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::::: they dont deal with the issue. ] (]) 15:16, 29 June 2010 (UTC) ::::: they dont deal with the issue. ] (]) 15:16, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

::::::Well maybe it is a language problem then. I will try (once more) to simplify it for you.
::::::1 - "''mauled the 16th German Air Force Field Division. Thus, the victory at Caen had been a hard-won affair that owed much to the resolution of the ordinary....''" - This means that the mauling led to a victory (Thus means due to what I said in the previous sentence/s)
::::::2 - "''The enemy has been successful and occupied the northern part of Caen...the 16 GAF, were not there... had suffered 75% losses''" - he is saying that the occupation of the north part was sucessful because the GAF suffered 75% losses and left
::::::3 - "''However, there was no doubt that these positions could not have been held any longer, because of the completely open right flank and also because of the heavy German losses''." - he is saying that the Germans could not hold the positions because of the heavy losses.
::::::I do not understand why you cannot accept that - it is not OR or SYNTH - it is merely the opinions of sources which can be quoted to support the statement "it was a success due to XXXX and the high German losses"
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Does Category:Religious paramilitary organizations work as an NPOV cat name?

There's been a lot of controversy on Misplaced Pages over terms such as "terrorist" for various armed groups, prefering terms such as "militant". I've put together a category, Category:Religious paramilitary organizations to see if it's a workable solution to non-judgementally tie together armed non-state actors with a religious commonality/purpose. This could include some of the less-disputed "terrorist" groups, as well as "self-defense forces", "militias", etc. under an objective terminology. I'd appreciate any input, and if the cat name is solid some help populating it would also be great. MatthewVanitas (talk) 18:14, 18 June 2010 (UTC)

Unfortunately, it can be argued that such a category could in many or most cases be called Category:Paramilitary organizations perverting religion for their cause. Perhaps Category:Paramilitary organizations claiming divine right. IMHO "religious" as an adjective is too open to interpretation: organized religion? self-professed? etc. I would have the same problem with the subcategories that would emanate: Islamic paramilitary organizations, Catholic paramilitary organizations, Protestant paramilitary organizations, and so forth. The only one to strictly fit such a category, I believe, would be the Crusaders as a paramilitary organization officially sanctioned by the Catholic Church. PЄTЄRS J VЄСRUМВАTALK 18:29, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
In a spirit of practical compromise, how about wording it Category:Paramilitary organisations claiming religious affiliation? I also think it should be restricted to more modern times - the concept of a paramilitary organisation is pretty meaningless in the Middle Ages when standing military forces of nation states were the exception rather than the rule.Monstrelet (talk) 09:39, 19 June 2010 (UTC)

Request for checking article for quality etc

Hi all

I have further expanded the British_Expeditionary_Force_(World_War_II) article. Eyeserene has already given it a going over prior to this latest expansion but I would appreciate if someone could check it now I have added some more detail to it.

The article has grown from 2,700 to 20,155 bytes so I am getting a bit blurry eyed and rather than chance missing simple things would appreciate somone giving it the once over before I start on the "Action" section

In particular the background section and the refs :¬)

thanks...Chaosdruid (talk) 18:23, 18 June 2010 (UTC)

I would suggest getting a hold of books on the British Army during the Second World War, preferably academic sources, to explain the BEFs faults and strengths. I can recommend David French's Raising Churchill's Army as a basic text, along with John Keegan's edited 'Churchill's Generals' for articles on Gort and other senior BEF personnel, as well as the various books on The Battle of France in 1940. It's a good stub at the moment, but it needs analysis of the BEF's performance, especially what it was like before and during the campaign. Skinny87 (talk) 20:08, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
The following may help too: HISTORY OF THE SECOND WORLD WAR, UNITED KINGDOM MILITARY SERIES; THE WAR IN FRANCE AND FLANDERS 1939-1940 The official history of the campaignEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 20:19, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
In addition, the British Army during the Second World War#Organisation article provides more fuller details in regards to the strength of the British Army (regulars, TA, and conscripts) on the outbreak of the war and how it evolved during the years; it will be able to reinforce the point made at the end of the BEF background section. RegardsEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 20:27, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for all that info guys - I will continue tomorrow with renewed vigour !
Chaosdruid (talk) 22:55, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
It's worth noting that the official history of the campaign is now in the public domain, so its maps and images can be reused on Misplaced Pages. Nick-D (talk) 00:41, 19 June 2010 (UTC)
Is that the History of the Second World War? It was been published in stages between 1949 and the 1990s so some parts would still be less than 50 years old. GraemeLeggett (talk) 12:21, 19 June 2010 (UTC)
Yes, only the older volumes are PD so far. Nick-D (talk) 00:16, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Which should cover the volume in mention, it was first published in 1954. Somewhat off topic, would that also cover reprinted volumes from 2004?EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 10:58, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
I'm not sure, though I think that the date the work was first published is the key factor for UK Crown Copyright. Nick-D (talk) 11:01, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

A-Class review for No. 6 Commando needs attention

A few more editors are needed to complete the A-Class review for No. 6 Commando; please stop by and help review the article! Thanks! AustralianRupert (talk) 08:12, 19 June 2010 (UTC)

Categorisation of VC Winners on Commons, et al

As part of a general tidy up and recategorisation on the Commons for the UK honours system, I have just finished sorting through all the VC recipients at Comm:Category:Victoria Cross recipients. I have separated out Australia, Canada, New Zealand and South Africa into their own national sub-categories using the naming form 'Category:Victoria Cross recipients from XXX'. As far as I can tell I have got everyone, but if others would like to cast an eye to make sure, that would be appreciated.

I welcome any thoughts people may have as to whether they need to be further categorised by conflict.

I have also added categories for most of the UK decorations (any I have missed I will get to shortly), these take the form of 'Category:Recipients of the XXX' which better reflects the standard approach to category naming decorations and medals on the Commons (I didn't attempt to modify the VC naming format because it seemed well established). Whilst I have added the appropriate additional decoration categories to VC winners where I was able to spot them from the images, I didn't do a thorough cross-check against the Misplaced Pages main articles. If you are starting or maintaining military bios, please consider adding the appropriate additional categories to related imagery on the Commons. Cheers, AusTerrapin (talk) 23:13, 19 June 2010 (UTC)

Action of 17 February 1864

FYI, Action of 17 February 1864 has been nominated to be renamed. 70.29.212.131 (talk) 03:51, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

A-Class review for HMS Indefatigable (1909) now open

The A-Class review for HMS Indefatigable (1909) is now open; all editors are invited to participate, and any input there would be appreciated! Thanks! -MBK004 04:17, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

Featured article candidacy for HMS Princess Royal (1911) now open

The featured article candidacy for HMS Princess Royal (1911) is now open. Comments from reviewers are needed to help determine whether the article meets the criteria for featured articles; all editors are invited to participate, and any input there would be appreciated! Thanks! -MBK004 04:17, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

Does anyone need any help?

