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::*Please see the second paragraph of the "Artistic work" section. The entire paragraph is supported by one and the same reference; it is meaningless to duplicate a reference four or five times in the same paragraph, just to make sure each sentence is referenced. ] (]) 02:57, 7 May 2009 (UTC)


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Candidate entries

Articles created/expanded on May 7

Articles created/expanded on May 6

Appalachian Azure

Created by Rufous-crowned Sparrow (talk). Self nom at 02:52, 7 May 2009 (UTC)


French Army in World War I

Created by Mynameinc (talk). Self nom at 00:55, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

I removed the stub template after submitting, forgot to remove it. I counted 2687 copying-and-pasting the prose into a JavaScript character counter. mynameinc 01:29, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Jane Edna Hunter, Woodburn (Pendleton, South Carolina)

Created by KudzuVine (talk). Self nom at 22:58, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

All set. If you could remember to bold the links to the articles you created in the future, that would be great. Nice work! — Jake Wartenberg 01:56, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Boys' Club (Parks and Recreation)

Created by Hunter Kahn (talk). Self nom at 22:14, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Source, history, and length verified. However, some of the sources used in the article are not reliable: Twitter, Cinema Blend, for example. TV Squad and the Conservative Journal seem like borderline sources to me - I'm not sure that they are reliable. I'm also not sure that we can use the NBC videos. Awadewit (talk) 23:04, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

The Ladies' Mercury

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nom at 22:10, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Jan Martin Larsen

Created by Punkmorten (talk), Oceanh (talk). Self nom at 21:54, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Salzburg

Created/expanded by Auslli (talk). Self nom at 20:54, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Carrington Moss

Created by Parrot of Doom (talk). Self nom at 20:39, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Aerial telescope

  • ... that very long focal length refracting telescopes built in the second half of the 17th century that did not use a tube?

Created by Fountains of Bryn Mawr (talk). Self nom at 20:22, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Hook has grammar issues, is uncited in the article, and does not include the nominated article. Two of these are easily overcome ("... that the aerial telescope is a type of very long focal length refracting telescopes built in the second half of the 17th century that did not use a tube?") but the sourcing issue is serious. - Dravecky (talk) 21:35, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

KKRB

Created by Dravecky (talk). Self nom at 19:54, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

On being asked for a War Poem

5x expanded by Mrathel (talk). Self nom at 19:48, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

History of Chianti

  • Comment: Oxford ref in Lead (FN#1) as well as the "Early history to the Renaissance" section

Created by Agne27 (talk). Self nom at 19:43, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

James Edward Hanger

Created by WBancroft (talk). Nominated by Ukexpat (talk) at 17:38, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

1993 Auckland mid-air collision

Created by XLerate (talk). Self nom at 13:05, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Hauz Khas Complex

Created/expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self nom at 12:48, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

  • The hook is the first sentence in the lead, and is not cited. Please find a citation. Everything else (x5 expansion, hook, length) is verified. Synergy 13:49, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Mikhaylo Parashchuk

Created by TodorBozhinov (talk). Self nom at 12:22, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Carlton Skinner

Created by Scapler (talk). Self nom at 11:43, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

  • - Length, date, and online source is verified. I think this could be a bit more interesting, so I suggest either of the two alt's below.
I think that the first hook is better, since it mentions both his role in racial integration, and his governorship. I personally found his integration campaigns more interesting than his governorship, and the majority of sources mention his role in the USCG, rather than in Guam. Cheers! Scapler (talk) 20:04, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Strand, Akershus

Created by Punkmorten (talk). Self nom at 11:15, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Willy Mullens

Created by Drmies (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 09:51, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Gaddi Torso

File:Torso firenze.JPG

Created by Wetman (talk). Self nom at 03:28, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

KISS Pinball

  • ... that the first KISS Pinball machine was developed in 1978?

Created by A Nobody (talk). Self nom at 02:33, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

  • The length is barely over 1500 bytes, and the "Reception" section is filled with "quotes". The hook is nothing "interesting" to me too.--Caspian blue 02:44, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Says you. I think the fact that there is even a KISS pinball machine is interesting enough. ;) CarpetCrawler 21:04, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
I agree with Caspian blue. Most of the sections are one sentence long. In addition, the bulk of the sources are unreliable - they are self-published sources. Awadewit (talk) 23:31, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Jan Dekert

5x expanded by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 23:21, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Jan Mikołaj Smogulecki

Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 01:08, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on May 5

Hel Fortified Area

Microsoft Venus

  • ... that Microsoft Venus was an unsuccessful venture by Microsoft into the Chinese computing market?
  • ALT1:... that Microsoft attempted to tap into the Chinese computing market in 1999 with a prototype computer known as Microsoft Venus?
  • ALT2:... that Microsoft produced a prototype television-based computer for the Chinese market known as Microsoft Venus in 1999?

Created by One (talk). Self nom at 14:14, 6 May 2009 (UTC)


2003 ricin letters

Created by IvoShandor (talk). Self nom at 10:01, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

--IvoShandor (talk) 10:01, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Finetooth shark

  • ... that the finetooth shark (pictured) is found exclusively in water less than 10 m (30 ft) deep during the summer?

5x expanded by Yzx (talk). Self nom at 03:58, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Anne Donahue

Created by Hunter Kahn (talk). Self nom at 01:05, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

  • The information is in the article and everything is verfied except for the hook. Its not cited. Can you please cite this? Synergy 02:13, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  • It is cited; it's in the second page of the newspaper article that is linked in the reference. Go to the page and click on the page #2 on the bottom of the article and you'll see it there. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 02:20, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  • - Length, date, and online source is verified. The sentence: On April 2, 2009, Donahue was one of five Vermont House Republicans who voted in favor of a bill allowing same-sex marriages in the state; the bill passed with an overall vote of 95-52. was not cited, but I have done so noting the page number. Please make sure that next time the source is linked directly to the information and the inline citations follows at the end of the sentence. Synergy 13:29, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
    • Well, it didn't seem entirely necessary to me, but that works. However, if that sentence has to cite page 2, so too does the sentence immediately after it. I was under the impression one footnote at the end of the second sentence would be sufficient for both, but since you say it isn't, I've added the same footnote to the end of both sentences. (I also changed your citation slightly so it would be in keeping with Template:Cite news.) Please check to make sure how I did it works for you. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 22:04, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

SARK

image

  • ... the SARK, the US Navy's Search and Rescue Knife, was designed and built within 24 hours by custom knifemaker Ernest Emerson?

