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Articles created/expanded on December 27

Daniel Balsam

Created by Qrsdogg (talk). Self nom at 01:15, 29 December 2010 (UTC)

  • I understand the purpose of the hook is to draw the reader into the article, however, I think it should be altered to offer a little bit more information on what he decided to do after receiving spam. Location (talk) 07:23, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
I agree with user:Location. More info is needed in the hook. Also, most of the information in the hook is not found anywhere in the article. Megan|contribs 11:40, 2 January 2011 (UTC)
The breast enlargement info was removed by an IP who may well be the subject (see Misplaced Pages:COIN#dan_balsam) after Qrsdogg posted here. I suggest a hook like:
The article needs to be gone over with a fine toothcomb before being promoted though to ensure everything is cited per BLP as the IP added seemingly unverifiable information as well. SmartSE (talk) 12:16, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
I've had a look and there are a couple of uncited paragraphs left, which I have tagged. Shouldn't be too hard to get this one sorted. That said, I haven't done the other DYK checks (age, size, hook fact). Schwede66 21:44, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

France–Monaco relations

Created by Lihaas (talk). Self nom at 21:00, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

  • . Nice article. Length, date, references and hook works out. However, the passage "The unrest continued until the ruling prince gave up his claim to the two towns (some 95% of the country), and they were ceded to France in return for four million francs." is unsourced, and for DYK all passages needs to have at least one reference. --Soman (talk) 15:42, 1 January 2011 (UTC)
thats a copy+paste from the requisite wikipedia articles. but it can be removed if need be.(Lihaas (talk) 21:42, 1 January 2011 (UTC)).
  • The source cited for the hook is a page on http://everyculture.com , which is a http://www.advameg.com/ website. I can't verify the reliability of the source. At least the page names its author and cites sources, but the fact that the same advameg company operates city-data.com gives me concern, since I do not deem city-data to be a WP:RS. Can other sources be used as sourcing for the "everyculture" content? (Or do you have some solid information on the fact-checking done by the cited source?) --Orlady (talk) 03:02, 8 January 2011 (UTC)
the other source on the para (the original one for that part) also says it Lihaas (talk) 21:42, 1 January 2011 (UTC)
Um, that source also does not appear to be WP:RS. It says it is publishes "Projects by Students for Students." --Orlady (talk) 03:24, 8 January 2011 (UTC)
done (with addition of new source?Lihaas (talk) 21:42, 1 January 2011 (UTC)
Erm -- Nationsencyclopedia.com (the new source) is another website in the Advameg family. Futhermore, spainexchange.com and mapsoftheworld.com are websites whose content sources are not clear. Isn't Monaco's system of governance described by a more reliable source (either online or in print)? --Orlady (talk) 00:17, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
I found a bunch of websites that may be good sources for this article. I posted the links on Lihaas' user talk page. --Orlady (talk) 00:49, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
yeah, its big news, i tried a couple from a google search. Anwyays it should be good. UPitt law school wont have crap ;)(Lihaas (talk) 02:01, 9 January 2011 (UTC));
  • OK, the hook fact is supported. (Thank you, Dravecky.) But I want to insist on alternative wording because the word "oversee" doesn't adequately hint at the scope of the target article:
Slight alteration
that the relationship between France and Monaco entails a Frenchman is chosen to oversee certain state affairs of Monaco?
in other words "under" is both weak and pov. (never mind thats what i t seems)(Lihaas (talk) 21:59, 10 January 2011 (UTC)).
THERE IS also an image map at WP:Graphics' map workshop. i havent added it yet as the colour is off for these type pages, but someone else is welcome to add it back in the interim at least.Lihaas (talk) 21:59, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
Orlady's ALT looks good, but the bare url needs fixing. SmartSE (talk) 14:28, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
"under" is pov, particularly for the main page. no? one word change would suffice there.(Lihaas (talk) 00:58, 15 January 2011 (UTC));
er...how is the word "under" POV? I don't have any clue why you think it is? It's the same context as "under the terms of this contract". - The Bushranger One ping only 06:38, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
"under the relationship" seems to indicate monaco sub-sovereign, which is deceptive. but otherwise good to go.Lihaas (talk) 00:58, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on December 30

Philippine senatorial elections

5x expanded by Howard the Duck (talk). Self nom at 19:34, 30 December 2010 (UTC)

  • Your DYK is uncited in the opening paragraph. I think that needs to be fixed. That being said, I like ALT1 more... which is cited as required. Otherwise, it has been expanded enough (acc. DYKcheck), and the article seems OK. Good job. I'll drop you a message shortly so that you can either fix or endorse ALT1. -danjel (talk to me) 13:09, 1 January 2011 (UTC)
Bump? –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 11:57, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
  • The scope and length of expansion of this article are impressive, the ALT1 hook is a very interesting one, and that hook's sourcing checks out as OK. However, the article as a whole is only thinly sourced. A couple of whole paragraphs and several other discrete statements are completely unsourced, and when I went in to do some checking and minor clean-up, I discovered that I could not find sources for some content that I wanted to understand better and that some statements in the article were not entirely consistent with the cited sources. DYK does not require perfection, but I think this article needs better sourcing before it is featured on the main page. --Orlady (talk) 21:20, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
Well, I'm not aiming for a FAC. I'm just hoping for something that is less muddled. I already inserted sources for a couple of items and I revised some of the text based on sources I found, but the following items still seem problematic:
  • "In 1935, the electorate approved in a plebiscite a new constitution that abolished the Senate and instituted a unicameral National Assembly of the Philippines." That sentence is unsourced, and the sources I looked at had somewhat different information about the dates of plebiscites and new constitutions.
  • I added a reference for this. The Philippines has had four "major" constitutions: 1899, 1935, 1973 and 1987. The 1935 constitution was approved in a 1935 plebiscite, and it was further amended, which was approved in a separate plebiscite in 1940. –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.)
  • That sentence ends the section for 1916-1935, but I notice that there is no section covering 1936-1940. If those years are omitted because the senate didn't exist, it would be helpful to say that explicitly. (I had to read this several times before I realized that the adoption of a unicameral legislature meant there were no senate elections.)
  • In the section for 1941-1949, I'm puzzled by the statement that 1946 was "a year after their terms were supposed to expire." None of the sources I looked at indicates that their terms would have expired in 1945. Anyway, if they were elected in 1941 to serve 8-year terms (as indicated later in that paragraph), how could their terms expire after 4 years?
  • That same section indicates that the Congress didn't convene in 1945, but this source that is cited in the article indicates that it convened in June 1945.
  • What happened to 1950? It's not included in any section, but there's no indication that the senate was abolished that year.
  • There is another gap after 1971 and before 1987. If no senatorial elections were held, it would be useful for the article to explicitly say that there were no senatorial elections due to Marcos' elimination of the bicameral legislature. (However, the source cited at the end of the 1951-1971 section indicates that the senate was not abolished until 1973.)
  • The first paragraph under "1987 to present" is mostly about events of 1986. (The source indicates that the constitution commission convened on June 1, 1986, and finished drafting a new constitution on October 15, 1986.)
  • No sources are cited for the second paragraph under "1987 to present."
I think these probably would be pretty easy to fix (at least for someone who knows the subject and sources better than I do!). --Orlady (talk) 05:29, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
The years refer to elections, which are not that coextensive with the existence of the Senate. –HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 06:09, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

A black and white photograph of a government building.

BTW if this is passed perhaps we can use the image to the right. (meeting place, pictured)HTD (ITN: Where no updates but is stickied happens.) 14:15, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 1

Calafia

A modern sketch of a griffin standing aggressively, with talons outstretched

5x expanded by Binksternet (talk). Self nom at 19:39, 5 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed Saber of London. Binksternet (talk) 21:55, 5 January 2011 (UTC)
  • DYK check reports that the December 19 version prior to expansion contained 3785 characters (643 words) of readable prose. That would set 18,925 as the character target for 5× expansion, an amount equal to 5×3785. Over January 1–5 I expanded it until DYK check reported 19,191 characters (3184 words) of "readable prose". I think it's okay. Binksternet (talk) 23:42, 5 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Thanks for passing the article! I have not used the charcount check tool; I was unaware it was available. Your IAR is joined in this instance by the crappy text I deleted during my expansion...     ;^)    Binksternet (talk) 21:11, 6 January 2011 (UTC)
Per C6, the hook must involve the real world in some way. Shall we mention the book Las sergas de Esplandián in the hook? (Hint: Double-hook opportunity?) --PFHLai (talk) 14:02, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
ALT1 ... that Queen Calafia, fictional ruler of the Island of California, was the subject of a sculpture garden designed by Niki de Saint Phalle?
This is a copy-paste from Binksternet's talk page. He's currently blocked, and requested another editor add it. Xavexgoem (talk) 07:46, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
The proposed alternate hook does not include an image. Binksternet (talk) 12:57, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

Boushey Vineyard

Dick Boushey

  • Comment: Reviewed Clutts House. Hook reference in Dick Boushey section with a direct quote from online Decanter magazine ref (FN#8) and several refs noting the vineyard's location in the Yakima Valley

Created by Agne27 (talk). Self nom at 09:56, 2 January 2011 (UTC)

The article is the vineyard, but similar to Champoux Vineyard and other articles where the notability of the person is essentially intertwined with the business/estate/crime/new story, we have Dick Boushey essentially "merged" into the article about his vineyard. The hook is about an event that impacted Bosuhey and his vineyard. Agne/ 07:45, 7 January 2011 (UTC)
Verified hook & sources, length, date. Image is a correctly labeled derivative of a now deleted commons image by the same user and has an appropriate license. I have piped the link to point directly to the article that covers both the subject of the person and the vineyard. Camw (talk) 14:15, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 2

Kenneth Volentine

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 03:17, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Ernest P. Goodrich

Article is a new article over 1500 characters long and the hook is referenced in the article and the reference is valid. However, the hook is uninteresting and not worthy of the Main Page. Is there nothing else in the article? -- Esemono (talk) 05:14, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
I don't think this constitutes a DYK review. cmadler (talk) 13:34, 11 January 2011 (UTC)


ALT:... that Kenneth Volentine, a former Louisiana sheriff, was sued for copyright infringement in 2003 after a jail inmate made pirated copies of recordings by Eminem and John Tesh?

