Radio station reported that they were bringing in fridge trucks in order to whisk away bodies of "terrorists" to military-controlled cemeteries in the Jordan Valley (which is, by the way, just about the most militarized and inaccessible area Israel controls). The plan was later abandoned under pressure, but the damage had been done. The trucks were ultimately used for IDF guys to cool down in, although local residents may have mistaken the sleeping soldiers for stacked Palestinian corpses. Eleland 20:01, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Here is the Daily Telegraph confirming the story, and Ze'ev Schiff, Israel's "most respected military analyst", explaining events in Ha'aretz (mirrored by Tel Aviv University). Eleland 20:34, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Thankyou very much, Eleland I've added the information here. PalestineRemembered 21:11, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Hint at the suspicion engendered? Rumor mongering is NOT encyclopedic. If this is worthy of inclusion, it will need to be written in a way that doesn't hint at anything but rather states what the source said. Kyaa the Catlord 21:21, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- If you're worried about rumor-mongering, you've got your work all laid out for you:
Popularly watched was the footage captured on video by an Israeli drone flying over Jenin on April 28. Palestinian pallbearers carried a green blanket-wrapped "corpse" who was accidentally dropped and then stood up and placed himself back in the blanket. He was taken to a staged funeral.
- Hint at the suspicion engendered? Rumor mongering is NOT encyclopedic. If this is worthy of inclusion, it will need to be written in a way that doesn't hint at anything but rather states what the source said. Kyaa the Catlord 21:21, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Thankyou very much, Eleland I've added the information here. PalestineRemembered 21:11, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Here is the Daily Telegraph confirming the story, and Ze'ev Schiff, Israel's "most respected military analyst", explaining events in Ha'aretz (mirrored by Tel Aviv University). Eleland 20:34, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
--G-Dett 21:32, 7 September 2007 (UTC)During the battle, Dr. David Zangen, chief medical officer of the Israeli paratroop unit that was fighting in Jenin, reported that the IDF had worked to keep the local Palestinian hospital open and that Israeli doctors had offered the Palestinians blood for their wounded, who then refused to be given "Jewish blood". Col. Arik Gordin of the IDF Office of Military Spokesmen has stated Israel subsequently flew in 2,000 units of blood from Jordan and arranged 40 more units of blood from the Muqased Hospital (East Jerusalem), which were sent to the Ramallah and Tulkarm hospitals, and also facilitated the delivery of 1,800 units of anti-coagulants that had come from Morocco.
- I swear some of that comes from the UN report. Are you questioning the UN document as a source? Oh wait, this is sourced back to CNN, are you having problems with verifiable material from a commonly pro-palestinian source? Kyaa the Catlord 21:39, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I can't tell whether you're kidding; you do have an unusual sense of humor, and it's odd to say "I swear" when you could just give a link. At any rate, no, the rumors don't come from the UN report. They come from an Israeli state website, and an interview with an Israeli state official. The blurry footage of the "staged funeral" has been incorporated into the Youtube conspiracy video your partner keeps linking to, so you can see it for yourself. If you're like me you won't know what the hell you're looking at, but the voiceover from the great Richard Landes, medieval history professor and first-time Youtuber, will help you to see that this is the Palestinians once again faking their civilian casualties, faking Israeli collective punishment, faking the Israeli occupation itself.--G-Dett 21:52, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Actually, I went to the article, followed the provided source to CNN and verified that it was placed. Do you have a problem with the policies about RS on wikipedia? If so, why not make a thread about that on the Village Pump. I'm sure you can discuss changing the reliable source and verifiability guidelines there to your hearts content. As long as we accurately reflect what is presented from reliable sources, where is the problem?
Or do you simply have a bone to grind with Paula Zahn and CNN?Kyaa the Catlord 21:57, 7 September 2007 (UTC)- Clusterfuck of non sequiturs.--G-Dett 22:12, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Actually, I went to the article, followed the provided source to CNN and verified that it was placed. Do you have a problem with the policies about RS on wikipedia? If so, why not make a thread about that on the Village Pump. I'm sure you can discuss changing the reliable source and verifiability guidelines there to your hearts content. As long as we accurately reflect what is presented from reliable sources, where is the problem?
- I can't tell whether you're kidding; you do have an unusual sense of humor, and it's odd to say "I swear" when you could just give a link. At any rate, no, the rumors don't come from the UN report. They come from an Israeli state website, and an interview with an Israeli state official. The blurry footage of the "staged funeral" has been incorporated into the Youtube conspiracy video your partner keeps linking to, so you can see it for yourself. If you're like me you won't know what the hell you're looking at, but the voiceover from the great Richard Landes, medieval history professor and first-time Youtuber, will help you to see that this is the Palestinians once again faking their civilian casualties, faking Israeli collective punishment, faking the Israeli occupation itself.--G-Dett 21:52, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I swear some of that comes from the UN report. Are you questioning the UN document as a source? Oh wait, this is sourced back to CNN, are you having problems with verifiable material from a commonly pro-palestinian source? Kyaa the Catlord 21:39, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Kyaa the Catlord - you're wasting everyone's time - the Israeli source speaks of the "the spark that set off the rumors about a massacre in Jenin's refugee camp". Those "rumours of massacre" are the "Major View", as even the "pro-Israel windsofchange article makes clear. PalestineRemembered 22:04, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- As I stated previously, your articles which are chastising the media for misrepresentation and bad journalism do not lend credibility to the previous reporting which was later proven to be false and overexagerated. The articles you used to try to say that a massacre is the "major view" only support that the false reporting was not properly countered when facts came to light that, as sources have shown repeatedly, no massacre occured. And for that matter, we should be presenting this battle in a neutral point of view, not from a "major view" or a "minor view" but from one which is supported by cold, verifiable fact. In the end, the claims of massacre were refuted regardless of whether or not the press ran with that story more or less than they ran with the sensational stories of hundreds dead. Kyaa the Catlord 22:58, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- If you have problems with editing the encyclopedia to WP:policy then you really need to be upfront about it. WP is "Verifiability not Truth" - and it is verifiable (even the "No Massacre" people tell us) that most sources treated this event as an atrocity/massacre. (And of course, you have no RS for "facts come to light" - when observers actually got into the camp they were even more horrified, rather than less). Again, this is what is going on at mediation - which you're refusing to participate in. PalestineRemembered 00:00, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- As I stated previously, your articles which are chastising the media for misrepresentation and bad journalism do not lend credibility to the previous reporting which was later proven to be false and overexagerated. The articles you used to try to say that a massacre is the "major view" only support that the false reporting was not properly countered when facts came to light that, as sources have shown repeatedly, no massacre occured. And for that matter, we should be presenting this battle in a neutral point of view, not from a "major view" or a "minor view" but from one which is supported by cold, verifiable fact. In the end, the claims of massacre were refuted regardless of whether or not the press ran with that story more or less than they ran with the sensational stories of hundreds dead. Kyaa the Catlord 22:58, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
Excuse me? This is wikipedia, the encyclopedia anyone can edit, not just the chosen few who have decided to take part in a witchhunty kangaroo court. Sorry, PR....Kyaa the Catlord 21:19, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
Discussing Mediation
- Will you participate in mediation, or not?--G-Dett 21:32, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I think I made my views clear on the "mediation". Kyaa the Catlord 21:51, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Will you participate in mediation, or not?--G-Dett 21:32, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- A well regarded Wikipedian has made it his business to mediate this article. If you reject procedures calculated to further the aims of the project then expect measures calculated to protect it. It's pretty pointless abusing other peoples TalkPages on the subject of not making WP a battleground, if your behaviour suggests that it's you who is the culprit. PalestineRemembered 21:56, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Another well regarded Wikipedian has made it his business not to take part in said "mediation" since the mediator is a sympathetic ear to you. I'll take part in one if you can find a neutral mediator, not someone who has been conspiring with you on your talk page. Kyaa the Catlord 22:00, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- The well-regarded Wikipedian Kyaa is referring to is him- or herself.--G-Dett 22:20, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- bows* I believe I made that obvious. Kyaa the Catlord 22:51, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Hi guys. Since it sounds you are alluding to me, I'd like to clarify that I have not offered or acted to mediate the article. Instead, I've made some suggestions about how you might narrow a request to submit for mediation. It is fair for Kyaa not to want somebody to mediate if there's a sense of sympathy biased to one side. That's partly why my original remarks were addressed more pointedly to the Users I knew. Nevertheless, I would say on behalf that I would like to think of myself as capable of sympathy to multiple viewpoints and editors. (It goes without saying that I'm hardly aligned with PR, who I often argue against and prod, etc., though in the friendliest and most collegial way I can muster.) Thanks for giving this some thought. HG | Talk 01:45, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Hi HG. It is with reluctance I treat you as a mediator since our previous dealings have been dominated by disagreement. It's a bit unlikely we'd start agreeing now over this article!
- However, I've complied with your suggestions (and requests) as if you were the mediator and I will not be abusing you over your arguments, views, comments or anything personal I might have picked about you.
- You may have forgotten this, but you were actually called to this article in the apparent hope and expectation you'd be partisan against me (based on the argument we were having on your TalkPage). It is bizarre indeed that I'm the one prepared to work (and actually working) with you, while the parties that wanted your assistance are now accusing you of being "far to buddy-buddy"(sic) with me and your "mediation" page a "witchhunty kangaroo court".
- It's taken 11 months, but I've suddenly started to wonder why people like you treating me in a collegiate fashion seems to enrage so many other editors. What can it be about Yours Sincerely PalestineRemembered 07:03, 10 September 2007 (UTC) that brings down the red mist?