Created by Mike Searson (talk). Self nom at 00:01, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Work Is a Four-Letter Word

Created by Rodhullandemu (talk). Self nom at 23:00, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Vicki Lynne Cole

  • ... that Ohio teenager Vicki Lynne Cole held up a sign (which she hadn't read) saying "Bring Us Together Again" at a 1968 Nixon rally, and the candidate later mentioned it in his victory speech?

Created by Wehwalt (talk). Self nom at 22:56, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Length and history verified; offline source accepted in good faith. Awadewit (talk) 00:48, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Um, it's an interesting article and an amusing story, but does it belong in Misplaced Pages? If there ever were a case of a person known for just one event, isn't this one? --Orlady (talk) 18:39, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
First, she got press attention for almost a decade after the event. Second, her involuntary choice of "Bring us together", had political ramifications, which are explained in the article: The Democrats threw that phrase in Nixon's face every chance they got, since after all, his political strategy was in holding his base and adding on the Wallace voters, and the hell with the rest of the voters. Panetta chose that phrase as the title of his tell all book about being kicked out of the Nixon administration, and his career on both sides of the political aisle continues today. If the sign was mentioned in the speech and Cole was identified, and that was the end of it, you'd have a strong point. However, that was not the case.--Wehwalt (talk) 19:57, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Jonathan Roberts

5x expanded by AdmiralKolchak (talk). Self nom at 22:01, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Looks good. — Jake Wartenberg // ER 22:32, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

The Hate That Hate Produced

Created by Malik Shabazz (talk). Self nom at 20:53, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Praise of the Two Lands (ship)

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nom at 20:51, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Date and length OK. AGF on offline hook reference. — Jake Wartenberg // ER 21:30, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Alberts Frères

Created by Drmies (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 20:41, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Article size and date check out. AGF on the Dutch hook reference. — Jake Wartenberg // ER 20:49, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Vicki Robinson

  • ... that Valessa Robinson used the fact that she was acting under the influence of LSD when she killed her mother as part of her defense, despite the fact that the drug does not cause violent inclinations?

Created by Jake Wartenberg (talk). Self nom at 19:49, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

  • The statement in the article is a bit more ambiguous: "Although the drug does not usually cause violent inclinations, Robinson still opted to use this fact in her defense". The source states the opinion of a professor about how LSD doesn't usually cause violent inclinations, but we don't really know anything about Valessa Robinson in particular here. Could we get a different hook? Awadewit (talk) 01:04, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Source, length, and history verified for ALT. Awadewit (talk) 23:35, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

List of outstanding South Park episodes

started/recovered by Nergaal. Self nom at 15:01, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

This is currently up for deletion. Awadewit (talk) 01:11, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

A Prayer for My Daughter

5x expanded by Mrathel (talk). Self nom at 15:01, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Nout Wellink

5x expanded by Permethius (talk). Self nom at 14:08, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Charlie Crowe

Created by 03md (talk). Self nom at 10:28, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

  • The hook does not match the article: "In 2009 he began the "Charlie Crowe Appeal" with the aim of helping Alzheimer sufferers. His daughter Lesley Edmondson started a campaign that aimed to raise £1.5 million to buy a medical scanner for Newcastle University’s Campus for Aging and Vitality that can detect early signs of the disease." Awadewit (talk) 01:39, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Apis cerana japonica

A. c. japonica forming a "bee ball" in which two giant hornets (Vespa simillima xanthoptera) are engulfed and being heated.

  • ... that when a Japanese honeybee hive is invaded by a giant hornet scout, the honeybees "bake" the hornet in a ball of about 500 bees (pictured)?

Created by Nihonjoe (talk). Self nom at 10:12, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

List of lemur species

Created by Visionholder (talk). Self nom at 02:46, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Zaira Cosico

  • ... that Zaira Cosico is notable for perfoming as a blue fairy in the ballet rendition of Pinocchio; however during the entire performance she was wearing a white tutu?

Created by Maverx (talk). Self nom at 23:45, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Pista apparently turns out to be a ballet. So did she dance playing the part of the "Wind God in Four Elements" in the ballet "Pista"? If so, then what is "Dulce"? More seriously, I couldn't find any of this in the article's reference, except for a mention of "Pista". Art LaPella (talk) 00:48, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
Fixed article, added a good reference. Ref was kind of screwy from the ballet corp website.--Maverx (talk) 01:08, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
For those trying to understand the discussion above: Maverx changed the hook. Art LaPella (talk) 01:41, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
Yup, sorry about that guys, I thought I saved that comment here, instead, I placed it on the edit summary. --Maverx (talk) 02:16, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
411 characters of prose after copyright violation removed. Shubinator (talk) 16:21, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
It's up to 1313 characters now, so it's getting close to being eligible, but still not there. --Orlady (talk) 23:59, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Louis Littlepage

Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 23:19, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on May 4

ARA Rivadavia

Created by DPdH (talk), The ed17 (talk), Parsecboy (talk). Self nom at 21:36, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Ismail Shammout

Created by AdjustShift (talk). Self nom at 17:56, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Please see the second paragraph of the "Artistic work" section. The entire paragraph is supported by one and the same reference; it is meaningless to duplicate a reference four or five times in the same paragraph, just to make sure each sentence is referenced. AdjustShift (talk) 02:57, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Helvella acetabulum

Created by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 06:32, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Helvella corium

Created by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 06:32, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Helvella elastica

Created by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 06:32, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Vanessa Rousso

Vanessa Rousso

  • ... that Vanessa Rousso, who is only 26 years old, is among the top four females in career earnings in poker history?

Created by 2005 (talk · contribs), Sirex98 (talk · contribs), DegenFarang (talk · contribs) and Essexmutant (talk · contribs). Nom at 23:34, 5 May 2009 (UTC) by TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs)

  • Also, is there any special consideration when the article starts as substantial and has a tremendous amount of text added. I have added over 8000 characters to this article that was around 2400. There is not too much more to add from what I can find.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 02:38, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Gary: While some information is provided by Card Player, the site is not a reliable source per their own words. If you scroll to the bottom of the link you provided, it reads Accuracy of information cannot be guaranteed. I'd like to see another source to back up this claim, or, another hook. Synergy 16:38, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Article length: Prior to expansion the article was at 2,456 bytes. For x5 expansion it needed 12,280 bytes and the article currently sits at 11,237 bytes with 1,043 bytes missing. Synergy 16:49, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  • In terms of the first number I believe I am starting from 2408. Are you starting with the first edit on the 4th or my first edit? I am currently showing 11523. 11523/2408=4.8 Thus, I believe I am closer to 517 short. I don't have much to add, but I will try to stretch a little.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 00:01, 7 May 2009 (UTC)
  • First: The length of an edit is ambiguous. It invites us to confuse the length before an edit with the length after an edit. So I will discuss the length of versions instead. Second: Using prosesizebytes.js, the version that includes Tony's first edit is 2497, but we wouldn't use that. The first 2 versions of May 4 are each 2456. The previous version of April 23 is 2378. I couldn't explain where 2408 came from. Third: The rules say expansion in 5 days. They don't say the same person has to do the complete expansion, and such a rule would be unenforceable anyway because expanders often have helpers to varying degrees. So I count the first 2 edits of May 4 as part of the expansion. Fourth: Therefore, the version before those edits should be counted as the before version. As explained at G1, that is the version of April 23. Fifth: Prosesizebytes only shows 11273 for the current version. 2378x5-11273=617. Art LaPella (talk) 02:00, 7 May 2009 (UTC)