I'm trying to get back into the swing of editing, but after a few failed attempts at writing a new article or finishing a few of my unfinished ones, I've contracted writers block; too fast too soon probably. But I think that something smaller might be easier - copy-editing, hunting down references from my library, spell-checking and reading through and so forth. Therefore, I'm opening this up to see if anyone needs a hand in those areas - I'm quite good at hunting down images from the IWM as well! Skinny87 (talk) 15:44, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

The Tower of London article underwent an overhaul recently and could probably use some copy editing if you're interested. Nev1 (talk) 16:06, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
You are also more than welcome to edit or expand any the existing Medal of Honor recipient articles. Or create one of the missing ones as there are still quite a few that need articles created. If you prefer working on some that are at a higher level of quality there are several that are Good class or better such as Smedley Butler, Douglas MacArthur, or others that can be found on my user page. Please feel free to contact me if you have any comments or questions. --Kumioko (talk) 17:31, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Looking at your page, you look like mainly a WWII man, which is a pity as far as my evil schemes go. However, if you fancy doing any work to provide something in Spear, it would be gratefully received. A few more folks have dropped by to broaden the content (thanks everyone) but I'm still in search of someone to put in some African stuff (Masai, Zulu, Sudan, Egypt anything)in particular. Even if you don't take up my suggestion, thanks for the offer. Monstrelet (talk) 18:02, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Hi, Skinny87. I'm trying to find more images for Maori Battalion, (particularly of its time in the UK, Greece, North Africa and Italy). If you were keen, I wouldn't mind seeing if anything came up in the IWM's archives on this New Zealand infantry battalion. AustralianRupert (talk) 04:04, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
I'm (slowly!) working on developing the Battle of Arawe and John Treloar (museum administrator) articles to A class and both could really use a fresh pair of eyes. Nick-D (talk) 08:50, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
Haha, wow, I knew you lot wouldn't let me down! Plenty of projectas for me to get started on, cheers! Skinny87 (talk) 09:06, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
If you're offering to proofread, Hill 262 could do with a look over too. I think it's approaching an A-Class candidacy but needs an uninvolved pair of eyes. EyeSerene 10:44, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
Would you like to take a look at User:Buckshot06/4th Command of VVS and PVO and make any changes or suggestions that you can think of? Buckshot06 (talk) 00:14, 22 June 2010 (UTC)

Deletion of the 295th Ordnance Heavy Maintenance Company (FA) - Unwarranted

I am the author of the 295th Ordnance Heavy Maintenance Company (FA) and the web site 295th.com . This page is currently up for deletion, which seems absolutely unwarranted. Yes, the page itself could use some re-work, but the story of this company is also important, regardless of them not being front-line soldiers. Why? These men supported the front line, they helped liberate the prisoners at Dachau, and the fact that they were a non-airborne company training at Camp Toccoa and also running Currahee Mountain should be enough to warrant it staying put! Please, visit the Misplaced Pages page, the 295th web site, and give your support. Thank you in advance. 295th (talk) 21:53, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

With very few exceptions, companies are not deemed notable.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:16, 24 June 2010 (UTC)

Company (military unit) needs content

The article right now discusses only the British, Canadian, and American company organization. It doesn't at all discuss the history of the military unit, which I think is rather lacking. I'm not sure if this is the place to request someone with expertise in military history to address this, but this supposed military history article is rather lacking in history. ;) RobertM525 (talk) 03:39, 21 June 2010 (UTC)

This is one place to bring such concerns, although whether or not someone with expertise, interest and free time will pick up your suggestion is another question! Your note on the article talk page might get better results in the long run. Thank you for bringing it to our attention though :) EyeSerene 11:25, 22 June 2010 (UTC)

Request for Input from the WikiProject on Major John Pott

Greetings, project members. I recently became involved with the fairly recently created article Major John Pott (just from seeing it pop up on the Recent Changes page). Military matters are a bit out of my area of expertise, so I'd like some help. I'm concerned that the subject of the article doesn't meet the criteria listed for notability at WP:MILPEOPLE. Normally I would have left the article for someone with more knowledge, but several things about this article struck me. The first, and perhaps most telling, is that the user who created the page is the self-identified flimographer of a documentary about the subject of the article, or, more accurately, the subject's grandson who wrote a song about Major Pott. Which leads to the second problem--I feel that the article is more focused on the song/video/documentary than the subject himself. That is, I believe that the band itself, as well as the lead singer and likely even the song meet the notability criteria associated with musical acts/works, but that doesn't make the subject of the song itself notable. Thus, if the Major is determined to be notable, the article will need to be trimmed to keep those references minimal; however, I hesitate to do too much editing on that regard if the page doesn't meet notability guidelines in the first place. So, what I'd like is for someone from here to take a look at the page and see if what Major Pott is said to have done qualifies by itself under the WP:MILPEOPLE notability guidelines (in particular, see my final notes on the Talk page). Thank you very much in advance for your assistance. Qwyrxian (talk) 23:50, 21 June 2010 (UTC)

My initial impression is that the article doesn't meet WP:MILPEOPLE. It doesn't really do itself any favours - as you say, it comes across as a WP:COATRACK for the video and not a biographical article, but even with an expanded bio and trimming of irrelevant information I'm not sure the article would make the grade. Major Pott was clearly a courageous and dedicated individual, but his best claim to notability in WP terms is probably that he "commanded a notable body of troops in combat". Personally I don't believe this is strong enough, and more importantly all the items listed at MILPEOPLE are subject to our normal notability rules. One obituary and two short articles aren't, in my view, enough to cross the "significant coverage" threshold. (BTW, I've trimmed out some inappropriate external links) EyeSerene 11:47, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
As an aside from the usual notability guidelines, I can add that his name does crop up fairly frequently in Arnhem books, so he does meet the requirements for coverage in sources. However, his role in the battle wasn't hugely significant next to other officers who don't (yet) have articles. I could easily flesh out his Arnhem bit with some RS, but then I could do that for quite a few people who really wouldn't warrent articles. Ranger Steve (talk) 11:58, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
Although... I'm starting to think that combined with the Athlete connection... I would probably vote keep at an AFD. Ranger Steve (talk) 12:11, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
I have to admit I am not 100% sure if this individual meets the notibilty criteria either. Does the fact he got an MBE or other military award qualify him. I am not sure how that would affect his notibility for a member of the United Kingdom. Since I am in the US he isn't particularly notible but that doesn't mean he isnt' either. --Kumioko (talk) 12:38, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
Kumioko: an MBE isn't particularly significant and not enough to establish notability on its own.
Steve: is that coverage significant or in passing? I've read a few Arnhem books (though nothing like the research you've done) so his name was vaguely familiar, but is there enough for a WP:BIO article? I wonder if it's worth rewriting the article and seeing how it develops... EyeSerene 12:52, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
The the MC and MBE (if it was awarded for bravery) do not rate highly enough to make a recipiant notable. It seems that this is best mergerd with the page about his son.Slatersteven (talk) 12:51, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
Don't have those books with me at work I'm afraid (it's all forts and guns here), but I'll check when I get home. Off the top of my head, at least some of it is significant, and I might have some stuff about his escape (John Waddy's role wasn't exactly significant either, but it gets a lot of coverage in sources). Like Waddy though, it will almost exclusively be about Arnhem though. The Black Swan theme is snagging on something in the recesses of my memory, I'm sure I've seen it as the title of something else Arnhem related, but can't think what now. Ranger Steve (talk) 12:59, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
I don't think he meets MILPEOPLE, but I think that's probably moot given the fact he got an obit in The Daily Telegraph, and The Daily Mail article about the song/video contains a fair amount of biographical information on him, I would be inclined to vote keep on the terms of WP:GNG. It's borderline, I'd be happier if a couple more of the nationals had also given him obits, but a delete would be harsh, and the song probably has brought him to wider attention. The Telegraph only prints 3/4 obits each day (fewer if someone particularly high-profile dies), so it's pretty selective (though The Telegraph is more likely to give an obit to military figures than most of the other British national papers). Combined with sources like the London Gazette, and the citations for his decorations, which aren't independent of the subject and/or are primary sources, there is plenty to write a decent length article. David Underdown (talk) 13:04, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
Quite, MILPEOPLE cuts both ways in that significant etc coverage per WP:N can trump our guideline. I still think it's probably borderline, but it's looking a lot more hopeful than when I first commented a couple of hours ago (as I said, unfortunately the article doesn't do itself any favours). I've come around to the view that an AfD would be premature at this point :) EyeSerene 13:21, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
The citation for his MBE reveals he was also in command of C Squadron Trucial Oman Scouts, and seems to have been involved in some interesting actions supporting the SAS during that period, in particular the assault on Jebel Akhdar (Oman) under the command of Anthony Deane-Drummond, commanding larger forces as a result. If anyone has any sources covering this, they would probably be helpful for assessing his notability fully. David Underdown (talk) 13:21, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
Pott gets a cursory mention about his MC in Italy in Saunders' The Red Beret. He gets quoted at length in Waddy's book (fellow company commanders), but as Waddy doesn't use an index I can't be certain how much more he is referred to. Middlebrook's bible, Arnhem 1944, describes his company's action over 4 pages with quotes and specific details (including the brother in law connection and the attempt to write a letter). Certainly enough there to flesh out a section but, being totally unbiased, not necessarily enough to establish notability. However, my personal feeling is that there is enough notability elsewhere (being the subject of a music video that's reported in quite a few diverse reliable sources for example) to justify this, and the Arnhem sources just add to the large picture. On the other hand, this shambolic article, written by the director himself no less, describes a film that has very little notability by itself and should be probably be deleted. In fact if no-one else has by tomorrow, I'll try and find time to nominate it myself. That said, I'm off to watch it now... Ranger Steve (talk)

