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CE Request
Hello Maralia; hope the computer woes are gradually fixing themselves. I'm wondering; if you have time, would you be able to do a copyedit of Japanese battleship Haruna? I'm hoping for an eventual FAC, but I recognize that there are some prose issues that just need a fresh set of eyes. Best regards, Cam 05:00, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
- I'm so sorry I've taken so long to get back to you; I was away from home for a week and missed your post in my less-frequent checks of my talk page. I'll be out this afternoon but will try to get to it tonight or tomorrow. Maralia (talk) 18:41, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
- No biggie on taking long. Thanks in advance. Cam 23:55, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
MilHist FACs
Maralia, as if you don't have enough to do :)
I'm concerned that several FACs haven't gotten solid reviews; the prose could use tightening, and I'm unclear on the use of hyphens (for example, when referring to an x mm something, shouldn't it be x-mm something?) Would you be able to glance at SMS Moltke (1910) and M249 squad automatic weapon with an eye towards the quality of review? They have support, but mostly from MilHist, and I'm concerned we need independent review. Perhaps this could be raised at MilHist if you think there's an issue? They were theoretically ready to promote, but I think more eyes could be needed. Also concerend about Heinrich Bär, which has support, but some rough prose. I'm not sure this is necessarily a MilHist issue, rather it could be a more general lack of solid reviews at FAC. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 22:17, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
- I'll start looking through those when I'm done re-doing my changes to the Ships/FT/GT dispatch; in G guy's reorg edit (which was sorely needed) all my copyediting changes somehow got lost. Maralia (talk) 22:21, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for this and for taking it forwards. Geometry guy 00:09, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- It's better for it anyway. Thanks for the reorg. I know nothing about FT and GT, so I hope the two remaining paragraphs are at least accurate, if not exhaustive. Maralia (talk) 00:53, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for this and for taking it forwards. Geometry guy 00:09, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- and...an edit conflict. Should I throw something out the window, or just cut right to the chase and leap? Maralia (talk) 22:26, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
- Don't leap: I need you :) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 22:27, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
- That drink looks delicious, thanks! I'm working on Moltke now. The hyphenation (for this and any weaponry-related article) is a bitch, frankly. The problem is that "12-inch gun" requires a hyphen, but hyphens are not used with abbreviations, resulting in the ugly (and misinterpretable) "12 in gun". Maralia (talk) 00:53, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- That's really stupid (no wonder I can never remember) !! Thanks, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:30, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- Done with M249. Going to hold off on Heinrich for now, since I see Laser brain just got to it. Frustrated about M249—the article is good, but how on earth did references in this kind of shape make it through ACR? Will tackle that beast when I am less cranky. Thanks for pinging me; it's much easier to leap in where needed than it is to keep track of everywhere help might be needed. Maralia (talk) 04:45, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- Sorry about that; I've been trying to do a reference MoS review on every ACR not nominated by YellowMonkey, but I either didn't get to that one or wasn't trying to get to every one at that time... —Ed 17 04:49, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- Criminy, way back then I had barely managed to beat reference formatting through your head :) Maralia (talk) 05:07, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- LOL no, I had most of it by then. Watching you work on Nevada was a ... minor tutorial, you could say. (alright, so it was a major tutorial. :P) —Ed 17 05:22, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- Criminy, way back then I had barely managed to beat reference formatting through your head :) Maralia (talk) 05:07, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- Sorry about that; I've been trying to do a reference MoS review on every ACR not nominated by YellowMonkey, but I either didn't get to that one or wasn't trying to get to every one at that time... —Ed 17 04:49, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- Done with M249. Going to hold off on Heinrich for now, since I see Laser brain just got to it. Frustrated about M249—the article is good, but how on earth did references in this kind of shape make it through ACR? Will tackle that beast when I am less cranky. Thanks for pinging me; it's much easier to leap in where needed than it is to keep track of everywhere help might be needed. Maralia (talk) 04:45, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- That's really stupid (no wonder I can never remember) !! Thanks, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:30, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- That drink looks delicious, thanks! I'm working on Moltke now. The hyphenation (for this and any weaponry-related article) is a bitch, frankly. The problem is that "12-inch gun" requires a hyphen, but hyphens are not used with abbreviations, resulting in the ugly (and misinterpretable) "12 in gun". Maralia (talk) 00:53, 1 March 2009 (UTC)
- Don't leap: I need you :) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 22:27, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
Talkback
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Battle of Dunkirk
There has recently been some conjecture as to how to describe the victory by the German forces. Can you or other members of the project group please assist in the discussion on the talk page. I intend to call for a consensus decision in order to establish the infobox statement regarding the outcome of the battle. FWiW Bzuk (talk) 12:53, 2 March 2009 (UTC).