Saint Alkmunds Way Footbridge

a bridge leads up to a gothis church

Created by Tentheagle (talk), Victuallers (talk). Self nom at 13:03, 5 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Article has no lead section. Is it possible that this article was written offline or in a sandbox and that the intro wasn't copied over when the text was moved to mainspace? I'm not in favor of sending an article to the Main Page that has such a conspicuous absence; however, this shouldn't be very hard to fix. Other than that, I can't see any significant issues; citations verify the information that they're used to support, the length is 1,646 characters, the date is correct, and the hook is verified. Nyttend (talk) 03:31, 7 January 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. Thats not a requirement for DYK - but fixed anyway Victuallers (talk) 21:03, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

Hubert Guerin

Created by Mkativerata (talk). Self nom at 20:26, 2 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Wallblake House


Comment: The idea of the story is good. There is no date of birth and death (is that unavailable?) It may not be long enough with the 1500 characters required for a DYK. The hook does not have Hubert Guerin's name in the selection. I think it needs a little more work. Billy Hathorn (talk) 18:52, 5 January 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. We have a date of birth but not death. I've thrown the date of birth in. Maybe that gets it over 1500 (I never seem to be able to use the tool properly!). I've exhausted the material in the sources so I can't expand it further except by gaming the DYK rules (like adding tangential or redundant text: eg I could have a sentence "Guerin was born in 1895."). I didn't know the hook needed to mention Guerin's name? Not mentioning his name allowed me to make the hook more interesting. Anyway, I'm not fussed - I can't do much more (at least, not legitimately) with the article. --Mkativerata (talk) 19:07, 5 January 2011 (UTC)
The hook is not required to mention the article title, but normally it does. You have up to 200 characters to work with in the hook, and Guerin's name is not particularly long, so I would try to get it into the hook. How about ALT1: ... that in 1944, the Holy See departed from its usual practice by receiving Hubert Guerin as an envoy from Charles de Gaulle's French Committee of National Liberation? --Metropolitan90 (talk) 16:46, 6 January 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, I'm ok with that. It just loses brevity and the reader could wonder whether it was the fact of there being an envoy, or the fact of the envoy being Guerin, that is supposed to be a departure from the usual practice. --Mkativerata (talk) 18:20, 6 January 2011 (UTC)

Art of Azerbaijani ashiqs

Created by --NovaSkola (talk) 07:10, 2 January 2011 (UTC)

Article should be listed as "expansion" rather than "new", comes to ~9x expansion (by my count). Added one more source for the hook, but neither of them mention the second fact, (about 3000 Ashiqs). Everything else is fine. SPat 15:32, 3 January 2011 (UTC)

Jo Tong Sop

Created by Spongie555 (talk). Self nom at , 2 January 2011 (UTC)

Not sure the hook is catchy enough, but I can't come up with anything better myself. Perhaps something about the alleged public shaming might work? Rwxrwxrwx (talk) 14:23, 2 January 2011 (UTC)
DYK Koji Gyotoku has the same hook but different team and it was accepted. Spongie555 (talk) 00:25, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
  • This article includes a lot of padding to get it to 1500 characters, so maybe try to find some more information about this person. And Rwxrwxrwx is right that the hook isn't very impressive. Just because a subpar hook was accepted in the past doesn't mean it always has to be. - PM800 (talk) 14:49, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Due to North Korea's secretive nature there is limited sources on him and most is about him coaching and nothing about his personal life. Also yes the hook isn't impressive but I can't think of another so I'm open to any other hooks. Spongie555 (talk) 21:16, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
  • There's a problem in that the article contradicts itself on that point: He was also part of North Korea's football team, on return home from the FIFA World Cup 2010 in South Africa when they were shamed in a six-hour public inquisition in Kim Il-Sung Square after the team's coach, Kim Jong-Hun, had been accused of "betraying" the nation's leader's heir apparent, Kim Jong Un, following their failure at the World Cup, according to reports. Later it was proven false that they were shamed and the team was busy practicing for the Asian Games. (Emphasis added.) It should be noted that the source for the second sentence doesn't rule out the possibility that Jo Tong Sop and the team were indeed subjected to a six-hour public shaming, but afterwards then allowed to return to their normal football schedule. Either way, this article should avoid having a self-contradiction on this point. --Metropolitan90 (talk) 05:16, 6 January 2011 (UTC)
There's less than 1500 characters of prose there. My count gives 1384 characters. Rwxrwxrwx (talk) 11:20, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 3

Jenny Lind Tower

Created by Ktr101 (talk). Self nom at 07:31, 3 January 2011 (UTC)

  • The length and references check out (I'm assuming they stand up to whatever notability criteria we have for places/buildings, which I'm not familiar with - there's also Google Books), but the hook is a bit convoluted. It could, instead, be about the performance...? Roscelese (talkcontribs) 07:46, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
I can't find the word riot or something close to it in the refs ... maybe I missed it. All I read about was her singing to people who failed to get tickets. Victuallers (talk) 21:53, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 4

Mesa Distance Learning Program

Created by Tyw7 (talk). Self nom at 02:23, 6 January 2011 (UTC)

Leave a message on my talk page if you have any problems with this nomination or if it fails. --Please leave me a {{talkback}} if you reply here. Thanks, Tyw7  (☎ Contact me! • Contributions)   Changing the world one edit at a time! 02:26, 6 January 2011 (UTC)

you certainly may. Btw what's the minimum character requirement? --Tyw7  (☎ Contact me! • Contributions)   Changing the world one edit at a time! 20:48, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
1500 char. /ƒETCHCOMMS/ 04:00, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Burnett, Somerset

  • that Burnett, a village in Somerset had a civil parish of 608 acres until it was abolished and merged into the neighbouring village of Compton Dando?

Created by Jaguar (talk), Rodw (talk). Self nom at 16:09, 6 January 2011 (UTC)

No where in the article discusses that it was merged in the village of Compton Dando. And the article was created on January 4 not January 5 and you should have credited User:Rodw! pLease add a sentence to the history section about it being a civil parish and discuss its merger and source it, credit Rodw also and it should be good to go..♦ Dr. Blofeld 07:51, 6 January 2011 (UTC)

I have mentioned the setence in the history section and credited Rodw. Sorry about that! I forgot! Jaguar (talk) 16:09, 6 January 2011 (UTC)

Brentwood Academy v. Tennessee Secondary School Athletic Assn.

Created by Lord Roem (talk). Self nom at 22:43, 4 January 2011 (UTC)

I do not have 5 credits yet but I will still review an article. -- Lord Roem (talk) Reviewed: Steve Hanley (rugby union). -- Lord Roem (talk) 22:49, 4 January 2011 (UTC)
  • There's one paragraph that's uncited; it's very short and could just be 'merged' into another, but I'd also like to see additional sources, and some of the long unreferenced paragraph sections being referenced as well. - The Bushranger One ping only 19:54, 5 January 2011 (UTC)

Five articles

Created by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 17:28, 4 January 2011 (UTC)

Well, there are two problems. The first one (easy to solve) is that all five articles have an orphan tag, and that needs to be dealt with before the hook can be promoted to the homepage. The second issue is more complex, though. By itself, each article is just long enough, as they all have just over 1500 bytes of readable prose. However, the articles are all much the same, with just the technical details differing between the various rigs. By way of example, they all contain the sentence "GSP xyz drilling rig is designed by Sonnat Offshore and was built by Petrom at the Galaţi Shipyard in 19yy." (a side issue is that it should say "was designed" in that sentence) As it stands, this could be promoted (once the orphan tags are gone) as a single article, rather than all five, as they are all more or less of the same content. Any of the duplication needs to be discounted for article prose, and if we do that, then they are all well under the 1500 bytes cut off.
But what can i do if the rigs are very similar in characteristics and construction process. The sentence containing designed by Sonnat Offshore and built by Petrom at the Galaţi Shipyard is a must in these articles because it states their origin. BineMai 12:52, 6 January 2011 (UTC)
You also need to familiarise yourself with the difference between "its" and "it's" and fix the articles accordingly. Schwede66 21:29, 5 January 2011 (UTC)
Fixed. BineMai 12:52, 6 January 2011 (UTC)
Well, there's nothing much that you can easily do about the articles being so similar, other than significantly expanding them. They are simply not long enough that those bits that aren't copies of one another meet the 1500 bytes of readable prose requirement. I thus suggest ALT1, with a single article in bold (and for clarity, I've struck out your original hook; if other reviewers disagree, please undo this and discuss). However, I can't give ALT1 the green tick yet, as the proper way of dealing with an orphan tag is to ensure that an article has a sufficient number of full incoming links. One is not enough. Have a bit of a read of policy by following the links in the tag. Schwede66 22:31, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
I simply can't agree with this. I've had a previous eight articles DYK about chromium mines in Albania (found here) in which the articles were pretty similar and the hook passed with no problems. The same can apply here in my oppinion. BineMai 20:40, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
ALT1 is good to go now. And if I had reviewed your 8 DYK entry, I wouldn't have passed it. I'm sorry for that, but citing a precedent where a reviewer wasn't aware of the rules certainly doesn't make this one fly through. If other reviewers are at variance with my assessment of the situation (or concur, as it might be), they are of course invited to comment here. I certainly appreciate your good work at creating new articles, but only one of the 5 is to be credited in my opinion. On a different matter, I'd like to draw your attention to the rather sorry state of the linked Grup Servicii Petroliere article. On 8 January, an editor addressed a copyright problem and the article went from 32,450 bytes down to 1,683 bytes by reverting to an old and clean version. For that reason, it now has an 'outdated' tag in it. It should be easy for you to at least update the info (it refers to drilling rigs to be delivered in 2009) to get rid of that tag. Schwede66 21:30, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for updating Grup Servicii Petroliere. Schwede66 06:37, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
IMHO, as long as all of the articles are new, the fact that they read much the same shouldn't be a problem. If the similar-text between them was copied/broken-out from an older, non-qualifying article, then I would agree with you, but here, if one's new and creditable, they all should be. - The Bushranger One ping only
I agree with you unsigned user :)) BineMai 11:17, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 6

Beauchamp Doran

  • ... that Beauchamp Doran, a British Army general, was sacked from command of his brigade in 1914, reinstated, and sacked again from command of a division in 1916?

Created by Shimgray (talk). Self nom at 22:41, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Date, length, hook OK. However, the references all need to be expanded per WP:Citation templates. Books need dates and ISBN numbers, which can be found on Google Books (I expanded two of the book references as an example). In the case of Bourne in footnote 5, when using a secondary source like Center for First World War Studies, quote it as the reference, not the primary source. Yoninah (talk) 11:06, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
  • ...I'm not quite sure what you're getting at here; the two "expansions" you did consisted of changing them to a different edition and adding inaccessible Google Books links. Books should have ISBNs if ISBNs exist, but in this case, they don't; we shouldn't obfuscate the references just to get them in! Shimgray | talk | 12:54, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
  • I'm afraid I'm not familiar enough with the rule pages to explain what's wrong here. Could an administrator please look at the Notes and References section and see if the sources are adequately cited? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 21:33, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

The Camden News

Single-story white brick building next to street with one door and one window, both covered by arch-shaped striped awnings.

  • ... that through a reorganization in 1968, the small-in-circulation Camden News (office pictured) in Camden, Arkansas, became the parent company of the Palmer newspaper chain?