(od) Not at home right now, but in a day or so I can look at my SAS post-war sources and see if he crops up significantly. Skinny87 (talk) 20:26, 22 June 2010 (UTC)

I want to sincerely thank everyone here. The information and comments added have really transformed this article. Eventually, I still think it needs to get less coatrack-ish, especially now that it seems like there is at least a reasonable likelihood that the subject is notable. Qwyrxian (talk) 23:22, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
Also noting the superb job you chaps have done on the article. I think AfD is fast receding over the horizon :) EyeSerene 13:23, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
For anyone interested, you might like to know that I've nominated the related article Black swan story for deletion. Any input is always welcome. Ranger Steve (talk) 21:45, 23 June 2010 (UTC)

Request help to reach a consensus in Continuation War article

As it appears that the current result which is listed is edited to something else periodically I tried to start discussion on changing it from single word result into " see 'aftermath' and 'analysis' " so that wider or conflicting views of the issue could be properly handled and discussed as suggested in the guidelines of template infobox military conflict as it appears that current result is not such.

There was a discussion ongoing about the change but it appears that the person why was arguing against the change (seemingly part of milhist group) first decided to drop out from the discussion and then after couple of weeks silence when i made the discussed edit he immediately reverted it, demanded in the edit summary that a talk page consensus must be reached (though he himself had left the discussion - and there were apparently no others), made no talk page changes though demanding a discussion and left again (apparently).

I was suggested to 'draw wider attention to this article' in hopes of gaining consensus/resolution on the matter and as it is military history article this might be the place to ask for it. - Wanderer602 (talk) 02:45, 22 June 2010 (UTC)

Conflict lengths

Just saw this edit. Think there would ever be a need to use the age templates to list in infoboxes the length of conflicts? Could use a "partial date" parameter for the ones where there are no exact months or days. Anyone? S.G. ping! 10:22, 22 June 2010 (UTC)

FA counter on entry

You may want to update the FA counter at the main page, it is over 500 easily, check out http://toolserver.org/~enwp10/bin/list2.fcgi?run=yes&projecta=Military history&quality=FA-Class . Sadads (talk) 17:12, 22 June 2010 (UTC)

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Mystery Rifle

I present to you all this gallery of images of a mysterious rifle that was just donated to the museum this week. It's rusted to hell and back and only the metal remains, but the donor found it at the side of a field in France aftera farmer had dug it up and tossed it away. It was found in the Somme/Arromanche area of Northern France, but that is all we know. Any ideas in identifying even who used it, let alone what model/type it is, would be much appreciated. A barnstar will be awarded to anyone who can help. More photos can be taken and uploaded if required. Skinny87 (talk) 11:53, 23 June 2010 (UTC)

Looking at the sigting, I'd say a Lee-Enfield MkIII*. If you can provide some measurements I can hopefully confirm it for you. Ranger Steve (talk) 12:06, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
I have a tape-measure right at hand, Steve. What exactly do you want measured? The whole thing, or certain parts? Skinny87 (talk) 12:24, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
Hmmm... Looking at the barrel length, I'm not so sure now.... The distance between the locking ring connecting the chamber and the barrel and the sights looks to be about right... but then the barrel is huge! This is a MkIII (not a star) and it bears many similarities... it's just that length! Can you measure the barrel from the ring to the muzzle, and from the trigger to the muzzle? I'll check some books at home tonight. Ranger Steve (talk) 12:33, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
I can't say it bears any resemblance to a breakdown of an S.M.L.E. in Skennerton's Small Arms Identification Series. --Simon Harley (Talk | Library). 12:32, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
Perhaps not, but the sight looked very similar at first glance! Anyway... Aha? Ranger Steve (talk) 12:38, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
Okay, not quite sure which bit the ring was, but here goes: Muzzle to front edge of trigger guard (roughly) is 34 inches/85.5 cm, and muzzle to ring is (I think) 26 inches/66.5 cm. Again, more photos can be taken if required. Skinny87 (talk) 12:41, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
Close enough to quite possibly be the Gewehr 98 perhaps. Those pics above look awfully convincing. The full site is here. Ranger Steve (talk) 12:46, 23 June 2010 (UTC)

(od) I had a look close-up at the rifle, and I don't think it's a '98 - the trigger guard of that '98 example is square/rectangular, and ours is definitely rounded. There are also no signs of those extra bits on the '98 example, not even marks where they might have rotted off. Skinny87 (talk) 12:57, 23 June 2010 (UTC)

How about the French Berthier? The sights look about right and it had a long barrel and a rounded trigger guard. EyeSerene 13:13, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
(edit): Link to gallery EyeSerene 13:15, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
Is it perhaps the Lebel_Model_1886_rifle ? Nah - I take that back if this is accurate - the trigger is not in the right place.
Seems to be a cpl here that match but in Russian No6, 7, 8 and No13
One seems to have the same stock attachment, forward sight and almost oval trigger guard
Also maybe try here
Chaosdruid (talk) 14:44, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
Hmmm, I dunno Skinny, the breech end looks pretty similar to the '98. Admittedly the muzzle end is missing the attachments, but I'm struggling to see any difference between your rifle and the '98 down at the trigger end (aside from the bent trigger guard). Of course I'm probably just clutching at straws after the embarrassment of getting the Lee-Enfield wrong, and being desperate to get the barnstar! Ranger Steve (talk) 16:56, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
The more I look at it, the more I think that you're right; it is just a slightly bent trigger guard. I'll get it labelled at the weekend. Cheers for that - I'll distribute barnstars to all and sundry shortly. Skinny87 (talk) 19:49, 23 June 2010 (UTC)

AfD Template for Miltary History articles

In the past few months, I've noticed (and I'm sure you all have as well) that a number of milhist articles have been nominated for deletion in an AfD, only for the poor bewildered writer to come to the AfD and try and defend their work without knowing why it's been nominated. Often they only get the standard generic 'Your article is being deleted' notice on their talkpage, which is vague and very unhelpful to new users. Several times I've gone to their talkpages and given a more detailed explanation, and they've been most grateful, and I know several other users have done similar. As such, I've developed (with EyeSerene's help) a MilHist AfD template which we can copy into a users talkpage. The template is here, and I'd like to see what people think of it, and what improvements can be made before we use it. Skinny87 (talk) 12:11, 23 June 2010 (UTC)