Misplaced Pages:Featured article candidates/M249 squad automatic weapon
Maybe you can explain it better. I've been attempting to explain my references concerns for a while and no luck. Ealdgyth - Talk 16:06, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
- I've cleaned it up; how is it now?--Patton 21:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
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Nominations for the Military history WikiProject coordinator election
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- Are you going to run for re-election? Even if you are not it would be nice for you to indicate as such on the table at the election page. -MBK004 02:22, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
- I do hope you decide to run, Maralia. — Roger Davies 05:20, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
- You should run, Maralia. You have a knack for this, and it would be nice to see you back. TomStar81 (Talk) 05:57, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
- Huzzah! — Roger Davies 16:22, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
- I *hate* writing about myself, plus I never feel like I accomplish enough, and it added up to a pitiful case of writer's block. Thanks for the encouragement. Maralia (talk) 16:32, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
- Huzzah! — Roger Davies 16:22, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
- You should run, Maralia. You have a knack for this, and it would be nice to see you back. TomStar81 (Talk) 05:57, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
Osteochondritis dissecans
Maralia, do you have time to glance at the comments at the bottom of Misplaced Pages:Featured article candidates/Osteochondritis dissecans and possibly work on a MoS cleanup? I saw overlinking and all sorts of other issues, left sample edits. The nominator mentioned contacting you, but apparently hasn't done so. I'm busy all day tomorrow, and had a full weekend, so if I have to do this cleanup myself, I can't get to it until Tuesday. Best, as always, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 00:27, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
- Sure, just got back home tonight, and will take a look at it now. Left a note at the FAC. Maralia (talk) 04:21, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks, Maralia; between the two of us, we got it mostly cleaned up, but it's still not to my level of expectations for medical articles, so I've left notes at WP:MED asking others to go through. (I do hold medical articles to a high standard because it's my "area" and I believe medical featured articles have a "moral" obligation to be scrupulous.) A rather sloppy, uncited sentence was added post-FAC, so the article may need extra eyes, in case you want to keep it watchlisted. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:16, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
- Yeah, I'm not done with it either. There is a fair amount of unnecessary content repetition, and a lot of redundant wikilinking—yet a lot of missed opportunities (mosaicplasty?) and some botched links (effusion in the lead). Some things just don't compute (if arthroscopic staging is "considered standard", then why is "the Anderson MRI...the main form of staging used in this article"? why does the article state—twice—that "pain killers" are used to control pain...and inflammation and swelling? why does the content of the Full thickness lesions section appear to have little correlation to the section's introductory sentence? what does OATS stand for?). There are many medical terms that could be better explained in-context rather than relying on readers to click wikilinks. I left four inline comments yesterday; I'll start listing some of these issues on the talk page. Maralia (talk) 16:41, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
- What troubles me is the sub-par review that it got at FAC: I do expect more from medical articles, and I hope that Project doesn't believe that article represents our FA medical standards. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:55, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
- Yeah, I'm not done with it either. There is a fair amount of unnecessary content repetition, and a lot of redundant wikilinking—yet a lot of missed opportunities (mosaicplasty?) and some botched links (effusion in the lead). Some things just don't compute (if arthroscopic staging is "considered standard", then why is "the Anderson MRI...the main form of staging used in this article"? why does the article state—twice—that "pain killers" are used to control pain...and inflammation and swelling? why does the content of the Full thickness lesions section appear to have little correlation to the section's introductory sentence? what does OATS stand for?). There are many medical terms that could be better explained in-context rather than relying on readers to click wikilinks. I left four inline comments yesterday; I'll start listing some of these issues on the talk page. Maralia (talk) 16:41, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks, Maralia; between the two of us, we got it mostly cleaned up, but it's still not to my level of expectations for medical articles, so I've left notes at WP:MED asking others to go through. (I do hold medical articles to a high standard because it's my "area" and I believe medical featured articles have a "moral" obligation to be scrupulous.) A rather sloppy, uncited sentence was added post-FAC, so the article may need extra eyes, in case you want to keep it watchlisted. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:16, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