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 01:49, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Hockey Fights Cancer

  • The article doesn't have any independent reliable sources. Currently there are three sources; #1 and #2 are from the company itself, and #3 both doesn't provide much information and doesn't seem reliable. I'm not sure this article passes notability. Shubinator (talk) 01:35, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
ALT: In 1957, the The Camden News began an investigation into the still unresolved disappearance of Maud Crawford, the first woman attorney in Camden, Arkansas? (2 articles in one hook)
The source you added mentions The Camden News tangentially, and doesn't really count as a source (for notability purposes) in my opinion. Shubinator (talk) 04:22, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
The DYK is for two articles now. Billy Hathorn (talk) 07:10, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
Ok. The main issue still isn't resolved though. Shubinator (talk) 02:31, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Sathyamangalam Tiger Reserve (pro)

Created by Marcus334 (talk). Self nom at 18:30, 6 January 2011 (UTC)


  • Length is fine (parts of text copied from Sathyamangalam, but still enough new text), hook checks out. Should have been posted under January 3 (date of creation), but that's not a problem. However, there are some passages in the article without references. In DYK all passages needs at least one reference. I also deleted some e-mails and phone numbers.
  • Also, perhaps the article ought to be moved to a less crystalballish name. After all, relatively little in the article is dedicated to the process of establishing a tiger reserve. So 'Sathyamangalam Wildlife Sanctuary' might be a better name. --Soman (talk) 22:05, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

Paolo Padovani

5x expanded by Dr. Blofeld (talk), David Eppstein (talk). Self nom at 15:49, 6 January 2011 (UTC)

Unreferenced BLP expansion. Can't find another hook needing reviewing!♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:50, 6 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Length, expansion, and hook verified, but this article is being considered for deletion. As for not finding another hook to review, there actually are still hooks here that haven't been reviewed. - PM800 (talk) 18:45, 6 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 7

Republic of China – South Africa relations

Created by Namiba (talk). Self nom at 04:24, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

  • The article is very interesting; the citation involving the hook seems okay. However, I am no judge about the length. The map of South Africa&Taiwan needs to be repair within the article-also I added the templates to the talk page. This in respond to the William Fones article I started and that User:Orlady submitted to DYK. Thanks everyone!RFD (talk) 15:01, 8 January 2011 (UTC)
I count 3914 characters; the date and the hook are good, and all references appear to be reliable. However, we have a verifiability problem: no page numbers are provided for the JSTOR document, which is the most important source for the article. If this were a minor source, being used just once, I might be willing to overlook it, but most of the article depends on it, including the hook. You can most easily cite pages by using {{rp}}; an example of how it's used are the various citations to reference #2 at this page. Nyttend (talk)
I added page numbers for the cites in question. — AjaxSmack 09:30, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Over the Hedge: Hammy Goes Nuts!

Created by Nomader (talk). Self nom at 21:09, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Hmm... IGN's considered to be a reliable source for game reviews, but I see your point. Some Alts:

Season of the Witch (2011 film)

  • ... that the newly released film Season of the Witch was scheduled to be released in March 2010, but the original distributor Lionsgate pulled it five weeks before the release date?

5x expanded by Erik (talk). Self nom at 18:16, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

5x expansion, hook and source verified. It seems that "pull" is quite a common word used in the film industry which sort of means "cancel". I'd suggest rewording: "pulled it from release five weeks before the date." ќמшמφטтгמ 15:56, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Glee: The Music, The Power of Madonna

5x expanded by Legolas2186 (talk). Self nom at 05:25, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

It might just be my maths, but I don't think you've got 5x expansion here. My count of the prose goes from approx 2000 to slightly over 8000. I could be wrong here, but I don't think it meets the criteria. Worm 13:42, 7 January 2011 (UTC)
Is it? I do think it was from 1500 to 8200. I'm sorry if I am making a wrong calculation. — Legolas 15:20, 7 January 2011 (UTC)
Well, I'm not 100% myself (anyone else who's more confident, please do chime in!) but my count for prose (including spaces) was 1981, and with the changes recently you've made you're at 8543.Worm 17:42, 7 January 2011 (UTC)
I also find that the prose count from this version, including the lede and reception section, totals 1969. The current version totals to 8407, from my count. The total count needs to be 9845, so you are short by 1438 letters. Unless this is something that can be fixed, i'm going to have to say . Silverseren 21:00, 7 January 2011 (UTC)
I can't see any way that the prose count can be increased. So if consensus demotes this from DYK, I'm fine. If I see any way to increase the extra 1000 chars, I will do so and re-submit. — Legolas 11:46, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

Steele Dunning Historic District

Small single-storey wooden houses along a street in broad daylight

Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 03:55, 7 January 2011 (UTC)


BOAR (rocket)

A fat, white-and-black-striped rocket is launched from a Navy blue, straight-winged jet in a steep climb

Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self nom at 02:39, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Date, length, and image source verified. "Unguided" is mentioned in the lead without a citation, which would be okay under some circumstances, except that it is not mentioned again in the prose of the rest of the article. Also, upon checking the references, there is mention that there has been some confusion between the "Bureau of Ordnance atomic rocket" and the ""bombardment aircraft rocket"; I noticed the 2003 reference by Michel about the "idiot loop" refers to the "Bureau of Ordnance atomic" version. Can you clarify in the article? KimChee (talk) 05:08, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 8

Jared Lee Loughner

Created by 574jerry (talk), Hoponpop69 (talk), KimChee (talk), and Flodded (talk). Self nom at 23:36, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

Smaart

a screenshot of SmaartLive 4 software, showing traces taken from active crossovers

5x expanded by Binksternet (talk). Self nom at 07:00, 13 January 2011 (UTC)


John Fryatt

Created by Ssilvers (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 18:28, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that English actor and opera singer John Fryatt co-wrote a Gilbert and Sullivan pantomime adaptation entitled The Sleeping Beauty of the Savoy?
- PKM (talk) 03:07, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Admitted, I tried to put too much in one hook. But I would like to see the word "character" in it, Fryatt's most general specialty. I liked Basilio, a role he frequently performed, also in Glyndebourne, a character who is not prominent in Figaro and deserves some attention. Finally I wanted to include something well known, such as Daniel Barenboim. Trying to mention the singer of singers instead, please improve:
ALT2: ... that English actor and opera singer John Fryatt performed the character part of Don Basilio in Mozart's Le nozze di Figaro opposite Dietrich Fischer-Dieskau? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:43, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
I'm happy with either hook. -- Ssilvers (talk) 05:56, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Natural dye

Wool yarn colored with natural dyes.

Created by PKM (talk). Self nom at 03:47, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

I believe the hook is too short to tell us much. Can you add a half-line about why such combinations are needed? The article reflects hours of work, and it is well-written, possibly too long. The source for the hook is offline. Billy Hathorn (talk) 05:21, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
ALT: ... that early dyers improved the color and fastness of natural dyes by adding salt, vinegar, natural alum, or stale urine (naturally-dyed yarn, pictured)?
Better? - PKM (talk) 22:49, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that medieval dyers made the Lincoln green cloth associated with Robin Hood using the natural dyes woad for blue and weld or dyer's greenweed for yellow (naturally-dyed yarn, pictured)?
In case anyone is uncomfortable with "stale urine" on the front page. (The citation is under "Green".) - PKM (talk) 19:18, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
Stale urine is just ammonia. Abductive (reasoning) 23:41, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
Are there still any concerns with this article or the hook that need to be fixed for DYK? It's been assessed "B" class, and as for the length, it's not unusual for a fleshed-out top-level survey article in Textile arts; it's about half the length of Knitting. Thanks. - PKM (talk) 03:20, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
I think the original is fine, it makes me want to click the article and see why they did it or to learn more. This is how applicable hooks should be IMO.--NortyNort (Holla) 02:22, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Ciudad Hidalgo, Michoacán

Mirror on the atrium cross

5x expanded by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 01:09, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

Length and history for article and hook are fine, but an explicit source needs to be added to the sentences in the article that corresponds to the fact cited in the hook. Alansohn (talk) 15:13, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
OK, I added another citation. The fact is from the "turiguia" book.Thelmadatter (talk) 15:46, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

Edward T. Archibald House

Edward T. Archibald House

  • ... that the Edward T. Archibald House (pictured) was home to a man who took "the leading place among flour makers of this country or of the world"?

Created by Bobak (talk). Self nom at 17:50, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

Date and length verified. Off-line sourcing accepted in good faith from established editor. Nice work. Cbl62 (talk) 19:39, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

Comment. Image is unsuitable for DYK. Abductive (reasoning) 23:54, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
A PD-old from 130+ years ago is not kosher? Why, exactly? Is this a technical or subjective opinion? --Bobak (talk) 20:35, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
No, it's just too blurry as a thumbnail... Abductive (reasoning) 16:22, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

The Plant List

I nominate The Plant List. Zabanio (talk) 21:32, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Creation date is OK. However, the article currently has under 1500 characters of prose and is not long enough. I cannot verify the hook fact because there is no proposed hook. - PM800 (talk) 21:38, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 9

VisionAire Vantage

Created by Nigel Ish (talk). Nominated by The Bushranger (talk) at 03:23, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

B&F Fk12

Two white-and-red taildragger biplanes sit on a grassy field, one with a pair of open cockpits, the other with an enclosed canopy

Created by TSRL (talk). Nominated by The Bushranger (talk) at 03:17, 15 January 2011 (UTC)


Main Street Connect

Created by Wasted Time R (talk). Self nom at 02:29, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed Women's Trade Union diff Wasted Time R (talk) 03:46, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Harry Bassett (horse), Joe Daniels (horse), Springbok (horse)

Horse and jockey

Created by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 17:22, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

Ministry of Home and Cultural Affairs

Created by JFHJr (talk). Nominated by Spongie555 (talk) at , 11 January, 2011 (UTC)

Comment: I reviwed the nomination Taruga. Spongie555 (talk) 03:26, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

La Soledad de Maciel (archeological site)

Created by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 18:27, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

This all checks out, but I have taken the liberty of shortening the hook, as Mesoamerican chronology covers a lot more than 3,000 years; so I changed "lasted over 3,000 years and all of Mesoamerican chronology" to "lasted for over 3,000 years". Moonraker2 (talk) 19:35, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

I question the use of "occupation" in the hook, too, as potentially unclear. — AjaxSmack 19:38, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
I was happy with that because it's what the cited reference says ("ocupación" and "ocupada" in the original Spanish). Moonraker2 (talk) 19:45, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
ALT 2 ... that the La Soledad de Maciel archeological site in Guerrero, Mexico may have the largest Mesoamerican ball court?