Øverland

Created by Punkmorten (talk). Self nom at 21:24, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Charles Widmore

Alan Dale

Created by Spongefrog (talk); Jackieboy87 (talk); JpGrB (talk). Nominated by Music2611 at 12:30, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Error: Too many parameters. DYKmake takes two parameters: one for the article title and one for the username.
  •   Nom credit: Music2611 (give)

Orly airport attack

5x expanded by Grandmaster (talk). Nominated by Brandmeister (talk) at 12:11, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

KBCH

5x expanded by Dravecky (talk). Self nom at 10:07, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Is this the quote you are using to source the hook?: "Station KBCH in Oceanlake is a notable exception representing the 20 Miracle Miles along the beach from Otis to Otter Crest in Lincoln County." - It doesn't support the hook. Awadewit (talk) 00:35, 7 May 2009 (UTC)
  • I know it's hard to see in the Google Books snippet view, but the chapter of the cited book is about communications in Oregon and contains an explanation of how call letters work (3-letter vs 4-letter, why most west of the Mississippi start with a K, etc.) plus an observation that these call signs have meanings beyond being a K and three random letters. The more complete quote is "...often the call letters are abbreviations for the city or county in which the station is located. Station KBCH in Oceanlake is a notable exception representing the 20 Miracle Miles along the beach from Otis to Otter Crest in Lincoln County." Also, at the time that book was published, KBCH's community of license was still Oceanlake, Oregon. I hope this clears it up. - Dravecky (talk) 01:31, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Streptococcus iniae

Created by Fvasconcellos (talk). Self nom at 02:51, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Minnesota Timberwolves failed relocation to New Orleans

Created by Patriarca12 (talk). Self nom at 23:51, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Que No Se Rompa la Noche

Created by Jaespinoza (talk) Self nom at 23:42, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Onion (horse)

Created by Pastor Theo (talk). Self nom at 22:50, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Lob wedge

  • ... that the modern lob wedge was possibly invented by Karsten Solheim after experimenting by gluing a potato chip to a straw?

5x expanded by Chrislk02 (talk). Self nom at 20:58, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

  • The hook is misleading in its certainty; the sentence in the article says that this was "possibl". Also, doesn't seem to be not quite 5x expansion, only 2.54.2x. Dabomb87 (talk) 02:08, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Yea, I know it was a little under 5x expansion, however I was basing the 5x expansion on the orignial article (not the article with the ultra lob wedge content copy pasted into it). I think that needs to be a different article in the future (possibly). I cant expand it much more so if that does not suffice then my apologies. Chrislk02 13:56, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Capture of Ormuz (1622)

Created by PHG (talk). Self nom at 20:44, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Mandeville House

A Supermarket in California

Created by Mrathel (talk). Self nom at 17:53, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

John J.B. Wilson

5x expanded by Cirt (talk). Self nom at 17:50, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Henrietta Johnston

  • ... that Henrietta Johnston was both the earliest recorded female artist and the first known pastelist working in the English colonies of North America?

5x expanded by AlbertHerring (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 17:20, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

The Body of the Dead Christ in the Tomb

Created by Ceoil (talk). Self nom at 17:52, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Hm. I don't have access to this source, but I would really like to see it. Who thinks it would have caused a seizure? His wife? It is rare for art to cause seizures. Awadewit (talk) 19:32, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Arius berneyi

Created by Mynameinc (talk). Self nom at 16:20, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, I'm not an expert when it comes to the usage of scientific or common names. mynameinc 16:56, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
Not 1500 characters. Also, could we find a slightly more interesting hook? Awadewit (talk) 19:33, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
Length problem addressed. To be frank, it's a catfish, and catfish aren't very interesting. mynameinc 00:11, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
On the contrary, catfish can be fascinating but this hook is far from such. Any alts? - Dravecky (talk) 00:19, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
I don't know an interesting fact about any catfish. This probably can be attributed to the fact that I have never seen a catfish, photographs aside. I am getting some more information from the WikiProject leader, so I may find something interesting. mynameinc 01:00, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
ALT1: "... that the genus name of Arius berneyi, also known as Berney's Shark Catfish, is based on the Greek word arios, meaning "warlike" or "hostile"? ···日本穣 20:18, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
I thought about that, but it had more to do with the genus than the species. mynameinc 21:00, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Holland Road Baptist Church

Holland Road Baptist Church, Hove

Created by Hassocks5489 (talk). Self nom at 15:37, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Christopher Grigson

  • This raises the question of notability, in my opinion. If no other sources can be found, perhaps this article should be put up for deletion. Awadewit (talk) 19:40, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Helped develop the SEM, and entirely developed scanning electron diffraction; that passes WP:ACADEMIC in a heartbeat. My apologies that no other well-respected, national newspapers have seen fit to put an obituary on the internet. Ironholds (talk) 13:17, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
He was also elected a fellow of a respected society; that's 1 and 3. Ironholds (talk) 13:20, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Gene Lees

Created by Gareth E Kegg (talk). Self nom at 09:10, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Brede Waterworks

Created by Mjroots (talk). Self nom at 06:42, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Do Thanh Nhon (new), Chau Van Tiep (new), Vo Tanh (5x expansion)

Created by Amore Mio (talk). Self nom at 05:24, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Wallace (The Wire)

Created by Hunter Kahn (talk). Self nom at 05:08, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

  • As much as I like love the article topic, this is unfortunately not eligible for DYK, as most of the text is not new material. Punkmorten (talk) 08:47, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
    • That's true, but the new prose that I wrote (the lead, and the "Behind the Scenes" info excluding the David Simon part) all exceed the 1,500 character criteria (by my count, it all adds up to 1,646 characters without space, 1,993 characters with them). Wouldn't that, combined with the fact that it is still technically a new article, make it eligible? — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 22:11, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

John McMahon (wrestler)

  • ... that 19th century wrestler John McMahon's career began with a 17-year undefeated streak?