- The Cabal is out to get you, PR. (Remember kids, there is no cabal.) Kyaa the Catlord 09:11, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- The well-regarded Wikipedian Kyaa is referring to is him- or herself.--G-Dett 22:20, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Another well regarded Wikipedian has made it his business not to take part in said "mediation" since the mediator is a sympathetic ear to you. I'll take part in one if you can find a neutral mediator, not someone who has been conspiring with you on your talk page. Kyaa the Catlord 22:00, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- A well regarded Wikipedian has made it his business to mediate this article. If you reject procedures calculated to further the aims of the project then expect measures calculated to protect it. It's pretty pointless abusing other peoples TalkPages on the subject of not making WP a battleground, if your behaviour suggests that it's you who is the culprit. PalestineRemembered 21:56, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
(outdent for space) Again, to clarify my initial comments here on Talk, I suggested how you all might clarify your (i.e., G-Dett's) request for mediation and also how to be more courteous on Talk so as not to have your dispute appear daunting (disheartening) to whomever might take the case. I wrote in a mediator/facilitator style but I did not and have not offered to "mediate" here. Incidentally, Steve did ask me to look here initially and he hasn't accused me of anything. Anyway, I'm not esp perturbed about concerns expressed about me here. At most, they may reflect poorly on the level of trust here and may be daunting to a mediator-to-be-named-later (as we say in USA sports chat). Anyway, here are some signs of progress:
- Constructive effort by PR to clarify issues of concern, for potential mediation
- Constructive effort by Jaakobou to elicit concerns (about the tag, round II) and also link to PR's effort, above
- Eleland also responded there. Helpful to identify involved parties. Asks folks to focus on the cause of the dispute among the parties. (N.B. I do think Jaakobou is trying to help toward that end.)
- "Red ink" spilled to strikeout some of the less courteous barbs on this Talk page (e.g., G-Dett, Kyaa, PR). There's been some improvement but continuing negative/personal comments do tend to annoy people (e.g., Tewfik below). It also distracts me and presumably disrupts constructive collaboration.
- A narrow dispute (over Pallywood video) resolved, maybe, at least to satisfaction of G-Dett and Kyaa
- Further recent efforts to clarify disagreements, e.g. Eleland on the article lead and Jaakobou then others on the "Jenin massacre" language (below)
- There also are useful efforts (eg refactoring, linking) to keep the conversation(s) coherent & on topic
Overall, I can't tell whether the Talk here will actually resolve your disputes. Still, the discussion has cooled off somewhat and I gather that enough folks (e.g., Jaakobou, Kyaa) would like to proceed apace without outside mediation at this juncture. Is that right? Take care. HG | Talk 12:28, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
General comments, continued
- Ze'ev Schiff said "the army sent three large refrigerator trucks into the city. Reservists decided to sleep in them for their air conditioning. Some Palestinians saw dozens of covered bodies lying in the trucks and rumors spread the Jews had filled trucks full of Palestinian bodies." The Telegraph said that "allegations last week that the Israeli army had staged an indiscriminate massacre of the Jenin camp's inhabitants were reverberating around the world ... the Israeli authorities unwisely contributed to the confusion by announcing that terrorists killed in the camp were to be spirited away in refrigerated trucks". We should neither hint nor monger, but simply state something like "...this decision contributed to the confusion, as Palestinians saw Israeli soldiers asleep in the trucks and spread rumours that they were full of Palestinian corpses".
- Furthermore, G-Dett's point to the "staged funeral" information and the "Jewish blood" story is spot on as usual. I'm not really sure what a "staged funeral" is, since all funerals are staged events. If the implication is that it was a funeral for someone who wasn't dead, then we need more information than just that a guy was standing in for the corpse. Aren't Israeli soldiers ever given funerals when their bodies can't be recovered? And the "Jewish blood" information is presents as objective fact the unverified claims of a combatant who has been "was close enough to hear the screams of the wounded" and "wondered if a few targeted F-16 strikes earlier in the day ... might not have saved some of the friends with whom he had served for years." Furthermore it's sourced to a free weekly that at the least, comes very close to failing WP:RS. Eleland 21:41, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Read the source, its in the article. (Its either 61 or 62, I believe). Kyaa the Catlord 21:52, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- More bluff and bluster, O Catlord. The article is titled "IDF: Tape shows Palestinians faked funeral", and notes that "the Israel Defense Forces has released a videotape showing what it calls 'a phony funeral'". Every statement about the funeral being phoney or staged is attributed to the IDF. CNN could not verify that it even showed a funeral, or that it took place in Jenin! Eleland 22:03, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Don't bother with the IDF statement. Just watch the great, seminal documentary film Pallywood. There's some colorfully blurry satellite footage of a crowd bearing a coffin aloft; it falls a couple of times and the corpse stands around and gets back in. That's it, no context, no nothing. No evidence that this happened in or near Jenin, or that the event was filmed on the ground, much less distributed to news agencies, nor even any evidence that this was intended to deceive anyone as opposed to being some sort of pageant. Next time you're flying a helicopter over rural Italy on a saint's day, film one of those "fake funeral" thingies and send it to the Boston Youtuber to see what he makes of it.--G-Dett 22:07, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
Whoah. Off-topic much?Kyaa the Catlord 22:09, 7 September 2007 (UTC)- Sorry, I forgot all the hand-holding that's sometimes needed. The "faked funeral" rumor has been circulated by two sources – a medieval history professor/amateur youtuber and an Israeli state official – and verified by nobody. The RS you gave held the story at arm's length. You've made this big pronouncement about how rumors aren't encyclopedic. I am providing examples of the silliest sorts of rumors and rumor-mongering that you actively endorse. And you've helpfully rounded out the illustration by reiterating your endorsement. Following?--G-Dett 22:28, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Translation: "I see its on a reliable, verifiable source. I still don't like it and since CNN did not say anything about whether or not they verified the authentity of the tape, it must not be real since it does not support my POV." Kyaa the Catlord 22:08, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Kyaa, you chose the subject of this digression. Now just answer – no more non sequiturs – are you or are you not in favor of including rumors in this article?--G-Dett 22:11, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
Dear G-Dett, reports from government officials provided by sources which meet the WP POLICY for reliable sourcing and verifiability are more than rumor. I ask again, do you have a problem with the policies by which we create articles on wikipedia? If so, maybe you should find another encyclopedia to edit.Kyaa the Catlord 22:15, 7 September 2007 (UTC)- Unsubstantiated rumors advanced by government officials aren't rumors? Does this apply to Palestinian officials or only Israeli? Oh, never mind, I know the answer.--G-Dett 22:20, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
A government official speaking on behalf of the government he works for on an interview show is a statement, not a rumor. Seriously, I'm tired of arguing this. Regardless of your, my or Superman's opinion, the policies of Misplaced Pages trump POV and require us to present the article in a NPOV manner. If you want to fill it with POV, I don't think Misplaced Pages is the right place for you.Kyaa the Catlord 22:27, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Unsubstantiated rumors advanced by government officials aren't rumors? Does this apply to Palestinian officials or only Israeli? Oh, never mind, I know the answer.--G-Dett 22:20, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Kyaa, you chose the subject of this digression. Now just answer – no more non sequiturs – are you or are you not in favor of including rumors in this article?--G-Dett 22:11, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Don't bother with the IDF statement. Just watch the great, seminal documentary film Pallywood. There's some colorfully blurry satellite footage of a crowd bearing a coffin aloft; it falls a couple of times and the corpse stands around and gets back in. That's it, no context, no nothing. No evidence that this happened in or near Jenin, or that the event was filmed on the ground, much less distributed to news agencies, nor even any evidence that this was intended to deceive anyone as opposed to being some sort of pageant. Next time you're flying a helicopter over rural Italy on a saint's day, film one of those "fake funeral" thingies and send it to the Boston Youtuber to see what he makes of it.--G-Dett 22:07, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- More bluff and bluster, O Catlord. The article is titled "IDF: Tape shows Palestinians faked funeral", and notes that "the Israel Defense Forces has released a videotape showing what it calls 'a phony funeral'". Every statement about the funeral being phoney or staged is attributed to the IDF. CNN could not verify that it even showed a funeral, or that it took place in Jenin! Eleland 22:03, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Read the source, its in the article. (Its either 61 or 62, I believe). Kyaa the Catlord 21:52, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I'd appreciate not having my words "translated" in the manner above. CNN did not report that the tape was authentic, that it showed a funeral procession, that it took place in Jenin, or indeed that it even showed Palestinians. They attributed Israeli claims to that effect, which is a very different thing. It's important to read sources closely and examine what they actually said. Failure to do this has been a major cause of the numerous problems with this article. Eleland 22:31, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I'm not even going to try to explain to you how to read news articles or[REDACTED] policies. I've cleaned up the statement on the main page providing the words and attribution of the material in question from the IDF press agent who discussed the pictures on CNN and not challenged by the host. Kyaa the Catlord 22:39, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Edit conflicts galore here - just wanted to note - "IDF officials stated X" is not a rumour; however "X" may or may not be a rumour, simply being repeated by Israeli officials doesn't elevate a tendentious claim. Eleland 22:31, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- The video or pictures or whatever, on an Israeli government web site, commented about on CNN by an IDF spokesman is not a rumor based on your own statement. Can we stop mischaracterizing the faked funeral as a rumor now? Kyaa the Catlord 22:53, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- No, I don't believe we can, Kyaa. That Eleland has tutored you to the point where you now see fit to present the "faked funeral" rumor as a claim instead of a fact is a good start. But what are you saying here? That if an official makes an unsubstantiated claim, and an RS reports that the official made the claim, then it rises out of rumor into the encyclopedic? Again, does this apply to Palestinian officials?--G-Dett 23:27, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- It isn't exactly a rumor. It is a statement and evidence presented by a government body. If you chose to believe it or not believe it is up to you. Our job, as wikipedians, is to present a NPOV article and allow the reader to make his own choices. If you present the idea that the refrigerated trucks were intended to carry away the bodies of terrorists as has been stated by RS/V sources and do not present it as fact, but as a claim with attribution, I believe it is worthy of inclusion. Maybe. It still seems pretty damn conspiracy theory-y to me. I'm terribly amused by the statement that the trucks were used as AC units by the soldiers tho. (And, if you don't have a sense of humor and don't get my original statement was a joke, I wonder about ya'll. Saddam's nukes? Hello. Noone claimed Saddam had nukes, well, maybe David Icke.) Kyaa the Catlord 23:35, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- You really need to answer the question (well, actually, you really need to participate in the mediation). But in the meantime, you could answer the question - if an official makes an unsubstantiated claim, and an RS reports that the official made the claim, does it rise from rumour to being encyclopedic? Does this apply to Palestinian officials? PalestineRemembered 23:52, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Palestinian government officials are included in the death toll with the numbers they claimed. It was a palestinian official who put the "final" death toll tally by them at 56 after all.