Has any directed said writers to the academy? We have Misplaced Pages:WikiProject Military history/Academy/Deleting an article, which was penned with this exact scenario in mind, so I am somewhat surprised to see that this is an issue. As far as the template itself is concerned, given the information present in the second paragraph of the template it seems intended only for biographical deletions. If this is not the case a little more info on the rest of the guidelines related to the deletion subject in question would be useful to whomever the template is heading out for.
Well, it definitely seems to be an issue, but I'm more than happy for the template to be altered to include more info on non-biographical guidelines - I only included them as the MILMOS didn't say anything specific for non-biographical articles, just to follow GNG as usual. I had no idea the Academy link existed, and although useful it seems quite long and daunting. I want this template to be something that can be added to a users talkpage as a simple introduction - though adding the Academy subpage as a link at the end for further reading/ideas seems a great idea. Skinny87 (talk) 13:32, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
(edit conflict) I understood it not to be a replacement for the Academy article but a handy boilerplate text that, as Skinny suggests, might save typing out the same explanation ad nauseam :) I agree a link to the Academy article would be useful too. Tom's right about the bio comment giving a possibly misleading focus to the notice, but my hope is that this is only temporary. I think we're probably overdue to start work on expanding our notability guideline (I think we put it on hold while other reorganisation was taking place elsewhere on WP?) I believe we were going to put something together for Battles and Military Units... maybe something for the thinktank to get its teeth into. In fact, I might go over there and write up a to-do list :) EyeSerene 13:36, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
How about we create a generic {{subst:milhistafd|X}} template, and replace the X with bio, vehicle, battle, etc? In this manner we can create a series of more specific afd explanation templates and alter the one user based on the need of the afd at the time. We can add a link to the academy page at the same time, as well as links to the arguements to avoid at afd. How would that work? TomStar81 (Talk) 13:48, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
That sounds very workable to me. It would avoid overload of information too - at present I think the notice is wordy (largely my fault!) and that would only get worse as we develop and include other notability information. EyeSerene 13:59, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
Excellent idea, that way we can tailor the explanation to the type of article. I seem to have created the biography one already inadvertently, so we just need the others - Vehicles/Aircraft, Battles and units...any others? I don't think a lot of work is needed, just copying the draft in my sandbox, appending the Academy page and altering the guidelines - maybe just examples of notable/non-notable battles and vehicles and units instead of people. Skinny87 (talk) 14:01, 23 June 2010 (UTC)

Featured article candidacy for USS Indiana (BB-1) now open

The featured article candidacy for USS Indiana (BB-1) is now open. Comments from reviewers are needed to help determine whether the article meets the criteria for featured articles; all editors are invited to participate, and any input there would be appreciated! Thanks! -MBK004 20:43, 23 June 2010 (UTC)

Declassified UKUSA Agreement

For those who read the news often may have recently seen the secretive UKUSA Agreement declassified yesterday/today. The Misplaced Pages article is at UK–USA Security Agreement. I have made some updates, added links to the declassified documents, and also requested that the page be moved to a new name as used by government sources. I would appreciate help in digesting this news as I have little knowledge about this topic. Thanks! Arsonal (talk) 03:03, 26 June 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the note. I never thought I'd see that document declassified! (though it's good that its now available) Nick-D (talk) 03:08, 26 June 2010 (UTC)

A-Class review for ARA Moreno now open

The A-Class review for ARA Moreno is now open; all editors are invited to participate, and any input there would be appreciated! Thanks! —Ed (talkmajestic titan) 08:41, 26 June 2010 (UTC)

War and popular culture queries

Two questions which sort of follow on from earlier discussions on computer games. 
  • I assume that wargames as a research or training aid come under the remit of MILHIST but not wargames as a hobby. Is that correct?
  • I think the consensus of the previous discussion was not to allow computer games because we were already suffering mission creep. I suggested we have a wider look at the popular culture field, being clearer on what we included and what we declassified as MILHIST as a contribution to the problem. I'm not sure there was an answer to that, so I'd like to raise it again. If there is no interest, then we can file it under NFA.Monstrelet (talk) 09:20, 27 June 2010 (UTC)
Your first would seem to make sense to me, although what type of wargames are we talking about? Computer, tabletop, or both (not that it really matters I suppose).
Your second... that might be a good topic for the thinktank, as it could have implications for the project's existing scope. No objection to discussing it here though :) EyeSerene 13:16, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
On the firsrt point I have strong objections to wargames being here (excepting such things as Kreigspiel and other training aids). I do not see a doifferanced in this respect from Board wargames, computer games or playing with toy solders.
I see no reaso ot to0 discuse the inclusion of computer games, I just dojn't think we should include them.Slatersteven (talk) 13:32, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
I think a case could be made that tabletop wargames are closer to military simulations than they are to computer games - many training aids in use now started out as hobbyist wargames. I don't think the same case can be made quite so readily for computer games, although even there the boundaries blur when looking at computer-based training simulations. Obviously we have to have a cut-off somewhere though. EyeSerene 13:44, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
Depends, for example whilst say Anzio might be an excelent simulation of the italian campiegn of WW2. But what about (lets say) WWIII, both a bad game and a terrible simulation (even at the time). I agree that were something starts out as a training aid (or in the case of Phoenix Command a forensic simulation) there is justification for its inclusion is good. But if its just a commercial wargame then no I don't think there is a case.I have dbouts that if we allow the idea that a game is a form of millitary history then every one who has played they third Reich will feel that their version of reality is a valid as Liddle-harts. I just so not se any benifit but a lot of potential trouble. The 'Hey I played battlefield Vietnam, I'm a vet man' mentality.Slatersteven (talk) 13:55, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
I tend to agree; we're perhaps best treating wargames as out-of-scope with the occasional exception decided on its own merits. EyeSerene 16:14, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
Wargaming and simulation is a standard element of both training and operational planning and should be covered, ISTR that red teaming already is. The individual games used in training aren't really all that significant, and the models used in strategic planning are sensitive so any discussion probably can't be sourced.
ALR (talk) 18:13, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
I think I agree. Wargaming is a military method as well as a recreation - insofar as it's a military method, we should cover it. Individual games shouldn't be covered, regardless of their sales/authenticity/whatever (though there might be exceptions). The Land (talk) 19:06, 28 June 2010 (UTC)

General Question

When i have a text about a battle, and the source talks about casualties of one participant ( in my case , they are actually far lower than the casualties of the other participant ) and says he believes that battle was a improvement for the other participant due to various reasons ( captured ground for example ). Can i take the historian/text to claim the historian claims the inflicted casualties were a major reason to call the battle a "tactical victory". Blablaaa (talk) 16:04, 28 June 2010 (UTC)

