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Inspector General Report on FBI and DOJ's Actions in the 2016 Election
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DOJ-OIG Report. 6/14/2018
- ... that the Inspector General Report on FBI and DOJ's Actions in the 2016 Election is 568 pages long?
- ALT1:... that the Inspector General Report on FBI and DOJ's Actions in the 2016 Election prompted President Trump to refer to FBI director James Comey as the "ringleader" of a "den of thieves"?
Created by Jerry the Bellybutton Elf (talk). Nominated by Jerry the Bellybutton Elf (talk) at 02:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC).
- I am honored to be co-credited for this article. But apart from approving the AFC and pointing Jerry to DYK I had little involvement. That said I am pleased to review this nomination.– Lionel 04:00, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Jerry the Bellybutton Elf: Here are two things that standout:
- The article needs a little work on referencing. Every para must have an inline citation. For example this: "...which had a deleterious effect on the FBI's credibility." Also the Focus section need a cite.
- The hook needs to be exciting. E.g. you could use Clinton's "But my emails" quote. Or Trump's "den of thieves." Trumo is so colorful. Anything he says is perfect for a DYK hook lmao. – Lionel 04:06, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- Higgens, Tucker. "President Trump: Comey is 'criminal,' and IG report 'totally exonerates me'". CNBC.