Created by GaryColemanFan (talk). Self nom at 04:20, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Victor Gold (journalist)

Created by Orlady (talk). Self nom at 03:23, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on May 3

Calkin–Wilf tree

Created by David Eppstein (talk). Self nom at 03:22, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

George E. Cryer, Kent Kane Parrot and Charles H. Crawford

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 22:20, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Air Battle of El Mansoura

Created by Sherif9282 (talk). Self nom at 06:50, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Mine That Bird

5x expanded by Giants27 (talk). Self nom at 02:29, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

  • - Hook is in article and is cited. The article is new as of 2 May and clearly has prose length that now qualifies so it's a clear GO for DYK. I'm not sure I'd call this a 5x expansion by Giants27 though... looks more like a collaborative effort by lots of folks. Giants27 added a goodly share of the total, for sure, and deserves thanks, but the history shows at least 6 other people who also helped... Parkwell, Handicapper, Orlady, and others. Just sayin... Still, it's good to go. ++Lar: t/c 15:53, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

List of Chicago White Sox Opening Day starting pitchers

5x expanded by Rlendog (talk). Self nom at 01:37, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Dokos shipwreck

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nom at 23:08, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Torture (The Jacksons song)

Created by CarpetCrawler (talk). Self nom at 21:34, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Mary Roberts (painter)

Created by AlbertHerring (talk). Self nom at 21:27, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Margitta Gummel-Helmboldt

Created by Mynameinc (talk). Self nom at 21:25, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

History, length (just over that 1,500 line!) and reference good. Taffy (talk) 06:05, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Henrietta Johnston

Portrait of Anna Cuyler (Mrs. Anthony) Van Schaick

Created by OpenToppedBus (talk). Expanded five-fold by AlbertHerring. Self-nom at 20:46, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Persian embassy to Europe (1609–1615)

Created by PHG (talk). Self nom at 20:10, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Siege of Saint-Martin-de-Ré (1625)

Created by PHG (talk). Self nom at 18:08, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Ronald Shanabarger

Created by Jake Wartenberg (talk). Self nom at 18:02, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Flying Aces (magazine)

  • ALT1:... that comic book cover artist Alex Schomburg got his start drawing dramatic covers depicting air-battle scenes for Flying Aces?

Created by NoCal100 (talk). Self nom at 17:17, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

List of fireships of the Royal Navy

Created by Benea (talk). Self nom at 17:15, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Length and history good, AGF on offline reference. Nice work! Taffy (talk) 05:56, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Niladri Kumar

  • ... that Indian musician Niladri Kumar started learning the sitar at the age of four and gave his first live performance when he was six years old?

Created by LeaveSleaves (talk). Self nom at 17:00, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

  • All the refs specifically mention amalgamation of sitar with "guitar" with an additional electrical pickup added later. I'm not an expert in the field, but should this be considered as combination with "electric guitar"? Sleaves 19:10, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
Since it's deemed as an 'electric sitar' I think it is an electric guitar/sitar hybrid. The article also mentions wanting to get a rock sound - which would typically be from an electric guitar as opposed to an acoustic one. Just my opinion. Law type! snype? 02:48, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Greeves (motorcycles)

5x expanded by Thruxton (talk). Self nom at 16:03, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Hartlepool Council election, 2000

Created by Davewild (talk). Self nom at 12:28, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Kentucky Route 2014 Bridge

Created by Mitchazenia (talk). Self nom at 11:13, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

KORC

Created by Dravecky (talk). Self nom at 09:28, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Claiming race

Created by Lar (talk). Self nom at 06:52, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

  • In a claiming race, as a requirement of entry in the race, all entered horses are purchasable by almost anyone (registration and a deposit are required) for the stated amount up to a short time before the race (15 minutes is not untypical). The person who entered the horse in the race, and had it claimed away, is thus the former owner. Title to the horse transfers to the new (claiming) owner when the horse turns up, ready to race, regardless of race outcome (even if the horse dies during the race), but the new owner doesn't get the winnings, if any, from the race. 2009 Derby entry General Quarters (horse) was a "claimer", or horse that runs in claiming races. ++Lar: t/c 13:50, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

List of Hot 100 number-one singles in 2007 (Canada)

5x expanded by SRE.K.A.L.24 (talk). Self nom at 05:06, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Shouldn't this be "longest-running chart-topping single" or "longest-running #1 hit single"? By itself, "longest-running single" sounds like the song itself is just very long. - Dravecky (talk) 09:30, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Alejandro Mario Yllanes

Created by Uyvsdi (talk). Self nom at 00:22, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

MacAdam/Cage

Created by Awadewit (talk). Self nom at 04:50, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on May 2

1952 in NASCAR

  • ... that 1952 in NASCAR was the first year that companies started to pay award monies for publicity in NASCAR?

Created by Ched Davis (talk). at 09:12, 5 May 2009 (UTC), significant expansion credit to Royalbroil

  • Alt:... that 1952 in NASCAR was the first year NASCAR started scheduling events to avoid conflicts between competing tracks?

Ceramics museum

Created by Johnbod (talk). Self nom at 04:21, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Robert P. Shuler

  • ... that radio evangelist "Fighting Bob" Shuler, known for his attacks on politicians and support of the Ku Klux Klan, received 25% of the votes in a 1932 U.S. Senate election in California?

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 21:54, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Gibson Mansion

Created by Killiondude (talk). Self nom at 08:29, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Penny Venetian Red

Created by Anonymous Dissident (talk). Self nom at 04:12, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Richard Suart

Created by Ssilvers (talk), Tim riley (talk). Self nom at 19:48, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Garrison Landing Historic District

Tofo

A Whale Shark off Tofo Beach

Created by SALTACE (talk), T L Miles (talk). Self nom at 18:27, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Charles Alan Pownall

Created by Scapler (talk). Self nom at 12:46, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Sham surgery

Created by Ekem (talk). Self nom at 03:05, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Bonus (basketball)

Created by Attonitus (talk). Self nom at 01:41, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

"non-USians"? You mean non-Americans? Lolz. --Cryptic C62 · Talk 16:47, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
I was too lazy to type that out. :) —Ed 17 18:06, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
Also, Attonitus, you realize that your talk page link is to User talk:Red Thunder, right? —Ed 17 18:07, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Arthur Eve

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 22:59, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Thoughts: assume good faith and realize that he was just commenting that it wasn't quite long enough, and please wait until you have expanded it 5x before nominating? —Ed 17 07:06, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Siege of Saint-Martin-de-Ré (1627)

Created by PHG (talk). Self nom at 21:23, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Christine Crawley, Baroness Crawley of Edgbaston

  • ... that Baroness Crawley first became involved in politics while seeking funding for a youth theatre she ran?