If the author does not specifically make that claim, then unequivocally no. You are not allowed to put words into the author's mouth, nor are you allowed to draw your own conclusions from what the author does say. Parsecboy (talk) 16:08, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
Blablaaa, please don't keep forum shopping until you get the answer you want. See the discussions at: Talk:Operation_Charnwood#sentence_in_the_lead_.28problem_solved.29, User_talk:EnigmaMcmxc#Operation_Charnwood, User_talk:EyeSerene#Charnwood, User_talk:Nick-D#Operation_Charnwood and User_talk:Blablaaa#Enlighten_me. EyeSerene 16:20, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
Eyeseren i searched for somebody not involded, and he says exactly what i expected of an uninvolded editor. And please dont start to affect him like u tried already Blablaaa (talk) 16:26, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
U also should not list talkpages which were not opend by me. Nick talk page enigmas talkp for example were not even started by me :-D Blablaaa (talk) 16:34, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
You're quite right, you haven't posted to Enigma's talkpage so I've struck that one - my apologies. You have joined in on Nick's though.
I hope Parsecboy doesn't mind me responding further, but he was replying to a hypothetical situation based on your post and in the circumstances you've described he's absolutely right. If I came across that situation I'd say the same too, as I'm sure would any experienced editor. However, you've not really given the full picture and enough editors have explained by now the problem with picking a single phrase out of a single sentence in a potted summary of an article and taking it out of context. My sincere advice is to drop the stick. EyeSerene 16:53, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
If u mean with "full picture" that i did not tell here that other editors are already commited to their false arguments, yes correct. I guess my statement is very simply summarize of the main factors ( two unconnect claims of an historian become a connected claim due to OR of wiki editors). And we all know how correct iam. Give the quote for the claimed correlation. U have no quote for a correlation?---> u are doing OR. And in this case pretty wrong OR. Iam aware of the full situation. The situation is so clear: VERIFIABILITY. Blablaaa (talk) 17:00, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
What are my possiblities if i introduce somebody in the situation and he sees who supports which opinion, ia lost. Do i post the question without irrelevanrt background-infos i get exactly what i said. Blablaaa (talk) 17:03, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
If this is going to carry on; it’s not an opinion of a single historian, the intro was not wrote by me and it is based on the sourced information in the article; i do not believe anyone, who worked on the article, has manipulated the information to fabricate the lede. Furthermore i do not subscribe to this whole notion, that seems to be getting raised, of spin or attempting to influence the opinion of other editors into gaining consensus; i believe people can see the facts for themselves. As it may have already been gathered this stems from the talk page of the Operation Charnwood article.
A quick glance through the article and a few sources at home highlights around six historians (at the least, i don’t have the time or inclination to go through everything i own) noteing the heavy personnel, equipment and tank losses the two principle formations took during the battle. Once again this is noted in the article and sourced. Of importance is a quote from Simon Trew and Stephen Badsley, albeit not mentioned in the article; “... Hitlerjugend Division’s incomplete records... . ... Hitlerjugend also reported losing eleven Panthers and seen Panzer IVs. Losses for other German units are not known”.
Thus the basis of the OP’s argument is rather flawed due to the incomplete records for one side not to mention how we do not know what size this force actually was. Additionally several sources note how the elements of the Luftwaffe division, based in front of Caen, suffered 75% losses; this is noted in the article. The tank losses, sourced in the article, provide a range of 29-52% loss rate of what was deployed.
Finally at least two sources, again i have not the time or inclination to look further, note in a separate point that the tactical position was improved by the capture of the city yet strategically nothing had changed.
I welcome further opinion on the matter although i doubt i will be able to reply today or tomorrow on the matter due to above mentioned lack of time.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:46, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
U do the same again, u try to distract. The statement is not sourced and cant be sourced because no historian claims this correlation. U try to list german casualties which is not more than a try of distraction and a very cheap on. First off all german lost far less euqipment and personnel. The lead is not based on sourced material. The statment is OR if the assumption is sourced u could easly give me the quote. U can not so its not sourced. Stop distracting stop listing casualties stop trying to affect other people face the point. The correlation is OR of an wiki editor and nothing more. In my opinion are u violating wiki rules when u claim the statement is sourced because two parts of the statement are sourced but without context. Bring the quote and stop talking blablablablablabla . My intention here was to find somebody who was not involded and not distracted after i found one , 2 of u immediatly banged into and distracted and threw useless comments in. But after u both disabled my try to get a complet objectiv opinion my plan failed Blablaaa (talk) 20:03, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
At the moment i seriously doubt that u understood the point. Blablaaa (talk) 20:05, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
We understand your point just fine, but I wonder if you understand WP:LEDE? The first section of an article is a summary of the following sections, and the sentence you're objecting to is fully supported in the text. Your argument about WP:OR would only apply if the lede made assertions that were unsupported in the rest of the article. However, if you read the "Analysis" section you'll find lots of detail about historians discussing the battle in terms of both the territorial gains made and the increasingly serious consequences to the Germans of the losses they were sustaining. Summarising related arguments in a single sentence in the lede to try to express the broad thrust of many paragraphs of detail is not original research, it's economical writing. EyeSerene 20:53, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
What u write hgihlights that u dont understand the point. I doubt that u understand what tactical ( your sentence about german losses is simply unclever while it highlights the strategic situation and not the tactical. U dont understand tactical u are unskilled) means , really i think u dont know it, u try to give your opinion about somethin what u simply dont understand. Give me the quote of a historian claiming the german losses were one reason for the tactical victory. A sentence in the lead must be verifiable , because he summarizes the rest what must be verifiable. But the statement in the lead is a conclusion which is not printed anywhere. U claim the text is full of sources but give me one supporting the claim. U are simply wrong i call u bias and u are, your sentence on the tractable talk highlights perfectly. U are wrong eyeseren. That this is your final replay is logic u dont have arguement u dont have sources thats why u trashtalk without bringing a quote for a statement. Blablaaa (talk) 21:27, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
Feel free to bring me one single quote of any historian that the german losses on charnwood were one major factor for the allied tactical victory BRING IT WP:Burden Blablaaa (talk) 21:31, 28 June 2010 (UTC)

Remaining neutral for the moment (until I've fully understood this chat), could I please ask everyone to keep their comments civil and constructive (here and on related threads). This discussion bears all the hallmarks of descending into a bitter battle - totally unnecessarily in my opinion. Blablaaa, I appreciate that English isn't your first language (apologies if I'm wrong on that) but comments like "what u simply dont understand" and "U dont understand tactical u are unskilled" come across as fairly insulting, and you are in danger of destroying any credibility your argument might have. Cheers, Ranger Steve (talk) 21:44, 28 June 2010 (UTC)

It is not insulting it is important for the discussion. For example, somebody at charnwood page comes to the dicussion and says "blabla is wrong: the text doesnt say victory he claims sucess". Then i read this and think omg who is talkin to me. Victory in warfare is the definition of sucess its exactly the same , look here victory . Than eyeseren comes here and wants to give his "opinion" and shows clearly that he did not understand what tactical means. What shall i do , teach him ? I try to show all objectiv readers that he not even understand the basis of the issue. Maybe this sounds insulting but i dont see the value of people who dont have the knowledge about the topic they talk about..... Blablaaa (talk) 22:00, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
To make myself clear it is essientially to understand the basics of the issue to give an opínion with value. Eyeseren for example clearly and undisputable showed he lacks the requiered knowledge. Blablaaa (talk) 22:13, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
If someone didn't fully understand the terms they were using, then it is of course important to the discussion. It would be perfectly acceptable to question that editor's understanding or knowledge. What it isn't ok to do is accuse editor's of "trashtalk", deliberately miseleading or distracting the conversation or being biased, and making challenges in bold font, which merely makes it look aggressive. You might have a point in this thread, but stooping to such phrases doesn't help. For what its worth, I think you're barking up the wrong tree on this particular argument (I refer to your opinion of other editors and not the main issue at hand, which I am still digesting). EyeSerene in particular has written or contributed to most of these articles, is particularly well read and, as I understand it, has a far more thorough military background than most editors here. Just my opinion, but I will once again reinforce my belief that you are coming across as very insulting. Ranger Steve (talk) 22:20, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
What i said about distraction is also very important enigma for example is deliberately distracting. He is fully aware of the fact that german losses were far lower but he is over and over repeating german % losses which were far higher simple because they had much less troops involded :D . Hes repeating to imply the opposite. Furthermore for the tactical outcome the % losses are pretty irrelevant compared to absolut numbers everyone knows this. Thats why i claimed i guess no historian supports the statement in the lead of charnwood, and i was totally correct when i see they are not bringing any quote who supports this uncommon statement. Distraction and lacking knowledge nothing else and a bit ad hominem beginning of every discussion to affect the "neutral" readersBlablaaa (talk) 22:22, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
Yes maybe i look insulting. But understand my point i go to a talk page and write that something is obviously not correct, what follows? a overlong dicussion where nobody wants to admit that the annoying blablabla is correct. All question my faith but at the same time they show they talk about things they didnt fully understood. So maybe sometimes i sound pretty annoyed. But u are correct its up to me to change this. I apologize for that. Blablaaa (talk) 22:26, 28 June 2010 (UTC)