I'm gonna read your mind. I'll let you know if I get it right after you reply to this...(Oh, and by the way, an official statement isn't ever an unsubtatiated claim. It may be false, but it carries the weight of the government the official is speaking for to "back it up".) Kyaa the Catlord 00:14, 8 September 2007 (UTC)- Kyaa, please stop this nonsense – it's insulting. Of course you'll permit official Palestinian statements that were later discredited; such statements are central to the propaganda narrative that you're using this article to disseminate – that the central significance of the siege of Jenin is an alleged Palestinian propensity for exaggeration, and the international media's alleged propensity for swallowing it wholesale. The question I'm asking, and PR is asking, is if your indulgence for official "statements" of unverified claims – an indulgence which sometimes includes your puffing them into "facts" – is one you'd extend to Palestinian officials. The answer, obviously, is no. Your approach to the sources, as always, is a la carte. Is this what you guessed I'd say when you "read my mind"? Very well, then you knew the fallacy of what you were saying, and were deliberately abusing our patience, intelligence, and good faith.--G-Dett 00:51, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Actually, I thought he was going to ask about if I thought that the unfounded claims of massacre made before the smoke cleared and people were able to go in and do their investigations would prove that a massacre occured, despite this massacre only existing in later proven wrong press articles. And I'm striking stuff. Too busy to reply to challenges right now. Kyaa the Catlord 00:55, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Kyaa, please stop this nonsense – it's insulting. Of course you'll permit official Palestinian statements that were later discredited; such statements are central to the propaganda narrative that you're using this article to disseminate – that the central significance of the siege of Jenin is an alleged Palestinian propensity for exaggeration, and the international media's alleged propensity for swallowing it wholesale. The question I'm asking, and PR is asking, is if your indulgence for official "statements" of unverified claims – an indulgence which sometimes includes your puffing them into "facts" – is one you'd extend to Palestinian officials. The answer, obviously, is no. Your approach to the sources, as always, is a la carte. Is this what you guessed I'd say when you "read my mind"? Very well, then you knew the fallacy of what you were saying, and were deliberately abusing our patience, intelligence, and good faith.--G-Dett 00:51, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Palestinian government officials are included in the death toll with the numbers they claimed. It was a palestinian official who put the "final" death toll tally by them at 56 after all.
- You really need to answer the question (well, actually, you really need to participate in the mediation). But in the meantime, you could answer the question - if an official makes an unsubstantiated claim, and an RS reports that the official made the claim, does it rise from rumour to being encyclopedic? Does this apply to Palestinian officials? PalestineRemembered 23:52, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- It isn't exactly a rumor. It is a statement and evidence presented by a government body. If you chose to believe it or not believe it is up to you. Our job, as wikipedians, is to present a NPOV article and allow the reader to make his own choices. If you present the idea that the refrigerated trucks were intended to carry away the bodies of terrorists as has been stated by RS/V sources and do not present it as fact, but as a claim with attribution, I believe it is worthy of inclusion. Maybe. It still seems pretty damn conspiracy theory-y to me. I'm terribly amused by the statement that the trucks were used as AC units by the soldiers tho. (And, if you don't have a sense of humor and don't get my original statement was a joke, I wonder about ya'll. Saddam's nukes? Hello. Noone claimed Saddam had nukes, well, maybe David Icke.) Kyaa the Catlord 23:35, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- No, I don't believe we can, Kyaa. That Eleland has tutored you to the point where you now see fit to present the "faked funeral" rumor as a claim instead of a fact is a good start. But what are you saying here? That if an official makes an unsubstantiated claim, and an RS reports that the official made the claim, then it rises out of rumor into the encyclopedic? Again, does this apply to Palestinian officials?--G-Dett 23:27, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- The video or pictures or whatever, on an Israeli government web site, commented about on CNN by an IDF spokesman is not a rumor based on your own statement. Can we stop mischaracterizing the faked funeral as a rumor now? Kyaa the Catlord 22:53, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I'd appreciate not having my words "translated" in the manner above. CNN did not report that the tape was authentic, that it showed a funeral procession, that it took place in Jenin, or indeed that it even showed Palestinians. They attributed Israeli claims to that effect, which is a very different thing. It's important to read sources closely and examine what they actually said. Failure to do this has been a major cause of the numerous problems with this article. Eleland 22:31, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
lead again
Hi Tewfik and Jaakobou. Here are the two disputed versions of the lead:
- Palestinian and international sources described the Israeli actions as indiscriminate and raised allegations of massacre and war crimes. Major human rights organizations subsequently conducted extensive investigations and found no evidence of massacres, but strong prima facie evidence of IDF war crimes.
- Palestinian and some international sources described the Israeli actions as indiscriminate and raised allegations of massacre, initially reported in the international media and subsequently disproven by outside observers, although major human rights organizations maintained that there was strong prima facie evidence of IDF war crimes.
Tewfik, you continue to insert "some" before "international sources," arguing that the EU report is the only international source that describes Israeli actions as indiscriminate. This is false, as we've gone through together pretty exhaustively here. Both the Amnesty investigation/report and the HRW investigation/report (as well as the latter's response to the U.N. report) stressed indiscriminate and disproportionate use of force by the IDF. I'm not sure why you're still edit-warring over this.
Secondly, your version ends on a wordier, more syntactically tangled note, and it falls back into the trap of beefing up one aspect of the findings of human-rights organizations while minimizing the other. My version follows their wording: they found no evidence of massacre, but prima facie evidence of war crimes. Your version keeps elevating the former to a "disproof." I trust it's clear why that's a violation of WP:NPOV? The choices are (i) presenting the massacre as "disproven" and the war crimes as "confirmed"; or (ii) using the language sources use, and say they found no evidence of massacre, but prima facie evidence of war crimes. I much prefer the latter, but I'll leave it you. Understand, however, that the days of picking and choosing and selectively enhancing are over.--G-Dett 13:31, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
If so, knock it off. Not a battlefield, friend.Kyaa the Catlord 13:38, 7 September 2007 (UTC)- Would you consider rethinking your response here?--G-Dett 13:43, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I take it you aren't a fan of Beavis? It certainly sounded like you threatened to do "something" if we do not accept your OWNership of the article. If that wasn't your intention, I'll apologize for taking your words "the days of picking and choosing and selectively enhancing are over" as a threat to disrupt the article. Kyaa the Catlord 13:51, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I don't know Beavis and Butthead, and am finding many of your responses incomprehensible.--G-Dett 14:05, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- The way you ended your statement made it sound like you were hinting that you were fed up and about to go on a spree of edits that would piss off your perceived "enemies". Kyaa the Catlord 14:15, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- As I've gone through with my red pen and all, could I ask you to stop trolling and discuss the issues, Kyaa?--G-Dett 14:20, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- The way you ended your statement made it sound like you were hinting that you were fed up and about to go on a spree of edits that would piss off your perceived "enemies". Kyaa the Catlord 14:15, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I don't know Beavis and Butthead, and am finding many of your responses incomprehensible.--G-Dett 14:05, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I take it you aren't a fan of Beavis? It certainly sounded like you threatened to do "something" if we do not accept your OWNership of the article. If that wasn't your intention, I'll apologize for taking your words "the days of picking and choosing and selectively enhancing are over" as a threat to disrupt the article. Kyaa the Catlord 13:51, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I disagree with G-Dett's choices. "Massacre" refers to a specific alleged event. "War crimes" refers to a whole set of allegations about various events and different times. If you need this, can you please change to "HRW found evidence of war crimes in Israel's actions during (for example) its infantry operations in the refugee area." That makes the text more specific, and allows you to present the material you wish. --Steve, Sm8900 13:50, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- These aren't compelling or accurate distinctions, Steve. Both terms – "war crimes" and "massacre" – are used with equal specificity in the findings of human-rights organizations. The "massacre" allegations, moreover, did not refer to a "specific alleged event," but rather to the (rumored) large scale of indiscriminate killing over the period of the siege.--G-Dett 14:05, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Would you consider rethinking your response here?--G-Dett 13:43, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
comment - we're going over the war crime allegations here, you might want to participate so we can get some actual proof displayed regarding this issue of who said what. Jaakobou 12:57, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
Pallywood...Jenin Jenin?
Kyaa, I'm trying to understand this edit. I get it that you're mimicking me, but I don't understand the WP:POINT you're making. "Jenin, Jenin" is not a left-wing blog term, and Jenin, Jenin is not a video, nor is it obscure. It was film produced and directed by a major Arab-Israeli actor and filmmaker, had a major distribution deal, screened theatrically, featured in a number of prominent international film festivals and won major prizes in two, including "best film," became the focus of a censorship controversy when the normally dormant Israeli Censorship Board banned it (a decision subsequently reversed by the Israeli high court), and generally attracted a large amount of international attention and became a prominent prop in ongoing disputes about what happened in Jenin. Though originally projected as a film, Jenin, Jenin is now available on VHS and DVD through Netflix, Amazon.com, and Blockbuster, and is housed in most major university research libraries.
Pallywood was an 18-minute video edited together out of TV footage by a medieval historian in Boston, who then posted it streaming on his blog. You can also watch it on youtube. It was never screened, distributed, or reviewed. It is flogged by right-wing pro-Israel bloggers (who found in it the conspiracy theory they needed) and by Wikipedians (who link to it wherever they can and call it a "film" even though it isn't because that makes it sound more important). "Pallywood" – both the youtube video and the blog-slang – went, however, all but completely unnoticed by the mainstream media.--G-Dett 16:05, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Response unnecessary. Kyaa the Catlord 16:29, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Oh, I see, you self-reverted. Thanks,--G-Dett 17:21, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
When did this stop being called the Jenin Massacre?