I propose this ALT because 3,000 years doesnt sound impressive. I meant to say that the site was occupied during at least part of all of the subdivisions of Mesoamerican chronology, which is very rare, but I cant figure out how to make that "hooky"? Also.... the source actually says that the site does have the largest, but it is a newspaper and its a recent and unfinished excavation, so I softened the statement.Thelmadatter (talk) 14:40, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

What's cited is "It is thought there is yet another section to be excavated, which may make it the largest Mesoamerican ball court..." Isn't it all a bit speculative? Moonraker2 (talk) 14:09, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
Reading that... its a lousy sentence. I took off the "It is thought..." in the article. If that's not enough, we can go with the "3,000 year" hook.Thelmadatter (talk) 17:28, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

John Graham (racing driver)

Created by Wayne Slam (talk). Nominated by The Utahraptor (talk) at 17:23, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

I posted more detail about my concern with the sourcing at this thread. --Pnm (talk) 00:56, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

Personal finances of professional athletes

Created by Clarityfiend (talk). Self nom at 07:10, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

  • length and hook checks out. Should have been listed under January 7 (date of creation), but not a problem. There are however several other issues. First of all, the article solely relates to U.S. athletes. Either the article is globalized or moved to say "Personal finances of U.S. professional athletes". Secondly, there are some problems with the tone. The passage on spouses is not really encyclopediatic, with commentary like "A prenuptial agreement is a wise precaution that not all players take". In this sense the article has more of a journalistic language than that of an encyclopedia. --Soman (talk) 11:27, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Start It Up

Created by Candyo32 (talk). Self nom at 01:50, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

(question here removed) I do see that the article replaces what has been moved to Start It Up (song), explaining why DYKcheck shows expansion not met. It seems to be a valid new article. But it doesn't seem valid that this article on a single episode of a TV show should get the world-wide Misplaced Pages primaryusage for the common phrase "Start it up", so that is an issue for article name stability. Will discuss at its Talk. Wording-wise, the DYK hook is misstated in terming the show as being "highest premiere". Do you mean "highest-rated premiere"? And i wouldn't like that either, as the article does not describe any reviewer's rating system. What is meant in a source that calls it highly rated is that it was watched by a lot of people, perhaps according to Nielsen ratings? I suggest some other wording conveying accurately that it was "most-watched". --Doncram (talk) 15:16, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
I have since changed wording, and will comment back about the move. --Candyo32
About the move, that should be resolved before this goes as a DYK, imho. It is frankly the DYK nominator's fault, to have created a problem with the name and page history. Being addressed at Talk:Start It Up. --Doncram (talk) 20:10, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
The new wording now using "highest-rated premiere", what i already objected to. I don't think it is encyclopedic to use "highest-rated" as meaning something other than having to do with a rating; i would avoid that language. Other editors welcome to address this and state some other resolution, overriding my view or not. Thanks! --Doncram (talk) 20:10, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
I don't know what other terminology could be used other than "highest-rated"? Candyo32 - Happy New Year :) 00:16, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
How about "most-watched"? I see the ZapIt industry-type source saying "highest rated", but that is industry jargon in my view, and unless you put it into quotes and then explain what you mean by the term, i think it is better to translate that to non-jargon English. I do see the source is fundamentally Nielsen, at the bottom of the cited source. --Doncram (talk) 02:26, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
Changed the wording to "most-watched." Candyo32 - Happy New Year :) 03:25, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
All good then. I didn't mean to brow-beat u into that exact change, maybe there would have been some other wording possible or maybe someone else woulda judged it is not jargon, but the current hook is fine by me. Thanks. --Doncram (talk) 20:52, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
P.S. I'll let it go about the Requested Move pending, which given usual 7 day process and unusual backlog, will take a while to clear. I think that means the DYK credit will be recorded centrally for the current article name, and then there may be some disconnect in the future which would be mildly unfortunate, but articles do get moved after they once received DYK. I am all done here. --Doncram (talk) 20:56, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
Move was done. Article name was updated in DYK hook. All set. --Doncram (talk) 03:24, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Edward Proger

Portrait showing the head, shoulders and upper body of Edward Proger painted by Sir Peter Lely.

Created by JMiall (talk). Self nom at 18:22, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

Well possibly it may have meant something else as well but this claims the 'teething' usage dates to 1600. JMiall 19:56, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
If that may have meant something else, let's not link to Teething, a wikipage about infants getting their first teeth. Chances are that it was 18th-century slang, referring to some other dental problems. --PFHLai (talk) 02:15, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
"Late 1600s" per that page; the first OED cite is 1677, not that far in advance of the use here. It's certainly possible he had some very anomalous "third set of teeth" or the like, but it seems more likely to be a garbled reference to something else - perhaps a botched surgical removal of partially-erupted molars, or an attempt to cut down existing teeth?
The quote's good, but I'd prefer to avoid linking it if we're not confident that's what it means. Shimgray | talk | 02:02, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
  • I wish to protest against putting a hook on the main page where neither the nominator nor the reviewers are entirely sure what it means. Linking or not, that's not acceptable. --Pgallert (talk) 14:18, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
  • I share Pgallert's horror at the idea of a hook fact that cannot be explained, but I see a path forward. I edited the article to clarify that this was the reported cause of death (it's clear that this is what was reported, although we can't tell what actually happened) and the hook can be revised as follows:

Articles created/expanded on January 10

Brookside Mills

Sepia and white photo shows a girl in old-fashioned winter clothing, in foreground, and several adult men wearing open winter coats and hats, in background. All are walking along railroad tracks and toward the viewer. Beyond the people are a wooden fence, a railroad box car, and a large building.

Created by Bms4880 (talk). Nominated by Orlady (talk) at 23:52, 15 January 2011 (UTC)


Peter Donaldson (actor)

Created by Slp1 (talk). Self nom at 16:42, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

  • I have now reviewed another article here

Republic of Korce

Created by Antidiskriminator (talk). Self nom at 22:01, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Antid. your hook is ungrammatical and out of context. You have to tell the readers who Enver Hoxha was, otherwise if they're not familiar with the subject they won't read it. He was a teacher at that school after the reunification of Albania, so this hook is unrelated to the state. Most of the article is related to other subjects and not the state itself i.e Greek/Bulgarian/French occupation, while you have miscited the sources(do you know Albanian and French?). Btw I'm not officially reviewing it because I can't help you if I do that. Rcej in 1920 Enver Hoxha was 12 years old. --— ZjarriRrethues —  08:19, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
I think that hook I suggested should not “have to tell the readers who Enver Hoxha was” because it simply not practice in DYKs (anybody can take look at the recent DYKs and see that in almost all cases there is no explanation who were the people mentioned in them although majority of them are far less famous than Enver Hohxa). Thank you ZjarriRrethues, for your copy edit of the article. I agree that part about events in Republic of Korce does need expansion and I plan to do it while preparing this article for GA. For DYK is enough that article has more than 1500 characters. The various occupations of Korce preceded establishing of Korce in the same year and can not considered as offtopic.
I propose that somebody, please, review the hook I proposed according to the criteria for DYK.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 11:12, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
Antid. you have labeled the reopening of the Albanian schools as part of the Albanian national awakening, which ended 4 years before the establishment of the republic. You have misquoted Albanian and French sources despite the fact that you can't speak either language. Btw the Greek occupation had ended 2 years before the establishment of the republic. Meeting the first technical criterium is pointless if the article is of such a low quality. You haven't even used ref name parameters.--— ZjarriRrethues —  11:23, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
Using the ref name parameters is not requested for DYK articles, as far as I know. If I am wrong, please someone provide link to the relevant policy. If I misquoted Albanian and French sources or made any other mistake, please use talk page of the article and mark the article with appropriate tags and I will deal with each of them. If I misquoted Albanian and French sources please correct my mistakes. I guess it is easier to correct mistakes in translation than to write comments that are longer than disputed text in the article. Any further comment about the quality of the article should be written on the article talk page and marked with the appropiate tags that would prevent positive reviewing of the article until it is resolved. Otherwise someone may think that purpose of the comments is not reviewing of the hook nominated for DYK but to discredit the NPOV position of the article.
* I propose to wait for a couple of days before final review of the article, on order to allow interested parties to resolve objections on the quality of the article.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 13:50, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Horace Robertson

  • ... that Horace Robertson (pictured) accepted the surrender of an Italian general, an Italian admiral and a Japanese general?

5x expanded by Hawkeye7 (talk). Self nom at 20:07, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

Franz-Joseph Müller von Reichenstein

5x expanded by Stone (talk). Self nom at 00:16, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

I like ALT1! --Stone (talk) 07:37, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Women's Trade Union

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 22:00, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Comment, I reviewed Low Head Lighthouse. --Soman (talk) 12:58, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
  • The hook is unclear – separate from what? Moreover, the article is unclear. Prior to 1902, had women tried to join any of the existing unions that were part of the Swedish Trade Union Confederation? If so, what happened and why? Or did they, from the beginning, want to organise on their own, separately? The article also has too many short, choppy sections. Both "Publication" and "Banner" can be merged into "LO affiliate" until such time as the length of the material warrants dedicated sectioning. Wasted Time R (talk) 03:42, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Jerome Case

Racing horse cart

  • ALT1:... that namesakes of Jerome Increase Case include racehorse Jay-Eye-See (pictured) and J. I. Case Company?
  • Comment: about 10x expansion (the article was a tiny stub), and yes, the horse is more interesting in many ways that the thresher-maker

5x expanded by W Nowicki (talk). Self nom at 00:12, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Rose de Freycinet


Brittany CoxXx

Photo of head and shoulders of trans woman Brittany CoxXx, with her face turned to the left

Created by EdChem (talk). Self nom at 17:17, 11 January 2011 (UTC)


Hudson Valley Rail Trail

A section of the Hudson Valley Rail Trail.

Created/expanded by Gyrobo (talk). Self nom at 15:16, 11 January 2011 (UTC)


Gary Williams (singer)

Created by Bosents (talk). Nominated by Shearonink (talk) at 00:20, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Seems like it would be better to have the DYK referring to his having played Frank Sinatra? Billy Hathorn (talk) 02:24, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

BQM-108

A vertically-oriented unmanned aircraft with fixed tricycle landing gear and U.S. military insignia is hovering while attached to a tether

Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self nom at 22:35, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

Bivariate analysis

Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 20:32, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

  • I was not notified of this comment, and the "reviewer" forgot to even sign. I hope a more experienced reviewer can track the above poster and explain them the DYKiquette. For now I've merged two short paras, this is a short article on a very simple (if important) topic and certain paras must stand alone for logic. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 18:57, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

St John's Church, High Legh

A church seen from the west showing timber framimg, brickwork, windows, and a tower with a lead spire

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 18:21, 10 January 2011 (UTC)


Long Tail Point Light

  • ... that the Long Tail Point Light survived attempts to demolish it in 1870, and has outlasted both its successors?

Created by Mangoe (talk). Self nom at 15:20, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed La Jana (actress) Mangoe (talk) 15:20, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
Squeaks over the length requirement; date and source check out. Article is at least as sturdy as its subject :) Gonzonoir (talk) 12:03, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

All Saints Church, Saltfleetby

A stone church seen from the south, with a slightly leaning west tower on the left, a long south aisle to the right, and a porch

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 14:22, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

Verry Idham Henyansyah

Created by Kawaputra (talk). Self nom at 07:00, 10 January 2011 (UTC) Reviewed Albert Estopinal, Jr. diff link ќמшמφטтгמ 07:23, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

SMS Thüringen

5x expanded by Parsecboy (talk). Self nom at 04:54, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

The Immortals of Meluha

  • ... that an increased printrun for author Amish Tripathi's first book, The Immortals of Meluha, led him to switch to a bigger publisher?

5x expanded by Legolas2186 (talk). Self nom at 16:33, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Comment I'm uneasy about a hook that, considering how recent (2010) the book is, could be construed as puffery. Additionally, multiple quick reprints does not imply that demand is high in absolute terms; it merely implies that demand is higher than the publishers initially expected. I suggest instead a hook relating to the statement that the book's rights were switched to a bigger publisher to accommodate the increased print run; however, that particular sentence is not currently cited. jnestorius 09:45, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
    • I see your point Jnestorius, I changed the hook accordingly, however the sentence in the article is sourced by the next reference. but still added it beside the line for clarity. — Legolas 09:44, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Lionel Lincoln

Created by Sadads (talk). Self nom at 18:10, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 11

Matlockite

clear or creamy mineral

Created by Parkywiki (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 23:02, 15 January 2011 (UTC)


Google Science Fair

Created by PJmdJIm (talk). Nominated by Mono (talk) at 04:34, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

The article need about 20 more bytes of content (If I'm reading the tool correctly :P). →♠GƒoleyFour♣← 00:47, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, the prose has been expanded. Everything else looks good. →♠GƒoleyFour♣← 01:11, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Icelandic census of 1703

  • ... that the Icelandic census of 1703 was the first census to record the names, addresses, and ages of every inhabitant of a country, regardless of social class?