5x expanded by Ironholds (talk). Self nom at 17:38, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Combination company

Created by Cryptic C62 (talk). Self nom at 15:37, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Changuu

An Aldabra Giant Tortoise

Incidentally I make this my 100th article (yay!). The image is obviously of an Aldabra Giant Tortoise so just insert the (pictured) after the mention of the tortoise if you decide to go with it as lead hook - Dumelow (talk) 20:26, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Stone Sour (album)

5x expanded by Rezter (talk). Self nom at 13:46, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Russia–Spain relations

5x expanded by NVO (talk). Self nom at 10:19, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

  • I'd like to have you get someone to copyedit this article. Also, the hook does not match the two sentences that cover this. Particularly when using the word "motivated". Synergy 03:02, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Ion-association

Created by Petergans (talk). Self nom at 06:28, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Baby Grand

  • ... that the Billy Joel and Ray Charles duet, "Baby Grand", was originally produced because Charles had contacted Joel over Joel naming his daughter after Charles?

5x expanded by CarpetCrawler (talk). Self nom at 05:28, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Older nominations

Articles created/expanded on May 1

Bill Sketoe

  • ... that after Bill Sketoe was lynched in 1864, a hole dug to facilitate his hanging refused to disappear for at least 115 years?

Created by Ecjmartin (talk). Self nom at 00:06, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

  • I'd be glad to cite it if I could, but there's no particular source with "115 years" in it; I derived that figure by subtracting 1864 (the year Sketoe was lynched) from 1979 (the year the bridge was built, which covered Sketoe's hole). I can see your point here, so I rewrote the hook to read "at least 115 years" so that it won't be so exact. I've incorporated this same change into the article itself. In addition, I added a citation to the first paragraph of "The Hole" section (#19), where this aspect of the story is related. Do these address your concern? - Ecjmartin (talk) 21:37, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Buddha Jumps Over the Wall

Buddha Jumps Over the Wall

5x expanded by Caspian blue (talk). Self nom at 20:45, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Nymphaea leibergii

  • ... that Nymphaea leibergii is an uncommon North American dwarf waterlily whose flowers open each day and close at night?

Created by Earthdirt (talk). Self nom at 18:53, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

The Motions

  • Comment: For the sake of a decent-looking hook, I've summarized his quote: "brought this song to life for me" → "was 'brought to life' for him", without the ellipsis. I'm being accurate with the original quote, and otherwise "brought ... to life" would look odd. JamieS93 01:38, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Created by JamieS93 (talk). Self nom at 01:38, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Humbug Mountain

5x expanded by Little Mountain 5 (talk). Self nom at 01:18, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Abigail Bush

  • ... that Abigail Bush, in 1848, was the first American woman to serve as president of a public meeting?

Created by Binksternet (talk). Self nom at 00:06, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Ringstabekk

Created by Punkmorten (talk). Self nom at 16:12, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Aleksander Sulkiewicz

Created by Radeksz (talk). Self nom at 06:04, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Francisco Arce Montes

  • ... that the Spanish murderer Francisco Arce Montes developed an obsession with personal hygiene during his teenage years?

Created by Jake Wartenberg (talk). Self nom at 20:39, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Oregon Iron Company

Oregon Iron Company furnace

Created by Esprqii (talk). Self nom at 04:20, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

J.T. Alley

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 04:47, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Phyllactinia guttata

5x expanded by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 03:40, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Casual Friday (The Office)

5x expanded by Hgporto (talk). Nominated by Hunter Kahn (talk) at 03:14, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Grey reef shark

5x expanded by Yzx (talk). Self nom at 02:03, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

  • I'm wondering if this is not already common knowledge; that most people already know this. Is there another hook you can come up with? Synergy 22:03, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
To me, the hook is fine, and I'll also confess to not knowing that this particular shark performs this function. My overall concern is that I think that most people might already know that "some sharks display this type of behavior". To be blunt, its like saying that a particular bee stings (where as some bee's don't sting, just like some sharks do not make this threat display). Maybe I'm assuming a bit much? Dunno. Synergy 02:59, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
  • ALT: ... that the grey reef shark (pictured) was the first shark species known to perform a threat display to warn off divers who are too close?
  • Comment: Synergy, I'm actually a bit surprised that you knew about the threat display but didn't know that the grey reef shark did it, because "shark threat display" is practically synonymous with "grey reef shark" -- it was the first species in which this behavior was documented, and until fairly recently it was the only species known to perform it. That's why almost every source that talks about the display talks about grey reef sharks. -- Yzx (talk) 06:14, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Well, I don't recall where I read or saw (maybe a documentary) the information but I did know that some sharks are prone to this behavior (noted in the article as well), just like dozens of other species. I'm also not a shark expert. :) The first hook looks fine, but I didn't see the info on the ALT "was the first shark species known to perform". Although I might just have missed it. Synergy 15:59, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Robert F. Hale

Created by Orygun (talk). Self nom at 01:46, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Looks good. Nice work! — Jake Wartenberg 20:55, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Humphrey de Bohun, 3rd Earl of Hereford

5x expanded by Lampman (talk). Self nom at 00:19, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

LaShaun Ward

Created by Giants27 (talk). Self nom at 22:52, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Riaz Mohammad Khan

Created by Razzsic (talk). Self nom at 20:57, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Peter Gummer, Baron Chadlington of Dean

  • - Length, date, and online source is verified. However, I do believe the hook might look better as one of the ALT's below:

Five Tango Sensations

Created by Drmies (talk). Self nom at 19:02, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

John Wollaston (painter)

Created by AlbertHerring (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 17:36, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Price's Mill

Price's Mill near Parksville, South Carolina

Created by KudzuVine (talk). Self nom at 17:23, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Amsterdam Hilton Hotel

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk). Self nom at 15:10, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

William Ruthven Smith

Created by BusterD (talk). Self nom at 15:01, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

  • I understand that the rope was to deter submarines from entering, but I'm not sure that others will. Could this be reworded? —Ed 17 18:14, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Moth Ki Masjid

Created/expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self nom at 14:59, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

City Hall Post Office and Courthouse (New York City)

Created by Acroterion (talk). Self nom at 12:35, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

South Dunedin

Created by Grutness (talk). Self nom at 10:40, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

KNND

Created by Dravecky (talk). Self nom at 09:36, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Capture of Tunis

Created by PHG (talk). Self nom at 06:51, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Council of Bourges

Created by Wetman (talk). Self nom at 03:01, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Article and hook lengths check out; offline ref accepted in good faith. Creation date is actually the 30th, though I doubt anyone cares. — Jake Wartenberg 14:12, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

The Hunt for Gollum

Created by Josiah Rowe (talk). Self nom at 02:35, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