??? -- 146.115.58.152 22:19, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- When the UN, HRW and AI presented their findings that there was "no evidence of a massacre". Kyaa the Catlord 22:27, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Er, I'm just googling here, and haven't looked at the sources, but this seems to say none of those groups ever said that? -- 146.115.58.152 23:05, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Yes. Read the article. Its in there. Follow the links to the citations from the UN, HRW and AI. All three released statements and reports that state no massacre occured. Kyaa the Catlord 23:06, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I'm looking at the UN report and it explicitly calls it a massacre repeatedly. There's a section entitled "Direct eyewitness accounts by survivors of the massacre at the Jenin refugee camp" with a sentence beginning "The present report contains a number of eyewitness accounts by casualties who survived the massacre...." Another sentence says "Al-Amri was one of the first journalists to enter the Jenin camp during the massacre." Where exactly does the UN report say what you say it says? -- 146.115.58.152 23:11, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Um, that would be Anexe III which was written by the Jordanian government, not the UN. The UN does not use the term massacre in their statements at all. It appears once in the Palestinian statement and several times in the Jordanian statement, usually in quotations by "eyewitnesses". Kyaa the Catlord 23:25, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Oh, OK. So Jordan still calls it a massacre, and the UN has no opinion. So the word "previously" in the lead still seems a stretch. The HRW report seems to only say that multiple massacres did not occur. Or am I misreading it too? -- 146.115.58.152 23:34, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Hi anon, as Kyaa indicates above, the HRW and AI found "no evidence of a massacre" (you're right that the UN had no opinion). Kyaa and Jaakobou – for whom these organizations' findings are either absolutely definitive or laughably "partisan," depending on whether Kyaa or Jaakobou agree with the finding in question – are thrilled with this particular finding. Admittedly, they feel it ought to have been more strongly worded, so they've doctored it and puffed it up from "no evidence of" to "disproven," while continuing to try to hide, bury, or contest the findings they disagree with. Such as evidence of war crimes, and "indiscriminate and disproportionate attacks" on the camp. Get yourself a user name – I suggest "Grey Ghost," "Richard Landes," or "Skin-tight Alligator Luggage" – and join the fun.--G-Dett 23:41, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I appreciate the rough overview of where everyone stands, G-Dett; I know you getting batted around like a mouse between cats for these kinds of summaries. Not to quibble, but the HRW report says no evidence of "massacres" (my bold italics). In any case, insisting no one anywhere still considers this a massacre is biased in the lead. I'd perhaps consider "colloquially known as" as I'm not sure exactly how many innocent civilians you have to kill to qualify as a massacre these days in the sausage factory of wikipedia. -- 146.115.58.152 23:57, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Hell, Misplaced Pages doesn't know what qualifies as a massacre in the sausage factory. :P But in this case we have verifiable proof that even the groups that tend to cry "massacre" at the drop of a hat say "no massacre" despite the lack of coverage of such by most of the media. Kyaa the Catlord 00:10, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- We know exactly what constitutes a massacre in everyday parlance, it's almost any number of killings carried out by soldiers of unarmed civilians. Hence Boston Massacre (5 dead) and Kent State Massacre (4 dead).
- However, there is another meaning, and various sources (of which Israel was one) led us to think that Nazi-style mass shootings has also been carried out. We have firm published evidence and Israeli confirmation for only one such incident (3 men, 1 of whom survived, giving us the first names of two of the soldiers), and this evidence was not released until 4 November 2002 (perhaps because that's when it became clear that Israel had no intention of even investigating this case as they're required to do?).
- Hence, as at todays date, the "No Massacre" thesis is disproved, in both of the meanings of the word.
- Howevever, none of this discussion should be going on in Talk, it should be on the mediation page.
- That's assuming you're agreeable to withdraw allegations against the good faith of the mediator - and you're prepared to move to Talk the defacement of the mediation page which has taken place. Without both those actions, it is questionable whether you should be editing this article. Even once you've taken those necessary actions, it would be a lot more collegiate if you restricted yourself to taking part in the mediation, and presented your evidence properly, in some fashion such as I've done. PalestineRemembered 09:14, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Did you simply not read HG's statements on the "mediation" page? He said no discussion. THIS is the proper place for discussion of this article, period. Read WP:TALK. Kyaa the Catlord 09:27, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Hell, Misplaced Pages doesn't know what qualifies as a massacre in the sausage factory. :P But in this case we have verifiable proof that even the groups that tend to cry "massacre" at the drop of a hat say "no massacre" despite the lack of coverage of such by most of the media. Kyaa the Catlord 00:10, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
And the character assassination attempts continue.Kyaa the Catlord 00:08, 8 September 2007 (UTC)Oh, rubbish.--G-Dett 00:38, 8 September 2007 (UTC)Random statement struck out.Kyaa the Catlord 00:57, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- I appreciate the rough overview of where everyone stands, G-Dett; I know you getting batted around like a mouse between cats for these kinds of summaries. Not to quibble, but the HRW report says no evidence of "massacres" (my bold italics). In any case, insisting no one anywhere still considers this a massacre is biased in the lead. I'd perhaps consider "colloquially known as" as I'm not sure exactly how many innocent civilians you have to kill to qualify as a massacre these days in the sausage factory of wikipedia. -- 146.115.58.152 23:57, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Anon, you have a very good point. One gets so exhausted fighting to have a lead that doesn't grossly misrepresent the sources, you slide into a position of accepting this sort of low-level POV-massage.--G-Dett 00:38, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Hi anon, as Kyaa indicates above, the HRW and AI found "no evidence of a massacre" (you're right that the UN had no opinion). Kyaa and Jaakobou – for whom these organizations' findings are either absolutely definitive or laughably "partisan," depending on whether Kyaa or Jaakobou agree with the finding in question – are thrilled with this particular finding. Admittedly, they feel it ought to have been more strongly worded, so they've doctored it and puffed it up from "no evidence of" to "disproven," while continuing to try to hide, bury, or contest the findings they disagree with. Such as evidence of war crimes, and "indiscriminate and disproportionate attacks" on the camp. Get yourself a user name – I suggest "Grey Ghost," "Richard Landes," or "Skin-tight Alligator Luggage" – and join the fun.--G-Dett 23:41, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Oh, OK. So Jordan still calls it a massacre, and the UN has no opinion. So the word "previously" in the lead still seems a stretch. The HRW report seems to only say that multiple massacres did not occur. Or am I misreading it too? -- 146.115.58.152 23:34, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Um, that would be Anexe III which was written by the Jordanian government, not the UN. The UN does not use the term massacre in their statements at all. It appears once in the Palestinian statement and several times in the Jordanian statement, usually in quotations by "eyewitnesses". Kyaa the Catlord 23:25, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- I'm looking at the UN report and it explicitly calls it a massacre repeatedly. There's a section entitled "Direct eyewitness accounts by survivors of the massacre at the Jenin refugee camp" with a sentence beginning "The present report contains a number of eyewitness accounts by casualties who survived the massacre...." Another sentence says "Al-Amri was one of the first journalists to enter the Jenin camp during the massacre." Where exactly does the UN report say what you say it says? -- 146.115.58.152 23:11, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Yes. Read the article. Its in there. Follow the links to the citations from the UN, HRW and AI. All three released statements and reports that state no massacre occured. Kyaa the Catlord 23:06, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
- Er, I'm just googling here, and haven't looked at the sources, but this seems to say none of those groups ever said that? -- 146.115.58.152 23:05, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
Comment - this issue has been fairly well explained and was seemed to be resolved in previous talk and also it's well referenced on the article (so i've already archived it). please go over the material and stop placing tags on the intro before you do. go over these discussions - (1), (2) - and let me know if you're interested in reopening the dispute. Jaakobou 13:15, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- I don't consider this issue resolved at all, thanks. We'll need to come to a compromise here. -- 146.115.58.152 14:46, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- How about something in the lead along the lines "The battle was initially referred to as the Jenin massacre when initial reports put civilian deaths about 500, but the label fell out of favor with international organizations after the civilian death toll was reduced to 23." That would be more honest and a better explanation than just saying "previously" which is confusing and inaccurate. -- 146.115.58.152 14:57, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- When this article is (eventually) written in a good NPOV fashion, we can revisit what it's called. (I'm personally convinced we'll find it's universally known as the "Jenin Massacre" - even the angry pro-Israel sources tell us that the "No Massacre Thesis" was ignored by the British/Western media). However, that's rather more of a snake-pit than the "Verifiable information in Reliable Sources" facts of the case (or the lead, on which we may be about to agree, see below). Get the lead and "the facts" into place, and much of the rest of it will shake out properly.
- Note that editors have (repeatedly) taken an ax to portions of this TalkPage and archived them away with no discussion/mandate to do this whatsoever. It's one of the relatively minor tricks that have been played here. PalestineRemembered 18:48, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
Striking out
Look, all this striking out of comments is getting exhausting. I can barely keep up with the whack-a-mole, and then to have to un-whack every mole that then goes to ground....
Let's concentrate on the mainspace shall we? We are all pissed off. Tone is important, but it ain't everything.--G-Dett 01:14, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- I'm playing with fire! Fire! Good! :P Kyaa the Catlord 01:34, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- You go girl, I guess.--G-Dett 02:12, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
On massacres
ANNIE WHITE: But first, the United Nations has released its long awaited report on the events in the West Bank city of Jenin in April, when Israeli troops seeking Palestinian militants, attacked the refugee camp there with tanks, helicopter launched-missiles and hundreds of troops.
Israel refused to allow the UN to investigate the alleged massacre of civilians so the report was compiled from accounts supplied by the Israeli Army, the Palestinians and various agencies.
The report that has emerged is at best a compromise, criticising both sides for using innocent civilians as human shields.
Unlike the UN investigators, our Foreign Affairs Editor, Peter Cave, did get into Jenin while it was still besieged by the Israeli Army and he's been looking at the UN report for Correspondence Report.
PETER CAVE: Was there a massacre in Jenin? Well, yes there was.
The Macquarie Dictionary and the OED define a massacre as the unnecessary indiscriminate killing or slaughter of human beings.
The UN's report, flawed though it is by being forced to rely on second-hand and often deeply partisan accounts, claims that 75 human beings died, 23 Israeli soldiers and 52 Palestinians, half of them civilians.
Were the deaths necessary or discriminate? Not by any measure.
Israel, however, has put its own spin on the UN report.
DANIEL TAUB: This report, and a whole host of meetings in the United Nations, were a response to allegations of absolutely shocking massacre that was supposed to have taken place in Jenin.
The report apparently makes it clear that there was no such thing,http://www.worldpress.org/Mideast/563.cfm and that allegations, particularly by the Palestinian leadership, of hundreds of innocent civilians who had been killed, were nothing more than a propaganda.
PETER CAVE: Israeli Foreign Ministry Spokesman, Daniel Taub.
Palestinian spokesman, Saeb Erekat, had his own spin when interviewed by the BBC just after the report was released.
