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| '''Whole article:''' | |||
| * Find citation for every <nowiki>{{fact}}</nowiki> template. | |||
| * Remove all exterraneous details from sections which are supposed to be written in ]. | |||
| * Implement bcatt's suggestions on NPOVing the article, inasmuch as the suggestions were reasonable, made in good faith, and for the purpose of strengthening the article. | |||
| * Include more inline citations (notes), where applicable, and/or where the fact could use a citation. | |||
| * Verify everything. | |||
| * Continue to improve brilliance of prose, and make more concise. | |||
| ''''Early life' section:''' | |||
| ''''1827 to 1831' section:''' | |||
| * Add picture(s) (purely cosmetic suggestion). | |||
| * Add mention of his trusty white stovepipe hat! | |||
| ''''1831 to 1844' section:''' | |||
| Massive work! | |||
| Generally get the article to synch up better with the extremely well-written ] sections on this period. | |||
| * Remove or at least deflate the two paragraphs (and then one under the notes) regarding the noncentral tarring and feathering; can't we include something more encyclopedic and central to his life? Dissenting Opinion: This is a beautiful illustration of his character and determination; much like anecdotal stories about Julius Caesar and Alexander the Great, the tarring and feathering is illustrative of Smith's character under duress. | |||
| * Add reference to polygamy under Nauvoo section. | |||
| * Explain: What does temple-building have to do with Smith's life? | |||
| ''''Marriage and family' section:''' | |||
| * Section on polygamy | |||
| * Section on birth family | |||
| ''''Major teachings' section:''' | |||
| ''''Legacy' section:''' | |||
| ''''Notes' section:''' | |||
| ''''References' section:''' | |||
| * Prune obsolete material, move it to ]. | |||
| ''''See also' section:''' | |||
| * Expand. | |||
| ''''External links' section:''' | |||
| * Expand external links. (Include at least some anti-Smith links.) | |||
| * Prune and alphabetize categories. | |||
| * Alphabetize interwiki. | |||