  • This doesn't make sense...define "reached an understanding" for those who are too lazy to click the link. :) —Ed 17 18:20, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
  • It's a direct quote from the film's director in the BBC News article. I was hesitant to interpret the phrase because the film exists in a legal grey area, and any more solid characterization might misrepresent Tolkien Enterprises' position. —Josiah Rowe (talkcontribs) 18:23, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
If the previous hook suggestion is problematic (although I don't quite see why it would be), how's this instead? —Josiah Rowe (talkcontribs) 05:09, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

List of major generals in the United States Regular Army before July 1, 1920

Created by Morinao (talk). Self nom at 01:40, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

  • See footnote 41. The thing is, there is no explicit reference for the actual number of once-and-future major generals; I had to count them myself by cross-referencing individual names in two lists and corresponding biographical sketches, which seems to shade perilously close to original research. Whereas it is obvious just from the length of the two lists that "only a handful" in one ever made it to the other. - Morinao (talk) 22:54, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 30

Niser bin Muhammad Nasr Nawar

... that the government of Tunisia initially believed the explosion caused by Niser bin Muhammad Nasr Nawar was accidental, until they learned he had sent a letter taking credit in the name of al-Qaeda? Sherurcij 22:40, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Length, history, article, and source verified. I encourage the user to switch to using {{cite}} templates, however, as the manual method is rather unnecessary. NW (Talk) 01:05, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Herrengasse (Bern)

Allen Dulles
Allen Dulles

Created by Tobyc75 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 17:07, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Irving Phillips

Created by Artofmine (talk). Nominated by Bruce1ee (talk) at 10:13, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Old Bethpage Village Restoration

Created by Dmadeo (talk). Self nom at 04:58, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Merle Fainsod

Created by Cool3 (talk). Self nom at 22:11, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

MGM Group of Companies

Created by Like I Care (talk). Self nom at 14:56, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Pls see this ref. The master franchisee of the Malaysian restaurant brand Marrybrown for the southern region, MGM Entertainment Pvt Ltd, has launched an expansion programme. --Like I Care 04:09, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
Now I think you're right. I had it backwards because the article says MGM "provides training, marketing and raw material support to the franchisees", which would ordinarily be done by the franchisor. But this is different because Marrybrown licenses master franchisees in each country, who in turn licenses a lower level of franchisees, and MGM presumably pays a royalty to Marrybrown for the trademark. Art LaPella (talk) 05:08, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
I see the source of confusion. --Like I Care 06:40, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Territorial evolution of the Caribbean

Created by Esemono (talk). Self nom at 12:58, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Gashing

Created by Wizard191 (talk). Self nom at 01:05, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Dead Hot Workshop

Created by Kelapstick (talk). Self nom at 20:36, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Altman Lighting Co.

Created by Ylime715 (talk). Self nom at 05:09, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Shadow Hare

Created by Quadell (talk). Self nom at 13:57, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

KSWB (AM)

Created by Dravecky (talk). Self nom at 02:13, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Woolmer Forest

Created by Wetman (talk). Self nom at 00:22, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

I can't count them. Is that more acceptable now?--Wetman (talk) 03:27, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
Over 3000 chars now. – Quadell 14:01, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
The hook should be fine after that fact is referenced to a source by an inline citation. Ceranthor 20:02, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
I have repeated the cited reference of the previous sentence in a duplicative footnote, for Ceranthor. I could stick it in after each sentence that depends on the citation if required.--Wetman (talk) 00:24, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Size, date, and ref hook all check out. Law type! snype? 23:32, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Antonio Latini

Created by Wetman (talk). Self nom at 00:16, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

The interest of the hook lies in how late the first mention of tomato sauce is in Italy: not what you read here and there on the 'Net.--Wetman (talk) 05:10, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
I thought the wording was awkward. If the interest is that you consider 1692 to be late, we should work that into another alternate. My impression was not that it was late, but early, considering it was over 300 years ago. Law type! snype? 08:24, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
Article does not match the required prose size currently. It has to be expanded by about 100 characters. Date and referencing good to go (offline references accepted in good faith), but please add categories. TodorBozhinov 08:30, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
Too succinct: I'm always taking padding out of articles, rather than putting it in. Mediocre food history, such as Misplaced Pages's article tomato sauce until yesterday, makes out that "The tomato has been central to Italian cuisine since its introduction from the Americas", when 18th century is more like.--Wetman (talk) 12:06, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Franklin Jacobs

5x expanded by Jnestorius (talk). Self nom at 00:04, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

New Man

Created by GRuban (talk). Self nom at 22:44, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Not Waving but Drowning

5x expanded by Mrathel (talk). Self nom at 22:17, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Hove Methodist Church

Created by Hassocks5489 (talk). Self nom at 21:20, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Taiwan Church News

Created by Taiwantaffy (talk). Self nom at 15:38, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

  • Length and date verified. Book sources for hook accepted in good faith. However, the fact that it was the first printed newspaper in Taiwan comes from the newspaper's website. Do you have another source?Mattisse (Talk) 19:41, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
  • Hi Mattisse - note number 4 covers that claim - it's an independent source, the Historical Dictionary of Taiwan (Republic of China). Google Books shows the relevant part of the Dictionary (second entry on that page). However, that reference simply says "Taiwan's first newspaper", so if you'd like to remove "printed" from the hook, that works for me too. Thanks! Taffy (talk) 01:56, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

RichGirl

Created by Cornucopia (talk). Self nom at 09:10, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that the names of the members of R&B girl group RichGirl include Brave and Seven? Corn.u.co.piaDisc.us.sion 09:10, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Lo Mejor de Tu Vida

Created by Jaespinoza (talk) 06:56, 30 April 2009 (UTC). Self nom at 06:53, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that "Lo Mejor de Tu Vida" was the first number-one song in the Billboard Hot Latin Tracks chart for Spanish singer Julio Iglesias? Jaespinoza (talk) 06:56, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that the song "Lo Mejor de Tu Vida" by Spanish singer Julio Iglesias held the record for biggest leap to number-one in the Billboard Hot Latin Tracks chart for almost 20 years? Jaespinoza (talk) 06:56, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Leon Ashley

  • ... that with his number 1 single "Laura (What's He Got That I Ain't Got)", Leon Ashley became the first country music artist to write, record, release, distribute and publish his own material?