Created by Yngvadottir (talk). Self nom at 05:26, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

St Fflewin's Church, Llanfflewin

A church built from stone blocks

Created by Bencherlite (talk). Self nom at 00:52, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Length, date, referencing, and hook referencing all check out; AGF on a couple of online refs. Yngvadottir (talk) 16:20, 14 January 2011 (UTC)


SWAC Championship Game

Created by Patriarca12 (talk). Self nom at 17:28, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

Farm Workers Union of Central Sweden

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 21:56, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Leave It to Me!

  • ALT1:... that the song "My Heart Belongs to Daddy" was first introduced in the 1938 musical Leave It to Me!?
  • ALT2:... that Gene Kelly's first Broadway appearance was in the 1938 musical Leave It to Me!?
  • Comment: The article has been expanded by x 4.97, and the citations are "almost" close enough to the suggested hook facts. I have not touched the article myself since its creation more than three years ago.

5x expanded by JeanColumbia (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 21:08, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Tylophora barbata

A green vine growing along the forest floor

Created by Casliber (talk), Poyt448 (talk). Self nom at 11:14, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Date, length, and hook look good to go. One question though: the hook states that bearded tylophora is now classified in the dogbane family, which implies that it wasn't initially, but the article doesn't mention any classification change. Also, Casliber or Poyt448, could you indicate which nomination you have reviewed? Smokeybjb (talk) 19:09, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Daniels v. United States

Created by Lord Roem (talk). Self nom at 23:24, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

That alternative hook is fine. Thanks! -- Lord Roem (talk) 05:19, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

St Andrew's Church, Sapiston

A stone church with red-tiled roofs seen from the south; on the left is an embattled tower, and to the right is the nave with a south porch, and a lower chancel

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 21:45, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Comedians of Middle East conflict

The members of Israeli–Palestinian Comedy Tour Charley Warady (American born Jew, migrated to Israel), Ray Hanania (American born Palestinian), Aaron Freeman (Afro-American born Catholic, converted to Judaism), Yisrael Campbell (American born Catholic, converted to Judaism and migrated to Israel).

Created by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 21:13, 11 January 2011 (UTC)


Hallsteinn Sigurðsson

2x expanded and sourced (BLP) by Dr. Blofeld (talk). Self nom at 15:45, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed Bohemic acid below.♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:48, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

I replaced 's with {{`s}} per rule C7. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 18:21, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Lucidarius

  • ... that the Lucidarius, the first German language summa, written around 1190, was reprinted at least 25 times in two decades three hundred years later, between 1479 and 1499?

Created by Fram (talk). Self nom at 15:43, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Date and size check out. Hook information is present in the article but the sentences they are contained in do not have inline references. I presume they are referenced by inline refs that come few sentences later but it is unclear, and needs to be addressed by improving inline ref density in the article. I added citation needed tags for the hook sentences, once this is addressed this should be ready to go. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 18:21, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
I added three more inline citations (to the same sources though), if anything more is needed just let me know! Fram (talk) 21:01, 11 January 2011 (UTC)
Looks fine now! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 19:04, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Bohemic acid

Created by Materialscientist (talk). Self nom at 08:39, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

The claim is unsourced.♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:47, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Please clarify. Three refs back the claim in the article and on this page. Materialscientist (talk) 00:09, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
  • I've verified the names from the two sources I can access, but the article doesn't mention then being antitumor agents. I can see the refs discuss this, but it obviously needs mentioning. SmartSE (talk) 00:26, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
See titles of refs. 1,5. Refs. 6-9 tested one-two of them in vitro and in vivo. Materialscientist (talk) 00:30, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
I saw that, but the article only mentions that they are antiobiotics at the moment. SmartSE (talk) 17:41, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
Added antitumor. Correct me at will on this. The articles don't say they are antitumor drugs, but some antitumor action seems undisputed. Materialscientist (talk) 00:16, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
Can you add some more information? At the moment antitumour is still technically uncited as it is only mentioned in the lead. Something along the lines of "xxx have antitumour properties in vivo and in vitro and have therefore been studied... " should suffice. SmartSE (talk) 14:04, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Updated. While updating, I found a mistake (bohemamine is inactive, others are), thanks. The hook remains accurate as bohemamine is named after the opera, not its character (and the hook doesn't claim "all"). Reviewed Textbook of Biochemistry/Cameron. Materialscientist (talk) 07:34, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

On My Way to Absence

5x expanded by J04n (talk). Self nom at 03:56, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

RIM-113

Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self nom at 01:31, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Meatball It Up

Created by Candyo32 (talk). Self nom at 02:22, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

Good to go. Spongie555 (talk) 03:25, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

National symbols of Bhutan

Created by JFHJr (talk). Nominated by Spongie555 (talk) at , 11 January, 2011 (UTC)

Pontificalis Domus

Created by Alekjds (talk). Self nom at 03:38, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Current nominations

Articles created/expanded on January 12

Parnell Tunnel

a tunnel entrance with two tracks, adjacent to a closed tunnel

  • ... that the 1915 Parnell Tunnel (pictured) duplication in New Zealand replaced an older single-track tunnel that was so steep that labouring steam locomotives tended to inundate passengers in open carriages with smoke and sparks, causing burns and clothing stains?
  • Comment: Just nominating this, but I can't claim that I've contributed to the article. I reviewed Vale of Avoca on 10 Jan.

Created by Ingolfson (talk). Nominated by Schwede66 (talk) at 23:57, 16 January 2011 (UTC)


Bölkow Phoebus

  • Comment: Non-self-nom

Created by TSRL (talk). Nominated by The Bushranger (talk) at 20:27, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Frank Freyer

Created by Scapler (talk). Self nom at 22:52, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

2010–11 Colorado Buffaloes men's basketball team

Created by Editorofthewiki (talk). Self nom at 02:54, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Jack Ertle Oliver

Created by Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) (talk), Betsythedevine (talk), Raryel (talk), and Vsmith (talk). Nominated by Alansohn (talk) at 16:22, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Abo Elementary School

5x expanded by The Luigiian (talk). Self nom at 09:49, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Length, sourcing and history for article and hook have been reviewed. The source says the only "public school", and doesn't preclude the existence of underground schools constructed earlier outside the United States. Some mention of the decision to build underground to provide protection from nuclear fallout during the Cold War may make the hook a bit more interesting. Alansohn (talk) 16:22, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
  • It could be longer. How about...

Brady Hoke

5x expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 05:39, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

St Mary's Church, Rhodogeidio, St Ceidio's Church, Rhodogeidio

Inside a ruined church

Created by Bencherlite (talk). Self nom at 07:44, 13 January 2011 (UTC)


Farm Workers Union of Småland

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 23:56, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Forest and Farm Workers Union of Sweden

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 23:43, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Husk Power Systems

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 22:39, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Note that this article was created as a fork from Economy of Bihar, where the content about the company in that article was largely cloned to create the new article. Whether this is treated as a new article or as an expansion, the article meets all DYK size criteria. Alansohn (talk) 02:04, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

Edison Mall

Created by TenPoundHammer (talk). Self nom at 20:20, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Vought XSO2U

An inline-engined aircraft on tall taildragger landing gear with a mid-wing and 1930s U.S. military insignia.

Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self nom at 19:31, 12 January 2011 (UTC)


Angelic acid

5x expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Self nom at 10:13, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, I could probably expand and add it after lovage, but, there is some poetry in the current hook, or maybe its just me? I have reviewed Ayo Rock Formations, though that review might be unwelcome .. Materialscientist (talk) 13:22, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Itaal Shur

A head-and-shoulders photograph of male musician singing into a microphone.

2x expanded and sourced (BLP) by Bruce1ee (talk). Self nom at 08:22, 12 January 2011 (UTC)


Ault Store

All that remains of Dundas' first commercial district.

  • ... that the arrival of the railway eventually left the Ault Store (pictured) as the only remaining commercial building in Dundas, Minnesota's original business district?

Created by Bobak (talk). Self nom at 07:19, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

  • The article mostly checks out, but on a read I don't exactly see the cause-and-effect mentioned in the hook, merely fact A (railroad caused the business district to move) and fact B (Ault store is the only remaining building today in the original business district). Does the source directly link A to B, or is it merely implied? - The Bushranger One ping only 19:24, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
  • The source, which is a survey explaining why the specific building is historically significant, went through explaining the creation of the railway station, the moving of business (including the store's owner) and that it's the only building left. The Ault Store is the only commercial building left in the original CBD, and the railway caused the death of the CBD. The only thing the source was vague on was the speed of the changes, so I used the word "eventually" would make it clear that it didn't happen overnight and take off the edge of anything too dramatic; however the causation is clear. For that reason I would say it's not a synthesis. --Bobak (talk) 19:38, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Stearman XOSS

A pale-colored biplane mounted on a single float with outrigger stabilising floats rests on calm water.

  • ... that the Stearman XOSS observation biplane was equipped with full-span flaps on its upper wing, allowing its pilot better control at low speeds?

Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self nom at 06:44, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Length sufficient is sufficient and article well-written. Image licensing looks fine. Heavily (those not exclusively) reliant on one off-line source, including for the hook fact, so AGF on that reference. I have questioned the reliability of one of the two sources used for the specifications section, but since there are two sources there I don't see resolving this as a precondition for DYK. I suggest a little more wikilinking in the hook, per ALT1 below. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 17:23, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
  • ALT1:... that the Stearman XOSS observation biplane was equipped with full-span flaps on its upper wing, allowing its pilot better control at low speeds?

Tiger Mask donation phenomenon

Randoseru at a school, the main object in donations to orphanages across Japan.

Created/expanded by 293.xx.xxx.xx (talk). Self nom at 06:25, 12 January 2011 (UTC)


Rose de Freycinet

  • ... that Rose de Freycinet, a stowaway disguised as a man, sailed around the world with her husband on a military expedition between 1817 and 1820?

Created by Drmies (talk). Self nom at 04:11, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Article meets DYK criteria but would suggest linking to the article on her husband (it needs work, but that's another story). It might be a bit misleading to call the mission "military". Certainly he was in the Navy and it was an armed ship, but the voyage was more notable for scientific observations than any battles (if any?). The Treaty of Paris I thought meant they were in theory at peace during this time, but am not an expert myself. So how about, say:
ALT1: ... that Rose de Freycinet sailed around the world with her husband from 1817 to 1820 as a stowaway disguised as a man?

W Nowicki (talk) 18:40, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

St Peirio's Church, Rhosbeirio

A boarded-up church

Created by Bencherlite (talk). Self nom at 01:01, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Length, date, hook all good, as is licensing on image. Aboutmovies (talk) 07:25, 12 January 2011 (UTC)


Hold It Against Me

Created by Xpoisonparadisex (talk). Nominated by Lil-unique1 (talk) at 00:45, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Reims Gospel

Created by Aloysius (talk) 06:29, 12 January 2011 (UTC). Self nom at 06:27, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Oldfields

Lilly House on the Oldfields estate

Created/expanded by HstryQT (talk). Nominated by HstryQT (HstryQT) at 16:06, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

I updated the hook to shorten it a bit. I think it's more concise now. HstryQT (talk) 12:11, 14 January 2011 (UTC)


Paul-Jean-Baptiste Poret de Morvan

  • Reviewed:

Created by Alexandru Demian (talk)

Fixed grammatical issues and shortened hook.--Alexandru Demian (talk) 12:20, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 13

Hippocrates Prize for Poetry and Medicine

Created by Drjsinger (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 21:53, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Grammy Award for Best Performance Music Video

Expanded by Another Believer (talk). Self nom at 21:59, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Thomas Witherings

  • ... that Thomas Witherings was responsible for establishing the Royal Mail letter service in 1635?

