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| Thanks for your contributions to ]. I should let you know that there are some aspects of it that still need to be brought up to Misplaced Pages's standards. Firstly, there is a list of sources at the end of the article, but there is no way a reader can relate a particular part of the article to the source that supports it. There should be inline footnotes that tie the statements in the article to the source that supports them. If you need help with that, check out ]. Secondly, the tone of some parts of the article needs to be more neutral. For instance, the lead says "...an excellent sense of melody and an inventive arranger. As a performer, she is distinguished by unique lyrical style of playing the accordion." If that is what a respected reviewer said then it should be quoted and cited to the review - but if it is just your opinion then it does not belong here. Similarly, in the body it says "Teija has long dreamed of creating an album featured by numerous guest musicians..." but encyclopaedias typically don't document peoples' dreams, just the facts. The article as it stands is a great start, and with a little more work it can be much better. Good luck!--] (]) 13:35, 11 January 2022 (UTC) | Thanks for your contributions to ]. I should let you know that there are some aspects of it that still need to be brought up to Misplaced Pages's standards. Firstly, there is a list of sources at the end of the article, but there is no way a reader can relate a particular part of the article to the source that supports it. There should be inline footnotes that tie the statements in the article to the source that supports them. If you need help with that, check out ]. Secondly, the tone of some parts of the article needs to be more neutral. For instance, the lead says "...an excellent sense of melody and an inventive arranger. As a performer, she is distinguished by unique lyrical style of playing the accordion." If that is what a respected reviewer said then it should be quoted and cited to the review - but if it is just your opinion then it does not belong here. Similarly, in the body it says "Teija has long dreamed of creating an album featured by numerous guest musicians..." but encyclopaedias typically don't document peoples' dreams, just the facts. The article as it stands is a great start, and with a little more work it can be much better. Good luck!--] (]) 13:35, 11 January 2022 (UTC) | ||
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Teija Niku
Thanks for your contributions to Teija Niku. I should let you know that there are some aspects of it that still need to be brought up to Misplaced Pages's standards. Firstly, there is a list of sources at the end of the article, but there is no way a reader can relate a particular part of the article to the source that supports it. There should be inline footnotes that tie the statements in the article to the source that supports them. If you need help with that, check out Help:Referencing for beginners. Secondly, the tone of some parts of the article needs to be more neutral. For instance, the lead says "...an excellent sense of melody and an inventive arranger. As a performer, she is distinguished by unique lyrical style of playing the accordion." If that is what a respected reviewer said then it should be quoted and cited to the review - but if it is just your opinion then it does not belong here. Similarly, in the body it says "Teija has long dreamed of creating an album featured by numerous guest musicians..." but encyclopaedias typically don't document peoples' dreams, just the facts. The article as it stands is a great start, and with a little more work it can be much better. Good luck!--Gronk Oz (talk) 13:35, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
Teija Niku moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Teija Niku, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Misplaced Pages). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Misplaced Pages's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. DMySon (talk) 13:51, 11 January 2022 (UTC)