Another MilHist issue at Misplaced Pages:Featured article candidates/Byzantine navy; see notes at bottom (am I the only person who reviews for MoS?). SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:55, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
Thanks
Thanks a lot for looking over those articles - I appreciate it. Nick-D (talk) 22:42, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
Nevado del Ruiz
I've resolved a good amount of your comments. Can you check to make sure I've done them satisfactorily? Ceranthor 23:22, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
- Have they been fixed to your content? Ceranthor 15:12, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
- Ruslik fixed your concerns. Ceranthor 19:56, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
Manners maketh man
Charming note on my talk page - bless you! Where would we elves be without wise reviewers? Tim riley (talk) 16:39, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
"Let it develop"
The template was/is still completely under development. Going to the template alone does not provide a full sample with parameters, for example: I hope this current full example clarifies that this template has a specific purpose, to avoid an immediate AfD by inviting editors to an appropriate place for community dialog. Thank you. PetersV TALK 17:54, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
Election
Good Luck on the election for Coordinator! I Hope you Make It! Have A Great Day! Lord R. T. Oliver 21:53, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you—and good luck to you as well :) Maralia (talk) 02:00, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
- And I was wondering since you haven't yet, at least at the moment, voted on it, What is your Opinion on Having a C-Class for the WikiProject? Lord R. T. Oliver 02:13, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
invitation
You're invited to sign up as a founding member, at Misplaced Pages:WikiProject Council/Proposals#WikiProject Historic Sites ! :) doncram (talk) 05:51, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
It's a race :)
We were both on it at the same time :) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:10, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
- I have no idea how we didn't ec at the article talk page. Notices left at article and user talk :) Maralia (talk) 15:14, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
- I think between the two of us, we got it all :) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:16, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
FAR
Thanks, hopefully I survive the upcoming bloodbath FAR. YellowMonkey (click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!) 06:45, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
Cleanup
yeah, no worries, i think i need to get a life man, Tom B (talk) 00:39, 17 March 2009 (UTC)
With Thanks
The WikiProject Barnstar | ||
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Coordinator
It seems we have our twelfth official candidate with 20 or 20+ endorsements, congratulations! Have A Great Day! Lord R. T. Oliver 21:10, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
Coordinators
There are currently 12 members with 20 or 20+, and it has been less than a week so far, that means there is two spots left. The turnout has been great. Have A Great Day! Lord R. T. Oliver 21:17, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
Military history WikiProject coordinator election
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Talkback
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Date linking
I've responded to a comment you made at User talk:KokkaShinto. —Locke Cole • t • c 15:09, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
Noel Coward
Noel Coward has been promoted to FA. Your excellent comments really helped us improve it - Thanks! All the best, -- Ssilvers (talk) 14:26, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
FA categorization of Warfare
Hi Maralia. Sandy and I noticed that the warfare category of FAs has reached over 200 articles. Usually at this point we begin to subdivide the category. Could you please give your opinion on whether or how we should do this? Misplaced Pages talk:FA#Warfare.3F Thanks! Karanacs (talk) 14:46, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
Greetings from WikiProject Medicine!
Welcome to WikiProject Medicine! I noticed you recently added yourself to our Participants' list, and I wanted to welcome you to our project. Our goal is to facilitate collaboration on medicine-related articles, and everyone is welcome to join (regardless of medical qualifications!). Here are some suggested activities:
Join in editing our collaboration of the week (the current one is Chronic obstructive pulmonary disease) Discuss with other members in the doctor's mess Have a look at some related WikiProjects Have a look at the collaboration dashboard If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask at the project talk page, or please feel free to ask for help, on talk page. Again, welcome! |
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American forces casualties
I have given my reply and my reasoning at the page for the discussion. I think I have stated a fairly solid reason why the article is needed.BobaFett85 (talk) 06:12, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
Congrats!