Created by Motmit (talk). Self nom at 21:59, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

  • The hook (and to some extent the article) are a bit confusing. The Royal Mail dates back to 1516, under Henry VIII. The significance of 1635 is that Charles I opens it up for the general public, and at some point the General Post Office is created (what year? you have a piped link to it, but the exact association is unclear). Most histories will say that Charles I was "responsible for establishing" the new service in 1635, for example this British Postal Museum page. So exactly what happened in 1635 needs to be more clear, and the precise role that Witherings played better expressed. As a separate issue, the article itself has substandard presentation values and isn't quite suitable for appearance from the main page. The last paragraph on marriage and finance is oddly out of chronological sequence with the rest of the article. Many wikilinks are missing, such as to various lords and earls and to the London streets named. Some of the footnotes are before punctuation, when they should be after; in at least one case, there are periods both before and after the footnote. There should be no space in "2½ d" (I didn't recognize this as being pence at first). Why is one quotation in italics, the rest in regular font? The sources, especially the wonderfully old book ones, lack full bibliographic citations, with name and location of publishers missing for example. And especially for the Hyde book, short form citing should be done. Have a separate "Bibliography" section with the full citation, and then the individual footnotes have short citations of the form: Hyde, The Post in Grant and Farm, p. 44. That will make the references easier to look at. Wasted Time R (talk) 14:09, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Werner Neumann

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 09:30, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Ussukuma

German passenger ship Ussukuma in 1921

  • ... that a wreckage off the coast of Argentina was identified in January 2008 as the passenger ship Ussukuma (pictured) that was scuttled in 1939?

Created by Neddyseagoon (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 07:21, 15 January 2011 (UTC)


Grammy Award for Best Concept Music Video

5x expanded by Another Believer (talk). Self nom at 17:07, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

moved to correct date by The Interior(Talk) 06:05, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Petatlán

  • ... that Petatlán is home to a ecological movement led by local peasant farmers?

5x expanded by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 03:29, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Its not particularly interesting or unusual. Can you think of an alt hook?♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:07, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

You sure about that? When I think of an movement or organization related to ecology, I think Greenpeace, not rural Mexican farmers.Thelmadatter (talk) 14:26, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that the mountains of Petatlán, Guerrero, Mexico are home to a local environmental group, some members of which have been imprisoned and defended by groups such as Amnesty International?Thelmadatter (talk) 14:22, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

New York ex rel. Cutler v. Dibble

Robert Cooper Grier

Created by Savidan (talk). Self nom at 00:32, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Length, date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. --Rosiestep (talk) 03:19, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Actually, the article creator did link the case to the freely available information online (US Supreme Court cases are always in the PD and easily accessible online), but it was in the infobox (easy for someone to miss). I've gone ahead and linked the first footnote and made this a confirmed. --Bobak (talk) 03:45, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Shafer v. South Carolina

Created by Lord Roem (talk). Self nom at 00:12, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

(Note: Reviewed 'Grammy Award for Best Concept Music Video' )

Diamondback (missile)

Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self nom at 22:43, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

Circuit City Stores, Inc. v. Adams

Created by Lord Roem (talk). Self nom at 21:21, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

  • I reviewed 'Ministry of Home and Cultural Affairs'.

Irving Leonard (accountant)

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk). Self nom at 20:53, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Meets length requirements; hook is supported by reference but as it is a book, it not possible to confirm. However, other information in the article suggests it is legitimate: "Friends of Eastwood say he was never as devastated in his life as to when he heard the news of Leonard's passing" (different published source).Verne Equinox (talk) 03:32, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
Generally you accept offline book sources in good faith...♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:59, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Fellows v. Blacksmith

Ely S. Parker

Created by Savidan (talk). Self nom at 19:50, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Length, date and hook checked and OK, with a question: the New York Times source states that Parker was "made a member of the Indian Commission," but the article states that he was the first indigenous "Commissioner of Indian Affairs," implied to be singular and stated in the article to be the the head of the BIA. Was there only one Commissioner? Was there a commission with several members? A slight reword would take care of the issue; if plural, "member of the Commission of Indian Affairs," for instance. Acroterion (talk) 00:54, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
The Commissioner was the head of the BIA. There was only one at a time. Savidan 01:01, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
That's what I thought; the Times may not have been very careful in their wording. Is there an additional source for Parker's appointment? Acroterion (talk) 01:04, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
For the avoidance of doubt and easier verification I have added a cite to this BIA press release. Savidan 01:10, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
That's fine, ready to go, and an excellent article. Acroterion (talk) 01:12, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Penshurst Airfield

Created by Mjroots (talk). Self nom at 19:11, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

Cape Bowling Green Light

architectural plans of a lighthouse, showing section, elevation, four floor plans and various details

  • Comment: The point is that this lighthouse was moved/reconstructed 4 times. I'd like to mention the Australian National Maritime Museum as the final resting place, but this would be over 200 characters. I think it is worthwhile to break that rule in this case, but leaving this decision to someone else. Reviewed Millen House

Created by Muhandes (talk). Self nom at 17:50, 13 January 2011 (UTC)


Theodosius (son of Maurice)

Created by Cplakidas (talk). Self nom at 12:35, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

I didn't really like it either, and although "co-ruler" is semantically different (a co-emperor did not necessarily exercise any power), it's a good suggestion... Unless we replace it with "heir". Constantine 09:23, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Vittorio Erspamer

Created by Materialscientist (talk). Self nom at 08:07, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Length, references etc look alright to me. I have made some minor changes to the phraseology.
How about this for an alternative hook? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:07, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
Thanks. ALT1 is better. (Reviewed Malibu Lake). Materialscientist (talk) 03:46, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Seratonin would perhaps be better known? Very interesting work anyway, thanks. ALT1 is definately better..♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:13, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Millen House

Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 04:02, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

  • At WP:NRHP, we've extensively discussed "registered historic places", and it's been found that this is a Misplaced Pages-created neologism, so I must oppose this suggestion. However, if you replace "registered historic place" with "federally-designated historic site" (thus making the entire hook 167 characters), I would be happier with that than with my original hook. Nyttend (talk) 22:15, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

First Upper Peru campaign

5x expanded by MBelgrano (talk). Self nom at 02:21, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

  • The expansion and fact check out, but I do not think that "native american" is the preferred term for indigenous peoples outside of the United States. Thus, it seems incongruous, when applied to Bolivia. Please suggest an alternate (probably, more specific) term, or show me that I am wrong. Savidan 05:47, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
I understood that "native american" could be applied as well to natives in all the american continent, and that the mention to Bolivia clarified that. I certainly wanted to avoid the term "indian", which is usually considered contentius; and the word "Mita" which is likely to be completely unknown by the non-expert readers. But if "native american" sounds confusing anyway, then we may use "slavery of indigenous people" at the piped link --MBelgrano (talk) 12:28, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I think that would be preferable. I suggest as follows. Savidan 16:14, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

Fine by me MBelgrano (talk) 16:15, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Sorry but I'm not sure this passes the DYK requirements at present;
  • The citation for the hook fact should be immediately after the hook fact in the article (see criterion 3).
  • I count five paragraphs, mostly quite large, which have no inline citations at all (see rule D2).
  • All of the inline citations are from a single foreign-language source - not a showstopper in itself, but not ideal (see rule D12).

--Demiurge1000 (talk) 16:42, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

I have fixed the reference, and included more ones from a second book. Now all paragraphs have references. MBelgrano (talk) 17:51, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
Looks fine now. Incidentally, this doesn't really affect its DYK eligibility, but the WikiProjects Argentina and Bolivia should probably change its rating from Stub to Start (or better) now. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 18:08, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
(I've struck the original hook just for clarity) --Demiurge1000 (talk) 18:10, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Iris Cummings

A woman in a neat, white uniform with a black tie with dark hair that is tied back stands at attention in front of an airplane and only the area from her shoulders up are visible in black and white. She is smiling.

Created by Canadian Paul (talk). Self nom at 03:57, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

  • The length, sourcing and history for the article and hook have been reviewed. My only question about the hook is the wording that she "had to raise her own funds to attend" the 1936 games, while the article (and source) says that she had to "raise her own funds for travel to the Games". Could the phrasing "to attend" be misinterpreted to mean that she had to pay to get into (or compete at) the Olympics, and might alternate phrasing better convey that she had to pay her own travel costs with funds she raised? Alansohn (talk) 04:32, 13 January 2011 (UTC)
I agree:
  • ALT1: ... that despite being that year's U.S. champion in the 200 m breaststroke, Iris Cummings still had to raise her own funds to travel to the 1936 Summer Olympics?

Canadian Paul 04:42, 13 January 2011 (UTC)


Essex Street Chapel

Created by ] (]). Self nom at 13:08, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

I believe I have only had one article on DYK before, about 18 months ago, if my memory serves me aright, so would appreciate being excused the duty of checking the contributions of others. BrainyBabe (talk) 13:08, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 14

Areni-1 winery

  • ... that the Areni-1 winery is believed to be the world's oldest surviving wine production facility?

Created by MarshallBagramyan (talk). Self nom at 02:28, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Miller Reese Hutchison

Acousticon, 1906 hearing aid

  • Comment: expanded starting January 14 over a couple days; the picture of the old hearing aid might be more interesing, but his picture in the article is higher quality

5x expanded by W Nowicki (talk). Self nom at 23:15, 16 January 2011 (UTC)


Ruth Cavin

  • ... that Ruth Cavin edited hundreds of works of mystery fiction in a career that she began in her 70s and was described by Sue Grafton as "soul mother to mystery writers for years"?

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 15:41, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Toyota Prius V

The Toyota Prius V was unveiled at the January 2011 North American International Auto Show.

Created by Aaaaplay (talk), Mariordo (talk). Nominated by Mariordo (talk) at 06:42, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Maud Crawford

???

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 06:30, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: John Doyle (general)

Wedding of Haakon, Crown Prince of Norway, and Mette-Marit Tjessem Høiby

Created by Ruby2010 talk 22:59, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: St John the Baptist's Church, Stamford

Thomas Forsaith

black and white portrait photo of a man in his fifties

  • Comment: Expansion started on 14 Jan. There's more to come, but it already meets the criteria. I reviewed John S. Gray (Michigan) the other day.

5x expanded by Schwede66 (talk). Self nom at 19:48, 15 January 2011 (UTC)


General Sir John Doyle

Created by Chienlit (talk). Self nom at 19:27, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Are we allowed to use such quotes in DYK? In the past, I have not been allowed to do so?