Just time for a quickie and two points:

  1. It seems the discussion is being drown out in regards to a discussion on casualties. Two historians have been cited that state that the military position, the tactical position/situation was improved as a result of the battle. If we cannot suggest that this was some sort of tactical success, what was it?
  2. A quick glance for articles that uses the term and that i have not worked on dig up contradictory statements to what one is over the, imo confusing, Tactical victory article. The victory article, while unsourced contricts it. During my brief search i found several articles: Battle of Wavre notes equal casualties among the attacking French and defending Prussian forces but gives the tactical victory to the French; one notes that the Prussians suffered heavier losses on the whole when compared to the French due to the size of forces deployed. The Battle of the Coral Sea article notes the tactical victory due to the losses inflicted on American warships but highlights how the Japanese suffered more personnel and aircraft losses. Higher British naval and manpower losses during the Battle of Jutland again provides a different tactical outcome. A further example i have noted, an article that i have worked on, is Operation Brevity which resulted in lopsided casualties but no historian putting a label on the outcome.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 23:14, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
U only reinforced my opinion that u not get the point. If charnwood was a tactical victory isnt the point i not even doubt that it was one . There are multiple factors which maybe make a tactical victory . Inflicting more casualties for example is maybe a reason to call a battle a tactical victory. But in this operation allied suffered heavier casualties so in this particular case the german casualties were not the reason for the tactical victory. Thats the point. I assumed this when i read the statement and that nobody brought a statement of a historian claiming that, showed clear that iam correct. That charnwood was a tactical victory and german had casualties are mabye 2 facts but that german casualties were a major reason for the outcome, is not said by any historian, so this is OR of wiki editors. Thats what i claimed and thats correct. Nobody brought a source to support the claim despite WP:Burden . The fact that there are 1 million battles in history and u searched 3 to show that a general rules does not always fit looks very strange for me and highlights that u not talk about the same like me Blablaaa (talk) 23:42, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
and battle of jutland is indeed a german tactical victory. somebody should change it on the english sideBlablaaa (talk) 11:42, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
I must admit I am a little confused. The article says that the intent was to take Caen with a secondary objective of drawing forces away from the American front. Is this correct ?
Chaosdruid (talk) 23:51 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Regarding coral sea, dont be confused, the sinking of the a fleet carier is a much bigger tactical value than the sinking of a normal destroyer. and the german article says Draw.... Blablaaa (talk) 23:55 29 June 2010 (UTC)

PLease do not edit your posts after people have replied nor insert between other posts. Your last post was not made before mine at 23:55 it was after my post of 23:51 (UTC) (which you managed to remove the time stamp from !!) I have corrected the order... Chaosdruid (talk) 00:04, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

didnt plan to do something like that dont know what happend, when i refreshed the page i saw your post Blablaaa (talk) 00:35, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
"The fact that there are 1 million battles in history and u searched 3 to show that a general rules does not always fit looks very strange for me"; you will have noticed that i stated numerous times that i have limited time at the moment, it also highlights the multiple factors that appear that need to be taken into account.
Balblaa, have you not just shot your argument in the foot with the following remark: "There are multiple factors which maybe make a tactical victory." The lede and article state such.
Chaosdruid, thats the general idea: Second Army tactical/operational goal was to seize the north of the town and secure bridgeheads to the south and take advantage if opportunity presented itself. The general overhead strategic plan was to halt the shifting of German divisions.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 00:49, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Now u already explained your mistake. Here look your words " it also highlights the multiple factors that appear that need to be taken into account " , correct the casualties are not the only reason for a tactical outcome thats why on charnwood casualties werent the reason for the outcome they were side effect, but a side effect in favor for germans. The lead implies they were the main reason beside northern cean. No historian claimed this corelation. your quote "Balblaa, have you not just shot your argument in the foot with the following remark:" , absolutly not i showed that your OR, -----german had casualties + allied tactical victory = german casualties made allied victory ---- is wrong. After rethinking the issue and with assuming that u are no complete amateur in warfare i think the problem is maybe the understanding of the sentence in the lead. Can u maybe read the sentence again. Maybe u read him only once and missed the implications Blablaaa (talk) 01:04, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
convenient break

It may be that some alteration is needed then as the article states nothing about only capturing the north of the town and the bridgeheads:

"...drew up an offensive with two goals: to capture Caen and to prevent a large scale redeployment of German forces from the Anglo-Canadian sector to the American front." and "...he sought control of Bourguébus and the commanding high ground to the south."

Bourguébus is around 5 miles south of the centre of Caen, and two miles outside its southern boundary. I do not think that you are correct in your last statemnt according to the article.

It seems to me that neither of these objectives were fulfilled so it would appear that the operation was not a success at all.

THe article states that the operation failed to draw german forces away from the american front and it also says that "mid-afternoon on 9 July, Operation Charnwood was over" with only the northern half of Caen being taken.

It may be possible to say that securing the northern half led the germans to withdraw more quickly but the eventual taking of Caen in August was surely down to operations Goodwood and Jupiter?