Created by TenPoundHammer (talk). Self nom at 04:20, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

  • All verified, but a blog is not a reliable source. Is this the only place you can source the information to? Aren't there more reliable records? Ceranthor 20:08, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Western Weald

Blackdown Hill viewed from the Western Weald

5x expanded by Charlesdrakew (talk). Self nom at 09:26, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

  • - Article prose size expansion (1.5K -> 12K) over 5x, date verified. hook is in article and is cited. However it makes no sense as written. "part-functioning" ??? The hook is a bare fact in the article, in a paragraph by itself with no elaboration or explanation of why it is significant. I suggest that a different hook be chosen, or that this part of the article be expanded ... links to explain what this means and why it is significant would help a lot. A nice article though... ++Lar: t/c 15:39, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
Perhaps something like this ALT (refs / and refer); wording may need to be tightened:
  • - Hook is in article, is cited, and cite checks out (it's the lead headline of a story in the Telegraph, no less). Good to go. The hook maybe could stand rewording a bit to make it less double negative, but it's not a bad hook. Sounds like an interesting area and the article is a spectacular piece of work now that Charlesdrakew has expanded it. I blew 20 minutes this morning reading about ironmaking though, and I hold you lot responsible. ++Lar: t/c 21:13, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Jerzy Borejsza

Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 02:45, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

  • - Article length and date check out. Hook is in article and is sourced. Accept source (printed) on faith. Interesting article, Piotrus. GO for DYK! ++Lar: t/c 02:51, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 29

Firehose instability

Created by David R Merritt (talk). Self nom at 21:32, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

  • IF the hook is changed. Else no. Article length and date check out. Hook is not in article. Article consistently says "probably responsible for" and similar. That's in several places in the article which are solidly sourced, and the sources check out. Suggest that the end of the hook be worded " ... is probably due to the firehose instability?" or similar, and we're good to go. ++Lar: t/c 02:48, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Lar, than you should probably use the icon. Movers (moving from here to the queue or next update) will be looking for the confirmed votes. Best. Synergy 21:33, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
  • The change is an easy fix, though. I thought I pinged David. I'll keep it (the icon used) in mind though. What do we want to do? I say pass it but with a fix to insert "probably" into the hook. ++Lar: t/c 17:20, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Right, since we're dealing with physics here, nothing is every certain. :) Suggesting an alt then:
ALT1 ... that the absence of elliptical galaxies and dark matter halos with axis ratios more extreme than 3:1 is probably due to the firehose instability? Synergy 17:45, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

ElvenQuest

Created by ISD (talk). Self nom at 10:47, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

  • - Article length and date check out. Hook is in article and is sourced. Sources check out, although the first two are a bit less reliable than I'd like, the last one is the Beeb. (well, a blog on the Beeb site so...) GO for DYK! ++Lar: t/c 02:39, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
  • I adjudge them not unreliable. Just somewhat less reliable than say, Nature, or the NYTimes. So I'd pass this if it were me. But we work on consensus. So if Synergy doesn't agree, my suggestion is, find better sources if at all possible rather than question the point (even if you don't agree). Since the hook is about what the story itself says (the plot of the story, that is), if you can find a transcript, that might be an approach maybe? ++Lar: t/c 17:27, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Updated icon. I would have preferred another source outside of primary, but if you think its good to go, than I'll nod to you. Synergy 17:40, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Terry Riley: Cadenza on the Night Plain

Created by Drmies (talk). Self nom at 19:12, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

  • - Article length and date check out. Hook is a bit of a "synthesis" of some of the statements in the article, but it's there. Statements are all sourced. GO for DYK. Interesting read. ++Lar: t/c 02:31, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Captain's clerk

Created by Kirk (talk). Self nom at 20:42, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

could also link to naval rating to explain why tht particular wording was used. David Underdown (talk) 10:54, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
ALT1 sounds good to me, except the clerk did more than accounting records. Kirk (talk) 13:27, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
Adjusted at the article. You are missing the point, explained at rating, that in the Royal Navy a "rating" is a person (anyone without a warrant or commission), while in the US Navy persons have a "rating". Otherwise some combination of alts 1&2 is fine. Johnbod (talk) 13:53, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
The RN section of naval rating begins "rating or rate is a military rank", so it seems perfectly reasonable to use it in the sense suggested. David Underdown (talk) 14:05, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
It says it is a rank, not a term for ranks in general, as in the USN, which is how it was being used here. But I see below it at least was used as such in the 18th century. Johnbod (talk) 23:10, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
I support removing rating completely from the DYK if its confusing, but if you look in the OED, David and I are referring to 2a.(early 1700s), while Johnbod is referring to 2b.(1893). In this case, it was a the position held by a person on a ship's books. Kirk (talk) 15:00, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
That sense is surely obselete, or anyway very obscure, in the RN. Maybe it is best to drop the word, which is hardly necessary. Johnbod (talk) 23:10, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
  • - Length, date, and hook verified. Book ref accepted on good faith. Either ALT is fine, we don't need tons of info in the hook. Its meant to draw the reader to the article for more info. Synergy 22:42, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Queen Millennia

Created by Nihonjoe (talk). Self nom at 05:31, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

If you need me to, I can scan the article for you. :) ···日本穣 07:18, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
The article is fine, don't worry about it! :) CarpetCrawler 08:10, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
Of course, some of the articles cited in the article are in Japanese, though the both of the refs used for the hook are in English. ···日本穣 08:32, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Alv Knutsson, Hartvig Krummedige, Knut Alvsson

Created by Williamborg (talk). Self-nom at 03:03, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

  • Comment Knut died in 1502, not 1501. And the hook is hard to understand. And I'm not sure about the Norwegian "independence" bit; it seems to have been a Norwegian throne under Swedish sponsorship. What precise cite in which of the three articles makes the claim? jnestorius 03:23, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Response - I obviously spent too much time trying to reduce this hook to 150 letters and keeping it a triple while not paying enough attention to detail - you're right about the year. You're also correct - it would have been a Norwegian throne under Swedish sponsorship. I'll spend some time seeing if I can clean it up tonight - if not I'll pull it. Thanks - Williamborg (Bill) 15:39, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
Alternative1 It would be a shame not to have this on DYK at all. As a minimal effort, I suggest just trimming it to:
jnestorius 10:20, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
"Alternative 2 ... that Henrich Krummedige’s 1502 murder of Knut Alvsson ended the feud started by their fathers, Hartvig Krummedige and Alv Knutsson, as well as Knut's leadership of the rebellion against King Hans' rule over Norway?
  • Response - I'd be good with either Alternative 1 or 2. Alternative 2 takes advantage of the 200+ character limit for a triple (Alt 2 is now 214 characters plus spaces). Thanks for the help with this one! - Williamborg (Bill) 02:21, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

O'Neill Forebay

O'Neill Dam and Forebay

Created by themaee 01:56, 30 April 2009 (UTC). Self nom at 01:55, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Oh, never mind. I saw the data, but still, I only need to change the measurement in the hook, as it still says that the largest caught striped bass was in the forebay. themaee 04:13, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
The .gov article also says May 1992. I think these are two different catches. I'm thinking perhaps the government is not exactly on top of things here. Big surprise, ha. Law type! snype? 21:55, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

I Dreamed a Dream

  • Comment: On behalf of the newbie (to DYK) author.