It's alright with me, but you could write it in paraphrase form without using quotes. 06:44, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Auditorio Monte do Gozo

A blue stage in the foreground, after which comes a dirt area and then concentric rings of concrete seats, with trees in the distance

Created by Wasted Time R (talk). Self nom at 14:27, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed Thomas Witherings diff
Ready to go. Jaespinoza (talk) 06:19, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Irish honours system

5x expanded by Jnestorius (talk). Self nom at 09:54, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Comment: there was formerly article at "Irish honours system", which I moved to Comhairle na Míre Gaile and repurposed. The current "Irish honours system" is 5x the bits I refactored out from the older article. jnestorius 09:57, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Pelican Bowl

Created by Patriarca12 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 06:38, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

I deliberately avoided that linking, 'coz with the Pelican Bowl actually played, the national championship was not that "mythical", going against the first sentence in the Black college football national championship article. The champions listed on that wikipage were determined by polls. --PFHLai (talk) 13:16, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
The two articles need to be integrated. I don't mean merged, but I do mean something more than giving each other a measly "See also". A black college football national championship is not by definition mythical, even if the Pelican Bowl's attempt to provide a non-mythical version ended in failure. jnestorius 14:29, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
Well, as things now stand, we don't have a championship game in black or all of US college football, so the national championship is mythical. (Can I call it de facto?) I threw in a paragraph on the Black college football national championship page and added a link to the hook. Hope this helps with the integration. --PFHLai (talk) 15:30, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
Fair enough, jnestorius 08:57, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Hypsibema missouriensis

Hypsibema missouriensis

Created by Fetchcomms (talk). Self nom at 03:55, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

All DYK criteria met. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 21:54, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
Thanks! I just got permission to use an image, which I have now added; to whoever puts this in the queue, I would really appreciate it if the image is used because there are essentially only two places that have a model of this species. /ƒETCHCOMMS/ 02:13, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Interactive urinal

[REDACTED]

Created by Prioryman (talk) 23:33, 14 January 2011 (UTC)


Frankia alni

Alder trees

Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nom at 06:56, 15 January 2011 (UTC)


Olca-Paruma

Created by Ceranthor (talk). Self nom at 22:42, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Crow (missile)

A long, slender rocket with a recessed conical nose is mounted on a pylon udner the wing of an aircraft; the pylon is labeled "CROW".

Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self nom at 22:06, 14 January 2011 (UTC)



Gunnersbury Cemetery

Gunnersbury Cemetery
Add rollover text!

Created/expanded by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 19:10, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Length just over 1600 chars, (exlcuding list of names etc). Date is fine. My only issue is that the list of burials of Wikinotable people needs better referencing. Will raise this with Piotrus on his talk page. Mjroots (talk) 08:15, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Elmer Mitchell

Elmer Mitchell, from the 1919 Michiganensian

Created by Paulmcdonald (talk), Cmadler (talk). Nominated by Cmadler (talk) at 18:17, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Is there no year of birth and death? Place of birth? Sometimes that kind of information is no where to be found. It seems alright to me, and subject is notable. Billy Hathorn (talk) 21:08, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Guppy Troup

Created by Giants2008 (talk). Self nom at 16:49, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Oregon Portage Railroad

The Oregon Portage Railroad

Created by Jsayre64 (talk). Self nom at 16:41, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Alright, I updated the hook. I was trying to find a little information on websites and at Google Books, but was unsuccessful. I left a note here recently, so I may be getting some feedback/help with expansion soon. Let's wait a little bit and see. Jsayre64 (talk) 19:33, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
It was still ~50 characters short, but nothing a bit of wordsmithing couldn't fix. Should be good to go now. - The Bushranger One ping only 17:11, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Andreas Lambert

Created by Pgallert (talk). Self nom at 14:12, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Dunn Peak

Matterhorn Peak in the Dunn Peak massif

Created by The Interior (talk). Self nom at 05:28, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, had to hike 8 hours to get it! The Interior(Talk) 15:10, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Flys (1970s band)

  • ... that the Fly's single "Waikiki Beach Refugees" was released on yellow vinyl and later covered by Die Toten Hosen?

Created by J04n (talk). Self nom at 04:12, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

  • There was an error in my original hook, changing to:
  • (ALT 1)(ALT 2) Length, date are good. Maybe even a bit over-referenced, but otherwise good article. AGF for ALT 1 refs, ALT 2 refs are online and check out. I would support ALT 1 for name recognition factor, unless "Die Toten Hosen" have slipped under my radar and were big in Europe? The Interior(Talk) 08:20, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

California Film Commission

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 03:16, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Stearns Bicycle

  • ... that in 1899 bicycle racer Major Taylor signed a contract with Stearns Bicycle who agreed to build Taylor a revolutionary steam powered pacing tandem on which he broke the world record 1 mile (1.6 km) in 01:19 at a speed of 45.56 miles per hour (73.32 km/h)?

Created by Nconwaymicelli (talk). Self nom at 11:08, 13 January 2011 (UTC)

It's longer than 200 characters. Try shortening it. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 07:10, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

  • It's still 32 characters too long. Why not something like -
  • ... that the E. C. Stearns Bicycle Agency built bicycle racer Major Taylor a revolutionary steam powered pacing tandem on which he broke the world record at a speed of 45.56 miles per hour (73.32 km/h)?


Harmony House

Created by TenPoundHammer (talk). Self nom at 20:03, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Textbook of Biochemistry, Alexander Thomas Cameron

Created by Ackatsis (talk). Self nom at 23:07, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Comment: The in-line reference for my hook can be accessed online here. Ackatsis (talk) 23:31, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Date, length, fact verified. I foresee that Textbook of Biochemistry might be moved to, e.g., Textbook of Biochemistry (Cameron) as there are hundreds of books with this title, but none has come up on WP yet. Materialscientist (talk) 07:25, 15 January 2011 (UTC)


British Library Philatelic Collections

Photo of samples of the British Library Philatelic Collections on permanent exhibition.

5x expanded by (talk). Self nom at 14:14, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Comment: I created the stub on 10/1 in preparation for WP:GLAM/BL the article has been significantly expanded after general collaboration and discussions with the British Library Philatelic Collections head curator on 14/1. (talk) 14:14, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 15

Nienover

  • ... that the archaeological excavation in Nienover has found evidence of use from the Bronze Age through the 11th century?

5x expanded by Marrante (talk). Self nom at 15:44, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Scotty Davidson

5x expanded by Resolute (talk). Self nom at 22:05, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

New Harmony Toll Bridge

  • ... that the New Harmony Toll Bridge, which opened on December 21, 1930, is owned by the only remaining joint state toll bridge commission chartered by Congress?

Created by Racepacket (talk). Self nom at 19:43, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Length and date check out, hook checks out. It would be nice, in future, though, if you could leave, either in your reference description or in the nomination comment, the page number of a 36-page PDF file that a reviewer will have to scour to find a small fact. Yours was on page 21 of the PDF file. Thanks. Marrante (talk) 15:38, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

October 1926 Air Union Blériot 155 crash

Photo of Blériot 155 F-AICQ Clement Ader, which crashed as a result of the first in-flight fire on a civil airliner.

Created by Mjroots (talk). Self nom at 08:02, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Offline source accepted, hook looks okay though it seems that the bold link should be the crash, not the fire. I'll leave that for whoever promotes the hook, however. Resolute 22:24, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

With this particular crash, the cause is more notable than the event. Mjroots2 (talk) 07:41, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Hermann AVA

Hermann AVA and Stone Hill Winery and vineyard

  • Reviewed: Aleksandra Samusenko
  • Comment: Primary refs are Durfur's Missouri Wine Country (FN#4) and Opus Vino (FN#5) but additional online refs are provided to aid in verification

5x expanded by Agne27 (talk). Self nom at 07:22, 16 January 2011 (UTC)


Miguel Angel Galluzzi

A red standard motorcycle its side stand

5x expanded by Dbratland (talk). Self nom at 06:04, 16 January 2011 (UTC)


Club Oasis

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 00:22, 16 January 2011 (UTC) Reviewed: December 2010 Gascoyne River flood

  • Length and dates are fine but the hook fact as stated with both very weakly sourced (the tvguide.com text merely states "In the summer of 1958, `Club Oasis,' which ran as a biweekly series, became home to the zany antics of bandleader Spike Jones.") and not wholly accurate. There's a much firmer source in cited-elsewhere Brooks & Marsh ("During the summer of 1958 Spike Jones became the permanent star of the show and the title was changed to Club Oasis Starring Spike Jones.") that not only properly notes Jones' role in the show but also documents a title change for the series that it not currently reflected in the article. A few tweaks to the article and it will be ready. - Dravecky (talk) 17:14, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Also, I'm not thrilled with some of the sourcing for this article, including the "Guitars 101" message forum. Worse, you apparently didn't read past the first message or you would have seen that the episode described is not from Club Oasis but rather from a much later episode of Startime. There is an accurate description of the Club Oasis episode later in the thread. This too, needs to be fixed. - Dravecky (talk) 17:22, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

December 2010 Gascoyne River flood

Created by Cyclonebiskit (talk). Self nom at 22:32, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

There are few links to related articles. Can you create more links? The article seems well-documented. Billy Hathorn (talk) 00:28, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
There wasn't much in the way of additional links to add, things that needed to be linked already are. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 01:40, 16 January 2011 (UTC)


OK, then. Billy Hathorn (talk) 06:16, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

St John the Baptist's Church, Stamford

The tower and part of the body of a Perpendicular style church

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 22:04, 15 January 2011 (UTC)


Rashad Jones-Jennings

Created by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 21:59, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Stewart Iglehart

5x expanded by Leech44 (talk). Self nom at 21:11, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Fact was cited later in the article not in the lead. I have added citation in the lead.--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 05:43, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
No need to apologizes better safe than sorry. Thanks for the review.--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 02:14, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Dajti Castle

Created by Empathictrust (talk). Nominated by Sepastaj (talk) at 20:59, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

references taken accepted in good faith

Comment: The nominator could add the language of the references in the template using |language=
The Location section is unreferenced. — Toдor Boжinov18:21, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
Thank you! I referenced the location section and added the language at those references using language other than English.Empathictrust (talk) 19:22, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
Good enough :) — Toдor Boжinov19:29, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Wyatt Luther Nugent

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 20:55, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed Elmer Mitchell

Khmer Writers' Association

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 19:58, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Length, date, source etc. check out. Jrcla2 (talk) 04:03, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Terasca, Cajun (rocket)

Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self nom at 08:14, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Length, sourcing and history for hook and both articles have been reviewed. Alansohn (talk) 04:45, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Under the Driftwood Tree

Created by Thruxton (talk). Self nom at 07:03, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Nice short hook for a just long enough article. To my limited knowledge of English it's: "the group plays", or "members of the group play". Or is it just one didgeridoo player? Help please. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:44, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
--Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:48, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Alan Charlesworth

Informal portrait of a caucasian man in light-coloured military shirt with peaked cap, and pilot's wings on left-breast pocket

Created by Ian Rose (talk). Self nom at 03:51, 15 January 2011 (UTC)


Italian monitor Alfredo Cappellini

Created by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Self nom at 03:44, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Rmv ship template: Sturmvogel, sorry, I know your project loves them, but our update bot still stumbles upon them. Materialscientist (talk) 00:50, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Ádahooníłígíí

Created by Seb az86556 (talk). Self nom at 11:30, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

  • CommentVery interesting article, but I've checked p. 200 of the cited "The green book"] , and it does not, as far as I can see, support the various statements in the lead, or the hook above. I don't doubt it is true, though. Perhaps there is another citation for this? --Slp1 (talk) 17:02, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
Unfortunately, I can't get what I presume are the relevant pages. In any case, the book was published in 1983, and so probably isn't the best source for a claim that it is the only publication to date in Navaho. Is there something more recent? Or maybe the hook could be altered. Sorry to be a pain! For other aspects (length of article and date of creation etc) everything looks fine. --Slp1 (talk) 19:28, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
Ah well, so make it "the first" — I can guarantee you that you won't find any other refs covering "only" til 2011 because, you know, if there is none, nobody will write about it. Usually people write about what is, not what isn't... (I know it doesn't count here, but let me assure you, if there was one, I'd be a subscriber) Choyoołʼįįhí:Seb az86556 19:44, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
PS: can I convince you by pointing out that www.worldcat.org lists only one Newspaper with Language:Navajo? Choyoołʼįįhí:Seb az86556 20:29, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
You don't need to convince me, because I've no doubt it's true. As you know, it is a question of verifiability etc. But the Potowski source is a good one and the hooks is fine so ..
--Slp1 (talk) 21:28, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 16

American Arts Commemorative Series medallions

Created by RHM22 (talk). Self nom at 13:52, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Noah's Ark (1956 TV series)

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 03:16, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed L'Enfant Plaza Hotel

Fishery Protection Squadron

British trawler Coventry City passes Icelandic Coast Guard Patrol vessel Albert off the Westfjords in 1958 during the first Cod War.