Chaosdruid (talk) 01:14, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

Your comments are directed to enigma or to me? Blablaaa (talk) 01:18, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
They are directed to anyone interested in correcting the article to properly reflect events and outocmes. I think it is time for you both to co-operate on getting the article right instead of arguing over which sort of success it was (strategic v tactical)
In my opinion as the article stands there is too much contradiction and I would not call it a success of either kind.
Chaosdruid (talk) 01:30, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Its a general problem on normandy article, when it comes to the outcome. Fulfilling objectives was not a cretaria for allied. If some germans where there do defend it always was a strategic victory because they were "missing" somewhere else. The fact that outbreak was only a madder of time from the very beginning seems to be irrelevant. Even if battles achieved nothing and resulted in heavy casualties they were victories because german were there. Please take a look at Second Battle of the Odon, this battele was a strategic victory because german units were held on the line and could not participat in goodwood, while goodwood itself was a tactical victory of german and they didnt need these units. Funny, isnt it? take a look at the talk of this battle. And we are not arguing about the outcome.
I feel like I'm missing something. I read the lead, & the analysis, & they look to be in agreement, so the "no support" argument falls IMO. As to "more Allied casualties equals German victory", that's a non-starter; attacker casualties are always greater. That's the nature of the beast. As to "limited success", I'd agree with the historiographers quoted (& here, I must confess a strong bias against Monty in the interest of full disclosure): the objectives were not entirely achieved, but things were better at the end than the beginning, & that is a functional definition of "limited success" IMO. I also see (not having carefully read the entire page) no strong criticism of Monty for said failing; IMO some wouldn't be out of bounds. At bottom, however, I really don't get Blablaaa's complaint. This looks to me like a pretty good example of a tactical victory for an Allied army in Normandy: front not shattered, Germans not in rout, but situation better for Allies than before. (BTW, don't try & tell me I don't understand what "tactical" is.) TREKphiler 04:49, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
No i tell u that the outcome is not the point. Cant believe how often i already explained it :-) please see charnwood talk. Off-topic: And regarding your statement "attacker casualties are always greater", this absolutly not correct. In ww2 the "rule" that an attacker suffers generally more casualties is far away from truth. Not even talking about the fact that an allied offensive in normandy was always supported with enormous firepower which inflicted so much casualties. In battles with good schwerpunkt its high likly that the defender suffers more casualties because he is commited to counterattacks if not he losses much troops which are taken POV. A good example is german attack at kursk, according to nearly all sources, the germans attacked the biggest and most fortified "fortress" ever .... . In ww1 this rule was a bit more accurate. Second quote of u "BTW, don't try & tell me I don't understand what "tactical" is." sorry but the fact that u think charnwood was a perfect example for a tactical victory because the strategic situation of allied improved, indicates this. Blablaaa (talk) 05:40, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Chaosdruid; re the plan for Charnwood see "The objective ... to clear Caen ... up to the Orne river, and if possible to secure bridgeheads in southern Caen." and "it was hoped that I Corps could exploit the situation ... towards the Verrières and Bourguébus ridges," and finally "...two goals: to capture Caen and to prevent a large scale redeployment of German forces from the Anglo-Canadian sector to the American front."
Blablaaa re Charnwood outcome, it is stated in the article that the capture of portions of the city had no effect the strategic situation.
Re Goodwood, considering your arguments here - plus the fact that the article has received much less attention and is an "unfinished state" - the outcome probably needs to be looked at more carefully rather than what appears to be accepting it on face fact due to the positive German result. The note states: "Hart states that Goodwood "...despite being immediate tactical failure". Dempsey is quoted stating the battle was not tactically very good ...".". If accusations are to be thrown around it probably should be for this part; because the sources dont call it a German tactical victory they talk of the failure on the side of the British tactical handling of the battle.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 07:27, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
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I think you are taking things a little too personally bla - we are discussing things and you are constantly replying as if we are talking about what you said - we are not. We have moved past the discussions you were having.
@Trekphiler - I can see now how that would be measured as a tactical success - although the original operational objectives were not met they still got half the city and got rid of half the german defences. There was also some success in recapturing a major French city as the populated side rather than the industrial was in the north half. Also I guess that would have caused logistical problems for the germans as they would have had to divert their heavier equipment quite far south to Vassy/Vire, or risk using the smaller roads, quite a detour - Thats not as contradictory as I thought then :¬)
Chaosdruid (talk) 08:08, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
@Enigma - I was trying to suggest changing the lead slighty from "operation was intended to capture the German-occupied city of Caen" to "operation was intended to capture the northern part of the German-occupied city of Caen.
That was what I was talking about when I said it didn't quite match sry :¬)
Chaosdruid (talk) 08:15, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
I think "capture Caen" wasn't over-reaching too much, as there were contingencies for following up into southern Caen depending on how the assault developed, but I take your point. I've tweaked the lead - it now says "The operation was intended to capture as much as was feasible of the German-occupied city of Caen...". Is this a reasonable compromise? EyeSerene 09:00, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

It's a bit of a mouthful lol but yup :¬) Sorry but it's an FA - I'm not normally that picky...Chaosdruid (talk) 09:44, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

Tweaked again :P EyeSerene 10:01, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
The sentence: "With northern Caen's capture and the heavy casualties inflicted on the two German divisions defending the immediate sector, Operation Charnwood was a tactical success." Maybe my english is the problem but for me this means the casualties were a major reason to call the battle a tac victory. But this is wrong and unsoured . That german suffered casualties is sourced that charnwood was a sucess is sourced but not the correlation . Charnwood was no tactical sucess regarding the inflicted damaged because they suffered more. Lord can somebody fix this OR finally or give me a simply quote for this claim. Iam getting mad seein people dont understant this incorrectnes Blablaaa (talk) 10:21, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
You are choosing to ignore the "northern Caen's capture" part of the sentence.
It seems to me that there are around 6 or more editors who, after checking the refs and quotes, agree that "it was a tactical success" is correct.
Consensus is therefore that the facts and the information in the article are correct.
Capturing half the city (and the network of road junctions it contained), forcing the Germans over the river, removing half of the German defenders and establishing a base for the next assault which took the rest of Caen, Bourguébus and the commanding high ground was indeed a tactical success.
It may be that your understanding of English is not the problem as the article clearly states "northern Caen's capture" first and the "heavy casualties" second which would mean that the casualties were indeed not the main reason for the tactical success.
Chaosdruid (talk) 10:55, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
I ignore the capture of northern cean because i dispute the second part of the statement and not the first. No they were not the reason they were maybe not even a minor reason maybe they were even a contra point. because no historian claimed this. Thats why its must out of the statement because the correlation between the outcome and german casualties is not support by historians!!!! The statement is simple orignal research because no historian claimed the german casualties as beeing crucial for the tactical outcome, and its not up to me to explain this its up to other editors to giving sufficient sources WP:BURDEN. DO u see anyone giving a quote of an historian claiming this correlation?? No!! german casualties are sourced and the outcome but no conclusiion. Iam getting mad ..... Here out of the OR article " It also refers to any analysis or synthesis by Wikipedians of published material, where the analysis or synthesis advances a position not advanced by the sources." this is pretty perfect description of what happend on charnwood. Two sourced facts become a new synthesis not support by any historianBlablaaa (talk) 11:08, 29 June 2010 (UTC)


1
"In two days of savage fighting I (British) Corps incurred 3500 casualties. In the process of securing Caen, however, I (British) Corps mauled the 16th German Air Force Field Division. Thus, the victory at Caen had been a hard-won affair that owed much to the resolution of the ordinary Allied soldier."
2
From Der Weg 21.Panzer-Division (The history ofthe 21st Panzer Division) by Werner Kortenhaus, a surviving German veteran.
At 16:30 hrs, the division commander of 21 Panzer division Generalleutnant Feuchtinger got the following information:
"The enemy has been successful after heavy bombardment and occupied the northern part of Caen. The situation is still unclear. Familiarise yourself with the situation and go to the position of the 16 GAF, which is in Caen. Release the commander of the 16 GAF and take command yourself. All parts of the 16 GAF are under your command. Regarding the situation you have to lead a couterattack with 21 Panzer Division and get in charge of the stuation."
Generalleutnant Feuchtinger reached the command post at 18:00 hrs. It became immediately obvious that the enemy was already in Caen and that all the infantry of the 16 GAF, who were meant to defend the city and prevent the enemy to get a further hold, were not there. The 16 GAF had suffered losses of 75% and all battallion and most ot the company commanders were dead or wounded. Demoralised parts of the division had already retreated over the Orne.
3
Night of 8/9 July 1944 from "The 12th SS: the history of the Hitler Youth Panzer Division, Vol2 by Hubert Meyer"
Soon after midnight the Divisional commander visited. He recalled:
"I found the survivors of I./25 in a bunker at the edge of town. These totally worn out soldiers had fallen into a deep sleep...The soldiers of 12. SS-Panzer Division were at the end of their physical endurance....TOday, mud-covered steel helmets threw their shadows on sunken faces whose eyes had beheld the beyond all-too-often."
The Division issued orders to leave the assembly areas at dawn, and to take up the new positions at the southern bank of the Orne...The enemy (Allied forces) had reached the majority of his attack objectives on the wings, although some centres of resistance held out...In thecentral sector, at the 59th InfantryDivision, Malon, Couvre-Chef,la Folie, Bitot, parts of Galmanche and Ardenne had not been captured, but abandoned by German decision. However, there was no doubt that these positions could not have been held any longer, because of the completely open right flank and also because of the heavy German losses."
I trust this will suffice for you
Chaosdruid (talk) 13:09, 29 June 2010 (UTC)


Nr 1 allied suffered higher casualties!!!!! No quote regarding tactical victory and casualtie correlation
Again noobish comment. Here from charnwood article "With support from the 10th Canadian Armoured Regiment, by noon Buron had been taken, although the 9th Brigade's assault companies suffered 60% casualties in doing so" , WOW 60% !!!! of a fully equipend brigade WOW. omg u didnt get it, hu ?