SAEB EREKAT: Five-hundred and more Palestinians will be killed, will be a massacre. Five Israelis to ten... what is the definition of a massacre? Do you mean to tell me now that five-hundred and more Palestinians will be killed will be a massacre? Five Israelis to ten will be described by BBC as a massacre. I've heard, this is not the point here, the point is that if we set wrong numbers, we stand to be corrected.
- And then there's this source On the Press Coverage and the battle over naming. Tiamut 02:29, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Thankyou Tiamut. I'm convinced that the whole "Massacre/No Massacre" thing is a propaganda red-herring raised to confuse matters. However, as long as there are people who insist this debate has to dominate this article, your information will help us keep the factual side of things straight. PalestineRemembered 18:32, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Did you notice that article highlighted the HRW investigation's findings that there was no massacre, then used massacre in quotes for the rest of the article? Did you notice that that article is another in a string of articles showing that it is only in the biased, propagandist media that it is still referred to as a massacre? I await your answers. Kyaa the Catlord 19:20, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Let's remind ourselves what HRW say: "Human Rights Watch found no evidence to sustain claims of massacres or large-scale extrajudicial executions by the IDF in Jenin refugee camp. However, many of the civilian deaths documented by Human Rights Watch amounted to unlawful or willful killings by the IDF. ..... Among the civilian deaths were those of Kamal Zgheir .... even though he had a white flag attached to his wheelchair .... Some of the cases documented by Human Rights Watch amounted to summary executions, a clear war crime ... Al-Sabbagh was shot to death while directly under the control of the IDF: he was obeying orders to strip off his clothes".
- Under these circumstances, the "No massacre" thesis should certainly not dominate the article as it does now. Misplaced Pages is based on reporting honestly what the secondary sources say, and your synopsis of the HRW words clearly don't give an NPOV impression. PalestineRemembered 19:26, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
- On the contrary, the HRW quotation you give above explicitly supports the claim that what happened in Jenin wasn't a massacre. --GHcool 00:55, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- As I keep saying, the "Massacre or no Massacre" discussion is a complete red-herring. It's certainly not the reason for this incident being notable.
- However, the sources saying "No Massacre" are only refering to one meaning of the word (Nazi-style mass shooting). Yet it's clear there are even good indications that there was a massacre in this limited sense of the word too. Evidence for this particular allegation was not published until November 2002 - perhaps because by then it was clear that Israel had no intention of investigating the case, with first names, that had been presented to them.
- Over at your TalkPage you said "the IDF kills a handful of Palestinians (some were civilians), and then the world buying the Palestinian propoganda version of the story". I'd be very interested to know why this article is not written to this "Majority View" (that we agree the world accepts). WP:Policy would apparently say our article should be written to that "Majority View" with NPOV balance to the "Minority View" - why is that not happening? PalestineRemembered 10:27, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- We have Godwins! We have Godwins! :P Kyaa the Catlord 11:18, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- On the contrary, the HRW quotation you give above explicitly supports the claim that what happened in Jenin wasn't a massacre. --GHcool 00:55, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Did you notice that article highlighted the HRW investigation's findings that there was no massacre, then used massacre in quotes for the rest of the article? Did you notice that that article is another in a string of articles showing that it is only in the biased, propagandist media that it is still referred to as a massacre? I await your answers. Kyaa the Catlord 19:20, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Thankyou Tiamut. I'm convinced that the whole "Massacre/No Massacre" thing is a propaganda red-herring raised to confuse matters. However, as long as there are people who insist this debate has to dominate this article, your information will help us keep the factual side of things straight. PalestineRemembered 18:32, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
Prompted by in lead
It is completely one-sided to count up all the Palestinian attacks in the lead and ignore the Israeli attacks, which prompted the Palestinian attacks, etc. The source, the Prime Minister of Israel at the time, specifically says the Jenin attack was in response to the attacks over the previous few days which caused 27 or more causalities. -- 146.115.58.152 12:27, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
comment - this issue has been discussed, please (1) signup with your regular username, or at least sign up with a new one. (2) go over the talk and look for previous discussions. (3) i disagree with your perception on who prompted what and this article could get real troublesome if we go with that type of information all the way back to the jews of Yathrib. the general consensus was that the events which led to israel moving into PA controlled jenin camp are the attacks, we can't go back beyond that, please look for this in the archives and let us know if you wish to reopen the issue. Jaakobou 13:22, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- 146 does not need a username to contribute, and since previous discussions were circular, frustrating, and did not resolve anything, it is most welcome for a new user to re-open the discussion with a fresh perspective.
- I think we have persistent problems in this article of citation and attribution. For instance, Jaakobou reverted back to a statement which says that "Prompted by over a dozen suicide bombings in the previous month which left over 100 civilians dead, the IDF launched a large-scale offensive in the West Bank..." and is sourced to an IMFA record of a press conference .
- First problem: "prompted". "X prompted Y" is an objective statement of fact, and it strongly connotes that Y is the natural and logical response to X. It is true that Sharon and other senior Israelis said that terror attacks prompted Defensive Shield, and that's very much worth including. But for us to say "X prompted Y" goes beyond this; it makes a direct conclusion on which not all sources agree.
- Second problem: "over a dozen...100 dead". The simple fact is, nobody at the cited press conference said this. Sharon and Ben-Eliezer both referred to three attacks which killed 21 people. The terms "dozen", "twelve", "fourteen", "fifteen", "sixteen" and so on do not occur ("thirteen" occurs in an unrelated context) nor do "100" or "hundred". Sharon makes a general reference to "terrorism, terrorism and more terrorism" which is about as close as he gets to what we're actually writing here. It may well be that in some other source, senior Israelis did say that they were prompted by over a dozen attacks with 100+ dead; if this is the case, we should add those sources and present them accurately. It is unacceptable to use sources that seem to support a claim unless you read them closely and check what they say. This technique is used heavily in Battle of Jenin to its severe detriment.
- Third problem: Removal of maintenance tags without consensus. This should not be happening. Perhaps was more appropriate than in this case, but we can't allow a statement to stand unchallenged when it is not in the given source and is phrased in a leading POV fashion. Eleland 14:39, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- "this article could get real troublesome if we go with that type of information all the way back to the jews of Yathrib." Yes, exactly. The lead is making it sound as if Israel sat around and did nothing for months, then suddenly attacked Jenin, which isn't what the historical record according to the sources says. At the same time you keep removing from the background the fact, from the UN report on the battle, that there were ongoing tit for tat attacks on both sides. I guess you want to make the Palestinian side look ruthless at the expense of making Israel look weak, and at the expense of the sources. But your position is untenable. This is, as the name suggests, just one battle in a larger war. -- 146.115.58.152 15:08, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Anon and Eleland both make good points. I wonder why we don't simplify and neutralize the lead paragraph so that it gives context without tendentious causality. Something like:
The Battle of Jenin took place between the 3rd and 11th of April 2002 in Jenin's Palestinian refugee camp. It constituted the apex and most controversial episode of Operation Defensive Shield, Israel's large-scale military response to a string of Palestinian suicide bombings. As the camp was completely sealed for the duration of the siege, early accounts of what took place depended heavily on hearsay, and were significantly revised by outside investigations in the aftermath. Details of the siege are still hotly disputed, and continue to serve as a lightning rod for criticism of Israel's alleged human-rights violations on the one hand, and alleged Palestinian media manipulation on the other.
- And then the last paragraph of the lead can cite the findings of human-rights organizations, and mention that the siege/battle is sometimes still referred to as the "Jenin massacre," though the formulation is highly controversial.
- I wonder what y'all think.--G-Dett 15:41, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Much improved in content, although I would obviate "constituted the apex" and "serve as a lightning rod". How about, "It was the most visible and controversial episode of", and "details of the siege are still hotly disputed, with allegations of Israeli war crimes on one hand, and of Palestinian propaganda on the other." I think that "war crimes" and "propaganda" describe the allegations more succinctly and accurately. Eleland 15:50, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, good improvements/tightening.--G-Dett 15:55, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- I don't want to put a stick into anyone's spokes, but I think incremental improvements of this article is a mistake while it is structured to be "For/Against" the "No Massacre Thesis". That structure is a road-block that will stop us ever getting a sensible article. Re-structure first, then do the lead, then tighten up on the rest of it. However, I'm very happy with the work done by G-Dett and Eleland and commend their new lead (which, incidentally, would be something like what we decided we needed some weeks ago, in one of the sections started by Jaakobou).
- PS - I've re-indented this section into the "threaded" form I believe it should have. This is not an exercise in disruption (I've even left the comment contribution in it's original confused state), it's because I'm pretty sure it makes it much more sensible and easier to read. PalestineRemembered 18:28, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, good improvements/tightening.--G-Dett 15:55, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- Much improved in content, although I would obviate "constituted the apex" and "serve as a lightning rod". How about, "It was the most visible and controversial episode of", and "details of the siege are still hotly disputed, with allegations of Israeli war crimes on one hand, and of Palestinian propaganda on the other." I think that "war crimes" and "propaganda" describe the allegations more succinctly and accurately. Eleland 15:50, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
comment1 - if certain editors can't cool off and avoid discussions that don't really relate to them, then i'm afraid we won't get many things achieved on this article.
comment2 - User:146.115.58.152, please follow my requests and when finished start a proper subsection on the topic and we will adress it properly and probably make some new concensus on how to write down the intro and the background section, i think the background is indeed pro-israel in an innaccurate way, but i don't see how misplacing information and turning the talk into a battleground (not reffering to anyone in particular) will help us resolve anything. Jaakobou 22:12, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- This section seems perfectly proper to me. This isn't a bureaucracy. The sentence in question, in any case now has been rewritten, the only thing left to do is replace the WP:Weasel word "numerous" with the more accurate count "three." -- 146.115.58.152 22:25, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- the problem is not the weasel term, but editors "batteling", who change the article repeatedly in a manner that allows degregation of the article rather than an improvement.
