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| * Add reference to polygamy under Nauvoo section. | * Add reference to polygamy under Nauvoo section. | ||
| * Explain: What does temple-building have to do with Smith's life? | * Explain: What does temple-building have to do with Smith's life? | ||
| ⚫ | ''''Marriage and family' section:''' | ||
| * Section on polygamy | |||
| * Section on birth family | |||
| ''''Major teachings' section:''' | ''''Major teachings' section:''' | ||
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| ''''References' section:''' | ''''References' section:''' | ||
| * Prune obsolete material, move it to ]. | * Prune obsolete material, move it to ]. | ||
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| This section could probably be retired: | |||
| * Prune (or move to 'References' section, or ]) two current references. | |||
| * Move main article marker to 'References' section. | |||
| ''''See also' section:''' | ''''See also' section:''' | ||
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| * Prune and alphabetize categories. | * Prune and alphabetize categories. | ||
| * Alphabetize interwiki. | * Alphabetize interwiki. | ||
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Revision as of 21:52, 27 September 2006
Whole article:
- Find citation for every {{fact}} template.
- Remove all exterraneous details from sections which are supposed to be written in summary style.
- Implement bcatt's suggestions on NPOVing the article, inasmuch as the suggestions were reasonable, made in good faith, and for the purpose of strengthening the article.
- Include more inline citations (notes), where applicable, and/or where the fact could use a citation.
- Verify everything.
- Continue to improve brilliance of prose, and make more concise.
'Early life' section:
'1827 to 1831' section:
- Add picture(s) (purely cosmetic suggestion).
'1831 to 1844' section: Massive work! Generally get the article to synch up better with the extremely well-written History of the Latter Day Saint movement sections on this period.
- Remove or at least deflate the two paragraphs (and then one under the notes) regarding the noncentral tarring and feathering; can't we include something more encyclopedic and central to his life?
- Add reference to polygamy under Nauvoo section.
- Explain: What does temple-building have to do with Smith's life?
'Marriage and family' section:
- Section on polygamy
- Section on birth family
'Major teachings' section:
'Legacy' section:
'Notes' section:
'References' section:
- Prune obsolete material, move it to Works relating to Joseph Smith, Jr..
'See also' section:
- Expand.
'External links' section:
- Expand external links.
- Prune and alphabetize categories.
- Alphabetize interwiki.