Created by Zephyrnthesky (talk). Nominated by Sceptre (talk) at 23:15, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

The Death of Procris

The Death of Procris

Created by Ghirlandajo (talk). Self nom at 17:16, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

2009 Monte-Carlo Rolex Masters

5x expanded by 03md (talk). Self nom at 11:57, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

  • I have expanded quite a bit more but not sure whether it will be enough. The problem is that some editors within Tennis WP consider detailed tournament articles to be too much like fansite, so it would be great if you could look at whether the language is encyclopedic enough. 03md 21:42, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
  • Almost there. You're at 5449 characters of prose now; another 400 will take you above 5x. So far the prose looks good. Some parts are a little confusing (such as the last sentence in the lead) because I'm not too familiar with tennis, but that's true for most articles. Shubinator (talk) 03:47, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
  • I think it has new been 5x expanded. I have expanded on that ambiguous final sentence in the lead - hope it makes it a bit clearer. 03md 09:29, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Alex Koslov

5x expanded by MPJ-DK (talk). Self nom at 10:50, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

Length and history verified; offline ref accepted IGF. Daniel Case (talk) 14:12, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

List of number-one singles of 2009 (Japan)

Created by Moon-sunrise (talk). Self nom at 03:08, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 28

Marbled headstander

  • ... that, in the wild, marbled headstanders are often found face down, tail up in narrow vertical rocky fissures?

Created by User:Drew R. Smith. Self nom at 05:05, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Article was created 8 days ago, well past the usual 5-day limit for nominations. Also, please use the template when nominating as the cut-and-paste entry included stray formatting that made everything after this entry vanish until it was repaired. - Dravecky (talk) 07:40, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 26

Influenza-like illness

Created by Una Smith (talk). Self nom at 04:16, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

  • Such as "most people clinically diagnosed with influenza do not have influenza"? That is true too, but harder to substantiate with a source. How about the following? --Una Smith (talk) 01:15, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
  • That source says During an epidemic, about 60-70% of patients with a clear influenza-like illness actually have influenza; "during an epidemic" is a crucial qualifier. Is this really a "by the way", or do I need to provide more sources or a different hook? --Una Smith (talk) 02:35, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
  • Heh, it's really a "by the way". I was thinking it could make a hook if you wanted. But the epidemic part is crucial, so if you don't want to use the ref, that's completely fine. Shubinator (talk) 03:00, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
Over and apart from not being able to find the language in the article supporting the bolded text, I have tagged it with {{globalize/USA}} as its perspective is limited to the US for the most part. Unless we want to rename it Influenza-like illness in the United States, it really needs a broader perspective. Daniel Case (talk) 15:50, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
Okay, here's another hook. Most of the world does not report how many tests they do, so this information is difficult to globalize. --Una Smith (talk) 19:18, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
ALT2 checks out OK. --Orlady (talk) 18:34, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Nathaniel Henry Hutton

Nathaniel Henry Hutton

Created by PKM (talk). Self nom at 23:34, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

ALT2 ... that Nathaniel Henry Hutton (pictured) was a civil engineer on routes for the Pacific Railroad Surveys and the Butterfield Overland Mail in the years before the American Civil War? Maybe best to say civil engineer; at this period "engineer" in connection with trains most often meant engine-driver. Johnbod (talk) 21:28, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Neverwinter Nights 2: Storm of Zehir

5x expanded by Vantine84 (talk). Self nom at 08:38, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

The article is now long enough. Can we get a more interesting hook? I tried to find one, but I'm afraid I don't know enough about video games to select one. Awadewit (talk) 03:25, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Special occasion holding area

Note: Articles nominated for a special occasion should be nominated within five days of creation or expansion as usual (with the exception of April Fools'). Also, articles should be nominated at least five days before the occasion to give reviewers time to check the nomination.

Articles created/expanded for Vesak (May 9)

Carola Roloff

Created by Maedin (talk). Self nom at 07:48, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Kothduwa temple

File:Buddha tooth pilgrims.jpg

Created by Maedin (talk), Paxse (talk). Self nom at 08:51, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Ta Som

  • Comment: I couldn't resist expanding this tiny stub - we need temples for this Birthday!

5x expanded by Paxse (talk). Self nom at 13:47, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

  • No biggie (as I have a section to add) but both prosesize and DYKcheck count 1546 characters - otherwise I wouldn't have listed it. Can I ask how you're counting them? Cheers, Paxse (talk) 15:21, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
  • I counted the following text:

"Ta Som (Khmer: ប្រាសាទតាសោម) is a small temple at Angkor, Cambodia, built at the end of the 12th century for King Jayavarman VII. It is located north east of Angkor Thom and just east of Neak Pean. The King dedicated the temple to his father Dharanindravarman II (Paramanishkalapada) who was King of the Khmer Empire from 1150 to 1160. The temple consists of a single shrine located on one level and surrounded by enclosure laterite walls. Like the nearby Preah Khan and Ta Prohm the temple was left largely unrestored, with numerous trees and other vegetation growing among the ruins. In 1998, the World Monuments Fund (WMF) added the temple to their restoration program and began work to stabilise the structure to make it safer for visitors."

"Designed to be entered from the east, Ta Som is surrounded by a moat and enclosed by three laterite walls which are broken by two sets of gopura (entrance ways). The gopuras are cross shaped and contain a small room on each side along with windows containing balusters. The main structure of the gopura are carved with four faces in the Bayon style. The eastern outer gopura has been overgrown by a strangler fig (ficus religiosa) which has grown down through the blocks that make up the gopura and into the ground. The inner section of the temple consists of a central cruxiform sanctuary with porches at each arm surrounded by four corner pavilions. Two small libraries sit on either side of the eastern entrance path."

mynameinc 16:48, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

  • You're both right; it's a software bug. Without saving the change, try removing the geographic template "coord" and clicking "preview", then try prosesizebytes. The count will drop from 1546 to 1464, after removing something it claims not to count. Art LaPella (talk) 01:56, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Migettuwatte Gunananda Thera

A Buddhist flag flying in Beijing.

Created by Chanakal (talk). Self nom at 07:29, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

  • Everything checks out. Great job on the article Chanakal! How about this image instead? It looks more striking at 100px. Cheers, Paxse (talk) 08:33, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

The Buddhist flag.

  • Thank you very much, Paxse. You too have worked hardly on two articles. I thought picture flag is too much bright. But You and others think it is better than the photo flag I also like to go with your opinion. Cheers!--Chanaka L (talk) 12:49, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

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