- here's an old version of the lead you should get acquained with, it will be making a swift comeback soon so we can avoid the "numereous" weasel term. Jaakobou 23:51, 8 September 2007 (UTC)
- User:146.115.58.152, in case you didn't notice, in this edit, you've removed the information that i retrieved from the past (about 6 suicide attacks within' two weeks). pardon the heated note, but regarding my previous note (1) you've yet to login with a proper user name, and (2) i get the feeling that you've not yet went over the material properly considering how you treat the UN reference (that, best i'm aware, israel did not even participate in it's process) while omitting other sources and the information within'. and lastly (3) it seems that you've mixed times and contexts with the introduction and while you added that the israeli 1st incursion caused many life loss, you've not went before it to register why the first incursion occurred... and also, not registered why the palestinians made these terror attacks that ignited the 1st incursion... etc. see note (3) from above and related talk. Jaakobou 06:53, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
previously referred to as the Jenin Massacre - round III
- based on the notation of User:146.115.58.152, the following talk is resumed in continuation from previously referred to as the Jenin Massacre - round II.
- an earlier discussion was is registered here
since we seem to have quite a few versions on how to phrase the "jenin massacre" name i request people, rather than revert and change to their preferred version, list down the version they prefer 'and the reasoning. if you wish to ask questions or make commentary please do it on the comments and questions section. Jaakobou 15:18, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
preferred version
- 'previously referred to as the Jenin Massacre - i was a tad conflicted about "previously dubbed as" because "jenin massacre" was never an official name albeit the way the fighting was presented. i've decided to support the mellower and more encyclopedic version, to what i consider the previously more common way the "consensus" described the israeli battle inside the camp. Jaakobou 15:18, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
comments and questions
- comment - Can't we slow down on the conflict? The previous one is still smoldering. http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/middle_east/1937048.stm The headline calls it a massacre. That's my quick and unfinished research for the moment. Jerseycam 01:35, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
- comment - The word "massacre" is part of some man's quote. You need reliable sources saying that the battle was indeed previously called "Jenin Massacre". Beit Or 19:28, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
- reply comment - we have a number of sources in the article body, both mainstream and official sources, who clearly used the massacre terminology during the battle. p.s. one of them is right above your comment. Jaakobou 22:07, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
- elements of a massacre did occur. A UN report concluded that mass killings in the range of 500 did not occur but official Israeli source acknowledge that 52 were killed. A significant part of the public will probably remember it as a massacre. News sources quote it as a massacre. Blame them, not WP. Jerseycam 02:23, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
- perhaps we should say "overstated in the media as a massacre" then, since international rights groups (the UN, HRW, AI) either do not term the battle as a massacre or blatantly state that a massacre did not occur. Yes, it was widely reported by the media as a massacre during the conflict and even until the smoke cleared and investigations actually had the ability to go in and disprove the claims of massacre. Kyaa the Catlord 01:06, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
- comment - extra talk can also be found here: sep. 9 static
- i refer you to my "comment/explanation" for a further comment regarding my perspective. Jaakobou 01:16, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
Take "Jenin Massacre" out of the lead - comment by Sanguinalis, and related talk
I would prefer to take Jenin Massacre out of the lead altogether. If we consider only Western sources, it is not at all clear that "Jenin Massacre" was ever used as a name for the fighting of April 2002, even by the British press. Jaakobou seems to concede this when he writes "'jenin massacre' was never an official name". Compare, for example, Racak massacre. Here is a BBC article three years after the fact that uses the term "Racak massacre" in a plain, matter-of-fact, narrational voice to refer to that incident (in which the death toll was 45, by the way). There has never been an article in the British press that uses the term "Jenin massacre" in a comparable way. The most notorious article, the BBC's Jenin 'massacre evidence growing', does not state as fact that a massacre occured. The article only says that it is the opinion of an expert working for Amnesty International that there might have been a massacre, based on the evidence available at the time. Note that the word massacre in headline is inside a quotation. On the other hand, if we are talking about the Arab press, it seems to be the consensus here that the term Jenin massacre is still being used, so "previously referred to" does not apply. Sanguinalis 02:06, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
- The original allegations of a massacre, though, seem to be the reason this little battle gained any notoriety in the West to begin with. 1,539 Palestinians died thru 7 May 2002 during the Second Intifada due to Israeli violence (per UN ref). So, mathematically, this was an above average week, but not by an order of magnitude, as was thought at the time. Compare the 27 February 2002 IDF Operation, for lack of a working title, which the U.N. mentions. It got no international attention (
beginning the same week as the U.S. Invasion of Afghanistanoops, I was thinking of Operation Anaconda; there musta been something going on 2002#February?) so no Western source knows what it was called, or how many people died; it's not on the templates we have for it and we have no article for it. We're suffering from WP:RECENT in reverse here. -- 146.115.58.152 05:04, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
I think that that is a good solution, and hope that you'll be able to convince the rest of us. The only issue which I had with the edits (which were clearly marked and thought out - I'm grateful for that) was inclusion of the previous incursions etc. in the lead. I appreciate the attempt at "balance" as it were, but the previous IDF actions, while relevant, are not directly related in the way that the other "context" is, that is those specific bombings were cited by the Israelis as a direct part of the cassus belli. The information is still valuable to the broader picture, and so I moved it to the "background" section, albeit without the vague and possibly controversial "cycle" phrasing. Tewfik 08:49, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
- The anon's version has made the article worse, not better. Who exactly is it that is supposed to have referred to the subject of this article as the "Jenin massacre" in April 2002? The anon's text implies the term was once "in favor" with "international organizations". Which organizations exactly? AI? HRW? The UN? No one has produced a statement, report, or other document from any of these organizations which refer to the battle/incursion as the "Jenin massacre", and until someone does this text should be removed. Likewise there is no article from the British press during this period that refers to it as such. If the Arab press is meant, that should be said explicitly (and is, later in the article). Sanguinalis 14:05, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
I think Sanguinalis sums it up well. The term "jenin massacre" appears to have been largely an invention of Israeli and pro-Israeli press, who then attributed it falsely to their opponents. In any case, it is not suitable for inclusion in the lead, which should focus primarily on the actual events on the ground, with secondary attention to international reaction. Currently we have a lead which talks more about Palestinian suicide bombings than any other topic; now you want to add information about sporadic reports in non-reliable media outlets? If you replace paragraphs 2 and 3 with a single brief mention that it was part of IDF operation "Defensive Shield", you have something close to the lede I'd prefer. The last thing we should do is stuff in more tangentally relevant information just to make Palestinians look bad, let alone draw false implications about what international organizations did. Eleland 14:35, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
The term "jenin massacre" appears to have been largely an invention of Israeli and pro-Israeli press, who then attributed it falsely to their opponents.
— by User:Eleland, 14:35, 9 September 2007
all i can say is, "wow". Jaakobou 14:59, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
- I put on my tin foil hat as I step away from the microphone to breathe. Wow. Kyaa the Catlord 17:20, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
Perhaps Jaakobou or Kyaa can help. In "previously referred to as the Jenin Massacre", who exactly is it who once referred to the battle as "Jenin massacre", and now now longer does? Be specific. Sanguinalis 17:36, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
- the mainstream media reported it either as massacre or possible massacre, the word battle was secondary in the reports. i suggest you go over the linked talk and also the article sources and compare the words in the 6 april - 28 april and the articles that came out afterwards. Jaakobou 23:03, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
- My very first involvement in this talk page was to point out that an Anti-Defamation League screed claimed that world media rushed to embrace this "Jenin massacre" concept, yet none of the quotations given by the world media actually used the term "massacre" except in scare quotes, or attributed with some word such as "allegations" or "claimed". If you Google "Jenin massacre" you will find scores of rightwing media-flak groups, blogs, etc which all attribute this term "Jenin massacre" to supposedly anti-Israel sources, yet never quote them using it.
- I have just now noticed that Media Lens made this observation long ago: "As of May 6, 2002, Media Lens found 65 examples in the Guardian and Observer, and 27 examples in the Independent, of articles containing the words 'Jenin' and 'massacre'. Remarkably, we found not even +one+ example of a Guardian, Observer or Independent journalist describing Jenin as a massacre. Instead, we found dozens of references to 'claims' and 'allegations' of a massacre in Jenin."
- I don't know what Palestinian officials may have said off-the-cuff during those dark days when the camp was locked down, Israeli generals were estimating "hundreds" or "250 dead", and Ha'aretz was quoting Shimon Peres calling it a "massacre". But as Uri Avnery so aptly put it, "The army wanted to prevent the entrance of eye-witnesses into the camp at any price. The army knew that this would give rise to rumors about a terrible massacre, but preferred this to the disclosure of the truth. If one takes such extreme measures to hide something, one cannot complain about the rumors." Eleland 21:18, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
"Jenin Massacre" is currently the name of this entry's Arabic version. That phrase in Arabic returns 13,800 hits, none of them to CAMERA et al., while English returns 30,500. Such contemporary gems from the "Israeli and pro-Israeli press" include "Jenin 'massacre evidence growing'", "Arabs press UN over Jenin 'massacre'", and "Expert weighs up Jenin 'massacre'" from the BBC, "Jenin massacre uncovering" and "UN report on Jenin massacre flawed" from ABC (Au), "UN report rejects claims of Jenin massacre" from the Guardian, and others from pro-Israel bastions like Al Jazeera, Democracy Now!, CounterPunch, and more. Tewfik 09:03, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
“Weasel words and disruptive spin” in the lead
The weasel word reference, Tewfik, is to the repeated insertion of the word “some” – "some international sources" – on your stated grounds that “only the EU said without qualification” that Israel had used “indiscriminate” and disproportionate force. I don’t where you get this idea and why you keep insisting on it when it’s been shown to be false. The “spin,” of course, is a reference to your continual attempt to frontload, buff up, and even exaggerate those findings you agree with, while muffing or weasel-wording those you don’t. So the fact that human-rights groups “found no evidence of massacres” isn’t enough; you need them to have “disproved” or “overturned" the allegations, and you’re willing to have a syntactically muddled sentence in order to get that extra legalistic ooomph. And while you’re burnishing that finding, you won’t even acknowledge the fact that HRW very clearly described Israeli actions as “indiscriminate,” although it’s irrefutable. I don’t know how to describe this kind of behavior except as disruptive. At any rate, the version you’re edit-warring against is clean, elegant, straightforward, incontestably NPOV, and closely follows the language actually used by the sources. Please stop spinning it.