FOR FUCK SAKE WHO QUESTIONED THE OUTCOME ????????? U QUOTE STORIES OF SOLDIERS TO SUPPORT THE POINT ??? ARE U SERIOUS ?????? THEN QUOTE ALLIED SOLDIERS WHO SUFFERED MORE CASUALTIES IN EVERY ASPECT ???? ARE U SERIOUS ????? THATS NOT THE FUCKING POINT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Blablaaa (talk) 13:23, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

getting mad iam out. Blablaaa (talk) 13:28, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
If you strike those comments now, you might just be able to spare yourself a block. Calm down please. I was on the verge of posting something to help, but am rethinking it now. Ranger Steve (talk) 13:30, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
There is nothing to help, the is right or wrong. Nobody brings the quote all claim it is sources but when i ask for the explicit quote nobody respondes and then claims he dont respondes because some other reasons. Nobody brings the quote, guys going around and making jokes about "blabla" instead of investing this time in bringing the quote and clearing the issue. What the word for this? Blablaaa (talk) 13:42, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
"Again noobish comment. Here from charnwood article "With support from the 10th Canadian Armoured Regiment, by noon Buron had been taken, although the 9th Brigade's assault companies suffered 60% casualties in doing so" , WOW 60% !!!! of a fully equipend brigade WOW. omg u didnt get it, hu ? "
The sentance doesnt state the brigade suffered 60% casualties; it is not comparable to an entire Brigade being made combat ineffective per the quotes regarding the Luftwaffe boys. The sentance specfically states the assault companies suffered these losses. Depending how the battalions attacked it could make the losses, while high, overall sustainable i.e. units attacking with one company up, two in reserve or whatever etc.--EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 13:36, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
enigma i dont care who suffered how much % because its totally irrelevant. i simply copied to show how useless this % are when we have overall numbers. i hoped my WOW and !!!! made it clear. and off topic: suffering 60% casualties against a dazed company is kinda tactical desaster, but thats not the point. Blablaaa (talk) 13:42, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
final try

is somebody willing to explain in 1 sentence what he thinks my problem is. Rethinking the whole problem iam not ready to accept that the people here are not able to understand the in my opinion very obvious mistake. So it is now high likly that my words are not wisly chooses. So please can someone explain to me what he thinks what i mean. if he understood what i mean i will quit the discussion and "accept" that their is no support for my opinion, while iam 95% sure that iam correct. So show your good faith now Blablaaa (talk) 13:47, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

You think that linking the assertion that there were heavy German losses with the assertion that it was a tactical victory is wp:synth? Ranger Steve (talk) 13:52, 29 June 2010 (UTC)


hm No i guess: i think that "the assertion that there were heavy German losses" and the "assertion that it was a tactical victory" are 2 source parts but the conclusion that the first was a reason for the second is wp:synth, does this sound different for u ?
i did some research because the 75% seem dubios for and found that , the 16 LWFD had 500 infantrymen in 8 companies and reported the loss of 375 men mainly POW, so they reported 75% loss, sounds a bit different now doenst it? "the whole division was steamrolled and lost 75% of their men" is one way to describe , and the neutral military way is saying 375 men which is the value of 2 companies and not more. Somebody so honest to say that this sounds complety different. It all comes down to the presentation of the facts... Blablaaa (talk) 14:00, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
this is not correct the statement regarding the 375 is about a battle before, the 16 LWFD reported 800 men lost at charnwood Blablaaa (talk) 14:04, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
additional infos: many battalions of the 16 LWFD were already transferred to other divisions to bolster their infantry strenght. Blablaaa (talk) 14:07, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

i followed the link of ranger steve and i think this is exactly what i mean, two correct facts are put in one sentence to imply a correlation. Blablaaa (talk) 14:09, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

I am still waiting for an apology - your comments were extremely baseless and in very bad taste. I spent three hours trying to help you and I deserve better than the language you chose to use. If this is the way you treat people that are trying to help then do not complain when they turn round and chew your nuts off.
Chaosdruid (talk) 14:37, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
i apologize Blablaaa (talk) 14:37, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
I will think about accepting it as you havent even deleted or struck out the insults yet...
Did you understand that in the post (where I have labelled them 1, 2 and 3) the only thing that I have written which is by me is "I trust this will suffice for you" ? Everything from the 1 to the "I trust..." is taken directly from the sources. It is what they said and is a direct quote.
Chaosdruid (talk) 15:00, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
they dont deal with the issue. Blablaaa (talk) 15:16, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Well maybe it is a language problem then. I will try (once more) to simplify it for you.
1 - "mauled the 16th German Air Force Field Division. Thus, the victory at Caen had been a hard-won affair that owed much to the resolution of the ordinary...." - This means that the mauling led to a victory (Thus means due to what I said in the previous sentence/s)
2 - "The enemy has been successful and occupied the northern part of Caen...the 16 GAF, were not there... had suffered 75% losses" - he is saying that the occupation of the north part was sucessful because the GAF suffered 75% losses and left
3 - "However, there was no doubt that these positions could not have been held any longer, because of the completely open right flank and also because of the heavy German losses." - he is saying that the Germans could not hold the positions because of the heavy losses.
I do not understand why you cannot accept that - it is not OR or SYNTH - it is merely the opinions of sources which can be quoted to support the statement "it was a success due to XXXX and the high German losses"
Chaosdruid (talk) 15:50, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

Portuguese-Indian War

A discussion thread has been started at Talk:1961_Indian_Annexation_of_Goa#Title regarding the title of the article (i.e., whether to use "Invasion of Goa" or "Annexation of Goa" in the title). If you are interested in the topic, please discuss the issue there.XavierGreen (talk) 23:46, 28 June 2010 (UTC)

Peer review for Operation Postmaster now open

The peer review for Operation Postmaster is now open; all editors are invited to participate, and any input there would be appreciated! Thanks! -MBK004 07:52, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

Featured article candidacy for Siege of Godesberg (1583) now open

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Masnieres British Cemetery, Marcoing

Hello Military History team! Can you help me? I was doing some tidy/update work on the Thomas Neely VC article, and noticed that he was buried at Masnieres British Cementry, Marcoing. I can't find an article with that title, do we have one? A small cemetery, it was also the place where the ashes of Henry Tandey were scattered. More details here on the CWGC website Rgds, --Trident13 (talk) 10:42, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

I don't think we have one for that yet. I've looked over at Misplaced Pages:WikiProject Military history/Military memorials and cemeteries task force and can't seem to find it. AustralianRupert (talk) 11:13, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
We do now: Masnieres British Commonwealth War Graves Commission Cemetery. Just a stub though - needs work :) EyeSerene 11:45, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Suitably expanded. Hehe. Ranger Steve (talk) 11:51, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Thank You All! Best Regards, - Trident13 (talk) 11:58, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Very impressive stuff; all done without an hour of the call!EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 12:00, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Doh! I just created one myself. Masnieres British Cemetery, Marcoing. I was having cache issues and didn't see the above threads. I have removed the content from mine and redirect to the other one. Well, that's half an hour of my life I'll never get back (not to mention the grief I got from my wife for being on the computer). Oh well. AustralianRupert (talk) 12:03, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Sorry about that :( I've merged elements of your content into mine, so your time wasn't wasted. EyeSerene 12:21, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
Totally my fault. Anyway, thanks. Take care. AustralianRupert (talk) 12:24, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

Category:Recipients of the Cross of Honour

I just came across the Category:Recipients of the Cross of Honor. Now I am wondering if there is any use for such a category. Essentially the Cross of Honor is the equivalent to the British War Medal, having been issued to anyone who fought on the German side in WWI. Frankly, I do not see a point in categorizing all German (and Austrian) WWI veterans who were considered worthy of wearing this medal (i.e. not Jewish nor Socialists/Communists). --Dodo19 (talk) 12:17, 29 June 2010 (UTC)

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