Congrats on your election as a Coordinator of the Military history Wikiproject! In keeping with the tradition of the project and in honor of your achievement, I present you with these stars. TomStar81 (Talk) 00:53, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
- I am honored that I was elected to my new position of assistant coordinator, and look forward to working with you for the next six months. Lord Oliver 01:32, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
Thank you!
Thank you very much for your support for me in the Military History coordinator elections. I am honored that I was elected to my new position of assistant coordinator, and look forward to working with you for the next six months. – Joe N 01:20, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
Thank you
Milhist Coordinator elections | ||
I wish to thank you for your gracious support during my bid for a position as Coordinator of the Military history Wikiproject in the recent March 2009 elections. I was initially apprehensive to stand for election as I was unsure on how well I would be received, but I am pleasantly surprised and delighted to have been deemed worthy to represent my peers within the project. I assure and promise you, I will strive to do my upmost to justify your trust in myself with this esteemed position. Thank you, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 01:42, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
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Thank you
I seem to have drawn a crowd of support! | |
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Explanation
Wrong template, I meant to igve him {{subst:uw-vandalism1|Ronald Reagan}} instead of {{subst:uw-vandalism2|PageName}} since this isn't the first time time he's done this. Soxwon (talk) 17:51, 30 March 2009 (UTC)
New FAC rollout
Maralia, Gimme has a plan to roll a new FAC template, explained at Template talk:FAC. I don't completely understand all of it, and am heading out to dinner now, home in a few hours ... maybe you'll get a chance to look at it? He was thinking it could run as this week's Dispatch. I suspect it will make sense to you since you speak bots and scripts and all that ... best, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 23:04, 30 March 2009 (UTC)
- Wait wait wait. FAC is merging with AfD? Or am I missing something? —Ed 17 01:09, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
Maralia, query for you at User talk:Gimmetrow. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:53, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
HD
Thanks for your eds, I'll switch to cleaning up the talk page to save you the headache of edit conflicts - they give a kind of warm feeling but can be a little tricky can't they! :) L∴V 23:48, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
- After thought - I forgot to use you 50% vs written, will put back in later if you haven't already. L∴V 23:56, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
- Was away having dinner. Have tweaked the lead again. Would still like to see consistency on capitalization of the gene and the protein (no idea which if any should be capitalized, but all permutations are currently in use) as well as the abbreviations Htt/HTT, mHtt/mHTT, etc. Lastly, I made a pretty bold edit of the Diagnosis section (mostly Genetic testing) that I hope you will check closely as I am far from an expert. Thanks! Maralia (talk) 02:29, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
- Checked, all ok √. I put the capitalization on talk page with it's own header - just below the mhtt/htt discussion from the past and will address, many thanks. L∴V 12:51, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
- As for capitalization, in case you're wondering, from a previous conversation 'I switched the gene name to all-caps italics wherever I saw it and the protein name to all-caps non-italics' and anything that is 'mutant' <gene/protein> is same but with lower case 'm' prefixed, although you will be able to find people use standards so using these papers inconsistency creeps in :( I will ce it now... L∴V 23:48, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for clarifying on capitalization of the abbreviations (and on italics; had missed the line RE gene capitalization in MOS). Still not clear on Huntingtin vs. huntingtin for the gene and the protein, but I don't see it codified anywhere, so I'd be happy with just consistency of usage. Ping me when you've finished your latest pass and I'll give it another read. Maralia (talk) 01:50, 3 April 2009 (UTC)
- I have gone through capitalized the gene name, protein lower case and attempted to avoid the phrase 'huntingtin protein' as it is ambiguous and could be used either way - see Talk:Huntington's_disease#Capitalization_of_huntingtin for further info, I've gone for consistency rather than the definite answer ( which may be elusive and way too complicated to implement), will hopefully being doing other copyeds later, but I think I've addressed issues you've raised. many thanks L∴V 14:27, 3 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for clarifying on capitalization of the abbreviations (and on italics; had missed the line RE gene capitalization in MOS). Still not clear on Huntingtin vs. huntingtin for the gene and the protein, but I don't see it codified anywhere, so I'd be happy with just consistency of usage. Ping me when you've finished your latest pass and I'll give it another read. Maralia (talk) 01:50, 3 April 2009 (UTC)
- As for capitalization, in case you're wondering, from a previous conversation 'I switched the gene name to all-caps italics wherever I saw it and the protein name to all-caps non-italics' and anything that is 'mutant' <gene/protein> is same but with lower case 'm' prefixed, although you will be able to find people use standards so using these papers inconsistency creeps in :( I will ce it now... L∴V 23:48, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
- Checked, all ok √. I put the capitalization on talk page with it's own header - just below the mhtt/htt discussion from the past and will address, many thanks. L∴V 12:51, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