Now I’m going to give you some sources, most of which you should already have read, in the hopes that you’ll stop once and for all claiming that “only the EU” has described Israel’s use of force as “indiscriminate.” We’ve been through the UN report together; your argument, as I understand it, is that whenever it uses the word “indiscriminate” it’s quoting Palestinians. Even if this were true – and it isn’t – this would still be a very weak argument, because these are findings, and the report is obviously quoting what it finds to be credible. When the UN report says “Witness testimonies and human rights investigations allege that the destruction was both disproportionate and indiscriminate," (i) it is clear that they find the allegations credible, and (ii) while the "witness testimonies" are almost certainly Palestinians, the "human rights investigations" are almost certainly not. At any rate, the reliable sources do not agree with your idiosyncratic argument, and the UN report was widely described as finding Israel to have used “indiscriminate force”: The Toronto Star, for example, reported that “Israel is criticized for "disproportionate and indiscriminate destruction" of civilian property, using Palestinian civilians as human shields during house-to-house searches and for preventing aid and medical workers from staging rescue operations."
The Association for Civil Rights in Israel described in Ha'aretz how the "Jenin refugee camp has been subjected to indiscriminate house demolitions." The detailed Amnesty report "Shielded from Scrutiny: IDF violations in Jenin and Nablus" also focused on the "indiscriminate" use of force. But your most mind-boggling omission is Human Rights Watch's repeated statements on the matter. They say very clearly "Palestinians were used as human shields and the IDF employed indiscriminate and excessive use of force." In their Human Rights Watch World Report, 2003: Events of 2002, they describe the background of Operation Defensive Shield:
During the operation, Israeli soldiers repeatedly used indiscriminate and excessive force, killed civilians willfully and unlawfully, and used Palestinian civilians as humans shields.
Then in the next paragraph they focus specifically on the siege of Jenin:
Israeli security forces continued to resort to excessive and indiscriminate use of lethal force, causing numerous civilian deaths and serious injuries. In Jenin, Human Rights Watch documented twenty-two civilian killings during the IDF military operations in April. Many of them were killed willfully or unlawfully, and in some cases constituted war crimes.
It then goes on to describe a 57-year-old man in a wheelchair "equipped with a white flag" being shot to death and run over by IDF tanks, and a 37-year-old quadriplegic being crushed to death when his father was not permitted to evacuate him from their family home. Tewfik, an entire chapter of HRW's lengthy report on Jenin is called "Disproportionate and Indiscriminate Use of Force Without Military Necessity by the IDF." A sample passage:
The destruction in other areas of the camp was indiscriminate in its effect on the civilian population, and disproportionate to the military objective obtained... Human Rights Watch concludes that the Israeli military actions in the Jenin refugee camp included both indiscriminate and disproportionate attacks. Some attacks were indiscriminate because Israeli forces, particularly the IDF helicopters, did not focus their firepower only towards legitimate military targets, but rather fired into the camp at random. This indiscriminate use of firepower added significantly to the civilian casualty toll of the fighting and the destruction of civilian homes in the camp. The Israeli offensive in Jenin refugee camp was also disproportionate, because the incidental loss of civilian life, injury to civilians, and damage to civilian objects was excessive in relation to the concrete and direct military advantage anticipated.
This chapter then has a subsection on "Indiscriminate Helicopter Fire":
Although missiles had been used from the beginning of the incursion, their use became particularly intense in the early morning hours of April 6. Testimony collected by Human Rights Watch indicates that many areas of the refugee camp were fired upon at that time, catching many sleeping civilians unaware. Many of the rockets used were U.S.-made wire-guided TOW missiles. The evidence gathered by Human Rights Watch suggests that many of the TOW missiles indiscriminately hit civilian homes and in at least one case a civilian was killed when she was struck by a helicopter missile. The number of solely civilian objects hit in the helicopter attacks the early morning of April 6 suggests that insufficient care was taken by Israeli forces to target only military objects. Due to the dense urban setting of the refugee camp, fighters and civilians were never at great distances. Nevertheless, such proximity does not provide a valid excuse by Israeli forces' action in firing upon the entire area as if it were a single military target... Indiscriminate attacks were most intense on April 6, but they did not entirely abate afterwards... Some of the helicopter missile fire was so indiscriminate that it nearly killed IDF soldiers.
Tewfik, can you please, please stop saying that among international sources, only a Spanish official of the U.N. described Israeli actions as “indiscriminate”? And will you please leave in place a neutral version of the lead, one which doesn’t muffle or disguise one set of HRW findings while foregrounding and burnishing another?--G-Dett 14:34, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
- To your thorough and unimpeachable demolition of Tewfikstery I add only that Peter Beaumont of The Observer specifically described "helicopters ... firing indiscriminately into the city's crowded refugee camp"; he was an international journalist and a direct eyewitness. Tewfik argued previously that because Beaumont in another paragraph also said that Palestinians alleged indiscriminate helicopter fire, his direct objective-voice statements didn't count. It's in Talk:Battle of Jenin/Archive 3#The neutrality and factual accuracy of this article are disputed.. Eleland 14:46, 9 September 2007 (UTC)
Instead of an essay justifying your allegations of bad faith, G-Dett, you could acknowledge that comments should be limited to the edits, and not the editors. The same goes for you, Eleland, since poison like Tewfikstery is just as wrong as me talking about some hypothetical "Elelandery". No one has the right to suspend WP:CIV because they believe that their position is the correct one, and I'm certainly not going to begin taking seriously comments that ignore it just because their frequency is increasing.
As for the actual substance, the above comments omit that the UN report still refuses unqualified use of the word in reference to Jenin, that the AI report still refuses any use of the word in reference to Jenin, and that despite its section documenting the cases it considered indiscriminate, HRW still makes the charge twice in its introduction, once in regard to the Israelis ("At times, however, IDF military attacks were indiscriminate"), once to the Palestinians ("using indiscriminate tactics such as planting improvised explosive"). Whether you agree that HRW is qualifying or not, none of this substantiates the idea that the objective position of all of these parties was that "Israeli actions were indiscriminate", nor are these the sum of relevant "international organisations" (the US being a notable example). Hence, "some international organisations". Tewfik 07:21, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- No, Tewfik.--G-Dett 10:07, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
The cites which are there support "Palestinian sources" but not "International". The UN report is based on Palestinian accounts. As for the NGOs and HR groups, that's in the next sentence. <<-armon->> 13:12, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- All the international findings – including that there was "no evidence of a massacre" – were based on Palestinian accounts, in this strict and tendentious construction. The Israelis refused to cooperate with the investigations, remember?--G-Dett 13:21, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Well I guess it's not surprising that the allegations were from Palestinian sources then. <<-armon->> 13:25, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- We should not be labelling sources by their ethnicity. That's the kind of thing that the South Africans used to do. PalestineRemembered 14:49, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Agree. So we won't change it to "Arab sources". <<-armon->> 15:20, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Armon, the minor problem with saying "Palestinian sources" is that it's well-poisoning, as well as patronizing in the way that PR accurately suggests. The major problem is that it's incredibly misleading, because the very sources whose findings of "no evidence of massacre" we're presenting as definitive, also very explicitly found Israel's use of force to be "indiscriminate." That's what's exhaustively demonstrated above, in the section you claim to have read.--G-Dett 15:35, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Actually no, it clearly and correctly identifies who made the claims. Adding in "International sources" is a way of "buffing up" the accusation which is misleading and not supported by the cites. <<-armon->> 15:41, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Human Rights Watch and Amnesty International are international sources, Armon, not Palestinian ones. Again, please the relevant material.--G-Dett 15:48, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- ...who also investigated, and later stepped back from the massacre claims. The very next sentence makes that clear. <<-armon->> 16:00, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, the very next sentence makes that clear, so why are you tooling around with this one? The major international human-rights organizations found Israel to have used "indiscriminate" force, but your edit attributes this claim to Palestinians. Why?--G-Dett 16:35, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Because it was their claim. I thought I made that clear. <<-armon->> 16:55, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Good G-d, man, read the damn sources already. If you can't be bothered with that, read the damn section you're commenting in. "Indiscriminate" is HRW's claim; they reiterate in their conclusions again and again and again and again and again and again. HRW is international; HRW is not Palestinian; HRW says "indiscriminate." I'm in Boston, Armon, where are you? If you're not too far, I'll make the trip and read the sources out loud to you, if you can't bring yourself to drag your eyes over them.--G-Dett 17:10, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- That goes for you too, Kyaa. Read the damn sources. An edit like this, after all the foregoing, is disruptive.--G-Dett 18:25, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- HRW attributes their statement to Palestinian sources. WP:IDONTLIKEIT much? Kyaa the Catlord 22:47, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- I don't like these calculated misrepresentations of source materials much, and I'm tiring of these assembly-line ".....much?" quips as well. HRW doesn't attribute their statements about Israel's "indiscriminate and disproportionate" use of force to Palestinians any more than they attribute their finding of "no evidence of massacre" to Palestinians. Read the sources, Kyaa, and stop lying to readers and other editors.--G-Dett 23:31, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- HRW attributes their statement to Palestinian sources. WP:IDONTLIKEIT much? Kyaa the Catlord 22:47, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- That goes for you too, Kyaa. Read the damn sources. An edit like this, after all the foregoing, is disruptive.--G-Dett 18:25, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Good G-d, man, read the damn sources already. If you can't be bothered with that, read the damn section you're commenting in. "Indiscriminate" is HRW's claim; they reiterate in their conclusions again and again and again and again and again and again. HRW is international; HRW is not Palestinian; HRW says "indiscriminate." I'm in Boston, Armon, where are you? If you're not too far, I'll make the trip and read the sources out loud to you, if you can't bring yourself to drag your eyes over them.--G-Dett 17:10, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Because it was their claim. I thought I made that clear. <<-armon->> 16:55, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, the very next sentence makes that clear, so why are you tooling around with this one? The major international human-rights organizations found Israel to have used "indiscriminate" force, but your edit attributes this claim to Palestinians. Why?--G-Dett 16:35, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- ...who also investigated, and later stepped back from the massacre claims. The very next sentence makes that clear. <<-armon->> 16:00, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Human Rights Watch and Amnesty International are international sources, Armon, not Palestinian ones. Again, please the relevant material.--G-Dett 15:48, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- I'm rather concerned that PR is accusing us of being racist. I certainly hope he refactors his statement to avoid that accusation. Kyaa the Catlord 15:45, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Par for the course. <<-armon->> 16:00, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- When you two are finished licking each other's wounds, note that PR is clearly talking about the patronizing tone of the text, not about the flawed souls of editors.