5x expanded by Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry (talk). Self nom at 01:29, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

  • If I may be so bold as to offer several suggestions to help improve the overall physical layout of the article: the table in the first section of the body would best go on the right side since, for the moment, the text seems to be hemmed in between it and the infobox on the right. Further, two quotations in the section have been separated from the rest of the body the article and place in box quotations. The typical rule is that we use a box quotation if a sentence goes over four lines, which in these two cases it doesn't. I see no harm in simply in integrating both into the text. Otherwise, the article itself looks pretty good and the content itself is quite amusing. Also, all the names of the warships must be italicized. Nice job. --Marshal Bagramyan (talk) 02:25, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
I'm still in the process of writing the article, and I got my hands on a few newspaper articles from the 1800s regarding the 'treaty shore'. I'll add them later today, as I need to find out what the treaty shore was. That should expand the 1800s section, which will then mean I can move the table over to the right without it conflicting with the infobox. I've now integrated the text to the rest of the article. However, it'll take me a bit longer to get all the ship names italicised. I think I've got them all, but need to double-check. Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry (talk) 12:35, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

L'Enfant Plaza Hotel

A vist of a city plaza with a small glass pyramid in front of a Modern architecture hotel and office building

5x expanded by Tim1965 (talk). Self nom at 01:27, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Fine. Billy Hathorn (talk) 03:27, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Camp Boiro

  • ... that many political prisoners at Camp Boiro died from the "diète noire", or "black diet": no food and no water?

5x expanded by Aymatth2 (talk). Self nom at 00:59, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Tewksbury Mills

Created by Ktr101 (talk). Self nom at 23:51, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Coffin birth

  • ... a rare case of coffin birth was uncovered during the excavation of a medieval cemetery in Kings Worthy, England?
  • Comment: First time making a DYK nomination

5x expanded by Boneyard90 (talk). Self nom at 23:41, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

St James' Church, Stanstead Abbotts

A flint tower with a battlemented parapet and a small spire; to the right is a stair turret rising higher than the tower

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 22:15, 16 January 2011 (UTC)


Es Demasiado Tarde

Created by Jaespinoza (talk) 21:26, 16 January 2011 (UTC). Self nom at 21:25, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Grammy Award for Best Performance Music Video. Jaespinoza (talk) 22:30, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Tablas Creek Vineyard

Created by Murgh (talk). Self nom at 21:03, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Kepler-10b

Penry v. Johnson

Created by Lord Roem (talk). Self nom at 20:41, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Ruth Cavin

University of Cambodia

Created by Rosiestep (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk), Nvvchar (talk). Self nom at 20:07, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Løkken IF

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 19:37, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Chinatown, St. Louis

Created by Poroubalous (talk). Self nom at 19:28, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Graffiti in New York

Graffiti and street art emerged in New York as part of the Zoo York subculture in the 1970s
Add rollover text!

Created/expanded by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 19:19, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Ksar es-Seghir

Created by Walrasiad (talk). Nominated by Cwmhiraeth (talk) at 18:34, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

What you say is correct but the article does clearly state its sources at the foot of the page. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:28, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
Sorry, but this was the sourcing requirement of yesterday, so to speak. The standards have changed somewhat. Geschichte (talk) 21:58, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Prohodna

Two eye-like holes in the ceiling of a cave letting light in

  • ... that the Prohodna cave in north central Bulgaria features two holes in its ceiling known as the Eyes of God (pictured)?

Created by TodorBozhinov (talk). Self nom at 18:13, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Interesting cave. No major problems. Jsayre64 (talk) 18:51, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

I suggest a slight reword:
  • ... that two holes in the ceiling of the Prohodna cave in Bulgaria (pictured) are known as the Eyes of God?
SmartSE (talk) 20:13, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
Yep, I'm cool with that :) — Toдor Boжinov20:26, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

KFIL (AM) / KFIL-FM

Created by Dravecky (talk). Self nom at 16:54, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Low Head Lighthouse

Low Head Lighthouse, Low Head, Tasmania, looking to the northwest in 2010

Created by DiverDave (talk). Self nom at 12:12, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

I have provided inline citations for the two passages in question. DiverDave (talk) 21:24, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

George R. Salisbury, Jr.

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 06:06, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed Obie Trotter
Correction made. Billy Hathorn (talk) 15:27, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Calabozos

Created by Ceranthor (talk). Self nom at 06:00, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Article creation date: OK. Article length: just barely OK. Would prefer to see a lead section, Infobox mountain and other sections like most of the better-quality WikiProject Volcanoes articles. DYK hook: length OK. Problem: while the cited sources do support the hook, the article text needs to be rewritten so that all 3 assertions in the hook are supported by an inline citation. DiverDave (talk) 11:16, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Should be supported now. As for the length, it's a very obscure volcano. There aren't very many sources at all, and truthfully, I feel that if I were to add more general articles about geology and related topics the article would become unfocused. I'll add an infobox. ceranthor 14:36, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Wharf (Holdings) Ltd. v. United Int'l Holdings, Inc.

Created by Lord Roem (talk). Self nom at 04:09, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Frank Freyer

Obie Trotter

Created by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 04:06, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Hook checks out, but was he born in Robertsdale or Foley, AL? Both are in Baldwin County. Is he African American? Billy Hathorn (talk) 06:13, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
Two of the sources give different places of birth within Baldwin County. Billy Hathorn (talk) 03:29, 17 January 2011 (UTC)
I've seen a few sites that say Robertsdale and one that says Foley. Either way, it's not a dealbreaker here. - PM800 (talk) 03:56, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Florida v. Thomas

Created by Lord Roem (talk). Self nom at 02:42, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Wyatt Luther Nugent
  • Date, length and hook ref checks out. However, oral argument should be added into the article so that the hook sentence works out. Also, all of the sources are original documents, could other third-party sources be added? (such as coverage in news media?) --Soman (talk) 12:12, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
  • Oral argument added and cite included for it. I am afraid there are no media reports that I can find, considering the decision was a few pages and was just dismissing a case. -- Lord Roem (talk) 17:30, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on January 17

Auriscalpium vulgare

Two brownish mushrooms with long stalks and laterally-attached caps with white spines hanging from the underside.

  • … that the mushroom Auriscalpium vulgare (pictured) is named for an instrument used for personal hygiene?

Created by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 13:45, 17 January 2011 (UTC)


List of birds of Georgia (U.S. state)

A brown bird with speckled eyes sits on the grass.

Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self nom at 07:38, 17 January 2011 (UTC)


Performic acid

Created by Materialscientist (talk). Self nom at 06:44, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Sopa de Caracol

Created by Jaespinoza (talk) 06:02, 17 January 2011 (UTC). Self nom at 06:01, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Auditorio Monte do Gozo. Jaespinoza (talk) 06:20, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Tropolis

  • ... that Tropolis has been called an attempt to 'snackify' beverages?

5x expanded by Ktr101 (talk). Self nom at 04:59, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Juniperus Capital

large tree with short trunk and green leaves

  • ... that Bermuda hedge fund Juniperus Capital was named after the Juniperus bermudiana (example pictured), Bermudian cedar trees that are extremely hardy in the face of adverse conditions?

new article self nom by --Epeefleche (talk) 04:17, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Lam Chiu Ying

Lam Chiu Ying

Created by Kayau (talk). Self nom at 03:50, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed #KFIL (AM) / KFIL-FM

Nicolas-Marie Songis des Courbons

A man in 19th century military uniform with decorations

  • Reviewed:

Created by Alexandru Demian (talk)

Hook length, article length & date ok; hook fact accepted AGF based on offline source. Sasata (talk) 13:43, 17 January 2011 (UTC)

Special occasion holding area

Do not nominate new articles for a special time in this section. Instead, please nominate them in the candidate entries section above under the date the article was created or the expansion began, and indicate your request for a specially-timed appearance on the Main Page.
Note: Articles nominated for a special occasion should be nominated within five days of creation or expansion as usual (with the exception of April Fools' Day 2011 - see Misplaced Pages:April Fool's Main Page/Did You Know). Also, articles should be nominated at least five days before the occasion to give reviewers time to check the nomination.



January 19

Mein Gott, wie lang, ach lange, BWV 155

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 17:18, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

February 5 or 6

1960 NFL Championship Game

Statue at Lambeau Field of Vince Lombardi, whose loss in the 1960 NFL Championship Game marked his only playoff loss as a coach.

5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 14:25, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

--PFHLai (talk) 21:21, 9 January 2011 (UTC)


Frankfurter Löwen

Created by Calistemon (talk). Self nom at 12:44, 12 January 2011 (UTC)


Halloween

Rhacophorus vampyrus

  • ... that the tadpole of the Vampire flying frog Rhacophorus vampyrus has two fang-like hooks in its mouth?

Created by Newone (talk), Ka Faraq Gatri (talk). Nominated by Ka Faraq Gatri (talk) at 14:59, 9 January 2011 (UTC)

  • Comment If the article meets DYK criteria, suggest moving it to Special Occasions section and keeping for Halloween. The authors of the paper on which this article is substantially based have stated that they intend to publish a separate paper on the tadpoles of this species so the move would also allow time for any material from this paper (assuming it is published in time) to be incorporated. Ka Faraq Gatri (talk) 16:56, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
  • That's confirmed. I agree that this should be kept for Halloween, especially as "A detailed description of the new tadpole will be published separately." which might be available by October. It's certainly an early start for the Halloween collection, does anyone think it is a problem to save it until then? SmartSE (talk) 23:41, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
SUPPORT waiting till Halloween, esp. if we can get a good, free picture of the scary tadpoles. --PFHLai (talk) 04:06, 16 January 2011 (UTC)
I've moved this as there were no objections. If someone wants to make a subpage for it, like we have for April Fools' nominations then feel free. SmartSE (talk) 12:46, 16 January 2011 (UTC)

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