- Was away having dinner. Have tweaked the lead again. Would still like to see consistency on capitalization of the gene and the protein (no idea which if any should be capitalized, but all permutations are currently in use) as well as the abbreviations Htt/HTT, mHtt/mHTT, etc. Lastly, I made a pretty bold edit of the Diagnosis section (mostly Genetic testing) that I hope you will check closely as I am far from an expert. Thanks! Maralia (talk) 02:29, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
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Nassau class battleship
I just wanted to mention how much I dislike reviewing all those measurements in MilHist articles :))) I think that article needs a lot of MoS work; it started to make me dizzy :) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 22:21, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'll take a look after dinner. Maralia (talk) 22:35, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks, Maralia! Those articles are so number intensive, and there are often problems with hyphenation. If Tony ever looks at one of those articles, he may go to town :) Maybe there's a way to raise more awareness at MilHist of the number and hyphen issues? Thanks again, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:51, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
1047
Hey Maralia. Would you be able to take a look at Design 1047 battlecruiser, which is at FAC, if you have time? I know that you are totally overloaded, so please delay/don't look at it if you don't have time. :-) Thanks, —Ed 17
- I started, but got tied up with stuff off my watchlist when I came back after dinner, and now I have a nasty headache. Will try to finish it off tomorrow; bug me if I forget. Maralia (talk) 02:50, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
Hello again! I addressed all of them, but left one in there for you to check. Have I altered the wording enough so that I am not speaking to the reader? —Ed 17 23:42, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
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Endometriosis Overlinking
I'm looking for help with the wp:overlinking policy and I invite you to join the discussion at Misplaced Pages:Village_pump_(policy)#Overlinking_vs._Redundant_Linking
Together, we're making good articles. Danglingdiagnosis (talk) 07:52, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
M249 squad automatic weapon
Hey. You opposed this articles FAC over referencing. I know you've already struck your oppose, but I've completely redone the refs. You might like to take a look :-).--Patton 14:19, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
Just something
I haven't seen your input about some of the grammar claims about the Johnson page. I was wondering if you could take a third party look and contact me with any that are still in the article and should be addressed? I respect your opinion on such things. It seems that the fighting halted many of the reviews. I should have more time to devote to article writing this week, as my current Wiki stuff will be finishing up tonight when it closes. Ottava Rima (talk) 19:04, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- Oh, and don't think that this is urgent and needs to be done now, if you are willing to. I'm sure that the FAC will be there for a week or so more, as no one is really reviewing and its stagnated near the bottom. Ottava Rima (talk) 19:05, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- That FAC was promoted by Karanacs this morning. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:06, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- Oh, well. That gives Maralia even more time to look at any concerns. :) Ottava Rima (talk) 19:08, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- Are you looking for a grammar check on the article, or specific feedback vs the grammar issues raised at the FAC? I would rather eat hot lead than try to decipher the lengthy FAC page, but I'd be happy to do the former. Maralia (talk) 19:21, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- Just a general sweep of the article looking for grammar. Some of the issues raised were a few words that were characterized as "antiquated" or some sentences that were vague or too confusing to understand. Ottava Rima (talk) 19:26, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- Are you looking for a grammar check on the article, or specific feedback vs the grammar issues raised at the FAC? I would rather eat hot lead than try to decipher the lengthy FAC page, but I'd be happy to do the former. Maralia (talk) 19:21, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- Oh, well. That gives Maralia even more time to look at any concerns. :) Ottava Rima (talk) 19:08, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
- That FAC was promoted by Karanacs this morning. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:06, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
Old templates
Are you sure we want to have them removed? I thought we were keeping them around in case we ever had to wing it without GimmeBot? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:37, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
- Not wholesale indiscriminate removal; mostly just tagging as deprecated to make it clear that they're no longer in active use. Some of them, though, never were used and could be deleted. Don't worry, I will take the time to look into each one and form a good recommendation case-by-case. Maralia (talk) 20:16, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
Crisis
An unexpected development on Misplaced Pages that concerns us has been brought to our attention by Moonriddengirl. Please follow this link for more information. TomStar81 (Talk) 23:34, 10 April 2009 (UTC)
Collins Line
I did Baltic and Pacific. When I start on a class of ships I usually do the lot but in this case I just whipped these two out to get a five-part DYK on another topic. I might have gone on to do the rest but since I see you already started on them, I thought you might want to do at least a couple.