--G-Dett 16:32, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- PR is lucky to have you to "translate" for him. <<-armon->> 16:55, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- No, he's unlucky to have other editors misrepresenting him. It's been a problem in his time here, you will recall.--G-Dett 17:10, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- PR is lucky to have you to "translate" for him. <<-armon->> 16:55, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- When you two are finished licking each other's wounds, note that PR is clearly talking about the patronizing tone of the text, not about the flawed souls of editors.--G-Dett 16:32, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Par for the course. <<-armon->> 16:00, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Actually no, it clearly and correctly identifies who made the claims. Adding in "International sources" is a way of "buffing up" the accusation which is misleading and not supported by the cites. <<-armon->> 15:41, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Armon, the minor problem with saying "Palestinian sources" is that it's well-poisoning, as well as patronizing in the way that PR accurately suggests. The major problem is that it's incredibly misleading, because the very sources whose findings of "no evidence of massacre" we're presenting as definitive, also very explicitly found Israel's use of force to be "indiscriminate." That's what's exhaustively demonstrated above, in the section you claim to have read.--G-Dett 15:35, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Agree. So we won't change it to "Arab sources". <<-armon->> 15:20, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- We should not be labelling sources by their ethnicity. That's the kind of thing that the South Africans used to do. PalestineRemembered 14:49, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Well I guess it's not surprising that the allegations were from Palestinian sources then. <<-armon->> 13:25, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
(outdent) Hmmm, my custom-made Personal vs. Substance meter seems to be blinking. Nudge, nudge. HG | Talk 02:22, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- Well, I'm at a loss, HG. HRW's findings re "indiscriminate" are very clear, as are their findings about "no evidence of massacre." Armon and Kyaa like the latter, dislike the former, and are whitewashing accordingly. I've given voluminous evidence above, which I shouldn't have had to do, because it's their responsibility as editors to know the sources and not misrepresent them. Yes, we are to assume good faith, but even WP:AGF makes an exception when editors are evidently lying.--G-Dett 02:52, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- I fail to see how the very next sentence which summarizes the HRGs' findings as "Major human rights organizations subsequently conducted extensive investigations and found no evidence of massacres, but strong prima facie evidence of IDF war crimes." is whitewashing. <<-armon->> 03:05, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- The part you're whitewashing is the part about "indiscriminate," which – despite an avalanche of source material to the contrary – you keep falsely attributing to "Palestinian sources."--G-Dett 04:26, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- Again, because they made the initial allegations. The HRGs' findings are a different issue, so there's no reason to conflate them. <<-armon->> 04:36, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- And yet what you just deleted was not a conflation. And the edit you've left in place makes it look like only Palestinian sources described the Israeli attack as indiscriminate.--G-Dett 04:47, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- It certainly is a conflation. It's an attempt to piggyback what has been shown to be a less-reliable source, onto what's regarded as a more reliable one. This is an example of biased writing. The solution is to clearly attribute who said what. <<-armon->> 05:26, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- I'm not sure if you know what "conflation" means – or "piggyback" for that matter – but there's only one source we're discussing here, HRW. You're alternately suppressing their finding of "indiscriminate" use of force, or misrepresenting it as coming from as a "Palestinian source." Now Tewfik has returned to edit-warring to have it say massacre claims "were overturned by outside sources." So HRW is a "Palestinian source" or an "outside source" depending on whether you're trying to burnish/exaggerate a finding or to suppress/well-poison it. Way to go, team spin. The contempt you show for your fellow editors' intelligence, not to mention WP:NPOV, never ceases to appall.--G-Dett 11:44, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- It certainly is a conflation. It's an attempt to piggyback what has been shown to be a less-reliable source, onto what's regarded as a more reliable one. This is an example of biased writing. The solution is to clearly attribute who said what. <<-armon->> 05:26, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- And yet what you just deleted was not a conflation. And the edit you've left in place makes it look like only Palestinian sources described the Israeli attack as indiscriminate.--G-Dett 04:47, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- Again, because they made the initial allegations. The HRGs' findings are a different issue, so there's no reason to conflate them. <<-armon->> 04:36, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- The part you're whitewashing is the part about "indiscriminate," which – despite an avalanche of source material to the contrary – you keep falsely attributing to "Palestinian sources."--G-Dett 04:26, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- I fail to see how the very next sentence which summarizes the HRGs' findings as "Major human rights organizations subsequently conducted extensive investigations and found no evidence of massacres, but strong prima facie evidence of IDF war crimes." is whitewashing. <<-armon->> 03:05, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- Hear, hear. Enough punctilios. If, as Tewfik claims, he has read the sources, then he knows that HRW calls Israeli actions in Jenin "indescriminate" again and again and again. He knows that the EU describes "an indiscriminate use of force, that goes well beyond that of a battlefield", and that Amnesty describes "documented cases in Jenin and Nablus where people were killed or injured in circumstances suggesting that they were unlawfully and deliberately targeted". To claim that these statements do not represent allegations of indescriminate action can prima facie be regarded only as conscious distortion of the facts. I would welcome any information which dispels this perception, but I'm not holding my breath. Eleland 03:19, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- Agreed. At some point it just becomes degrading to keep discussing this.--G-Dett 03:34, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
Ultimately employed
Well, here's another narrow and clear-cut dispute which we can all spill some ink on.
- The Israeli force consisted primarily of infantry supported by armoured vehicles and ultimately employed attack helicopters and armoured bulldozers as their casualties mounted,
Note six is a scholarly opinion piece by an Israeli grad student, seven is Peter Beaumont in the Observer, and eight is the Jafee Centre conference report.
6 says nothing of the sort about helicopters; just that they were used, and that the IDF officially stated their use was "carefully controlled". It does say that D-9s were used after the April 9 ambush. 7 says nothing about the timing of various weaponry; just that "Dr Zaid Ayasi, director of the hospital, tells us that many of the civilian victims that he knows of were hit by helicopter fire in those few days ." 8 has a reprint of BBC's Jeremy Cooke saying "And so for days now the Israeli helicopter gunships have been carrying out wave after wave of attacks against Jenin,"of HRW saying "Civilian residents of the camp described days of sustained missile fire from helicopters hitting their houses...Firing was particularly indiscriminate on the morning of April 6, when missiles were launched from helicopters", and of the UN recounting that "Interviews with witnesses conducted by human rights organizations suggest that tanks, helicopters and ground troops using small arms predominated in the firsttwo days ... There are reports that during IDF increased missile strikes from helicopters".
So that's what the currently used sources have to say; nothing about helicopter fire being "ultimately employed" after Israeli casualties. Armored bulldozer use was greatly stepped up, of course, after the IDF penetrated Hawashin around 9 April but this appears to have happened after their casualties had stopped, rather than "as their casualties mounted". I propose:
- The Israeli force consisted of infantry and armored vehicles, supported by attack helicopters. Towards the end of operations armored bulldozers were used heavily. Eleland 13:30, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Sounds good to me. Kyaa the Catlord 13:32, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Agree. That was quick ;) <<-armon->> 13:42, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Agree. Sounds good to me. --Steve, Sm8900 20:48, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Oppose - my understanding is that gunships were used extensively in the first few days, before it was clear there was going to be much resistance and before there were too many IDF engaged. They did this all over the camp, causing extensive damage before the militants were forced back into one smallish area, the one that was flattened. The helicopters "swarmed", fired bullets "like rain" and used a considerable number of TOW-missiles.
- I should really provide the references for this, but it's all been in the article before, and been edit-warred out. In the meantime, the most important thing is to take out the "Body Count Estimates" section and put in place a structure from which a good article could eventually emerge. PalestineRemembered 14:47, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- PR, I think what Eleland, Kyaa, and Armon are saying is consistent with what you're saying, unless I'm missing something.--G-Dett 15:14, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
I've made the edit, keeping the the 10% of the camp destroyed bit. OK? <<-armon->> 03:02, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- Looks good. Tewfik 07:11, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
Burgas00's edits
Armon why do you disagree with my edits to the lead section?--Burgas00 14:21, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
- You reverted under me while I was still editing out the background you objected to. Anyway, this introduces weasel words. And I think the death toll is better at the end. If you want to highlight it, and I tend to agree, it's the human cost, placing it at the end is good. It's the end result. <<-armon->> 14:32, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
Sorry if I accidentally reverted you. The really problematic bit for me is the martyrs bit, that many other editors seem to have objected to and seems overtly POV and inadequate for the lead section.
Taking the main elements of my edits:
Eliminating the phrase in the lead that claims that Palestinians know Jenin RC as a "Martyrs Capital It seems to say: "before you read on, don't forget that the people who live here are just a bunch of terrorists, so its ok if they get killed".
Any source which shows evidence of Martyrs capital being used does not prove that such a term is of general use among the Palestinian population and I am sure, as I recall a Palestinian editor expressing, many find it distateful. I would also understand that they find such a statement offensive since it would indirectly say that all Palestinians condone violence.
Eliminating the bit on past terrorist attacks from lead section
That information is already in the background as I have already expressed. I appreciate you have slightly shortened it. My point is that, Background sections exist for a reason, i.e. to offer facts which lead up and explain the described event (in this case the battle of Jenin. Including the terrorist attacks on Israel in the Lead points to an unexpressed urge to justify the Military Operation inmediately and is thus NPOV. I understand we are all politiced and edit these articles from a strong position. However, it would be better if all explanations on why things occur were in the section which serves that purpose.
My edits regarding the term massacre
I may have unwittingly introduced weasel words in this edit as you claim, but the rationale here is that we should not judge whether there was a massacre or not. It is not a court of law and there is no clear definition of massacre. What must be conveyed is that the term massacre was initially used to describe the event, and then dropped by most mainstream media. This is better than saying that initially it was thought that there was a massacre, and then it turned out that there wasn't.
Moving up the paragraph on deaths
Its not only a question of highlighting the human cost. Its more about logical coherency. The lead section should contain firstly what happened and then about the media/international reaction, not vice versa.
That sums up my position, pretty much. I won't edit the article again until some constructive dialogue is established.
--Burgas00 15:00, 11 September 2007 (UTC)