If I was doing them as a set, I would probably write a blanket article called something like "Collins Line ships" where I would include the detail common to all four ships (or five, including Adriatic), and then just concentrate on the service histories in the individual articles. I think that's the best way to proceed because otherwise you end up with a lot of redundant info in the individual ship articles. If you would like to tackle such an article though, I can give you a couple of useful sources. Gatoclass (talk) 07:15, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
- Is the DYK nom up yet? Was curious about a five-part DYK related to those ships, but couldn't find a nom.
- I wouldn't in the least mind if you wanted to work on any of the other ships. I am mainly interested in working on Arctic, due to the spectacular manner in which she was wrecked, and the extreme amount of coverage in newspapers and books. Maralia (talk) 18:10, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
- The nom was up, but I just decided to pull it as I am now considering breaking it up into two separate hooks (ironically, after spending all that time researching those two ship articles!).
- I think the Collins Line ships are very interesting, and I would like to give them the attention I think they deserve, but I have other priorities at the moment and if I manage to get back to them at all it probably won't be for weeks, if not months. So if you change your mind about them, it's not likely to bother me :) Cheers, Gatoclass (talk) 18:35, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
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What every happened to
Hey there Maralia, I know that back in November/December there was some talk about your running for admin, whatever became of that? If you want a new nom, I would not be opposed to giving you one.---I'm Spartacus! 16:20, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
- I had some real life stuff going on that would've made it difficult to handle an RFA (first an illness in the family, and then my primary computer gave up the ghost). Things have settled down since, and I'm gearing up to get on with it again. I've recently contacted both people who previously wrote co-noms for me and they're still on board, so I think I'll stick with that; 3 co-noms seems a bit much to me. Thanks very much for the offer, though! Maralia (talk) 17:41, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
- No problem... I've been seeing your name around a lot more lately and just wanted to find out what happened... I knew there were personal issues then, but didn't know if you had completely decided against it or what.---I'm Spartacus! 17:55, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
Keith Johnson
Thanks for pointing those out, I've fixed them. YellowMonkey (cricket calendar poll!) 00:30, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
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- It was just a few minutes' work, really. But thank you, it's always nice to be appreciated :) Maralia (talk) 04:18, 15 April 2009 (UTC)
SD tagging per AWB
Hi Maralia
Could I ask you to instead of mass-tagging pages for speedy deletion, just compile a list of the pages in some sandbox and notify one admin (like me or xeno or Toon05) to batch-delete them, in the future? Otherwise those are clogging up CAT:CSD, and people are going to start deleting them one by one while they could pretty easily all be deleted with one click, with the proper tools.
Thanks & Cheers, Amalthea 12:51, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
- I'll figure out a way. I've been using AWB to tag because I have to eyeball each one (they're not in a convenient category, or reliably in a subset of whatlinkshere, and even the false positives need other editing). It's further complicated by AWB bugging out—creating a list from 'what transcludes page' is busted, so I'm having to start with a manual copy/paste of onwiki Special:Whatlinkshere results into a text file, clean up the formatting with search/replace, then import it into AWB just to get a working list. Ugly, huh? :) I'll try weeding out the ones needing editing first instead; a few pre-parse runs after that might get me to a reliable list for CSD. Maralia (talk) 16:38, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
- Ah, I see. Hmm, if it's easier for you you can also just categorize them in some non-existant category, like Category:FAC pages for G6 deletion, which can then be used to delete them all. That wouldn't change much in your workflow I assume? Amalthea 17:23, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
- A category had occurred to me, but I figured that would be frowned on for being out-of-process :) (This is where some smartass talkpage stalker will point out that this would have been the smartest way to get it done.) Per your previous suggestion, I had already started preparing a subpage list, using multiple pre-parsing runs in AWB and a review pass onwiki (thank all that's holy for popups!) to weed out false positives. Glancing at the rest of my batch, it appears that they are mostly false positives that I just need to edit, so I think I'll just keep adding to my subpage. Thanks for the suggestion, though; once I'm through with this batch, it will take some inventive searches to isolate the rest of the relic pages (these were the 'easy' ones!), and a temp category would be more efficient than back-and-forth from wiki–AWB–wiki. In any case, the pages listed at the subpage link above are multiply-confirmed and ready to be deleted. Thanks for your help. Maralia (talk) 03:52, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
- Done, batch deletion of those listed on the subpage is complete. I have left the backlinks intact. I was just about to mention this until I saw that you already did. You really should think about going for it, your need for the tools has just exhibited itself yet again. -MBK004 04:08, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks, MBK. I just finished processing the rest of the first batch. Even though I had drafted the subpage list at an arbitrary breaking point, it turns out that the list captured all the remaining positive matches from this batch. Creepy. Maralia (talk) 04:28, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
- Hi
That second batch doesn't happen to be reviewed yet, does it? I'd be needing a test case cause the batch deletion tool is acting out a little. :)
Cheers, Amalthea 13:44, 23 April 2009 (UTC)- As a matter of fact, it is ready now; knock yourself out :) After that, I expect to have only one more batch, probably smaller than the others. Thanks. Maralia (talk) 13:47, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- Alright, they are all gone. Thanks & Cheers, Amalthea 15:15, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- As a matter of fact, it is ready now; knock yourself out :) After that, I expect to have only one more batch, probably smaller than the others. Thanks. Maralia (talk) 13:47, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- Hi
- Thanks, MBK. I just finished processing the rest of the first batch. Even though I had drafted the subpage list at an arbitrary breaking point, it turns out that the list captured all the remaining positive matches from this batch. Creepy. Maralia (talk) 04:28, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
- Done, batch deletion of those listed on the subpage is complete. I have left the backlinks intact. I was just about to mention this until I saw that you already did. You really should think about going for it, your need for the tools has just exhibited itself yet again. -MBK004 04:08, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
- A category had occurred to me, but I figured that would be frowned on for being out-of-process :) (This is where some smartass talkpage stalker will point out that this would have been the smartest way to get it done.) Per your previous suggestion, I had already started preparing a subpage list, using multiple pre-parsing runs in AWB and a review pass onwiki (thank all that's holy for popups!) to weed out false positives. Glancing at the rest of my batch, it appears that they are mostly false positives that I just need to edit, so I think I'll just keep adding to my subpage. Thanks for the suggestion, though; once I'm through with this batch, it will take some inventive searches to isolate the rest of the relic pages (these were the 'easy' ones!), and a temp category would be more efficient than back-and-forth from wiki–AWB–wiki. In any case, the pages listed at the subpage link above are multiply-confirmed and ready to be deleted. Thanks for your help. Maralia (talk) 03:52, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
- Ah, I see. Hmm, if it's easier for you you can also just categorize them in some non-existant category, like Category:FAC pages for G6 deletion, which can then be used to delete them all. That wouldn't change much in your workflow I assume? Amalthea 17:23, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
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Tex Settle
Thanks for cleaning up that Hindu grammar of mine! Any suggestions how to find verifiable date/place of his death, other than breaking into Pentagon screaming FOIA? NVO (talk)
- You're welcome! I have some ideas; let me see what I can find. Maralia (talk) 01:15, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- Here's what I've found so far:
- The SSA lists a Thomas Settle, born 4 Nov 1895, last residence in zip 20015 (DC), that died in April 1980. His SSN was 579-52-8080; you can see the summary report I pulled this from by searching on that SSN at this site.
- SSA info on Fay can be found by searching on 579-60-9349; she died in 1989.
- Tex appears to be listed in the 1900 DC census, at age 4.
- He's also listed in the 1910 Honolulu census, at age 14, in the household of Joseph Settle and May C W Settle.
- By the 1920 census, Joseph seems to be back in DC, but it's not clear if the family was with him. Tex would have graduated from the Naval Academy by that time anyway.
- While I'm on the topic of the Naval Academy: this Navy source says he graduated in 1915. The USNA alumni site shows Thomas G. Settle as a member of the class of 1919.
- It seems likely that May's maiden name was Williams. I haven't sussed out a Greenhow connection yet; any of your sources hint at where that came from? It has some interesting possible connections.
- The Joyner Library at East Carolina University apparently has a 67-page transcription of an oral history given by his wife Fay, covering 1923–1957.
- The University of Texas/Dallas has a box of some correspondence between Tex and Admiral Rosendahl, including articles by Tex.
- The Naval Historical Center has a box of Tex's correspondence and notes.
- I don't have immediate access to the relevant census listings (they are available online, but behind pay walls). Know anyone with an ancestry.com paid subscription? Maralia (talk) 16:51, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- 1980 sounds reasonable - at least one of the books I used say he lived over 80. As for the middle names - no idea; in fact, the only book I saw that deciphered G. W. is They sailed the skies, p. 35 but it does not mention anything prior to Academy. NVO (talk) 17:27, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for your note regarding dashes—I clearly was confused about it. I was using the insertable dashes on the edit page for a while, but I guess you are right—they display OK on the article pages with my IE7 browser, but not in the edit space. I'd much rather not use the html code. Any idea how I change the browser setting to display them in the edit window? LilHelpa (talk) 10:59, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- Ah.. I found the setting in preferences that will change the font to permit me to see this better. Many thanks for clearing this up for me. I still have a lot of MOS to learn before I'm a really good copy editor. I try to respond to requests, but it is not really my thing (yet). LilHelpa (talk) 11:19, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
- Here's what I've found so far:
Reply
What do you mean by "breaking wikilinks?" Magus732 (talk) 18:22, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
FAR
Just the techie I was looking for. Can you look at the two computing FARs at the bottom please? Nobody is reviewing it. Thanks YellowMonkey (cricket calendar poll!) 03:35, 24 April 2009 (UTC)
ANI thread on Gimmebot
Here. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:34, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
Ships
I'm working on Clements Markham, currently at peer review. It has a lot of 19th century warships in it, and I'm not sure I've linked them all correctly. If you could possibly look at this aspect of the article, I would be very grateful. Brianboulton (talk) 12:35, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
Jacob Aaron Westervelt
Nice work on cleaning this one up some more, I obviously missed quite a bit first time round -- that will teach me to copy edit after a 3 hour conference call! – ukexpat (talk) 19:17, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for noticing :) I can tell that you put a lot of work into it, too; the prose is much better than it was when I skimmed the article a couple weeks ago. I still have a fair amount of work to do on the reference formatting, but it's getting there! Maralia (talk) 19:26, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
Opera cleanup
Why are you delinking Opera Software in the citations, changing "cite press release" to "cite press release/citation", changing "Agnitum" to "Agnitum Ltd", wikilinking small screen rendering (a redirect to mobile browser), and changing all the dates from American to British format? The rest of your changes look mostly okay. —Remember the dot 17:30, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
- In order:
- I delinked redundant wikilinks to Opera Software in the citations. The article as a whole had tons of redundant wikilinks.
- I changed {{cite press release}} to {{cite press release/citation}} because the former improperly displays press release titles in italics, while the latter properly displays them in quote marks.
- I changed Agnitum to Agnitum Ltd because that's how the linked website displayed the name.
- I wikilinked small screen rendering because the term was not explained in-text; several redirects (from various wordings) to mobile browser existed, and it seemed an appropriate link.
- The date formats used in the article were not consistent. The dates used in the text were mdy and dmy, while the dates in citations were invariably dmy format. I standardized to the latter form as it required vastly fewer changes and seemed appropriate given the international scope of the article.
- I'm sorry that the FAR has been a bit contentious, but I'm just trying to help here. Maralia (talk) 17:51, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
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